Maneet FF...NOT A FAIRY TALE pt39-pg86(Mar 31) - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago
i hope rohit doesn't harm geet

thnx for the pm dear
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
so dev was past in geet's life...

beautiful update...


thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

loved it...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

will b eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dev Khurana.. hope he didnt do something bad..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part...
So geet met dev the way she wants...hatke..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...Dev "Khurana"? A bulb just blinked in my brain...are Dev and Maan family by any chance?

Well Geet and her group looked very cool in college...and she looked full of dreams...i wonder what has made her how she is now...

Many twists? Wow...I hope this FF turns out as interesting as it has started off 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago


wonderful updates...

Geet is fighting with her heart...she has feelings for Maan but fear of getting decieved again is stopping her to accept her feelings...and above it she don't know about Maan's feelings whether he loves her or not...love is far even like her or not...abhi to Geet hi confused hai...Maan also will have to go through inner turmoil and as usual he will deny his feelings also...so confession is very far away...

at this juncture Geet has taken a most convenient decision by saying yes for this marriage proposal...

u have started past story of Geet...waiting to know more... what happen with her...and he is Dev Khurana...is he somewhere related to Maan Singh Khurana...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 25
nice part...
so Dev is Geet's past...
what is this Rohit up to?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww Akki thanks a ton dear for the update...😳
haiii where is my munda in this update...I missed him...😉
So this Dev is geet's past...n I have a hunch he is Maan's bro...
loved Geet's bonding with her friends...
n what's cooking in Rohit's mind...


waiting for the next part...😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow ! GREAT UPDATE👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi buddies...thank you so much for your likes and comments. I know many of you are curious to know if Maan and Dev are related in any way. I guess right now u ppl will have to wait a bit for that. I hope to meet all of your expectations with the story. I am finishing with Geet's past in this update.
Hope you guys like it.

@Namita...sry yaar..ekk aur update Maan will be devoid of Maan, but promise to have many Maneet moments in future updates...keep missing our Munda till then 😃

@mystique_girl... I hope i am able to meet ur expectations 😊

@tushti-kiran...lets see how Maan reacts to this news 😊. It will be only then that we will be able to know how Maan feels 😊

Love
Akki

NOT A FAIRY TALE
PART 26

Next day..

Geet, was unusually late for her college and was rushing towards her class, when she again crashed with somebody. But he immediately caught her by her shoulders, keeping her from falling. She saw it was Dev again and he was smiling at her. "Do you always meet people in this way ..Gee..Geet Handa, am I right?"

"Yeh right, its Geet, hi" she said getting a little cautious. She was a little surprised that he remembered her name.

"So..how have you been. Are you going for some class?"'he asked.

"M fine. Yeeeh, woooh actually I was getting late for a class, that why I was rushing. Sorry" she looked at him.

"Aare its ok, no problem at all. Chalo then I won't disturb you, you should go to your class"

She nodded her head and started walking towards her class, when he called her again.

"Hey listen..Geet, are you free in the break time today?"

"Yeh, why?" asked Geet innocently.

"Nothing much, actually I had head there is a stall outside the college, where really gr8 coffee is made. Would you like to join me in the break time" asked Dev.

She looked a little uncertain.

"Aare yaar, koi date ke liye nhi puch rha hun, am only asking for a cup of coffee a stall, itna daro maat. Actually I still do not know anybody much here. Socha tumse thoda college ke bare me hi jaan lunga over a cup of coffee" teased Dev.

"No no.. nothing like that. Fine I'll meet you there. Bye" she said and rushed towards her class.

"Yeh maine kya kar diya. Coffee, that too alone with a guy. Geet yeh tujhe kya ho gaya. Kaisi harkatein kar rhi hai tu. jabse us Dev se mili hai tera to lagta hai screw hi dheela ho gaya hai" she thought. "Nahi nhi, main to bas thadi pe hi to jar hi hun, aur kuch nhi. Aur vaise bhi Dev ke hi to sath jar hi hun. He seems to be a fine guy. Not like the others in the college jo itni choti choti baato ka bhi galat matlab nikal lete hain. Aur main konsa roz roz jane wali hun. Bas aaj ek baar hi to jana hai. Its not a crime. Chal to theek hai Geet, just his once that you are going to go out with him. Ok??.. ok" she tried justifying herself. The whole day she was thinking about this only, in all her lectures and was all lost.

When the lectures ended, she hurriedly went to Pari .. "Pari.. I won't be able to join you guys for the lunch today. Have some work. Will see you later after the break" and she rushed away from there, leaving Pari wondering. Even Geet didn't know why she lied to her, somehow she didn't want anyone to know about it.

**

"So you came.." he beemed seeing her.

"Yeh, I told you I'll come" she said returning his smile.

"I know I know, but somehow I was not sure. Mujhe to laga tha tum mujhe meri phalli hi date pe aakela chod dogi" he said a little dramatically.

She stopped suddenly and looked at him stunned at the mention of the word 'date'.

"Aare baba mazak kar rha tha.."

She relaxed. They walked to the stall.

From that day they kind of started talking to each other a lot. They could not meet much at the college, due to different sections, but they always remained connected via texting or on FB. They used to talk for hours about everything and anything. She also used to help him catch up with the course here, coz it was a little different from what he had in Canada. As for him, he was her tension buster, especially during exams, when she always used to get overstressed and he used to calm her down.

The whole year spent like this, but not many people knew about their friendship, since they did not meet much at college. Even Pari thought he was just a by-the-way friend of Geet. But Geet didn't realize when she started developing feelings for him. The whole day she used to talk with him, and if sometime he got a little late in his replies, she used to get restless and kept looking at her phone longingly.

The final year exams had ended and they had to come to the college for one last time, for their project presentations. In a way it was their last day at the college. Geet was restless. She was now aware of her feelings towards Dev and was not sure if she will be able to meet Dev again after today. Her heart just couldn't take that thought. So she decided to confess her feelings for him. That day for the first time in her life, she felt the need to dress up nicely. She never cared about looking beautiful at college, but today she wanted to. She selected a nice white chudidar, although she generally preferred wearing patiyalas only, applied kajal and liner and a light lip gloss. Even with this minimal makeup, she was looking different. She was looking beautiful.

After her presentation got over, she walked around the campus, searching for Dev. She saw him, standing in a corner, chatting with his classmates. She went to him. "Hi Dev.."

He turned and looked at her, a little surprised at her appearance "Hi there, how are you.. someone is looking really good today " he smiled at her.

She gave him a little nervous smile. "Thanks.. hey actually I wanted to talk to you about something. Kya tim mere saath aa skate ho?"

"Sure, sure..chalo" he turned once to signal his friends and then started walking with her"

Little did she know, that the whole group, with whom Dev was talking was now following them.

She took him to the college playground, where there were not many students at this time.

"Bolo Geet..kya hua? Kya baat krni hai, is there some problem?" he asked her, showing concern.

"Woooh...actuuuallly..woh kya hai na Dev mm..mmujhe tumhe kuch kehana tha" she was feeling very nervous. She had never ever even thought of falling for someone like this, and here she was standing in front of him, trying to confess her feelings for him. She was constantly looking down, unable to meet his eyes and knotting her dupatta around her fingers.

"Kya hua Geet, bolo na, why do you seem to be so nervous" he again asked, sounding more concerned now.

"Dev wohhh main yeh kehana chati thi, ki.. I think.. I think.. I am in love with you" there she said it. She felt a little relieved at being able to voice out her feelings. She looked up to gauze his expressions.

She first saw puzzlement there, then a little confusion, but then a small smile spread on his face "Geet, I guess I am also in love with you"

She felt a jolt of happiness inside her at his words. She couldn't express how much joy his acceptance had given her. She couldn't believe that it was actually happening, that she was in love and was also loved back. Her happiness knew no bounds.

But then suddenly she saw a change in his expressions. That slight smile on his face slowly turned into a grin and then a full blown, somewhat wicked smile. It was as if her was mocking at her. She couldn't understand. "Geet Geet, my darling Geet. Don't get so happy so fast. Let me first finish my sentence. So where was I , oh yeh.. I was saying that I too love you... but only in your dreams" and he burst out, laughing hard.

And it was then only that she heard it. She could hear more laughs coming from behind the trees and saw people coming out from there, laughing hard, clutching their stomach. She couldn't believe what was happening with her. She was too numb to register anything.

All of Dev's friends now came to surround both of them. They were still laughing and mocking at her, but she was looking down.

It was Dev who stopped them from laughing. "So friends, look who here finally proposed me. After a long wait of one whole year, finally I got what I wanted. I won my bet. This victory, OMG, it has its own high, eke alga hi nasha hai" and he patted the back of Rohit, who was the nearest to him and was the one who was enjoying the whole situation the most. After all, it was he only who had planned all this and placed the bet, to take his revenge on Geet for rejecting him. "Maan gaye beta Dev tujhe to.. le yaar, you really deserve the bet money, kya proposal nikalvaya hai. Bhot aapne aapko toop samajhti thi na yeh Geet. Aaj dkho, kaise saar jhukaye tere intezar me khadi hai" and all started laughing again.

Dev quittened them all again.

"Geet.." he called her politely "you ok na? I hope you didn't mind this small game of mine. I am sorry if it hurt you. It was all for the bet, nothing personal, really"

She didn't say anything. She was only looking at him with anger in her eyes.

"Aur vaise bhi why will you be angry at me. I didn't do anything at all. I was always and only a friend to you. I never promised you anything. Even today, it was you, who proposed me, I didn't"

"Vaise issme Geet sab tumahari hi galti hai. I mean how could you even think of me liking you. I mean, yes you are a good girl, but not my types. Do you even remember how you used to look when I met you. I could not even think of talking to a girl like you, let alone make you my girlfriend. You only made yourself vulnerable enough to fall in my trap. Still it was not that easy to make you confess. I had to totally lost hope today, but you didn't disappoint me. You a sweet girl. Vaise you can thank me for one thing, I surely taught you to dress well at least, look at you today, how lovely you are looking" and again there was burst of laughter around her. "Hey let me introduce you to my girlfriend. Here she comes, Naintara, meet Geet, my gf, oops, sorry, my bad, I mean my friend and Geet meet Naintara. She is my girlfriend, from Canada. She especially flew today to be there with me on my last day in college. So nice of her. Kitna pyaar karti hai mujhse. " and he kissed her, right in front of everybody, smack on her lips. There were loud hooting sounds from the people standing there.

Geet could bear no longer and she looked away. Not because she was feeling jealous or something. What jealousy, what love it was all a joke a big joke. But now she just wanted to run away from there, hide herself, not face anybody. Dev left Naintara after giving her one more peck on her lips.

"So Geet I guess its time to say goodbye. It was really nice meeting you. Wish you a good life ahead. And yeh, no hard feeling. Bye and take care"

He left from there with his entourage.

She stood there as if rooted to that place, too numb to react. She was shocked, shocked to her very core. There were no tears, nothing on her face, just plain shock. Every passing second she was growing paler. A strong gush of wind, broke her from her trance, and then she ran. She ran like she had never run before. Tears were flowing freely from her eyes, but she had to reach her home. She passed through the college corridors, where Pari spotted her running madly. She tried calling her "Geeet.." but Geet was not in a state to hear anybody now.

**

Geet's home..

Pari pressed the bell for now what, 100th time. She had come to know about the whole incident through a classmate and had rushed to Geet's place. At first she herself could not believe what had happened with Geet. She had never expected something like this to happen with Geet, a girl who never had anyone before in her life and who used to make fun of her friends at their petite fights with their bf. How could she get cheated by some guy. But then she remembered that Geet might be alone at her place, as her parents were out of town for a relative's wedding and she hurried to Geet's house.

"Geet, please open the door, mujhe pata hai tu yahi hai, please mujhe andar aanede" cried Pari..

She heard a click of door's latch opening. She pushed open the door. She could not believe the sight in front of her eyes. Geet was all messed up. Her hair was all disheveled, spreading wildly over her face and shoulders. Her dress was all torn from places, as if she had tried to just rip it off her and her face, it had taken the worst of all. All her make up was smudged as if she had brutally tried to take it off, not caring to hurt herself in the process. There were bruises on her face, red scratch marks, which will soon start to swell. Pari looked at her friend who was once such a happy go lucky person. What had she done to herself, how had she punished herself, that too for no mistake of her. Pari just entered and hugged Geet tightly. For a long time Geet just stood there, not responding. But then she broke. She hugged Pari back tightly and started crying, taking all her feelings, all her pain out. She could no longer stand, and collapsed on the ground, Pari too sat down with her, not leaving her. She kept on comforting her, but let her cry and take out all her pains.

Next Part : Part 27

Edited by thekolgal - 12 years ago

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