FF:-ENTWINED SOULS{maaneet)ch-18 page-37 Oct9/11 - Page 22

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
awww maan is so protective towards geet...
hmmm Kritika in for motive..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
excellent one..
i think kritika s been sent by brij and kuldeep...
bt no worries..maan s dere for her..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
this nanny is here upto no good!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
even i dont like the nanny...
i think abhi is making a mistake...
probably she has been planted by geet's step dad...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read all the parts...

wonderful...beautiful story...

do add me to ur PM list...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

just read all the parts...


wonderful...beautiful story...

do add me to ur PM list...

welcome aboard 🤗
added u in will love to hear more from u 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

OK guys

i am backso whoo missed me😆

hmm first of all I will really like to thanks all the lovely ppl
who liked and commented on the last update
thank u its all ur love that makes me write this ff
but my dear silent readers plz plz plz press the like button and do comment
on the update guys u see that motivates me alot😃
so i hope i will see some more likes tonight after the update
remember guys more the likes increases more the frequency of updates will too😃😃
chalo enough of my blabber😆 now update time hehe
Chapter-18
I am there




Maan was not sure what he disliked
about this Ms Kritika but one thing he was sure about that she was not good for
geet
Maan
His dad's call reminded him that he
has called him in study
He gave a last look towards Geet
Who was looking at him little scared
he gave her a smile so that she won't feel sad
And assured her he will be back soon


He walked out of the room thinking
about how to be with Geet
Maan Abhimanyu called
Yes dad...I am here
Abhi looked at his son
He knew his devil was sad but then
he just wanted good for his devil and his angel

Maan aapki books kaha hai

Maan just took out his books from
the bag
Hmm let me have a look at your
homework Maan
Maan just handed him the notebook in
which he has written the home-work
That's a lot of work Maan
Maan just nodded
Have you started anything?
Maan just nodded for a no

Fine just start with Maths for the
moment and then we will do science

Maan nodded and looked towards the
watch the clock was about to strike at 12

He mentally calculated that almost
completing a chapter will take him at least

2hrs too much time no ways Geet will
be waiting for him but then dad

Abhi-Kya hua Maan start your work
Yes dad
He starts doing his work reluctantly
thinking about an excuse to escape

Meanwhile
Kritika looks towards Geet who was
sitting at the bed little scared
Hi geet won't you talk to me she
smiled sweetly at her

Geet looks at Kritika little
confused she nodes and says a yes to her
Good

So tell me Geet
Where is your mom?

Geet looked at her surprised

Mom she is upstairs in her room she
is weak na and ill too so
Kritika makes a little sad face oh
really that is so sad

Hmm but you know Abhi dad has
appointed good doctors for her and they say she will be good soon

Kritika looked at Geet little
surprised oh really that is great

So Geet tell me do you wanna play
Uhmm maybe

Kritika smiled then let's go out and
play

Geet smiled and got up but then
suddenly she sat down and said no i can't play

Kritika looked at Geet angrily but
then she composed herself

Kyu geet abhi toh tum jana chahti
thi

No i can't Maan will get angry on me
Kritika gritted her teeth's Maan

He won't Geet he is busy studying

No i won't go without Maan Geet said
stubbornly

Ok ok Let's do one thing

We will go out and then we will call
Maan there too


Uhmm ok Geet nodded and got up

Kritika lovingly grabbed her hands
and started going towards the door


Maan was still trying to concentrate
on his sums but then all he thought about Geet

There was something in this nanny's
eyes which he didn't liked

He looked out of the window towards
Geet's room
In hope that he will get one glimpse
of his angel

And there was she smiling he looked
at her and smiled feeling content to see her smile

But then he noticed Kritika walking
behind her
She was looking intently towards
Geet

Like a hunter looks towards a prey

Not once she blinked her eyes
Maan didn't liked the look in
Kritika's eyes

He was getting restless
and then he noticed a sharp thing shining in Kritika's hand
Knife he almost screamed


Kritika looked at Geet and then
slowly she turned towards Maan and smiled wickedly

She looked at Geet yet again and
then walked after her

Maan got really worried
Do something Maan his mind screamed
Stop Geet

Maan looked at the glass of water
kept beside him
He grabbed it in his hand and
smashed it

Geet was getting down the stairs
When she heard the sound of a glass
breaking
Maann...she heard her
Abhi dad scream



Abhi looked at his son's wounded
hands blood was oozing out of his hand

And a large piece of glass was still
stuck in the large cut

Ahhh Maan screamed as he fell down
from the chair


Geet rushed towards the study

Kritika looked at her retreating
form


Maan Geet screamed
As she saw his bleeding hand

He was in immense pain
Abhi rushed outside the study room

Kritika looked at him
Kya hua Mr khurrana

Look after the kids Kritika
I will get the first aid


Geet held Maan's hand in hers she
was crying profusely

Bahut dard ho raha hai na
Maan looked at her he never liked
her tears
Even it was for him but he hated it

He looked at her and tried to wipe
her tears but then he strained his hand and a muffled scream came out of his
throat
Ahh
Maan Geet held his hand and hugged
him tightly


Kritika looked at them
young lovers
she murmured huh


She walked towards them
Maan looked at her as she sat down
beside him and Geet


Let me have a look at your hand maan
She said as she forcefully pulled
his hand out of Geet's
Ahha Maan screamed again

Oh i am sorry kritika murmured
Geet looked at Maan's painful
expression and then at Kritika she hated her for hurting Maan

Geet tried to hold Maan's hand again
But kritika didn't let her

Not so soon Geet
See there is such a big piece of
glass still stuck in his hand

Let me help him with it

Maan's face flinched in agony but he
didn't screamed

Geet started crying badly

She held Maan closely will it hurt
Maan she asked to him innocently
Maan looked at her and then smiled a
bit


Just hold me tight Geet and don't
leave me
and nothing will hurt me

Geet nodded and the very next moment
wrapped her arms around him

Tightly
Kritika looked at them surprised


Maan smiled at her and said it
doesn't hurt now Ms Kritika


Kritika looked at him in anger


She held his hand more tightly


And then at one go pulled the glass
out from his hand


Maan's body jerked out of pain but
still he suppressed the cry


Kritika looked at Maan's face
surprised by his strength


He didn't even cry


She got up and walked away from him
irritated


Geet felt his body stiffen a bit


She tried to move away from him so
that she can have a look at him


But as soon as Maan felt her
movement he wrapped his hand around her waist


I am fine Geet he said holding her
tightly


Just don't leave me


Never Maan never


Promise


Hmm promise she said as she kissed
him lightly on his cheek continuously




Abhi entered the room with a doctor


Maan he screamed as he looked at the
amount of blood Maan has lost


The doctor rushed towards Maan


He looked at Maan's cut and said we
need to put some stitches on the wound Mr Khurrana


Abhimanyu just nodded


He picked Maan up in his arms and
then walked towards his room


Geet still held on to his hand


Abhi looked at her and ensured her
Maan was fine




Doctors dressed Maan's hand


The stitches were really painful but
Maan managed it


As geet held him tightly


Tears rolled down her eyes every
time Maan flinched in pain




Mr.Khurrana your son is fine now


Doctor said as he was about to leave


But please no stress on his left
hand the cut is really deep and the stitches are fresh


Yes doctor


I will take care of him


Thank you for your help




Geet still held maan's hand she was
still in pain


Maan looked at her lovingly and then
wiped her tears


I am fine geet


Hmm Geet said as she looked at his
hand umpteenth time




Rano entered Maan's room


The nurse wheeled her wheelchair
beside maan's bed and left


Rano looked at Maan's hand


Tears started rolling down her eyes


Maan looked at her worriedly


I am fine Ma sachi


Rano just looked at him angrily


Dekho na ma kitni chot lagi hai Maan
ko Geet said


Rano just nodded


Rano tried to lift her hand to sooth
Maan's head but was unable to do so


Maan tried to bend his head
immediately


But then Geet came and held Rano's
hand and guided it towards Maan's face


Both Maan and Rano smiled at her


Rano looked at Maan lovingly


But then when she heard someone's
voice her facial expression changed


She looked towards the window
horrified


Maan just followed her gaze


Kritika was standing outside the
window
PRECAP-
Mom do you know her
Maan asked
but rano couldn't say anything
Ok done now guys waiting for your lovely comments shower them on me next update probably when we reach atleast at page 40





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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh! so rano knows Krithika oh no

something is wrong definitely oh no

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