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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Excellent ff...just read it in one go...and now I am totally hooked on to this...I really like this little devil and his cute angel...day by day maan is getting more and more possessive about geet..I am little scared about that ,because some time, over possessiveness brings problem
itself...geet's nany😡😲 this nany... Kritika Khanna looks too much smart dear .. Abhimannu Khurana had no other choice??? 😲 it's good that Dadi also does not like this nany and has slightly got the wind of her intentions...hope maan and dadi will handle this nanny matter with 'care'😉
waiting for your next update...

Thanks a lot Nilam
I am so happy that u liked the ff
yes maan is getting possessive but you knw that happens when u love someone too much
no doubt that this can bring problems for their relations
the nanny is here with a motif sweety so she prepared herself as the best choice
and abhi couldnt reject her
bt dnt wry Maaan will look after Geet and even daadi is there





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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter-17
Meet with the Nanny
Abhimanyu saw his mother's disappointed look he definitely didn't liked it
He gently held his mother's hand and assured her this was for the best
Savitri Devi looked at abhi and just nodded
Ms. Khanna
Kritika she cut him before he could have said anything else
Abhi looked at her she smiled
Abhi still maintained his stern face
Kritika he repeated his voice was fully professional he didn't even looked at her
The smile was wiped off Kritika's face
Savitri devi mentally smiled feeling proud of his son who didn't even looked at the her
Abhimanyu turned towards Kritika
I hope you know why you are here Ms Kritika
Yes Mr.Khurrana
I am here to take care of your kids
Abhi nodded hmm
but you will be looking after my daughter Geet only
Ms Khanna
Kritika nodded i want you take care of her and also teach her
She is quiet weak in her studies
And i want you to start from the basics
Kritika nodded don't worry Mr.khurrana i will not disappoint you
Fine I think you must meet her first then
I would like her to be comfortable with you
Kritika just gave Abhi an flashing smile
Kids love me Mr khurrana she laid a special emphasis on the word love
But Abhi didn't notice it
Hmm let's go then
Both Kritika and Abhi got up
Abhor guided her through the stairs towards Geet's room
He was surprised to see the doors of geet's room closed
He knocked at the door once
But didn't get any reply
Abhi was now getting a hint who was in the room and locked it
He at once roared
Maan you better open the door
Maan didn't moved a bit
Geet looked at him she was little scared after hearing Abhi's loud angry voice
She at once clutched Maan's hand
It's ok Geet
I am here
Maan Abhimanyu roared again
Kritika looked at Abhi wondering what was going on
Geet looked at Maan with pleading eyes
Please Maan dad Abhi dad will be really angry from you
Maan looked away from her eyes
Nodding a no
Please Maan
Geet requested again as she cupped his face and turned it towards herself
Maan just looked at her
He knew he cannot deny her anything so he slowly moved away from her
And opened the door
Abhi heard the door unlock
He at once pushed it open
He was fuming in anger
He looked towards Maan anger and raised his hand to slap him
But Geet just came between them
Maine kara tha band door Maan ne nahi
Maan held her and pushed her back
Jhut mat bolo Geet
I did it dad
Abhi looked at them not knowing what to do he wanted to punish them but then their love for each other and trying to take blame on each other just mellowed his anger down
He maintained his composure and looked towards Geet and then Kritika
Geet in se milo ye hai aapki nanny
Kritika just came forward and offered her hand towards Geet
Hi Geet
Maan came in between them
As he pulled geet back
Talk to me first ma'am
Kritika was shocked and the guts of lil boy angered her within but she maintained
The calm smile on her face
Well hello then she said as she forwarded her hands towards him
Maan...Maan singh Khurrana
He said and lightly shacked her hand
Oh so you are junior Khurrana
Hmm he said
And you are Geet right she said
Geet looked towards Maan and when he nodded his head then only she looked towards Kritika
Yes Geet said in her sweet voice
I am your Nanny Geet
Kritika said as he pulled Geet towards her
Maan certainly didn't liked it
And as he started to move towards her Abhimanyu stopped him
Let them be together Maan
I want Geet to be comfortable with her new Nanny
And waise bhi aapko padhai karni chahiye
Maan looked at Abhimanyu and said I can study here with them dad
But Abhi just nodded for a no
Abhi walked out of Geet's room but before leaving he told Maan that he wanted to see him in the study room in 10 mins
Maan just nodded but his eyes never left Geet
Kritika just saw Maan and Geet's bonding she was really surprised to see their love for each other
Her phone buzzed at the very moment and she picked it up with a smile
Main pohch gayi hoon yaha
Ab sab thik hoga
She caressed Geet cheeks while saying so
Maan didn't liked the look in her eyes it made him more scared for Geet
This nanny was definitely here with some motif
He looked at Geet who was feeling sad to be left alone with nanny
Sorry friends no precap aaj
coz I am not sure
about what i want in the
next update
I am thankful to all the people
who read and liked and
commented on the updates
coz it really made me happy to read them
sorry for the typo errors
i just typed the part and now
i am really sleepy so
me not editing now😛
but please hit the like button and
do shower your
love on me
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Posted: 13 years ago

very interesting update...Krithika has some motive...she must be sent by Brij and father to kill Geet or some other thing but she has deffinately something up her sleeves...Maan as usual smart brain sensed it...

waiting for next...thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh God!!! nothing should happen to Geet😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
oye kick this nanny out quickly.don't drag her part.it'll get on my nerve otherwise.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Excellent update...loved it...
I really loved their bonding very much...
Krithika😡 ...hope every thing will be fine soon...
eagerly waiting for your next update...
please update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Argh i'm not liking this Kritika!
Maan is one smart cookie<3
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
is kritika came here on some purpose
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Posted: 13 years ago
Miki first of all wonderful update short but sweet & tx for the pm 😊
now i am sure as i said earlier that Krithika has been sent by brij and his father to probably eliminate geet...
but i guess Maan would know it

hmmm

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