Mini AR FF: Cross connection End pg 17

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Very cute story. Read the entire story today and enjoyed thoroughly. No drama (as in rona dhona). Cute story, sweet flow of emotions :)

Thanks for the PMs and hope to read more from you.

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Heaven

@HeAvEnS

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

awww wonderful FF....loved it ....

amazinglly written

Love Heaven

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

hey dear...!!!

The parts wer awesome....

I loved the ending it was so cute & sweet...

thnx for the cute fic n thnk u for al ur Pm's...

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Mahnaz

@Mahnaz93

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Such a cute ff
i read it all 2day
luved it 😊

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vyshu

@vyshu-avi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

hmphhh..itni choti ff..4 din kii..too much ashuu..yeh toh ini nehii..micro ff hainn..hmphh.. par naa..bahuthi cute thii😳 bilkuhl tumhari tarah.. wat a gang..and tht msg ka idea badiya thii.. ridz ne accept karliyaa..haayee.. par tu itni jaldi jaldi kyu likhdiyaa...😆 nxt time todi badi ff likhnaa...😳

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richa_b

@richa_b

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Ashu dear.....I am so late in reading this ff, but I was seriously away from IF for a long time.

Coming to the ff, it was really a very very sweet story dear. Very new and interesting concept and I loved it to bits. The best thing is that I got to read the whole story at one go. I have read your earlier creations too and I think you should write more.

BTW, where have you disappeared nowadays.....haven't heard from you since a long time.

Love,

Richa di

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forgot it :P

@lostfantacy

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

yello ashu !!

just crossed the way of cross connection and the name intrigued me to read the rest !

very nice concept ..flow was smooth and realistic ! the stalking thingy intrigues very much ...loved ur style ...the way ridhima replayed the msgs fitting herself into simran's shoes and finally realizing she so wants to be simran ~ liked the way...the particular msgs fitted into the situations !

quite a research on msgs eh ! liked it ! as well loved the pranks and tamanna sid scene ! using mahi way touch ! fantastic !

but m afraid ..that i might upset u at the end of this comment ! cause it was evident that u posted the last two parts in jiffy ..quite a hurried ending ! it wud have better if you had taken sweet time to let armaan linger a tad bit more..and their finale encounter a lil later ...i sincerely hoped that simran never existed ...that wud have better ....hope u dont mind me adding this bit .. this is not to offend you at all...!

however !

liked the entire concept ..please keep writing ....and please hold the flow ..!

regardz

lost !