Yun Hota Toh Kya Hota Pg26(5.5.11)-Lekz

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi friends,

I am going crazy watching old LTL scenes...i mean i love them and have watched them a million times but there is limit to how many times i can watch them right. So i was thinking lets have a section...where all members are allowed to present a Scene a Tasha or Duji or BAtasha scene...a scene that never happened on LTL but we would have loved to see something like this..I know all won't really feel like writing an imaginary scene..but we have lovely OS, FF writers...they can put in small scenes here...and drop me a PM and i'll edit teh title with the latest updates scenes so all can read, imagine and enjoy...u can leave comments post caps that will suit the scene and illustrate them a little.

Here's the first i wrote in some other thread...Yun hota to kya hota...
Index
TaSha scene1: Post Bonfire Party scene By Shilpita-Page1
TaSha scene2: Karvachaut by Kiran-Page3
TaSha scene3: Trip and catch recreated By Tinkerbell-Page3
TaSha scene4: Gaurdian Angel Jagtap By prncz-Page4

TaSha scene5: Morning Tea By lekz-Page5
TaSha scene6: Lovers In The Rains By dg0628-Page7
DuJi scene7: Shopping for 'The'Gift By Shilpita-Page11
Tasha scene8: Payal scene continued By dg0628-Page12
Tasha scene9: Mirror Mirror on the Wall By tintiny-Page14
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TaSha scene11:Wishful Thinking By Lekz-Page18
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TaSha scene13: Thode Badmash ho Tum By dg0628-Page19
TaSha scene14:Khamoshiyaan gungunane lagi By Lekz-Page21
Taji scene15: The Understanding By Shilpita-Page24
TaSha scene16:Yeh NokJokh,Sharaatein By Lekz-Page26

Did u guys forget the scene where Nakku and dutta are teh only one left in passing the parcel game...I loved his negligent nawabi pose when he was playing wid others but when it was just him and her..he was alert like a jungle cat and she was throwing the pillow wid force at him...they were looking at each other from hooded lids..i know the problem between them was very major one but what i liked was at that moment they were like normal couple who had had a fight...and there was distinct impression that they will kiss and make up as soon as they are left alone...then when dutta losses like a dore losser he says i won't sing or entertain any on...then one of the very few good things madhu did was to tease him saying nakku will have to face the music for him..loved loved loved his incredulous expression of split second that said.."how dare u chuttki...meri nakku ko punishment..no way.."

then he sang...i remember how apprehensive and skeptical everyone was at the prospect of Dutta singing like amitabh and here i was jumping around in the forum frm post to post saying murad hui puri and justifying that if dutta can play harmonica so well maybe he can sing too..and that it would look great onscreen with his morose air if he sings a sad kishore hit...and Cvs didn't disappoint every shot of the song was heart wrenching..especially when he walked around nakku in circles and poured sharsb in the bonfire...with eye contact with her...his pain was more like why can't i stop loving her so damned much...why do i need her to breathe...what is it that makes her so mine...so dear and so so so precious she lied to me..why can't my heart listen to my brain and hate her...

i would have loved it there was a dutta nakku scene after the bonfire...it would have been great...like dutta woudl have been all disturbed about baaji putting the gun on his head and dutta was feeling guilty about it...on the other hand kala had taunted nakku and tried to burn dutta's jacket that nakku had rescued with little burn on her hand...

Suppose Dutta in his restlessness walks out of his room towards the garden and nakku is coming inside from the garden the kinda bump into each other near the swing...dutta reaches out to steady her and is the usual brute by being rude and not meeting her eyes..

Dutta- Tu bahar kya kar rahiu thi? soyi kyun nahi ab tak?

Nakku- ji, saab main..wo...(she looks down at her hands tongue-tied)

Dutta out of the corner of his eyes watches her and follows her gaze. he notices the burned jacket..and the dark red angry marks on her hands. Dutta barks out- yeh kya hua? tera haath kaise jala (He reaches out and grabs her hands making her drop his jacket)

He forgets in his agitation that ehr hands must be tender with burns and remembers when she winces in pain..he loosens his hold and tenderly holds up the hands in light apologetic with his eyes for causing her pain. Dutta- kya hua? bol. Nakkus shakes her hand trying to free her hands- kuch nahi. Dutta holds on to her hand fast- to ye jala kaise?

Nakku- wo mere haath se aapka coat aag mein gir gaya..main usko bujha rahi thi...toh..

Dutta looks at her angrily- bewakoof ladki...ek jacket ke liye apna haat jala liya...

Nakku- main theek hai saab..aapko chinta karne ki jarurat nahi...hum aauroto ko rasoi mein aise jalne kaatne ki aadat hoti hai..

Dutta silently looks her down making her go quiet. he hold her rwist and leads her to teh kitchen. HE then switches on the cold tap and hold ehr hand under the flow of water tenderly soothing the burns..then he helplessly looks around for first aid kit..he finds it in a corner and brings it to her applying the anti burn ointment slowly on her red welts..they both look into each others eyes...she with her love for him shining thereand he with his helpless longing...

kaash yun hota toh kya hota...

plz guyz lets make the forum interesting...ana, Sheeba, Sophie,Tinkerbell,bushy,priya,vika, rose,tintiny,lizy...I want participations from u guys especially...Or else...😡


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Posted: 14 years ago
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you churaofied my thought or what!!!
I was just thinking of starting a post like this on daily basis after I saw your short OS....and you made this post😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Srushti-

you churaofied my thought or what!!!
I was just thinking of starting a post like this on daily basis after I saw your short OS....and you made this post😆



Its called telepathy😆😆...Le i made the post but we can both work on it...hai na...letys ask all lazy writers of this forum to pitch in...as akele akele itna bada kaam mushkil hoga...also hum lurking PS and etc etc loggon ko dikha denge hum kitne adamant hai...that nakku only and only belongs to DUTTA and that is spelled as D.U.T.T.A....not D.I.G.G.U.....i mean ye hai meri gandhigiri without BAshing anyone...no matter how pompous those people are..Kya bolti tu Srushti meri jaan....😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ammm... ammm... ammm.... ammm...
what?? arre soch rahi hu yu hota to kya hota, wo kya h apun ki tumhari tarah writing skiii m jabardast pakad nahi h, so give me some time... ok
and all other forum writers uth jaao re baba , shilpi aa gayi and she calls all of u lazy writers. so buck up guys ,or achchhe se khabar lena ok
waise shilpi daat deni hogi tumhari posts hamesha hi kuch hatke hoti h.
will come soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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V nicely written shilpi and kash that was shown in the serial too *hyee day dreaming*
Yep will love to read more of this!!! :D
kya karu I don't have this talent na to write FF OS !!! I can only read !!! :s
But will defo read them if u choose to continue this :D
Thank u *muh*
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shilpi,

U mentioned GANDHIGIRI isliye now Munnabhai wants to say something to u😆
Munnabhai😎 : Aye chikni,kya rapchik idea nikala hai 👍🏼 Apun bhi apna dost Dutta ko bahut miss kar rela tha😭 Tera isstory ekdum mast hai,maaza aaya.Pura world ko maloom hai apun bapu ko ekdum khaas hai ,bole toh fan hai.To apun ko toh tere se milne aaneka hi tha.
Aur ek baat,tune jo sab ladki log ke naam likhe the naa,unme se koi bhi tere idea ko follow nahi kare naa,toh tu apun ko bulana kya😉,
apun bade pyaar se unko kharcha-paani dega😆
chal ab apun chalta hai,Chinki bula reli hai😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful idea...Shilpi...just that this makes me sadder.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shilpi
love this idea , very innovative !
and what a scene would be that u described
but kya karay thats y u said yun hota tu kya hota !

hmm im thinking and thinking !
looking forward for the scenes specailly by our ff writers and os and ss !

i mean all writers!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Brilliant Idea - awesome way to keep the Tasha fire burning :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great shil... got your message i'll have to give it some thought to see what i want ...but yes will get back..agreed have to keep dutta/nakku mishal burning.x

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