Yun Hota Toh Kya Hota Pg26(5.5.11)-Lekz

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

hey guys

beautiful posts

hey tin
love ur idea ..kash all this happen in show .agar mera hath mein hota toh i will make you script writer .

lovely dear

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

hey shilpi,

amazing thread...... lovely posts...... i am just amazed at the creativity in this forum....... such good writers...... i alrdy hav told u, u make one hell of a writer n u shud do as i said to u once.........

imagination has no cutout frames.... they can go on n on....... lovely inputs from all u gals.......

just loved reading all ur posts........

tc
divya

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Pooja_219

@Pooja_219

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: shilpita87
Pooji..don't use P and S together in this thread...even for that purpose..write PostScript ok..lol

oops ,sorrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy😆

I forgot that writing these 2 letters together creats bad vibes😆

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: dc17-7
hey shilpi,

amazing thread...... lovely posts...... i am just amazed at the creativity in this forum....... such good writers...... i alrdy hav told u, u make one hell of a writer n u shud do as i said to u once.........

imagination has no cutout frames.... they can go on n on....... lovely inputs from all u gals.......

just loved reading all ur posts........

tc
divya

thanks divi..

how i wish i could do it....but alas....practical life is far tougher than imagination....not everyone can be chetan bhagat....but yes, one can try!😳

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Lekz

@Lekz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

A lovely post and lovely additions too.👏👏👏

Yun hota to kaise hota - making an attempt, hope you all like it.

Try recollecting the scene, a few days after FR, where Dutta walks out of his room fastening the watch on his wrist. He turns to go back and his gaze falls on Nakku who is in the Mandir with her hair loose lighting the lamp.This scene was so abruptly edited. But that was the sulking Dutta whose head refused to listen to what his heart called out..

I have always imagined a similar scene once Raja and Rani returned back to Patil Nivas.all problems resolved both basking in their new found love, the Don still with his stern broody self most of the time and Nakku all flustered and confused when it comes to sharing space with Saab when others are around.

Dutta gets ready, still undecided what to do about the recent problem with the new land deal. Mathur had cheated him and he was looking out for the right opportunity to strike back. Work was still dangerous and risky but he had a new purpose in life ....now .....Nakku and her happiness......

Fastening the watch on his wrist he walked out to the balcony when his gaze fell on Nakku. She was in the mandir, lighting a few incense sticks, getting aarti ready. Leaning against the railing he stood there watching, as she completed the aarti and folded her hands in prayer. Though he was still unsure of this supreme power that Ayi saheb and Nakku believed in, he definitely found himself thinking a little too often about Nakku's Bappa and her immense faith in him.

And here was Dutta whose head and heart sang the same tune..

In a few strides he was right beside her, after a quick nod at Bappa, stood arms folded, looking at her. She was muttering something that he did not quite register but the 'saab' in her conversation with Bappa was something he did not miss. Looking at her, his heart swelled with love and pride, he wondered whether there could be anyone in the whole world , who could make him feel so. One of the things that bothered him these days, after returning from the jungle was, whether he could ever love her the way she did, selflessly.

Nakku completed her prayers felt a presence close by and turned to see two pairs of eyes with a glint of mischief in them boring down at her. 'Saab' she called out, on getting no response from him, and not knowing what to do - she took the thali and offered him the aarti and prasad. He took the aarti and prasad, folded his hands back and continued to look at her.....completely flustered and uneasy all she could blurt out was ' Saab aap baitho main chai le aati hai..' and hurried to the kitchen.

Once in the kitchen she gathered her breath, tried to calm her thumping heart whispering 'Yeh saab bhi na'' ..........Gathering her hair into a clip, speaks out loud 'chai. She gets a pan from the shelf and puts it on the gas stove, pours some water and realizes that the pan was too big for tea, patting her forehead, pulls out the usual tea pan and starts all over again. Gets the lighter and clicks, for some reason it refused to work..'Ufff'ise kya hua......ab mein kya karegi.' she muttered continuing efforts to light the stove.

Suddenly she realized the lighter was off her hands.

He gently took the lighter off her hands, turned on the knob of the gas and clicked the stove to flames. She looked at him as a feeble 'Saab' escaped her lips. He shrugged his shoulders with a gleam in his eyes and Nakku could do nothing but run for the tea leaves. As she returned back to the stove, realized that he was standing too close and made no attempt to move away. She waited, looked at him but all he did was tilt his head as if saying 'Go ahead and make the tea'.

She came closer to the stove and tried her best to focus on the pan, the boiling water and the tea ..........He was enjoying every minute of this, he loved to see her all flustered and blushing.........Though he wanted to gather her in his arms at that moment, all he did was lean over and pull out the clip off her hair leaving her tresses loose all over her shoulders. He then gently brushed a few loose strands across her shoulder and walked out of the kitchen with the hair clip calling out 'Do cup chai leti aana'.

Not that it helped her in anyway, she had to calm herself all over again.

As she walked out of the kitchen with two cups of tea, he got off his chair, pulled a chair out for her indicating her to sit. She placed a cup for him, and sat on the chair he pulled out. He gently pushed the second cup towards her saying ' Ab se subah ki chai hum dono mil kar peyenge'.

'Dutta, Nakku..arre wah tum dono aaj ek saath.' Ayi sahib walked in. Nakku jumped off her chair, as she saw Ayi sahib coming towards them. Dutta also gets up 'Mein nikal hi raha tha Ayi Saheb, aaj jaldi lautoonga.bas pass me hi hoon koi kaam hai to phone kar deejiyega.' He turns to Nakku 'chai achi thi' and with a sly smile walks off.

As Ayi sahib moves off to the mandir, Nakku takes a sip of the tea and cringes. 'Chai achi thi.' rings in her mind ...It was bland....

As if in a trance she walks towards the door to the verandah and stands looking as he reverses the jeep.

She stood there looking at the man who had made her life complete....the man whose happiness mattered to her more than her own life...

Edited by Lekz - 14 years ago

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

@lekz i will be back to comment ...

*Edited:

Lekz very nice post

Loved it to the core

haye haye naughty Dutta and blushing Naku

haye haye 😍 😍😍 Enjoyed reading this

loved the kitchen aspect....I love watching romance in kitchen

cliche i know but sooooooo adorable 😆

Great post hun 🤗 Thanks for it

Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago

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@ivy_11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Its a pleasure to read this post....very well written... I could actually visualize D-N.

Thanks for the BG music...just what we need to set the tasha mood.

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

A note

Those who have participated with their posts here please send me the direct link to their post in PM so that i can add it on the index as quick launch...all u have to do is go the MY POST in the IF and find ur posts for thsi thread and send the link to me in PM.and next time plz attach ur own link in the psot so that i can update the index.😳

Lets keep the thread alive and kicking 😳😳😳

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Pooja_219

@Pooja_219

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Thanks Lekz(can i know ur name plss😊)

This was something which i also wanted to see in the show.The subtality of their romance,thoda naughty Dutta😉,thodi blushing nakku☺️.

I could actually visualise the scene😳

Do keep posting ,it will be pleasure to read.

Pooja😊

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Lekz..it was amazing yaar..when is the next one due....i would have loved to see this one...haye...i always wanted dutta teasing nakku in kitchen..it seems something new hubby would do..there is this scene in Roja where arvind comes and lights his cigerette frome gas stove and when MIL is out of kitchen shoves teh ciggy in madhu's mouth...its so naughty and cute.

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