Yun Hota Toh Kya Hota Pg26(5.5.11)-Lekz - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
a very heart warming piece of writing.. u have chosen some of the best lines of naku to dutta.. just brought back all those good episodes in my mind! they never showed much bonding between |dutta-sethji na.. and ur version will be as close to the original if there was ever one.. esp the way D says did se jhooth bolta hain and lifts his hand just to scare sethji and then ruffles his hair.. i could see MR and sethji so clearly in my mind.. great job shilpi..
aaww.. the way sethji asks if he will look after his sister was so beautiful.. even though he is a lil boy, he knows how many hardships his sister has gone thru and asks in his innocent manner..this touched me just as much as the way in which Dutta extracts three promises lol..how he would not want sethji to waster his life away..
very well done :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
pann ye sharafat ki life ne to apna pura reputation ka vaat laga diya hai..kya bolega main abhi!!!👏👏👏👏 Hahahahaha
Loved it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
*********Yun Hota To Kaisa Hota *********
Yeh Nokh Jokh, Shararetein
One fine morning at Patil Niwas, after Raja, Rani returned to rule Patilwadi.
Nakku was in the kitchen getting breakfast ready, making sure there was something special for everyone. Her hurried steps to and fro the kitchen to the dining table went unnoticed.
Aayi Saab was at the mandir, lighting lamp, busy with her usual morning puja.
Baji, in the living room, was on the phone talking to some business associates on the recent deal that was getting finalized.
Dutta walked out of the shower, up to the closet, a red towel across his shoulders and realized his clothes would be on the bed. He turned around to see the turquoise blue kurta on the bed, picked it up and smiled. 'Ab to tere bina jeena hi bhul gaya hoon', the grin widened on his face. Fastening his watch he walked out into the foyer of his room to see Nakku at the dining table setting up breakfast. Hands on the railing he leaned over, watching her. Nakku breezed in and out of the kitchen and finally emerged with a large jug of fruit juice that she poured into one of the smaller jugs on the table.
As she filled the second jug at the other end of the table, instinct made her look up to find Dutta on the verandah looking down at her. He straightened as their eyes met and continued to look at her. Mesmerized she returned the gaze back not realizing the jug overflow, spilling the contents over to the table. She jerked her head back, too late.
Getting a napkin from the kitchen she dabbed the spilt liquid, looking back at him, a deep crease drawn across her brows.
'Sab aapki galti hai, Saab' her look clearly conveyed the message.
'Mein ne kya kiya', He smiled, 'Aur phir itne door khada hoon ' he shrugged his shoulders in reply.
'Sab aapki galti hai, bas' she nodded her head affirming her statement.
He laughed out loud irritating her further. She continued wiping the table refusing to look up. After a few more rounds up and down the kitchen she stole a glance up to the balcony. Hands folded on his chest he continued to watch her with a grin still pasted across his lips.
The next time she looked, he touched his ears as if in apology and motioned her to come up and she nodded her head in a big NO.
Aayi Saab, done with puja walked into the dining, to see Nakku at the table looking up and nodding her head. She stepped closer to the table and saw Dutta on the balcony. She looked at the two of them talking to each other in their own world, hid her smile in her pallu and looked on.
He turned his lips down at the corners and put out his most appealing face, pleading a couple of times with his eyes, gestures, as she continued to say no. Upset he finally signaled he was coming down. He turned and walked down the stairs adjusting the sleeves of his kurta, not leaving her gaze as she continued to say no. Just as he landed the bottom of the stairs she turned around for an escape and found Aayi Saab looking at her.
'Aayi Saab, aap kab ayi ? Naashta taiyar hai aaiye na' she took Aayi Saab her by the arm and led her to the table. As they moved towards the table Nakku looked at Dutta giving him a broad smile.
Dutta who had already taken a few steps to the table, did a U turn to walk back as soon as he saw Aayi Saab.
'Dutta, kahan jaa raha hai, nashta taiyar hai aa jaa' Aayi Saab stopped him.
He nodded at Aayi Saab, and turned to glare at Nakku as if to say 'Dekh loonga tujhe'.
Aayi Saab controlled her smile pretending not to have seen any of this.
Nakku put a straight face, trying to suppress her smile.
Soon the others were around and all seated on the dining table, the usual hustle bustle.
Nakku came and sat beside Dutta who continued to sulk at his setback. She served him food and poured out a glass of juice. He laughed gently at Roops and Baji's argument but refused to touch the food, the pout still evident on his face. She stared up into his face, suddenly aware that he was waiting for her.
Nakku drew a deep breath, broke a piece of chapatti from her plate and with a little of the sabji, placed the piece on his plate and looked at him again..
Frowning a little he looked back at her still refusing to eat. There was a hint of arrogance to his strong jaw and a proud tilt to his head. The face of a King she thought.
'Dutta, Nakku ne jo karna tha usne kar diya, ab to kha le.' Aayi Saab's voice brought him back from the daze.
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Missing Mishal Raheja...our Dutta Shriram Patil
Edited by Lekz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍😍😍😍😍😍 beautiful Lekz!!!
dinner table scene is something u cant forget when u think of PN!!!
thank dear😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG OMG OMG Lekzzz !

Thank u for writing such a besutiful piece !
This was all i wanted to see from tasha , but we never got the chance !

LOved it LEkzzz !

so beautiful and so subtle ,
Love their talking in their own language :D
TAsha never needs words and this YHTKH shows that !

Their al emotion can be conveyed without words and they exactly know what the other one is thinking !

This is simplyyy beautiful !

LEkzzz Plzzz write an OS na !
PLZZZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww lekz that was beautiful

haha i was soo into it and then u ended it

aww but great work

loved it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks a lot Lekha for such a beautiful scene👏
The dining table has always played important role in LTL & movement of the story.
I loved this slight naughtyness from Dutta & they still continue their eye to eye talks😍
AS again caught him😆
Poor Dutta ,isko koi serial me toh kya story me bhi thik se romance nahi karne deta.🤣
But,i loved that first morsel of food wala part the most👍🏼
Thanks for this YHTKH.
Pooja😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the the awesome scene, Lekha.😃

Loved the convo between Dutta and naku..with Dutta pretending to be the personification of innocence.."Mein nekya kiya" 😉

Yeh Nakku bhi na...Hamare Dutta ko Ruthati rahti hai...Poor guy is now sulking🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AzMishy

😍😍😍😍😍😍 beautiful Lekz!!!

dinner table scene is something u cant forget when u think of PN!!!
thank dear😳

Thanks Mishy, yes the dinning and the foyer where we had Dutta looking down are some of my favs too...
Sounds inane that am putting my thoughts down on this thread ...Thats what TaSha has done to me I guess...Sigh
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255

OMG OMG OMG Lekzzz !

Thank u for writing such a besutiful piece !
This was all i wanted to see from tasha , but we never got the chance !

LOved it LEkzzz !

so beautiful and so subtle ,
Love their talking in their own language :D
TAsha never needs words and this YHTKH shows that !

Their al emotion can be conveyed without words and they exactly know what the other one is thinking !

This is simplyyy beautiful !

LEkzzz Plzzz write an OS na !
PLZZZ

Thanks Kiran, you are too generous with your praises...itna bhi kuch nahi tha...frankly its so depressing that I just take refuge in this thread by writing something.
Yeah TaSha never needed words, they spoke volumes with their eyes.
Word, they understood each other so well its like reading each others dhadkan.
Never though they would stoop to this level.
Thanks again Pal. OS will try, believe me as I said its stupid I never wrote anything ever in my life.
🤗

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