Yun Hota Toh Kya Hota Pg26(5.5.11)-Lekz - Page 9

^^ thanks rama ....I'm glad that you liked it 😃

yes I missed it..cause i dont ghumofy around the forum much except for the ccc and srush's wu thread..and ppls ffs

Ok here is one short one from me....

Remember the 'Payal ya necklace' scene..after the catastrophic almost mistake by dutta and after being made to look what he exactly is the great Gadha....he actually got the right gift for his koyal...the ultimate romantic Gift -PAYAL....aur wo payal hi the...as he confidently told her while showing them to her in the beautiful moonlit night...albeit our baaji ji ki vahiniji like a scared cat made her escape with MIL ka milk and meds ka bahana....But i have always wondered how Dutta must have selected that gift for his love...so here is a spinet of how he must have gone about it.

Dutta paced his room still feeling the heat of embarrassment of what had transpired today infront of everyone while selecting a gift for nakku.
Dutta murmured to himself- ye aaisaheb bhi na! ab mereko kaise pata chalega wo necklace tha..nakku bhi maaza dekh rahi thi. mereko is jhamele mein hi nahi padneka tha..

just then a memory flashed infront of his eyes...her sweet voice chirped in his ears...."saab, aapko pyaar jatana nahi aata!"
her could see naku smiling at him and his choice of gift...the huge teddy bear.."saab, ladkiyon ko jhumkey,daginey ye sab bahut passand hota hai.."

He smiled at the innocent excitement she had in her eyes. He had wanted to give her those payals. when he had walked into the room and aaisaheb had asked him to choose a gift for nakku...his first thought had been to choose a payal for her..he hadn't dwelt upon it but now that he thought of it he knew why he wanted the payal...he wanted her to wear the payal so that whenever she moved he'll hear her tinkle and know she was near. He felt whimsical about it like a callow youth in his first brush with love.

Baaji walked in talking on his phone- arey to bolne ka naa..jaban mein kya mehendi laga ke baitha hai.....haan to tu sambhal le.

Baaji looked at his friend who was deep in his thoughts with a smile tugging at his lips, a constant state now a days with bhau.Baaji was extremely happy for Dutta but the truth castes a shadow on his happiness. Baaji-bhau...kya soch rela hai? sab theek hai na?
Dutta snaps out of his reverie-hmmm..haan main ..wo main theek hai.
He looks at baaji- Baaji, mereko ek kaam hai..chal mere saath.
Baaji looked at him surprised- kya kaam bhau? kissi ko baajane ka hai..he takes out his gun pointing in the air....then pulls a mock punch saying...ya saajane ka hai?

Dutta grimaced rethinking about taking baaji- Nai, chal bas gaadi nikal.

They get to teh market and dutta pulls infront of a jeweller's shop. Baaji- bhau! yahan kya kaam hai....koi loccha hai kya?
Dutta- koi loccha nahi hai. dekh andar sharafat se pesh aana samjha!
baaji frowns at dutta's rude warning but curiously follows him inside.
Dutta was second time that day caught on unknown territory. He faltered for a second thinking if payal was indeed something that she would like.
"Dil se doogey naa...to hamesha dil se laga ke rakhegi" Dutta smiled to himself thinking of her simplicity.He could remember her pleasure at that duppatta he had bought her. He made up his mind and walked to the counter.

Dutta looked at the saleswoman- ji..mujhe wo...hume payal dekhne the. Hearing the words baaji breaks into a wide smile understanding instantly.
baaji-Kya bhau? saahi jaa rahe ho..lagey raho! Dutta glares at him to make him quiet. baaji takes the hint of danger in Dutta's eyes and for his own health shuts up and points at the tray presented by the saleswoman to divert Dutta's angry attentions from his person...Dutta turnes to look at the array of ornaments presented for his perusal. They looked the same to him like the thing he had selected in the morning at his home..fearing he would commit the same mistake again, he hesitated at the selection.
Dutta -ye payal hi hai na?
The saleswoman was taken aback- haan,sir.Ye payal hi hai.apne payal hi kaha tha na?
Dutta picked a long chain with various things handing from it- Pakka ye payal hi hai?
Baaji bit his tongue trying not to laugh himself silly while Dutta glared at the already harried woman.
Salewoman- aapne payal maangi to main payal hi dikhaungi na?...Necklace thodi dikhaungi...

That did it for baaji he burst out laughing pointing his hand at Dutta- kya bhau! tu to pura yeda hai...tereko payal aur necklace mein farak nai pata to kya duniya mein kissi ko nahi pata...Ye payal hi hai!

......Yun hota toh kya hota....Hmm!!

res :)

*Edited:

Shilpi that was great :)

I loved Baaji ...biting his tongue to hold from laughing 😆 but didnt work

and Dutta hesitant to commit the same mistake.....cutie ...love him :)

great scene ....i was thinking of doing the payal scene to but after her gives it to

her lol but i dunno i never ended up doing it for some reason 😳

loved it dear :)

Originally posted by: dg0628

res :)

*Edited:

Shilpi that was great :)

I loved Baaji ...biting his tongue to hold from laughing 😆 but didnt work

and Dutta hesitant to commit the same mistake.....cutie ...love him :)

great scene ....i was thinking of doing the payal scene to but after her gives it to

her lol but i dunno i never ended up doing it for some reason 😳

loved it dear :)

Great idea Dhayani..make it happen..u can post Youtube link of that payal giving scene and add that next yun hota scene....it will give a continuation to my scene....wow that would be amazing....plz plz plz..do it naa..sooooon...*Pleading pouting muh*😆

Shilpi🤗

Originally posted by: shilpita87

Great idea Dhayani..make it happen..u can post Youtube link of that payal giving scene and add that next yun hota scene....it will give a continuation to my scene....wow that would be amazing....plz plz plz..do it naa..sooooon...*Pleading pouting muh*😆

yeah that was one of the scenes i was debating to do for the one i did ...and then i didnt

lol sure if u really want I'll write a short one ...after the payal giving scene haha wen she runs ....

hmmmmm....i will write it soon ....😳😃

NOTE PLZ READ :

So this part I wrote as kinda a request from shilpi lol
this is kinda of a spin off from her Yun Hota Toh Kya Hota on pg.11 (payal scene) read her part first and then watch the youtube link of the beautiful scene 😍 below and then read this....so it kinda flows better

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I6rzU1NaEqs&feature=youtu.be

continued Payal scene :D ............

Naku used AS as an excuse the jet off as fast as she can from there. She was overwhelmed with the amount of love Dutta was showering on her. He made her heart beat faster every time he came around. Little did she know that his heart was also restless when she was around him. Dutta knew that she would probably make some excuse as romance is not exactly her usual cup of tea. She was a very shy girl, who he could never imagine her to openly express her love in such romantic ways. All he wanted was time alone with his wife (to-be) on the terrace, was that too much to ask? It seemed like everyone was against this, even Naku. But this time Dutta wasn't going to let it be, he's determined, if he can get embarrassed in front of his whole family just to pick a pair of payals for her and bear Baaji's teasing for her...she can make time for him...she will make time for him. A determined Dutta walks, like a child looking for some chocolate to steal, around the house. He walks by AS room, where he saw her sleeping. He wondered then where Naku went because clearly, she wouldn't be needing milk to sleep. He looks near the mandir in their house she wasn't there so he figured where else is his Heer going to be? Kitchen bingo. There she stood tidying up. He looked around and saw stillness of the room. No one was there but the two of them. That was what he wanted. He stood by the door and watched her smile to herself. He stood silently admiring her innocence and simplicity. She was done the kitchen work and grabbed some milk for herself..as she took a sip then she froze looking down at her feet, her payal. She thought with every step she took and every noise it made he was with her, this made her smile grow bigger. Dutta smiled watching her and spoke "If the gift itself makes you smile like this, how about the person who gifted?" Naku was caught off guard, and kind of jumped hearing his voice. She turned to the door and suddenly got extremely nervous. "Saab" she gasped "...d-id you want something, you could've just called for me" she said stuttering. He moved forward taking steps closer to her "Haan, I did want something...but first tell me what do I get?" Naku creased her forehead in confusion "Kya matlab?" Dutta stopped right in front of her, with his arms folded across his chest , he looks into her eyes and said "for giving you the gift, what do I get?" Both looked down at Naku's payal, Naku looks hesitant and nervous. She wasn't sure what he was up to, but she was sure that it would make her uneasy. She looks at him and immediately lowers her gaze and asks "Saab, whatever you want from me ask" He smiled and said "First I want that" as he pointed at her glass of milk. She immediately goes to turn to grab him a glass when he stops her and asks her "where are you going" she responds "uh...the milk" as she pointed in the direction of the stove. Dutta shakes his head and points at her glass "I said this one" Naku looks at her glass and then looks at him...she had already drank half of it, and realizing that why he asked just caused Nakku to blush hard. She looked down the whole time as he stuck her hand out handing over the milk" Dutta smiled and chucked the now cool milk down in one go. Naku was kinda surprised. I mean she had seen him drink alcohol like that but milk. She quickly looked down again as he finished the glass to avoid eye contact. Dutta put the glass on the counter and grab Naku's wrist and dragged her with him. She was kinda startled by this and looked at him confused. She managed to ask where he is taking her in between where he simply said terrace. Nakku's eyes widen. He knew she would try to get out of it but he wasn't going to let her this time. She try's saying AS again but Dutta said he checked on her and she is a sleep, she was going to say something about the kitchen, but Dutta stops her to say he knows that her work in there for the day is over. Then finally she thought he will have to let her go if she said she was sleepy "Voh Saab, I'm sleepy" and he stopped turned around looked at her smiled and continued on his way. She was shocked that he didn't care. "Koi baat nahi... you can sleep on the terrace to, it would be nice...." She couldn't believe her ears. They made it up there and Naku who was reluctantly being dragged behind him actually walked ahead herself in amusement at the decorations that were done. She thought all was amazing, the moon light added to the effect with flowers around and the lights...and she turned back and looked at him with a single tear drop in happiness. He walked towards her and cupped her face in his hands. He used his thumb to wipe the tear lightly. They look into each other's eyes as they see their life flash before their eyes. From the first meeting, to becoming friends, to the gun point marriage, to the mandir scene where Naku saves him, then the JMM1 scenes and his proposal, her rejecting, then her coming back, and accepting. Remembered everything up to that point in time. The silence between them spoke loud and clear of the love they had for each other. They shared a relationship that no words can explain. It was that of their heart and soul....

OK so I kinda got writer block here lol I dunno where to go with this.... so I will stop there :P

Hope you liked it...and I did write this very quick so excuse the mistakes

awww shilp n daya u both did a wonderful job at d payal scne..one of d my fav scnes lol...