Yun Hota Toh Kya Hota Pg26(5.5.11)-Lekz - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
Welcome back Liz!, missed ur musings for so long. With LTL u too vanished all this time. Lovely post btw. Thanx again to shilpita for this topic. I can read this entire thread again nd again with all the short OSs. 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
WB noticed you have been MIA for a while. Hope you had a good vacation.
Your update was awesome...brillinatly written..⭐️ .teared me up at the love between these two...but then TaSha - the selfless devotion tears me up always...😍
So natural Dutta challenging with his eyes and Nakku flustered confused...just what we love about them...and their discussion on passion...Gold...wonder Nakku will ever get herself to talk about passion...
Thanks for the lovely update...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey liz,

once again, a superb post dear...

loved reading it... missing ur writing... wish, u come up with something...

tc
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Posted: 14 years ago

**** Yun hota to kaisa hota ********

The scene continues from where Dutta slaps Nakku for dancing, followed by the memorable dinner. She takes him to their room and bandages his wound as he drifts off to sleep '.she sits on the ground with her head on the bed and sleeps off too.

Sunlight sweept into the room as a new morning dawned, Dutta opened his eyes wondering where he was. His head felt as if hit by a boulder, and as he moved his hand, felt something, turns to find Nakku sleeping with her head on the bed, hand in his. He looked at her, at his hand bandaged with her saree strip, the first aid kit and sits up. Holding his head in his hands he tried to recollect what happened. He remembered walking into the kitchen and dropping the plate'..and then as if in a dream flashes of what happened swims before his eyes. She was waiting for him, served him food and walked him back to their room.

He turned to look at her, softening at the serene look on her face, deep in sleep. Dragging himself to one side of the bed, he sat looking at her, unable to take his eyes off. A wisp of hair fell on her face and he could see stains of tears still on her cheeks. As if in a trance his hands gently tucked the hair behind her ear. His gaze fell on the wound on her hand that still had stains of blood. Involuntarily his hand moved to the wound touching it gently''Nakku ko laga Bhau ke jaan khatre me hai 'bas nikal padi mujhe leke'' Baji's words rang in his ears'

She stirred, felt a touch on her hand and opened her eyes. She saw him sitting next to her on the bed, startled she stood up and he withdrew his hand in a jerk. 'Saab woh mein' , she stuttered.

He stood up, turning his face away as if reminding himself - she was a cheat and he hated her. Hands clenched he turned back to look at her, the shutter back in his eyes..cold eyes stared at her in disgust as she fumbled 'woh kal raat'..

He walked away towards the sofa and stood facing the wall his back to her.

She hurriedly walked out of the room stopping at the door to say 'Saab mein chai bhejti hai'

He turned his head in time to see her receding figure, the guard fell off once again and he wished he heard 'Saab mein chai leke aati hai '.

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Edited by Lekz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh i loved i loved that last bit abt him wishing he had heard 'saab main chai leke ati hai'

He had so ruthlessly thrown her out of the room the morning after the lighter scene...then had thrown the cup and insulted her in front of the servants...

I wish we had some more husband-wife scene in PN before they did wht they did to the track on 28th march...but alas...but yeah..makes me wonder yun hota to kya hota!!!

Lekha thanks a lot yaar...this is simplicity at its best...i am amazed that many of the memebers who feel they can't write have come up with so many amazing scenes like even kiran...and u...WOW...looking forward to more...as i know we can have million such moments.
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Posted: 14 years ago

superb Lekz!!!!

that was one nice scene n wish it was showen in that way!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh lekhz that was superb...

u nailed it...everything about it...stick to character and emotions

beautiful ... great job

thanks for such a part

and loved the end about the chai. ...she says she'll send it up vs he wants her to bring it up ... awww...he's so consumed in her lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful moment Lekha👍🏼How wish this would have been the actual scene😍I liked how he could hear baaji's voice ,& that touch on her wound,sigh...Like Shilpi said,the last line was the best.Gadha full on apni akad me kitna kuch miss kar gaya & we also missed all these beautiful scenes.Thanks for this YHTKH.Do come back with some more scenes😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks Shilpi. Oh yes, he was such a bewakoof…never could see through his own heart…I so wish too we got some cute husband wife scenes..the subtle TaSha kinds…..everything ended so abruptly…and when we read the real eternal story somewhere there is a sense of loss on what we lost out.

I love this thread and am sure there will be more people joining 'coz we all imagine so many things its just the effort to put them on paper. Would love to see more of the YHTKH….

Thanks Mishy..I wish too but DSP was so obsessed with his dhoka dhokebaaz thingy that he refused to look beyond…must agree Nakku endured a lot…

Thanks Dhayani…glad you liked it…word – he was always so consumed in her just that he refused to accept…Gadha…

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Posted: 14 years ago
yun hota to kaisa hota
Foreword: scene 6th december 2010. The scene is a personal favourite,as it stands out as mostly non-verbal where actions speak louder than words.Dutta's persona as a man of action with very few words is brought out,also Nakku's silent ,helpless looks cover an inner strength. When the two finally strike verbal contact,it appears a battle betwit the two,where both justify their personal stand and grounding behind individual actions. My continuation is just a feeble attempt at showing what might have transpired if the verbal action might have continued perchance...
Love's Sore
Dutta kicks the cushion on the floor and makes his way to leave his room,whilst Nakku looks on in abject saddness and hopelessness. Saab whimpers Nakku, Dutta stops midway between her and the door. Hmmm, he murmers without facing her, Saab,she repeats, mujhe samajh nahi hai aap ko kis baat ka ghusahai?, he reels around, and she can visibly see his frigid eyes,and stiff mouth spells anger ,but more so shock at her nerve to question him. Dutta parts his lips and spurts out Kya boli tu?! Saab, she repeats kis baatse naraz ho?. He stiffens his head and moves defiantly towards her with slight briskness than normal,but stops at the foot of his bed. Kis baat se? he poses a question upon her question,looking at her with narrow eyes,and shortly fires another question towards her, Ye sawaal tu apne ap se pooch Nakku?. She becomes helpless under his querying onslaughts and feels her wounded arm nimbly with her little quivering hand before disintegrating into tears. Dutta decides to soften a tad,as he observes her tears, he points to her wonded arm, Haan yehe tu Nakku! ye tera ghao!, pun Saab aap ko bas! he raises his palm and points his erect fore finger at her, Thujhe beech mein aany ki kya zaroorat thi? he quizzes her furiously, Balkay thujhe wahan aaney ki kya zaroorat thi? he continues to raise his voice, Woh Saab mein whispers Nakku, Ghup! ek dum ghup!, Nakku mujhe apna dhunday mein teri madaat ki zaroorat nahi,he hollers, Pun Saab,Nakku tearfully urges on, Mein aap ki patni hai,aap ki rahsha karna mera faraz bunta hai!.The corners of his mouth bent downwards stubbornly and his narrow raging eyes softened at her response which was as he expected from her, and he walks past the foot of the bed and comes around sits on the edge of the beside her. Dutta examines her with helpess eyes,with slightly twitched eye brows, and he looks intently into her watery eyes,as he attempts to reason with her ,as opposed to gunning her... Nakku, teri jaan bhi ja sakte thi ,he explains to her,and suddenly stands up beside her and continues speaking, or aggar aisa ho ja ta ,tou Dutta aapnay ap ko kabhi maf nehi karta! Nakku cluthes on to his tender gaze which he pours on her while he stands. He breaks away from the eye contact and on hearing her snivel,he bends on the beside table ,pulls out a tissue from the tissue box and passes it to Nakku icely. He watches her as she dabs her eyes and face dry, and says, Bas kar aur tu aram kar, abhi main chalta hai. Nakku catches him glance at her again before he turns and gradually walks out of his room, with her in his bed! Nakku can clearly see that his on display
frosty armour of steel, stands in contrast with the camoulage of pain and hurt that bubbles inside him. She also knows where he is heading for to drown his trauma,his usual temporary painkiller ,alcohol!
Heavily Nakku considers,if only he can let go of his insecurities,his fear of facing betrayal, his disbelief in the sincerity of her love, his in acceptance of the sanctity of marriage,at least this time.. But when that can be,only time can tell,untill then she can continue to nurse her love's sore...

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