Yun Hota Toh Kya Hota Pg26(5.5.11)-Lekz - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Hey Lekha,

Loved that scene...The beauty of tasha is their love and concern for each other despite the situation.

Ditto...adore the subtle, pure and understated yet intense love of D-N
Edited by ivy_11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful!! U r bang on Lekha with DN nd their subtle romantic moves. Dutta superconfident nd Nakku all flustered nd not knowing how to handle the attention. Very cute!.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
šŸ¤— for all the appreciation and good words.........

@dg0628 : Thanks a ton for the comments. Glad you liked it. Cliched yes....but nothing like watching Dutta a lil naughty and Nakku her usual confused self…Nakku's confidence was only when Dutta was blind…..she will never be able to face those piercing eyes….

Thanks Raj….Tasha will be the end of us I guess…sote jagte I just keep thinking of them….I hate to read Nakku without her Saab around…..was watching the scene where she takes the bullet and they are walking after drinking water from the pond….if you closely observe the scene…our man is walking ahead with that typical constipated …'I hate the world' expression and she is following like a meek lamb…but together they looked so complete….thanks for liking the post….
Hammie thanks yeah healing touch indeed.
Thanks Divya.
Thanks a ton Ranjana.
Thanks Lalitha….yeah they screwed up the entire plot….thanks to exceptional creative skills…and maintaining tradition yeah that's so Tasha right…
Thanks Kiran.
Thanks Mishi.
Thanks Ivy am glad that the scene was visualized the way I had imagined and written.
@brvr – Thanks a ton for liking.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Yun Hota Toh Kya Hota :D

Note: So I was trying to decide what scene to take off from and I couldn't ...there is just too many I could work with itz soo hard to choose šŸ˜† but anyway this is what I decided to do...going off track but hopefully you like it 😃 the epi is kinda mixed in to this .. here we go :P

The headlights of the car catches Dutta's attention as he sat in the deserted jungle area waiting for his ride. He speaks up asking why it took so long for Kale to come, when he sees Baaji jump out of the passenger seat of the car. His expression changes to a frown. He stares in surprise as the headlights of the car turns off and to his surprise there sat his beautiful wife, Nakusha, in the driver's seat. His expression immediately changes to that of anger, concern, and irritation. He stands up and stares at Nakusha with a 'why did u do that' wala expression. He immediately questions Baaji, his voice hinting at slight discontent, "have you forgotten how to drive a car?" Dutta stares at Naku as Baaji explains that Naku would not listen to him and how she thought that his life was in danger so she took control in the moment, and he had no choice but to go along with her. Dutta flashbacks to when Naku told him she has no right to come in his room, and that she will now only come when he calls for her. Dutta in strictly says that he only asked for the car not help, and whoever thinks to help is doing so on their own will. He turns his head away. It was clear the thought that Naku had put herself in danger to supposedly help him was bothersome. His mind hated her but his heart beated only for her. His anger was controlled at this moment, yet it was still visible. Naku walks up to him and both her and Dutta share an eyelock. He knew she loved him more than anything but he wasn't ready to forgive her. But her presence made every minute different, special, although he did not want to accept it; her love flooded his heart and every beat if his heart was because of her only. Baaji who sees this as a perfect opportunity for Dutta and Naku to reconnect, he decides to leave. He thinks to himself that Dutta and Naku need to spend time together alone. He knew that if he got in that car that his Bhau being himself would drive quietly back home. So Baaji walked towards the car slickly grabbed the car keys that was still in the ignition and walked off. He hitched a ride home from someone he knew who happened to come by. He was proud of his plan and was sure that they had no choice but to walk home alone...no together. Naku calls out 'Saab, ghar chaliye, gaadi aagai' Dutta stares at her in discontent, it was clear to him that this girl will never leave his side and that she will go to any extent for him. He knew that and it made him feel more bitter, and frustrated. He stares at her with concern and then although angry with her, could take seeing her shiver like that. He slowly walks to her while taking his coat off. He stands just inches away from her and wraps the coat around her. Without a word, he walks away without giving her a glance and stands at a distance. Naku notices this a thinks that she knows that he wants to look into her eyes, but is trying to avoid it, as she thinks this he turns to look at her and walks towards her again. But then he walks right passed her and Naku's eyes follow in his direction. Dutta walks to the car and Naku follows with her heart longing for Dutta to open up to her and speak. Dutta finds that the key is not in the ignition and turns towards Naku. Naku walks around to the driver's side and notices the key is not there. Both look at each other and realize that Baaji must have taken the key. Dutta looks at Naku in irritation, and then adamantly walks off like a child who was told he has no choice but to sit in the corner. Naku thinks about the situation then smiles slightly to herself, she was appreciative of Baaji's thinking. Naku followed Dutta through the jungle, in the darkness of the night. She followed him like his shadow. Dutta was annoyed thinking about the fact that Naku always shows up that to putting her own life at risk, he hated, it bothered him to the core to know that no matter what he said or did she will forever stand as his shadow, or more like his shield. Ready to take on whatever ill may fall upon him. Naku could tell that her every presence in such situations affected him, she knew he hated it, but not because he hated her but rather because he loved her and just could not admit it. Both were thinking about the other and continued to walk as grey clouds began to cover the sky. Dutta couldn't help but feel, something about walking with her, her presence, made his heart skip beats. His anger, as much as he wanted to show it he just couldn't, his heart wouldn't let him. He stopped on his trail at the sound of loud thunder and then suddenly felt to hands grasp his arm tight. He didn't need to turn to see, he knew the feeling of those two small hands, the effect of that touch...he knew it was Naku. His minded wanted to shake his arm right out, but his heart wanted them to stay, he wanted her to keep those warm arms on him. He couldn't help but love her, no matter which corner he turns she'll be there and he knew that. Naku grasp tightened as the thunder got louder, Dutta knew it would rain hard and figured they should find shelter. He knew in the darkness of the night, he couldn't afford to lose her, so her grasping onto to him was probably the best thing. He led her under a broken shed he saw nearby and stood there. Naku looks up at him and Dutta can see this from the corner of his eyes but he couldn't help but think how he could love a traitor.Rain started pouring now and Naku, finally realized the closeness to Dutta and let go. Her hands releasing their grip suddenly caught Dutta's attention. He turned to look at Naku who looked down and moved a bit away embarrassed. As she stared at the rain all she could think about was that her Saab loved her or else he would've thrown her out like yesterdays garbage with his anger. But he was too stubborn to admit, she knew that his heart only pines for me, she knew that he won't give in right there and then. Dutta stared after Nakku as her hands began to play with the rain...all he could think was how beautiful she was looking. As much as he didn't want to give in to her, he was actually amused with her little hands splashing the water, her innocence, her love everything just pulled him to her. Naku started walking towards the rain and Dutta reacted to her slightest movement. His feet automatically went towards her. As he was about to reach out to stop her, but she had already stepped forward to get drenched, her next step he saw her feet start to slide and he jolted to her...he was quick to catch her fall wrapping both arms around. One arm went around to her upper back and the other around her waist to her lower back. He stood there both in an eyelock, as they continued to stare into each other's eyes, Dutta brought her up to stand up, but was still holding her. Suddenly the rain stopped and the breeze aired over their wet bodies making both snap back into realty. Dutta immediately removes his hands and Naku, looks down and away in embarrassment. As she face away she couldn't help but smile but that smile was quick to fade when Dutta without a word just continued walking on the path to go home. Naku again just followed helplessly and annoyed at his stubbornness.

Wow ok ...so a lot of this is from the episode and then I kinda just modified it ...hope you liked it ...I was going to write more but i got lazy šŸ˜† so imma just stop here ...Hope you liked it :P Let me know 😃


Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
RES
that was breathakingly beautiful babeh!!
my heart was goin>>>



Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Dhayani....that was soooo cute šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›

LMAO...at the line about throwing her out like "yesterday's garbage" šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† Honestly, where do you come up with these one liners????

Totally loved Nakkuz shyness and Dutta being mesmerized by her...itz like he loses all senses when hez around her😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: monigod

Dhayani....that was soooo cute šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›


LMAO...at the line about throwing her out like "yesterday's garbage" šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† Honestly, where do you come up with these one liners????

Totally loved Nakkuz shyness and Dutta being mesmerized by her...itz like he loses all senses when hez around her😳



omg mon i wrote this after u two left my house

LMAO yeah you noe how my brain works ..šŸ˜†

yesterday's trash :P

haha thanks for the comments

love you and see you soon :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

RES

that was breathakingly beautiful babeh!!
my heart was goin>>>





haha thanks Missy 😳

I just love ur emoticons 😃

I'm glad that u liked it and it took ur breath away šŸ˜†


that heart is jumping out :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dg0628



haha thanks Missy 😳

I just love ur emoticons 😃

I'm glad that u liked it and it took ur breath away šŸ˜†


that heart is jumping out :P

gee u liked it lol..........
btw i espesh loved d barish scene...they are always my fav
rain always mkes everythng sooo soooooo romantic *sigh* n HOT lol




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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
me coming after reading...will take time but will be there for my Daya...Duniya jale to jalešŸ˜›
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Chal Daya... mein aa gai😃
finally to unreserve the reservation.....
Haye...barish aur Tasha....was so wanting to see that scene..
Nakku's little hand playing with rain drops...owww...and Dutta watching her...would have made such an epic scene,,worth a montage pic....
her walking with him made him feel so good...really they complete other so much...only the presence of the one means so much to the other...no words required.....
and Dutta the gadha walks away wiping the smile from Nakku's face😔...Maro Maro usko😔
Daya re beautiful scene yaara...wonderful ..you completed the scene which most of us were hankering to see more of...Thanks yaarašŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Edited by -Srushti- - 14 years ago

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