FF Suhaag Ki Nishaani...PART 9 PG 31 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
nice concept and an awesome update...................continue soon....................however can we expect to get someone in geet's life who will bring happiness to her or a comeback of maan's look alike................you are the writer, its for you to decide what turn you want your story to take.......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Good story line .

Do Continue.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
oh! geet as maan's widow😲 ............ very different concept ....hope u'll surprise us with maan's return in the present story .😳 pls add me to ur pm list............
Edited by siroilily - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
wow awsome one yaar ...dont make maan die yar ,,,
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
wooooooooooooooooooo itna khatarnak start😡😡i'll kill u😡😡
congrates for starting neww FF and thanks a lot for PM😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
lmao you start is sooooooooo different . please add me to your pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

nice concept

but plz need maan alive

but different concept

con soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Sorry guys but there might not be an update today😭
I want to focus on my 2 OS's 2day,Memories of his past and Why did you leave us,Geet? so sorry!!!
But there myt still be an update😆
Depends on how much time i actually spend writing nd how much i spend on IF😉
Sorryyyyyyyyyyy😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

I Just want to say that while I was writing this,I was in tears.😭Also,Maan is stammering because he is in immense pain so it is making it hard for him to speak.

Part 2

SHE RUNS AND GOES AND SITS NEXT TO HIM.SHE IS CRYING.MAAN IS ON LIFE SUPPORT AND HAS AN OXYGEN MASK ON.HE SEES GEET AND WEAKLY SMILES.

Geet:Maan,what has happened to u? This is all because of me.

Maan:N..No G..Geet.You'Havent done'done anything.D'Don't W'worry.

Geet:No,Maan.Dont stop me this time.Forgive me.I couldn't fulfil any duty,I wasn't a good wife,a good DIL.

Maan:Geet,w'why are you'm' making me think o'.of sad thoughts in my l'last m'minutes?

Geet:Last minutes? What do u mean?

Maan:G'Geet,I'I d..dont think I 'I have Th..that m'much time left.

GEET HOLDS HIS HAND.

Geet:No,Maan.dont say that.You cant leave me.

Maan:Geet,we don't h'have a ch'choice in th'these things.W'we Just h..have to follow G'gods wishes.

HE IS IN PAIN BUT SMILES.

Geet: Maan,how can u say this?

Maan:Im having t..to say I..it.I..I don't w'want to.D'do you th..think I'd ever w'want to leave y'you?

Geet:Maan!!!!!!!!

Maan:Geet,look af'after yourself.D'don't do a'anything reckless a'after ive g'gone ok? I'll al..ways l..love you.

Geet:Maan,I wont let you go.

Maan:G'geet,Please.I have to G'go.Its H'hurting me.My time i..in th..this world is o..over,G'G..

HIS PULSE DROPS.

Geet:Whats wrong? Doctor!!!!

DOCTOR COMES IN,STARTS CHECKING THE MONITORS.

Maan:I'im G..going,G'Geet.

THE MONITOR BEEPS AND THE LINE TURNS STRAIGHT.

Doctor:Mrs Khurana,pls go from here.We need our space.

MAAN AND GEETS HANDS SLOWLY SEPARATE.SHE LEAVES.

GEET WALKS IN A DAZE.FLASHBACKS OF HER AND MAAN GETTING MARRIED,THEIR SR,THEIR TALK THIS MORNING,MAAN BEING SHOT,HIM SAYING"IM LEAVING GEET",THEIR HANDS SEPERATING.SHE FEELS FAINT.SUDDENLY,SHE FALLS TO THE GROUND.AS SHE FALLS,SHE MURMURS'MAAN'

END

Please Comment😆

I Have never written such a sad update😭

Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
lovely update.........😭😭😭😭

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