TERA MERA SAATH{RN FIC}PRT11/PG44

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Posted: 16 years ago
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What would you do if the love of your life asks you for marriage on the peak of a snow covered mountain?

And after some time you come close to losing that person who means so much to you? In that period you get the experience of being devastated? A death like situation. What's more, this is not the first time you have found yourself in this maze of troubles. You have experienced it before and you are facing it now all over again and you don't know what is worse ? facing it all over again or not being in a position to react.

What will a person do??? How much can he/she tolerate it???

Go ahead and find out.


KANCHANJUNGA MILITARY ACADEMY

AMBALA

CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT - RAJEEV KHANDELWAL

CADET NAINA SINGH AHLUWALIA - PRIYANKA BASSI

CADET POOJA GHAI - GHAZAL RAI

CADET ALI BEIG - HARSHAD CHOPRA

CADET AALEKH SHARMA - ARJUN BIJLANI

CADET YADUVANSH SAHANI - KUNAL KAPOOR

CADET AMARDEEP HUDA - VIKAS MANAKTALA


DR. CAPTAIN SHALINI SINGHAL - APARNA TILAK

DR. PSYCHIATRIST RITU MISHRA - SHEWTA SALVE

CAPTAIN NAVEEN SINGH AHLUWALIA - SAMEER SHARMA

CAPTAIN ABHIMANYU RAI CHAUHAN - GAURAV CHOPRA

BRIGADIER VARUN SAREEN : PRINCIPAL, KMA - KIRAN KUMAR

SUBEDAR SURINDER SURI - RAJIV MEHRA

SUBEDAR MAJOR LOLITA SEN - PRIYA ARYA


COLONEL SHASHANK SINGH - NARENDRA JHA

ADITI SINGH: SHASHANK'S WIFE. - VAISHNAVI

KMA ? One of the best military academies in the country which boasts of preparing the best soldiers of the country.

KMA ? The academy which changes the life of all those who join it.

KMA ? The academy which has made some lives, talking them to the zenith of success and glory.

KMA ? The academy which has ruined some lives, casting them in the nadir of shame and despair.

Cadets Naina, Pooja, Aalekh, Ali, Huda, Yudi: Cadets who joined the Kanchanjunga Military Academy and thus underwent a complete change in their lives.

Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat: Their mentor, friend, philosopher and guide.

Dr. Shalini: A good friend of Captain Shekhawat and the cadets.

CAPTAIN NAVEEN SINGH AHLLUWALIA: Rajveer's best friend.

RITU: The love of Naveen's life who leads to his downfall and death.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey that waz a awesome start!! Plz do continue!
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superb che, i am so happy that again i got a RN ff.
Welcome dear n update soon

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supercool....

gr8 to 've yet another rn fic...thnk u so much
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WOW....a new RN fanfic.
please continue soon
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oye...tum ne ise phir se start kiya...lekin tumne mujhe is k bare me ek baar bhi nahin bataya...!!! 😲
ab batao...main tum se naraz nahin hun...toh aur kya karun...???😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PROLOGUE:

"Look here, it's dangerous."

"So what? Let it be. I don't care."

"But I do. How do you think I would feel seeing your dead body in front of me?"

"As an army officer I have every right to lay down my life for my country. And besides why are you worrying so much when last night you told me that you actually don't care whatever happens to me?"

"Naina, please don't say such things. I had been extremely angry. But that was not what I meant. The words just slipped out."

"On the contrary, I think you meant them. Besides, it isn't important" Naina turned her back towards him.

He held her by her arms and made her turn towards him forcibly.

"No." he said softly. "Look me in the eyes and me that and I may believe you." He challenged.

Naina didn't look up at him. He didn't force her either. After some time Naina broke down in his arms and hugged him tightly.

"I cannot live without you Rajveer." She sobbed in his arms. "I really can't. I have lost all those people whom I loved. You are the only one left. I don't want to lose you. I'll come with you Raj. I'll come with you. Please."

"Hush. Stop crying darling. Why are you so hell bent………"

Naina cut in fiercely, "Look. I have got my orders as well. If you try to cancel them and stop me here then I promise you Raj, you won't find me alive when you come back."

"Naina…….." screamed Rajveer. "Don't. How many times have I told you not to say such things." Then he cooled down a bit. "Hmmh! I see you are not to be put off. Very well then, you are coming with me to J&K. We have lived together till date. I just hope that when we come face to face with death, we will be together in that as well."

And he hugged her tightly.

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PART -1

KMA:

It is the last day of the cadets Naina, Pooja, Ali, Aalekh, Huda and Yudi in the KMA. They were different people with different dreams, different aspirations but one goal. To be a perfect soldier and KMA was the best place for that.

A TRIP DOWN THE MEMORY LANE:

(BY RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT)

Naina Singh had come to this academy with only one dream – to know the truth about her brother's death and to prove him innocent. She, along with her mentor, Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat had embarked upon a journey – a journey into the past in the quest of TRUTH.

Rajveer had not supplied her immediately with all the information that she wanted. Instead he had tried her, put her to test but when he saw that she was not to be deterred on any account come what may, he helped her only too gladly to fulfill her dream, even at the cost of his own life.

He still remembered how Naina had scolded him once he was out of the hospital. In that moment all the unsaid emotions between them flowed out unrestrained and Rajveer had promised to himself that he would never leave Naina alone.

Rajveer still remembered the spark which he had noticed in her eyes during their first meeting. A spark, which told him that this girl would go far.

There was also a pain in her eyes – the pain of losing a dear one, someone very close to the heart. Her pain pierced his heart to the core causing the old wounds to bleed – bleed profusely. Not that the wounds had healed any time. Rajveer could never forget the one he had lost. But just by looking at Naina he felt a stabbing pain in his heart. Deep waves of empathy washed over him and as the girl wished her good morning; he couldn't refrain from flashing a smile at her.

SMILE – It had become a very rare occurrence in Captain Rajveer's life of late. But something happened that day.

Her big, black eyes with a slight upward slant and the beautiful eyebrows were the first thing which caught his attention. Her frank and straightforward nature and the faith in her eyes reminded him of someone. But he wondered if she was always like this? Did she trust each and every person who came her way? He will have to groom her to keep her emotions under check; Rajveer had thought and immediately found himself proved wrong.

Huda and Yudi came there with the intention of joining them. Almost as if in a flash, Naina underwent a change. As Rajveer watched, he felt some sort of shutters being drawn across her eyes and she looked at the other two with a distant look. They were strangers and they felt it too. She had closed herself to the outside world, but her piercing look penetrated deep into the hearts of all those at whom she looked. Huda and Yudi mumbling a good morning to Rajveer and almost ran away from there. Naina was then back to her normal self and she remained in this normal state only in the company of her Raj sir and Dr. Shalini.

The fact that Naina trusted him the most gave Rajveer supreme joy and he didn't mind sharing the honours with Dr. Shalini. She was a friend after all.

In the evening when Rajveer was roaming in the grounds, he overheard two people talking.

1st Person: I'm warning you; don't mess around with that girl.

2nd Person: Are you crazy Yudi? Mess around with Cadet Naina – Naina Singh Ahlluwalia. Have you taken me to be a Ravan – the demon king with ten heads or what. Look, I have got only one head over my neck and I'm very much fond of it and want it to stay there.

Rajveer was amused. But he also was enlightened. Now he knew why he felt such a deep empathy with Naina. The bond which they shared was too strong to be broken. He would have felt the pull even across the globe. And the name of that bond was NAVEEN. NAVEEN SINGH AHLUWALIA – Rajveer's best friend. KMA topper. A great soldier and a great friend. A martyr who had been branded a traitor.

NAVEEN SINGH AHLUWALIA: Naina's elder brother.

Rajveer sat in his chair and rocked to and fro. Along with the chair, his mind was also rocking from past to present and then present to past until everything got jumbled up for him.

He had become habituated to the heartache which was his constant companion after Naveen's death. Now that he knew who Naina was he understood the language of spark in her eyes. She was here to prove her brother innocent and her faith sparkled in her eyes. It set Rajeev's heart and soul on fire. And he promised to himself that he would help her at any cost. Though he had promised Naveen…………

Rajveer knew a lot about Naina because Naveen could never stop chattering about his younger sister. A black belt holder in karate and a sharp shooter; she had won many prizes at the national level and had got the chance to prove herself at the international forum when she was selected to represent India in an international sports meet. She had attended the meet and had been successful.

Naveen had been literally jumping up and down in the room which he shared with Raj when he heard the news. He wanted to buy a gift for her and asked Rajveer to accompany him to the mall and Raj had agreed.

But even before Naina could come back, tragedy struck. Naveen died and was branded a traitor. The gift which a brother had so lovingly bought for his sister remained in Rajveer's possession.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello All!
Lo, aap sab ki khawishon ke mutabik maine ud kar diya. Ab toh kush ho jao.
And yes, an important note:
Iss fic ko start karne me mujhe bahut taklif hui hai. Mai shayad isse discontinue kar deti but for four of my friends who supported me through this. They are:
Aneesha, Priya, Shaina and Dhara.
Thnks a lot friends.
The next part will be dedicated to you.
Tab tak enjoy this part.
Love
Guglu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very interesting prologue!!!!!!

The opening lines of the story are awesome!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj is to stop Naina from going but Naina is adament!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj had said he doesn't care what happens to Naina in anger!!!!! Thats very bad!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina is now crying in his arms and saying she cannot live without him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina now threatened Raj that if he tried to stop her there then he won't find her alive when came back!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Good for her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Warna yeh Raj toh manta hi nahi hai aur jab dekho Naina ko khud se dur karta rehta hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Finally Raj agreed to take her with him to J&K!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ne kaha that they have lived together till date and he hoped when they come face to face with death they will be together in that as well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj aur Naina toh jeeyenge saath aur marenge bhi saath!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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