Voyage: A Manik-Nandini Fiction| *Completed* Ch11, Pg 27 - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveIsManan

Aren't you being a bit more of a tease for him..

That bichara had to test a next level of his patience .
But I guess this is the starting of drawning the realisation for him.
It was fun to read though.


You believe this was more of a tease? 😲


Then what would happen if you read the next chapter; that is if I pen down that one as planned. You will either kill me or Nandini or Manik.

This was nothing in my view, it could have been depicted in a bit more detail and with bit more intensity to have him all sweaty and needy. Just my thought.

He has a lot of tests to go through, he better stick to his patience.

For realisation, that has already happened. He is just kinda taking his time before he takes the 'next step'. ;P

The chapters better be fun to read or else there's no point in jotting them down.

Thank you, by the way! ^_^
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-

Heya Shenz😳

Oh its U really😲🤗
Missed u a lott good to see u here hope Angie comes here as well😳
I read all the missed chappies❤️
Fantastic ones as alwayzz😳
Wow drunk nandu and a helpless manik😛
Loved them😳
I wil catch up with the collision ones soon
Ciao soon😊


--Aishu--

P.S changed my UN😳


Aishu, *hugs you tight* I missed you.

Yes, it's me, really! *Grinning proudly*

I know it's good to see me *winks* I hope the same, I want everyone back. Angel included. Good to see you too. :*

Thank you, though it was hopeless to consider that people would come back, some really did. *Wipes off the tear*

I am glad you found them fantastic. ManNan babies be always treat to watch. Always. I love them too *sighs dreamily*

Take your time with 'Collision', I am in no hurry 😆

See ya, too. By the way, grace the CC at times ;P

-Shenz-

PS: would have known, even if you didn't inform me that you changed your UN. Aishu is one of a kind ;P
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

oh geez! Babies.

She's testing him way too much BTW. And I'm so glad you sent me the PM. Update soon.

-Love
Zoha.


Hehehe 😆

This was nothing. Really, nothing. You will get the PMs. ;)

I can't assure of the next update yet. I still have to kick start the upcoming one but I will do that quick.

Love
Shenz.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

wow what an update dear

Manik is lusting Nandini & her drunken state dont help him soo much
pls update soon
thanks for pm

I know, right! What was I thinking while writing that one?

Anyways, her drunken state is cute, I believe. While he is just being trapped under the charms of attraction; physical attraction. Her drunken state cannot help her either ;)

I will try and update soon. *Try*

You shouldn't be thanking me for the PM. That's the least I can do for the readers.

Thank you.. for being a reader.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just FYI,,


This will be updated tomorrow. Can't ensure by what time. But by End of Day Tomorrow.

Plans to finish this story off by coming week.

Love
-Shenz
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Posted: 8 years ago
I had been a little busy during the weekdays. Work issues, I would say. But more than that I didn't have the tad bit of energy to jot down something after work. It was just come back home and crash onto the bed. Probably, a couple replies here and there but that was all.

Moreover, there was a bit of content which I wasn't willing to type publicly because I often type while traveling as well. But not this time. Anyways. It's weekend and I have got some time. I will try and finish off the 'Stage Two' by tomorrow and will have the 'Stage Three' set. So that by this coming week, we are done for this story. #hopefully.

Also, during this week, a couple of more ideas clicked my mind. Again few randoms and I am not sure about any of it. Probably, I will come up with something new or probably not. Depends.

But just stating, 'Collision' is going to be up again, soon!

That's all from me. Hope you enjoy this little ride. Not that appealing for me. Didn't turn exactly the way I wanted it to be.

Though, I would love to know your thought.



Chapter Nine




The other day, after the party, he had somehow manged to drop her to her place and directly took off to his hideout. The calmness of the place didn't help to dim the hunger she had ignited. The only way he could think of to cool down his irrational thoughts and straighten himself was to distance himself from her. The decision was tough but the beast she was to unleash was dangerous.



He bought some time, traveling down to the other city for a business project. Initially, he had kept ignoring her phone calls as well with an excuse that he was busy; he had work to focus on. But nothing helped. She would creep into his dreams during the night, while throughout the day his mind would run into her direction irrespective of what he thought about. He would always end up with her thoughts.



Giving in, he had finally answered her call that morning only to face the wrath of his furious little Nandini.




Later that day, he had finished off with his meetings and marched towards his room, when her name flashed across his cell phone. His lips curled upwards. Without wasting a minute, he answered, "Hey!"



"Manik," her soft moan rang into his ears, making his eyes voluntarily shut. His head rolled back while the moment sank in. The luscious lips of hers hummed in pleasure igniting his desire.


"Nandini," he tried warning her but her name rolled out hoarsely onto his lips.


"What do I do?" He felt her pout in the words, "It's so good," she let out a gutteral voice of appreciation as the words rolled onto her tongue.


The sudden click made him aware of her actions. She was licking it clean. Rolling her tongue onto the length and her lips wrapped around, she slid the entire length into her mouth. From one finger to another, she licked all of her fingers clean.

'She was relishing the icecream', he chanted in his head.

He swore under his breath. She made images flash across his eyes merely with her voice. He gulped. This was so out of place. Never had his mind ran into the directions where it was now; but then never had his feelings for her been so obvious to him.

While he was engrossed into his thoughts, he heard her, "Manik?" Her voice laced with doubt.

"Yes," He instantly answered.


"Will you come for me?" she thoughtfully questioned. But that blew his mind away.

Sure, without a doubt, he thought of answering her.

Instead, he countered her with a question, "Why do you ask?"

"Naah," she casually brushed off the question only to clarify further, "was just wondering if you'd ever come for me."

Always, his heart answered.


"By the way when are you coming?" She popped another question while her fingers dug into the icecream bucket and travelled back to her lips; yo be licked off.


'If you keep making those noise then I won't last long', he wanted to retort but he rather chose to answer vaguely, "Soon!"


"I will be waiting," she answered softly, her voice knitted with an unidentifiable emotion, "please, come soon."

He couldn't decipher the emotion that her words held but whatever it was, it urged him to travel back to her.


'I would travel the end of the world for you', those words stuck into his throat. It wasn't the right time to confess the undeniable.





Do hit like, and comment please.

Thoughts and reviews are most welcome.

And for the ones who have been wanting to read Collision on Wattpad. Can find me there, @Mystic_Blues

Tons of love,
Shenz-
Edited by -shenz- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
So you're back?
It's been what? eons?
Anyway, great surprise😆, I logged in to my account after so many days and i see that you have finally updated it. I read all the chapters.
Waiting for Part 3 😃
Edited by DivyaMukhi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DivyaMukhi

So you're back?

It's been what? eons?
Anyway, great surprise😆, I logged in to my account after so many days and i see that you have finally updated it. I read all the chapters.
Waiting for Part 3 😃


Yes, I believe, I am back!

*Goes away and hides* Umm, it's been long enough that I can expect getting beaten up any moment.

You found this as great surprise? [:-o] Well, good to know you were good reading it. Because I wasn't. I cringed at the way the past few chapters were. How do you manage to be fine with my write ups? They are becoming cringe-worthy.

Anyways, I do know, you will be waiting for Stage Three because that marks the end to this. It will mark an end to this story.

By the way, thanks for reading and commenting.

Would update the next today, probably.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-


Aishu, *hugs you tight* I missed you. I missed u moreee🤗

Yes, it's me, really! *Grinning proudly*

I know it's good to see me *winks* I hope the same, I want everyone back. Angel included. Good to see you too. :* Angel is active in twitter i guess😆

Thank you, though it was hopeless to consider that people would come back, some really did. *Wipes off the tear* I hope more ppl come

I am glad you found them fantastic. ManNan babies be always treat to watch. Always. I love them too *sighs dreamily* Yus MaNan r loveee☺️

Take your time with 'Collision', I am in no hurry 😆

See ya, too. By the way, grace the CC at times ;P oh yus i guess the time is the problem😆wel work it out someway😆

-Shenz-

PS: would have known, even if you didn't inform me that you changed your UN. Aishu is one of a kind ;P

@bold haina one of a kind🤣☺️ replied above in pink😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww this was cuteee😆
I can actually imagine manik's reaction🤣
Poor guy🤣
nandu doesnt even know wat s she doing to him🤣
do continue soonish shenzie
loved it as alwayzz❤️

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