Voyage: A Manik-Nandini Fiction| *Completed* Ch11, Pg 27

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-
@bold haina one of a kind🤣☺️ replied above in pink😛

Well, I am not that active on twitter.

Let's hope that what you hope actually happens.

There's no discussion needed for MaNan being love. MaNan are truly and magically love. Period.

Let's work out the time issues together. I have got some too.

Your username is one of kind just like you are. :)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-
Awww this was cuteee😆
I can actually imagine manik's reaction🤣
Poor guy🤣
nandu doesnt even know wat s she doing to him🤣
do continue soonish shenzie
loved it as alwayzz❤️

Thank you! It's surprising that you found it cute. I am not sure if this reaction would continue *grins mischievously*

Poor guy? Do you really think of him in that sympathetic way? Why?

Think of her rosy cheeks when she gets to know what goes into that pretty head of her best friend. *Rolls out laughing* that would be a treat to see. *Sigh* only if that was possible.

On it, I am not leaving this midway, Aishu. Would rather wrap it soonish. ;P

I love you instead :)

Anyways, I am off to writing the next for this one. Let's see if I find the next worth reading and probably justifiable. *Fingers crossed*

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

I know the previous chapter has been pretty much cringe worthy. But I hope this brings the feel back. If not to the precision as much as MaNan do, at least read worthy enough for you all.

I have been lately intrigued and instead hooked with a particular thought, there are many though. I might just plan to come up with something new as well. Of course, along with Collision. But I am just saying. This new project may or may not happen. I was just curious to share. ;P

Anyways, without any more blabbering let's take a look at the next chapter. :)

Chapter Ten.

He walked among the crowd, looking for a glimpse of the familiar faces. His friends. But mostly that face of an angel whom he had dearly missed. He was longing to meet her, now. Realising that nothing in the world would ever be a substitute to her. She was irreplaceable. She had unknowingly created a hollow into his heart that could only be completed by her. Only she could complete him.

His eyes caught the sight of his friends standing at the airport to receive him. He had been reluctant to have them all there. He wasn't a kid. He could travel back home exactly the way he walked out. But his friends were crazy enough to do exactly what he would not want them to do.

He padded towards them, while his eyes still in search of those deep brown ones. Though, he couldn't find that one face he was dying to see.

Cabir stepped forward, engulfing him in a hug, "Hey, bro!" Dhruv joined in as well. But his eyes still trailed behind.

Where is she, were his restless thoughts.

Mukti patted at his back, grabbing his attention. His eyes found her smiling warmly at him. Alya peeped from behind and launched at him along with Mukti. He was squeezed into a group hug by the four of them. Yet, he could feel the emptiness. The missing piece of his life. She was nowhere around. The thought worried him.

Peeling their arms from around him, his lips curled into forced smile. He wanted to ask about her but restrained from doing so. He had already received quite a few suspicious eyebrows raised at him regarding her. Being smooth and casual was a way but he wouldn't be able to pull it off with ease. The feelings he had, would explode with a mere thought of hers.

Inhaling heavily, he stepped aside and said, with utmost honesty, "It's good to see you guys." His smile didn't shine bright enough.

"Stop pretending, Manik," Mukti huffed in annoyance as she spoke while smacking onto his arm, "you wouldn't have gone unannounced, if we were valued."

Alya added, "It was more surprising that you didn't inform Nandini as well," others just nodded in agreement. He wanted to just let it out loud and clear that it wasn't by choice. He just had to clear his thoughts.

Cabir tugged onto his sleeves and whispered softly yet eyed him calculatively, "Is there something wrong?" He answered with a casual shrug and pretending normal while on the insides there was hurricane of emotions.

"Oh! Come on guys," Dhruv interrupted, "we better move, Nandini is waiting for us." He carefully reminded only to grab undivided attention from Manik. Manik had tons of questions at the tip of his tongue but found it difficult to voice.

Everyone else agreed to Dhruv and they padded towards the exit. Manik grew restless with each step.

When they arrived at the parking lot, he found the petite frame leaning against the car. He drank her image. Arms folded across her chest and legs crossed at the ankle with her eyes shut as she had her head leaned back onto the car.

She was there.

As if alerted by the marching footsteps, she fluttered her eyes open to mingle with his and her arms fell on either sides. The way she looked at him made him feel the churning within. He gulped.

Thinking the distance could have suppressed the emotion he held was wrong, he knew. But now, he could sense the intensity in emotions that the distance has created.

His eyes caught the sight of her sighing. She straightened her feet to step forward while her eyes depicted pain. It ached him but even more alarmed him.

Before he could question her, she wrapped her tiny arms around his waist and enveloped herself into his cozy warmth. His arms instantly wrapped around her while she snuggled deep into his arms. Her hold conveyed a few unspoken words.

"I missed you," she mumbled into his chest, unwilling to let go off him. Smiling to himself, he tilted back to unveil her tear stained face. She still looked beautiful to him.

Tucking a strand of loose hair, he held her chin in order to make her eyes stare back at his. He spoke with utmost tenderness to his voice, "I missed you too." He wished, she could realise the pain of being away from her.

She sniffed ignoring his words as she buried her head into his chest. His smile only grew wider. She behaved like an innocent child. Securing her in his embrace, he placed a gentle kiss at the top of her head.

Aware of the presence of an audience that witnessed the scene unfold, he still chose to ignore. He hardly cared. She wasn't just the world to him, she was the center of his world. When he had her in his arms, the world around fades into the thin air and all he cares about is her.

He very well knew his feelings and he was certain of what he wanted. He wanted her, in his life. For Always. Forever.

And for that he had to take the next step. It would be either forever or never.

End of Stage Two.

Chapter 11

Hope you all enjoyed reading this one. If you did, then let me know what you liked and disliked.

If not, then let me know why not. It might help me to improve.

The next and the final stage would consist of one or two chapters marking the end of this journey - Voyage.

PMs would be sent a little later. Till then toodles ;;P

Edited by -shenz- - 8 years ago

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: payal94
Beautiful story
Loved it

Thank you. Glad you found it beautiful.

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alina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

nice story.manan fiction is amazing

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aishwarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Well, I am not that active on twitter. Me too i forgot my password🤣very much lazy to create a new one!

Let's hope that what you hope actually happens. It will

There's no discussion needed for MaNan being love. MaNan are truly and magically love. Period. Agreed☺️

Let's work out the time issues together. I have got some too. Yus Sure❤️

Your username is one of kind just like you are. :) Awww Love uu❤️

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aishwarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Thank you! It's surprising that you found it cute. I am not sure if this reaction would continue *grins mischievously* Huh Y😲

Poor guy? Do you really think of him in that sympathetic way? Why? Its jus that he is trying hard to control his feelings par nandu clearly hits a six by doing something which is definitely not intentional though and manik loses again😆isliye🤣

Think of her rosy cheeks when she gets to know what goes into that pretty head of her best friend. *Rolls out laughing* that would be a treat to see. *Sigh* only if that was possible. Wont it be possible after their confession☺️

On it, I am not leaving this midway, Aishu. Would rather wrap it soonish. ;P Oh so is it ending soon😲

I love you instead :) I love u too🤗

Anyways, I am off to writing the next for this one. Let's see if I find the next worth reading and probably justifiable. *Fingers crossed*

Replies in pink😳

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aishwarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

She was irreplaceable. She had unknowingly created a hollow into his heart that could only be completed by her. Only she could complete him.

She wasn't just the world to him, she was the center of his world. When he had her in his arms, the world around fades into the thin air and all he cares about is her.

He very well knew his feelings and he was certain of what he wanted. He wanted her, in his life. For Always. Forever.

And for that he had to take the next step. It would be either forever or never.

These lines👏👏👏

They really show how much Nandini means to Manik!!

Beautiful Brilliant Mindblowing

Amazingly penned shenziee!!

So the nxt stage is the confessing wala!!?

Wonder what does nandini feel for him!!

Will we have a pov of nandu's too??

Lovedd it shenzie and love u too🤗

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-

I love you too.

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-
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I replied too

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-
She was irreplaceable. She had unknowingly created a hollow into his heart that could only be completed by her. Only she could complete him.
She wasn't just the world to him, she was the center of his world. When he had her in his arms, the world around fades into the thin air and all he cares about is her.

He very well knew his feelings and he was certain of what he wanted. He wanted her, in his life. For Always. Forever.

And for that he had to take the next step. It would be either forever or never.

These lines👏👏👏
They really show how much Nandini means to Manik!!
Beautiful Brilliant Mindblowing
Amazingly penned shenziee!!
So the nxt stage is the confessing wala!!?
Wonder what does nandini feel for him!!
Will we have a pov of nandu's too??
Lovedd it shenzie and love u too🤗