Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

I am Mayu:)
This is my first try as os.

The initial promos said " kya khote hai kya paate hai jab dil ke faisle dimag se hote hai " ...
So here is my version story as on Devaskshi love story ..
Flashback

Dev and Sona broke up and promised each other that they will never meet in their entire life

---------------------After 5 years -----------------------------------
Current situation

Delhi : At airport

Sona : Wow it feels so good to come back to this city .. My city

Saurabh dada after kicking and punching few taxi drivers who are shouting at top of their voice: Sona!!! am here Sona!

Sona : Dada!!! Oh Dada!!Tumi k"mana ch?( How are u ?)

Dada with tears in his eyes : Ami Bhalo ( am fine)!! pani baluna ( you tell )and gave tight hug to her ..

Sona with tears in her eyes as well : mi' bhl chi( am fine too) and both laughed ..

Dada : But where is princess of Bose family ??? Where is she ? Am dying to see her ..

Beside Sona, small nearly 5 year old little girl holding her doll with one hand and bag at other hand with smiling face..
Sona: Dada !!Woh rahi jo apne favourite pink doll and pink suitcase ke saath khadi hai ( laugh).
Sona : Devki come here .. See your favourite Mama is here..

Devki: Mama!! Mama and quickly jumped over Saurabh Dada searching his pocket for chocolate..

Saurabh dada : Chocolate toh tabhi milegi jab hum pyaari si kissi milegi humari devi se ...

Devki : Kiss !! Bass ye lo .. She gave him 10 kiss in exchange of big cadbury chocolate..

Devki, Sona and Saurabh dada went into taxi stand and somehow quickly dumped their luggage into taxi and off they go..

Sona and Dev reached home ..
Asha : Bijoy come fast !! Maa Sona aa gayi hai ..

Bijoy : Sona !! Beta tu gayi ..

Sona: Maa and Papa And Dadi am so happy to see you all after so many years ..

Asha : Devki kaha hai ..

Devki : Nanii !! badi Nani!! and Nanu! ( Sorry I don't know anything about bengali ) hugged and jumped over.

At night Sona was in her room , feeling nostalgic about her childhood and of course why she was forced to left this place..

Tears in Sona eyes look at moon remembering her time with Dev , confession, their first hug, their rain dance and of course their love night : Pata nahi kitna time ho gaya.. Aab aap kya kar rahe hoge.. Meri yaad bhi aati hogi ki nahi..Nikki,riya , Neha kaise hoge. And Auntyji hope she is taking care of herself.. Aisa ek din bhi nahi jaata jab main aapko yaad nahi karo Dev. Ek din bhi nahi..

Aur sach kaho toh aapko bhool bhi nahi sakti hoon - mere pass hai jo ho.. Dev and Sonakshi ki Devki ... Humari Devki..

Asha : Sona beta Soi nahi abhi tak. Thank you Sona yaha wapas aane ke liye. Tujhe pata hai na Bijoy ko kitna guilt hai ki tujhe yaha se jana pada. Jab tujhe humari sab se jayada jararoot thi tab humme tera saath nahi diya. Shayad itna sab kuch aachanak ho raha tha ki kuch sochne and samajhne ka time hi nahi mila. But aaj dil se tujhe sorry bolti hoon beta..

Sona: Maa aap kya ye sab lekar beeth gayi.. JO gaya So ho gaya.Aap toh mujhe ye batao ki Baba ki report kya hai? Doctors kya bol rahe ? Kaun se stage ka cancer hai Baba ko? Maine Dr.Sinha se baat kar liye hai kal hum log hospital jayege reports lekar.. Aur aab aap baba par dhyaan do and purni baato par nahi.OK

Asha: Jaanti hoon Baba ki bemari ke karan hi tu aayi. Samaj nahi aa raha hai ki khush ho ki dhukhi.

Sona: Maa !! Aap bhi na ..Sach mein ..Always emotional mode par raheti hai. Jake Soo jaiye and aab main bhi aapke saath.

Devki was again wake up from the sleep and started crying. Sona quickly ran towards her ,patting her. Today after 5 years Sona will sleep properly in her own bed while cuddling devki..

Next part-

Sona meeting with Ishwari and Mamaji at hospital
Ishwari - Wohi Chehra , wohi ankhe , wohi.. !!nahi...
Mamaji Shocked : Devki bilkul choti dev hai..

If people like this story then I will continue otherwise my first and last os..

Part 1- Page 1

Part 2 - Page 6
Part 3 - Page 14

Part 4 - Page 20

Part 5- Page 24- Only for +18

Part 6- Page 32

Part 7- Page42

Part 8- Page52

Part9 - Page61

Part10- Page69

Part 11- Page 77

Part12- page 85

Part 13- Page92

Part 14- Page 102- for +18 only

Part 15 - Page 10 7- Again +18 only

Part 16- Page 112-

Part 17 - Page 119

P.S. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.
P.S. If possible please comment if you like and silent members please hit " like " button .

Edited by mayu1982 - 8 years ago

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice start. Do continue.

So Ishwari sees Devki first.. Between Bijoy and Asha are Nana and nani. It is Ishwari who is Dadi.

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sammy8182

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Posted: 9 years ago

Im cribbing like a child i want 2nd part jaldi ...jaldi karo...BEAUTIFUL OS..

I cant tell u how much i loved the name devki...beautiful name

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fatima rukia

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice OS...wants to read more...😳

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: c85rie
Nice start. Do continue.
So Ishwari sees Devki first.. Between Bijoy and Asha are Nana and nani. It is Ishwari who is Dadi.

Thank you dear .. and for the help..😆 Corrected it 😊

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sammy8182
Im cribbing like a child i want 2nd part jaldi ...jaldi karo...BEAUTIFUL OS..

I cant tell u how much i loved the name devki...beautiful name

Thank dear for liking it so much.. It boost my moral to write more..