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fatima rukia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

i cant wait for next part...😆
it is so amazing ❤️ ...dev and Sona talk...😆😆
and Devki is so cute...😳

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: rukiaa
i cant wait for next part...😆
it is so amazing ❤️ ...dev and Sona talk...😆😆
and Devki is so cute...😳

Thanks dear 😊

Patience .. Take a deep breath 😉

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pooji145

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

plzzz update... soon...

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pooji145

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

plzzz update... yar... ab main aur wait Nahi Kat sakti :p

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Vaishali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Read all three parts. I just loved them.

Devki is super cute. Praja and kingdom was epic😆

And your daughter is also sure cute. A tight hug to your cuteness filled daughter.

Plz continue soon and if possible PM me.

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: anamnaqvi00
Hey plz update soon

Thanks Dear😊

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: pooji145
plzzz update... soon...

Patience !! Patience 😊

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel
Read all three parts. I just loved them.
Devki is super cute. Praja and kingdom was epic😆
And your daughter is also sure cute. A tight hug to your cuteness filled daughter.
Plz continue soon and if possible PM me.

Thank you so much so such cute message ..

Big hug to u from my daughter side

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

I am very glad that all of you guys liked my story .. I apologise that in this part we will see only Dev knowing the truth about Devki and their confrontation.
---------------------------Next Part - 4-----------------------------------

After meeting with Sona and Devki ,he was super restless and anxious. Even Ishwari noticed the change in Dev's behaviour but somewhere she understands that destiny again played her role, Dev meet Sonakshi again. But this time she choose not to say anything. Very next day Dev comes to the office , waiting for TINA ..

As soon as TIna comes , Dev call her immediately inside his cabin.

Dev : Tina!! God !! You came so late ..

Tina : Sir !! Main toh Time par aayi !! In fact 5 mins before aayi hoon? Tina is shocked and happy to see Dev like this..She is so sick of ROBOT DEV..He was lifeless as if he was just passing the time through meeting and business deadlines.

Dev : Tina!! I want you to do something really important.. After a slight hesitation .. I want you to tell me everything about Dr. Sonakshi Bose ..

Tina: But Sir !! I have already told you that she went to Mumbai ..

Dev in slight irrirated tone: Tina !! She is back and has a small kid along with her. I want to know everything about that child- regarding her father,marriage with Sonakshi -( in mind provided if ) .. everything!! Everything Tina !!

Tina: Don't worry SIr !! I will .. But i need sometime to get all correct and accurate information..But I will give you all information asap.

Dev : Thank you TIna ..

TIna with tears in eyes : Anything for you SIr ..
Tina after sitting in chair does her self talk- Omg so Robot selfless Dev is again gaining life because of Ms. Bose. No Ms.bose , this time I will pray for you and Sir. This time god ko bhi aapko humare sir ke pass lana hi hoga.. Oh so excited!! Only Ms. Bose can bring life/hopes back into Dev Sir lifeless life. Bhagwan unhone marriage nahi ki ho..Pls pls..

After 15 days

Tina came into Dev cabin : Sir !! I have found some information about Ms. Bose and he little daughter. Sorry I took some time but as you know I want to collect correct information. So I have used my sources and collect information from Hospital, school and neighbours and even of some her relatives..

Tina: Sir !! This is all copy of information.Plus this is report from my informers.

Dev after reading all evidence ,almost in tears : Thank you Tina

Tina just left the cabin without saying a word. Dev in super angry mode , went to the hospital to meet MS. Sonakshi Bose.

Whereas Sonakshi totally unaware of Dev detective mode and investigation .She is in school because principal called her.

Inside Principal cabin:
Principal : Hello Ms. Bose !! Pls come in. we are actually waiting for you.Meet Mr. And Mrs. Bhandari , they are parents of Rohit who is in classmate of your daughter Devki..

Sona: Hello Maam !! Good morning everyone

Ms. Kanly who is class teacher of Devki and Rohit comes along with Rohit and Devki.

Mr. Bhandari : There she comes.. Last to last week because of devki, we need to cut Rohit's hair.and this week - see principal madam - iss bechare ke samane ke dono daat chale gaye .. All because of devki..

Principal: Relax Mr. Bhandari !! ye sab toh hota rehta hai.. Bacche hai after all..But yes devki this is not good why did you pushed him ?

Sona looked towards Rohit. Rohit with running nose , smiled back to her- with no two front teeth. Sona wants to laugh but she somehow controlled.

Mr. and Mrs. Bhandari take out of all their frustation on Sona by saying this and that.
Sona: I am really very Sorry !! Really sorry !! WOn't promise but will try my level best to make her understand that hitting someone is not right at all

Mr. Bhandari in very rude tone: But iss bacchi ki lagati nahi hai madam !!isse bacche aaise hi hote hai out of contol jaha par Baap nahi ho...

This is it. Sona who was listening all their talks with head down , stared them with big eyes.

Prinicpal :Mr. Bhandari!! No need to get personal. Like I said - bacche aisa karte hai. Ms. Bose already sorry bol chuki hai. So lets end this meeting here only.
Sona came out from principal cabin and sit in chair and crying.

Devki comes towards her with puppy face and said: Mumma almost in tears. I am sorry Mumma.. You don't cry ..

Sona: No am not crying.. But pls devki promise me you will never pushed anyone .. It is very dangerous baby.. Usko aaur bhi lag sakta tha..

Meanwhile even Rohit came and sat beside Sona..

Rohit : Aunty !! Don't cry!! I don't know why mummy and papa were so angry although I told them the truth. That firstly I pulled Devki ponytails and in return she pushed me.. Devki said sorry and gave me yummy sandwiches.. I loved that sandwiches..Aunty don't worry!! Am not angry with Devki. Smiled with no teeth in between.

Sona can not stopped herself from laughing and gave tight hug to both kids.
Both of them went towards their class room

Sona: Kash humm baade bhi inn baccho jaise hote ..

Sona came outside the school and looking for taxi , she suddenly noticed Dev and his car is coming towards her.

Sona: Mr. Dixit !! Aap yaha par!! Kaise ?? Kahi aapke -- she didn't compelete the sentence.

Dev in stern Voice : WIll you pls come with me Ms. Bose. I need to talk to you regarding something very urgently ..

Sona: AM sorry Mr. Dixit. No !! Not now!! not possible. I am already late, need to go the hospital . Plus I don't think there is anything important in between us.

Dev almost lost his control over his anger and grab her arm and took her forcefully and made her sit inside the car.
Sona was so shocked with his behaviour and shouting at him: What are you doing ??
Dev after sitting the car and took her to the desserted area.

Sonakshi was bit scared to see his side of him and in fact she was trying to figure out the reason of his extreme temper.

Dev checking that lock of the door whether it is closed or not again in front of Sona.

Dev : Yes Ms. Bose .. I want to know few things from you. I hope that you will not test my patience and will tell me only the TRUTH .. I am already in very bad mood so don't expect me anything nice from me if you don't say the Truth .

Sona: What ?? Why ? In fact what kind of behaviour is this ? Are you mad? Kya aap aaise mujhe lekar aaoge and main aapke sawaalo ka jaawab dugi..

Dev: WHY SONAKSHI ? WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME THE TRUTH BEFORE ?

Sona now scared if he knows the truth about devki and keeping the face straight: Mujhe Kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai.. Pls let me go..

Dev : Kuch samaj nahi Aa raha hai !! Seriously Sonakshi..!!( first time he said Sonakshi after separation)

Dev almost shouting in high pitch, grab her arm again: Tumne mujhe Devki ke baarre mein kyon nahi bataya..Kyon nahi !!!

Sona shocked : Devki aapki kuch nahi hai Dev ( first time after separation she said Dev ).. Toh main kya batati

Dev : Accha !! Kuch nahi hai..

Dev : Showed her evidence - ye devki ka birth ceritificate hai - jo bolta hai after our breakup and the time you left the city - she was born after 6 months. Kaise ??Ye tumhare neighbours and relatives ke conversation evidence hai- jo bata hai re ki tumne shaadi nahi ki and ye bacchi according to them --- he don't want to use that word. Agar tumne Shaadi nahi ki and ye bacchi meri nahi hai - then tumne kaunse bhagwan se tapasya ki vardaan mein tumhe beti mili?

Sona in tears: After breakup mere saath kya hota hai - its none of your business .. Aur waise bhi..

Dev : Are you serious? Irrespective of all facts and indifference - ye mera right tha Sona..

Sona: Kaun sa right ? Kaun sa right bolo na ??? Just because you lend me your bloody sperms - you can't become the father of any child.

Dev: So you accept that fact that sperm were mine ..Right??

Dev in almost tears and cann't believe this : Sona !! I agree main ek accha boyfriend nahi baan saka .. Main ye bhi maanta hoon ki mujhse bahut saari mistakes hui. Main saari mistake accept karta hoon jo main ki and aur jo maine nahi bhi ki ho..But still tumne toh mujhse father hone ka right bhi chiin liya ..

Sona: Dev!! Kaise batati main ? Kya badal jata hai.. The reason for separation - both of us know it very well. Kuch nahi ho sakta tha ... Above all Humlogo ne promise kiya tha ki we will not meet each other..

Dev: Sona !!! As a boyfriend and as a father .. Dono alaag alaag cheeze hai.. Tumne toh mujhe as father koi decision lene hi nahi diya.

Dev : Kitna ajeeb hai Sona. Devki sarif meri jaisi dekhti hi nahi balki uske and mere beech mein ek aur common dard hai aab

Sona with questioning face..

Dev : Maine apni puri zindagi papa ke bigar bitayi hai - woh toh mere control mein nahi tha. and Meri beti toh apni zindagi mere hote hua bhi bena mere ji rahi hai.. tears are flowing

Sona knows this and always felt guilty for that.

Dev: Aaj meri beti ko agar koi galat naam se bolega then mujhe kaisa lagega?

Dev: Aaj mere samne agar koi tumhe kuch bolega then main kya karo??

Dev: Kharab Tumhe bole ya Devki ko Bole - Bola toh mujhe hi jayega na ...

Dev: I will not forgive for this ... I will not ..

With this Dev drive the car and dropped Sona in hospital. Dev went straight to the house where no one is inside the house - Ishwari went to some relative place for some function. Dev went to his room and cried uncontrollably ..

Sona , devki came straight to home. Devki thought Sona is upset with prinicipal meeting , so today she didn' bother Sona Mumma much and went to sleep all by herself.

Here Sona and Dev both remembering the love night. The night which they will never forget... The night which makes them one ...

Part5- Coming Soon for +18 only May be on saturday or Sunday

Dev confessed immediately that he by mistake opened her bra as well ?

Dev : What ??? He is super angry and frustrated now.. Aree saree pehnai nahi aati samaj mein aata hai.. Khol Li bhi Nahi aati ..

PS. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

P.S. : Am not comfortable using abusive word. Sorry not able to send any pm for this post to anyone.

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Edited by mayu1982 - 9 years ago