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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: adi35
Superb
waiting for part 5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: saumya07
Awesome!!!!!!! I read the 4 parts together and during that time only 3 things in my mind were going on-
1)It is so realistic.. With the current track I can very much relate with the story..Woww..U just took my curiosity level 100 steps higher
2)That what an amazing writer you are..Its your first try and it is soo good..And the way you incorporated the details about Devki seeing your lil daughter .I m so glad ..
3)I was whole time cursing myself that how could I miss such a lively lovely OS!!
PLzzz update soon..I knw wid ur kid u must be so busy..waiting for Saturday sunday when you will update.Uff these weekends without Devakshi..
Srry I blabered too much..

Don;t be sorry.Thank you !! Thank you for such nice comment😳

In fact Am flat with your kind words.. Am so touch and thanks for lovely compliments .
Always feel free to say whatever comes to your mind.
I am happy to read all comments irrespective of the length of comment.😃

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: priyavishu18
Thanks for the Continuation...

Eagerly waiting for u r Next Part...

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: parsh-lover
what an amazing part.
i just love your writing.
your writing sense is awsome.
Update soon.
eagerly waiting for next part.
if possible then pm me.

Aww Thank you so much for so much encouragement .

sacchi dil se thank you 😳

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: _RS_
Part 5 pls

😆😆 Very soon .. Patience

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Antora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

huh u didnt pm me fr this luvly update i WS missing it frm so long chking my phn evry now n thn fr ur pm bt nvr mind i hv finally stalked u n yaa its beautiful bt plz nxt time se pm krna othrwise i won't talk to u

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: andy1245
huh u didnt pm me fr this luvly update i WS missing it frm so long chking my phn evry now n thn fr ur pm bt nvr mind i hv finally stalked u n yaa its beautiful bt plz nxt time se pm krna othrwise i won't talk to u

Well thank you for the comment.

But for your compliment- I have already mention in my post in part 4- that I won't able to able to send any pm to anyone and I apologised for that as well.😉😆😃

Well I won't promise but I will try my level best to send the pm to all of us.

If not , then pls forgive me in advance 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Super Duper happy after reading many beautiful messages from all of you.Thanks all for encouraging me and appreciating my efforts.Big hug to all

Warning: Suitable for +18 and above all. Sexual content.

Please baccha party stay away from this part. I apologise for that.

---------------------------Next Part - 5-----------------------------------

Here Sona and Dev both remembering the love night. The night which they will never forget... The night which makes them one ...

Dev and Sona both of them remembering - how their relationship was going through rough patch - sometime it is off and sometime is on.

--------------------Flashback

Natasha called Dev and Sona for her marriage. Finally she was getting married to one of richest person- Karan Kapoor- Highly educated, rich, and from their class, well settled in london. Natasha was super happy for her marriage .She especially called Dev's entire family , but Mamaji was not well , so Ishwari and Mami has decided not to go. Although Mami was super depressed with her own decision but due to fear of Ishwari stayed back. Even Nikki, RIya and Neha were busy in their respective work so even they decided not to go.

Dev went all alone to Natasha's marriage. Mr.Gujral has no hardfeeling for Dev , welcome him wholeheartedly .After meeting Mr. Gujral and Natasha ,Dev was drinking white wine chit-chatting with one of his business associate .

All of sudden he heard the familiar female voice who was speaking about food and health. So he immediately turned around. And his mouth was wide open in shock to see Dr. Sonakshi Bose was standing with few familiar rich Business class people,discussing same her favorite topic.

Dev- Self talk- was dumbstruck to see Sonakshi over there and above all she was wearing Saree. Immediately Dev thought she is doing all this thing purposely. She is well aware of that she looks absolutely gorgeous and sexy in saree. Why Sonakshi ? Why are you doing this ? You will kill me one day.

Sonakshi was wearing kanjivaraam saree- white with thick red border with only traditional Long earring. plus very deep cut blouse exposing her back ..First time she tied her hair up.. So back was fully visible. She is looking so sensous that dev was mesmerized by her beauty.

Sonakshi ignored him completely during the entire wedding- receiption and infact she didn't even came towards him ,didn't even greet him. Dev was really pissed off with her behaviour as a result he had hard drinks more than usual intake.

Here Sonakshi was well aware of Dev condition and why is he staring? But she has decided that she will not go towards him. She needs to move ahead as per Dada and Elena advice and for that it is necessary to stay away from MR. Dev Dixit. And she was enjoying, dancing with few know patients, drinking wine but her mind and eyes were stuck on Dev only.

At 11pm - Sona after saying final goodbye to couples and congratulating them once more time , she took the taxi and went away. All of sudden rain is also started. Climate Change after all due to global warming.

Meanwhile Dev also left the reception after doing last usual formalities around 11:15pm

While driving ,he saw Sona and taxi in the middle. Taxi karab due to some mechanical fault.Drivers is trying hard to fix it.Even Sona was standing outside giving him some advice which is definitely not helpful. Dev stopped the car.

Dev even though he was angry with Sona, but immediately came outside and ask her -

Dev- What happened?

Sona in scarastic tone - Nothing I want to know is it really raining or Am i just visualizing something like rain ??

Dev- Simple question ka simple answer dena kab Seekogi?

Sona- Obviosuly agar question itna stupid hoga then answer bhi uske level ka hona chaiye na .

Dev is really pissed off but still offered her lift, even Sona didn't refused because road seems too deserted plus rain plus unknown taxi driver. She payed taxi driver some amount and sat down in the car.

Dev and Sona both drenched, angry,not looking nor talking to each other. Suddenly they saw a line of car infront of them- after enquiry they came to know that political parties are protesting against some law . And there is no chances that traffic will be clear till morning. Infact some even suggested to go back to the place they came from because chances are very high - riots types disturbance/situation might took place.

SO Dev and Sona immediately called their respective family and informed them regarding the current situation and told them they will come tomorrow morning as soon as traffic will be cleared. But none of them tell to their respective family that they are together .

Dev knew it is impossible to go back , but one of his employees stays in nearby area,so he went to his place after parking his car and knock at his door.

Mr. Subramaniam : Aiyyo Sir!! Aap Yaha par..Pls come inside.

Dev: Sorry Subramanian ! Actually kuch traffic jam hai kuch protest ho raha hai. So maine socha. ...Am really sorry AAP ke yaha par without any notice aagaya..

Mr. Subramanian : Not at all sir! In fact humko bahut accha laga aapne humare baare mein socha..Wait I will call Mrs. Subramanian

Dev: No pls don't wake her up. As such it is really late.

Dev and sona both of them were feeling very awkward. MrSubramanian sensed that .

Mr. Subramanian: Sir Mere bete ka flat hai aap waha chaliye with all facilities and comfort. Main abhi key lati hoon.

Dev : correcting him Lata hoon .

Mr. Subramanian: Sir mere Son toh America mein hai.. Yaha par jab aata hai iss flat mein raheta hai.. AApko jo chaiye woh milega ..

Dev: Ohh Thank you Mr. Subramanian.

Mr. Subramanian:Why Thank you sir !! It is my pleasure ..

Dev and Sona followed him and he opened the door of the flat ..

Mr. Subramanian: Sir Yaha par sab kuch hai - Even clothes for you and madam.. Aaplog bahut bheeg gaye hai.. Change kar lijiye..

I will bring something to eat ..
Dev : No pls .. Humne already dinner kar liya hai .. You go and sleep and Thank you..

Mr. Subramanian: Are you sure? sir..If you need anything just buzz me Sir..
Off he went.
Dev and Sona stare each other and looked around- it is small flat with one bedroom , hall and small kitchen..

Dev went inside the bedroom and opened the cupboard and took out all the clothes. Obviously by looking at size of clothes- Dev came to know Subramanian's Son must be tall and very heavy. But he was wet and so was Sona. He took one salwar suit for Sona and kurti and pajama for him. She was more drenched than him. He gave it to her and told her to change first . But she refused and told him to change first as she might take more time to change. Dev without argument -quickly went and came outside wearing loose kurti pajama. Pajama was alright but kurti was way too loose. Sona can not control her laughed. Dev stare at her and said now you go and change.. I will sleep in hall and you in bedroom.

Sona went inside the bedroom to change and after 25 mins she still didint come out. Dev need to take blankets and pillows. He thought she might fall into sleep and so he start banging the door.

Dev: Sona !! Sona ! open the door.. Mujhe blanket chaiye.. Its cold outside..

Sona open the door and still wearing that saree

Dev : Are u mad it is more than 25mins and you are still in saree. Madam jo hai woh pehen lo .. otherwise you will fall sick ( with concern )

Sona: Nahi I am fine with this saree and not feeling cold( little bit shivering )

Dev : Sona pls.. What? After a minute silence - OK !! U tell me why are refusing to wear this salwar?

Sona: Nahi ! !Just take your pillow and jaooo..

Dev in high pitch: No !!! Change your clothes now. Choti Bacchi nahi hooo..

Sona in tears: Nahi kar sakti hoon..

Dev : But why ????

Sona: Because ... Because because ...again started crying

Dev staring her and saying through eyes don't test my patience pls..

Sona: Because blouse ke hook open nahi ho rahe .. Mera haath nahi pooch pa raha hai..

Dev was dumbstruck , never ever imagined this problem. The importance of hook of blouse don't know what to do - confused and ask. Shld I call Mrs. Subramanian for your help.

Sona: But it is already 12 pm ..Mrs. Subramanian is sleeping and don't know whether she will be happy to come or not. Leave it .. I will stay like this with shivering tone.

Dev : OK turn around I will open it..

Sona: No!! HAHAHA !! NO ..

Dev : I will close my eyes baba..

Sona: WIth closing eyes how can you open the hook of the blouse? Expert ho - hook open karne mein?

Dev in irritated tone: Pls Sona!! Don't fight for this as well..

Sona was not ready and with stubborn Dev she give up and above all she knows if she didn;t change the clothes she will be in great trouble healthwise.

SO dev with slight force , make her turn around in front of mirror.Dev looked her in the mirror while Sona closed her eyes tight. Dev knows about this woman so much , knows when she will angry, happy, sad , naughty, grumpy everything. He knows in and out of this woman. He loves her so much that he can't think of any other woman other than Sona to be his wife. Both are remembering their confession, first hug, first rain dance, first kiss, and how their love is only increased day by day despite of all odds.

With cold trembling fingers Dev touched Sona's bareback, Sona gets excited and as well nervous and bite the her lips slightly and Dev can see the effects of his touch. He opened the first, second, third, and but before the last hook , he by mistake in nervousness , opened bra , instead of hook of the blouse. But don't know what to do , he was mesmerized by beauty and innocence of Sona.

After fraction of second of pause , he continue with this opening job and opened the last hook as well. After opening last hook, the blouse and bra almost about to fall down but Sona immediately in defense put her hand over her breast to hold her blouse .Shocked and in anger looked in mirror with staring eyes to Dev - How come?

Dev confessed immediately that he by mistake opened her bra as well .

Sona was feeling so ashamed , embarrassed ,don't believe that she is standing in front of Dev half naked . Through her eyes she instructed him to go back to other room. Dev was about to go then - Boom Boom - Light went off ..Obviously with rain comes electricity problem.

Sona : This is it.. This is worst nightmare of my life. I stuck in some unknown places almost half naked with no electricity Dev ( in almost frightening tone)

Dev Immediately putting hand over her shoulders to her calm down . He knows her fear of darkness so much

Dev: Sona ! AM here .. Don't worry.. Will call Mr. Subramanian?

Sona: WOh Kya kar lege ?

Dev: Aree He might be having inventors or something else..

Sona: No don't go and don't call .. I can't stay alone Plus woh mujhe aise kaise ???

Dev realised that he can't even call any outsiders inside and no one shld see Sona like this.

Dev switched on the light of his mobile ,open the cupboard again and searched inside frantically because battery in mobile is very low and he need to find something before battery of mobile goes off completely. He found extremely small battery operated tea lights.

Dev switch on the tealight. It was so dim that Sona was still struggling with darkness issue. Sona is still complaining about darkness.

Dev - Aab Aur kya kar sakta hoon Sona?

Dev told her to change and he will close his eyes.. As such it is getting difficult for him to control his hormones seeing her half naked.

Turn around , closed her eyes again. Again he heard crying voice, frustrated tone he asked: Aab kya hua ?

Sona: Aab Petticoat ka Naada nahi khul raha hai ?

Dev : What ??? He is super angry and frustrated now.. Aree saree pehnai nahi aati samaj mein aata hai.. Khol Li bhi Nahi aati ..

Sona: Woh saree khul na jaaye issliye maine 2-3 knots extra ho gaya but woh pani ke karan bahut tight ho gaye hai. Plus Aab ye knot mujhe theek se dekh bhi nahi rahe hai and khul bhi nahi rahi hai.. Mummy !! Mummy..

Dev: Aree kya Mummy!! Mummy !! Kar rahi ho.. ? Choti Bacchi nahi ho .Problem toh ye hai ki tum choti bacchi nahi ho Sona..

He again turn around and said - OK main try karta hoon

SOna- No !! No !! No .. Stay away ... I mean to say Pass mein raho but kuch maat karo..

Dev : Then full night aise hi already open blouse and bra , almost khul chuki saree mein khadi rahogi..

Sona: Hey bhagwan.. Main kya karo.. NAhi Dev .. Kuch aur Socho..

Dev : Tumhare pass iske elava aur koi idea then pls share. Love to hear that.

Dev without any further discussion and came near to her and started opening her petticoat knots as well..

But his concentration was distract by scent of her body..And slim figure which he was watching through dim light..

FInally without thinking much he opened the knots of petticoat and off it went straight to the floor. Now dev and Sona , both at same time closed their eyes. Sona can't believe that from half naked to fully naked she was standing infront of him. She can't take her hands from blouse otherwise it will also fall down.

SOna Shouted at dev = Dev... what have you done?
Dev with closed eyes: Sorry Sona.. I didn't realised that after opening the knots I need to hold it as well for you..

Sona: Yes By mistake you open my bra , by mistake forget to hold my petticoat..

Dev still closed eyes: Yes mera toh rooz ka kaam hai - Blouse and petticoat open karna ..

Sona : Tumhi.ekdum Impossible ( sorry for using bengali )

Dev still closed eyes controlling his laugh: Sorry !! Sachi Sorry !!

Meanwhile one last thing - rat comes and cross over from SOna's legs. She was so petrified that she forget that she is standing almost full naked infront of dev, Jumped over and hugged dev with so much force that both of them land in bed.

Dev with slight dim light , still able to see naked Sona , her slim trim figure,her innocence in eyes, his love. Embrassed Sona closed her eyes , but again heard the rat squeaking noise and hugged Dev tightly. With so much closeness, it is impossible for Dev to have control over his emotions and his hormones as well.

Dev:Sona!!Don't do this.. Afterall I am human being and not god. Aise condition mein toh Bhagwan bhi control loose kar dege? What do u expect from me ?
Sona after realising that she is fully naked and hugging dev tightly.

Embrassed Sona trying to move up , but exposing her boobs more to him ,

Dev shouted : No don't get up!! Pls..

Now Dev lost control over himself, and started touching her soft silk hair. With his touch , even sona was loosing herself. His touch is sending shivers down his spine.And why not even she is human being. Above all person who is touching her is love of her life. Her princess charming. Yes they have issues but not because they don't love,trust and understand each other but it is because Dev can't hurt his mother. Dev started to touch her face with so much love , that it is impossible for Sona to think - rationally- whether it is right or not ? whether it is allowed before marriage ? She can't think about anything at this moment. Rather she loosing herself more with every touch of Dev..

Slowly pulled her up and Sona still with closed eyes .. Dev kissed with on- forehead, then on cheeks, then on nose as well, then softly on Lips. It was so beautiful. Sona knows him so well, she knows him- his love , his life line . He is not ordinary person but Dev.She knows that he will take care of her more than she can ..Then sona opened her eyes, Dev and sona looked each other with so much passion and love, both burning with desire. That they once agained kissed each other with more passion and sona gripped his loose kurti and reel him in closer. His hand gently mover to her hip, rubbing exposed skin there. This kiss goes on for a long period of time, and they took the break to breathe..Again they started kiss each other - licking their tongues,and this time his hand was moving to towards one of the right breast nipples encircling them.. WIth this she makes slight moaning sound, which makes Dev very excited.

Now he came over her- started kissing her neck, then her nipples of the breasts, with his one hand slipped in panty ( that is only piece of cloth she was wearing ).His fingers graze along the smoothly shave skin of her outer lips.He slips his fingertips between her lips finds her wet. He was enjoying her condition and was not in mood to spare her.. After all from so many days he didn't hug her, and was missing her badly.When he slips his finger slowly up and down her slit, her wetness increases.

Sona was moaning loudly, and grabbing the pillow. Dev was kissing her entire body with so much passion . That it is impossible for her to control . And even Dev was fully erected.. And now Dev removes his stupid kurti and pajama and and remove her only panty as well. Dev asked her whether he can taste her as well. But Sona didn't give any answer and Dev even understand her unspoken words. With the premission he spread her legs and started kissing her pussy as well, because of which Sona was in moaning and breathing heavenly and pleading him to stop .. That she can;t take it anymore.
Dev Stopped and move up and looked into her eyes and said - I LOVE YOU SONA.I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. It is like he was asking her - to give him permission to entry her body and SONA just smiled.

Since Dev understand her so much , he understood that she gave her permission.As soon as Dev tried to enter tight pussy and Sona was scared and struggling with pain. So immediately stopped , told Sona to relax, and trust him he don't harm her and hugged her tightly. Sona was lost so much to his passionate love.She was so happy that her man knows her so well, that he will not ready to give her pleasure pain as well. This time she kiss his man and said - I LOVE YOU DEV and indirectly asking him to continue to do so.

Sona open her legs, slightly and he gently insert and the sight of her ass muscles clenching excites him.She moans and spreads her legs wider. Dev again tried to entire tight juice filled pussy, and with second attempt he entered inside her and she gasps as he enters. He pauses before pushing again, sliding his throbbing manhood deeper into her. With few very slow stroked, he is completely inside her, totally engulfed by her womanhood. Wet and tight, and he feels her clamp down with her pussy muscles, squeezing his shaft. He begins thrusting in and out in long , slow deliberates strokes. and the sight of her ass moving with him and bumping against him with each thrust exciting him more and more.He hold her tight as his thrusts become more urgent , feeling her move against him. Sona felt the best connection with him now. Because of speedy strokes and in rhythm ,both are cumming together.

She is breathing hard and fast now, her mouth slightly open ,and she clenches her muscles again and again, moving her hips in time with his movements.He feels the familiar shifting in his balls and knows that he will cum soon. She feels his shaft widen inside her .Then she cums, hard, she moans, as he watches while he himself about to cum , her ass muscles clench as her orgasm overtakes her. Her hands are clenched into fists in the pillow beneath her head. Her orgasm last for several wonderful, blissful moments, and then he was his turn to cum. He finally fills her with shooting stream after stream of hot, thick cum deep inside her pussy. He also moans as his orgasm erupts.Her eyes watered at the pleasure of the fullness of him inside her.

Then the throbbing slows, and stops , and he pulls her back against him.They hold onto each other for several minutes. For the first time in her life, she listen to her body and do what her body wanted.

Dev pulled her towards him ,tears were still coming from Sona eyes while hugging him. Dev pulled the blankets from other hand and cover both of them and gently wiping the tears of Sona. Sona fell asleep over him easily, not thinking for a moment about an awkward morning-after.

Both of them were happy soul. Both of them are official become "ONE".

Today Dev knows about Sona fully-mentally, emotional and even physically.First time ever Mr. Dev Dixit is secretly praying and thanking god - for giving him wonderful partner of his life. Thanking him with tears in his eyes - for his blessings in the form of Sona.

Sona was feeling so safe, secure, happy at her Man's arms. Today her man loved his one and only one woman in true way .

Next part 6- Coming soon - Dev and Devki bonding and their dinner date

PS. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

P.S. If possible please comment if you like and silent members please hit " like " button .

Edited by mayu1982 - 9 years ago

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fatima rukia

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Posted: 9 years ago

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oh...i didnt expect this part to be 18+😆
enjoyed their petticoat and blouse moment☺️..rest is too HOT☺️
waiting for next part..😃😉

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mayu1982

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: rukiaa
oh...i didnt expect this part to be 18+😆
enjoyed their petticoat and blouse moment☺️..rest is too HOT☺️
waiting for next part..😃😉

Am bit confused with your comment🤔
Already mentioned in my previous post regarding their love making
Anyway I will take it as compliment then

Hope you are pleasantly surprised 😆

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