Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Prizi
nice starting
one request. plz if u dont knw bengali then write it in hindi or english.. what u wrote those r nt correct :p

Thanks and sorry for using bengali .. I am not bengali.

So blame google translator ..

Are u bengali ?

Help me / convert some basic sentences into bengali ..😃

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#32

Originally posted by: nishita.b
Very nice 👏 pls conti. soon i'm waiting 😳

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#33

Originally posted by: mena_k
Devki 😃 OMG.

You have raised our heartbeats with such lovely imagination. Pl. don't stop and post next part asap. 😊

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#34

Originally posted by: yyy
Amazing start...I can't believe it's your first OS..I love the name Devki...Dev +sonakshi. ..perfect...cliffhanger...waiting eagerly for the next part...

Thanks dear ...

Yes indeed it is my first os..

Even I can't believe it.. Never ever tried something like this . So i was nervous to post it thinking may be no one wants to read this story. 😊

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Originally posted by: andy1245
hey its really nice plz cont soon n pm me

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Originally posted by: rana.mina
It's amazing please continue fast 👏

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Originally posted by: lwrimaforever
Awesome 😃 Please continue soon and pm me 😊

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regarding pm - I will definitely try to send you

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Originally posted by: -AditiS
i really liked it. pls continue!

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Originally posted by: Asma-
It sounds so good write more

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Omg thank you so much guys for encouragement and boosting my morals and c85rie helped me in correcting few things and Prizi - I will try not to use any bengali word
---------------------------Next Part - 2-----------------------------------

Morning time - full chaos in the house , Asha preparing the breakfast , Bijoy reading newspaper and complaining about current world situation. Dadi is busy in yoga.

Sona: Devki pls baby come fast. Stop reading that princess story and come get ready and you need to go to your new school as well with Mama. Admission ke liye beta

Devki: Mumma Mujhe new school nahi jana hai. Mujhe wapas apni frnds ke paas jana hai.

Sona: Baby tum ek baar jaoo toh sahi new school. Dekho new frnds bana kar. Accha nahi laga , toh hum phir se wapas jayege.. Aab chalo bhi. Bolo kaun sa dress pehani hai tumhe ??

Devki : Pink wali princess dress..
Sona: why do you want to wear only pink devki. There is so many colours in life. Why don't you want to try different colours ?

Devki :No mumma. I love pink. I want to wear - Pink dress, pink socks, pink shoes, pink necklace, pink nail polish, pink tiara , pink bangles , even...

Sona( inner talk) : tiara bhi pink !!Devki !!omg just like dev. Obsess with one color. I still remember his obsession for dull colours- white, grey and blue only.

Sona : Why don't you try orange colour dress baby? Its nice.. plus princess bhi hai.

Devki is more stubborn than Sona and Dev: Her bhajan start - pink dress, pink dress .

Eventually Sona gave up and put on her pink princess dress .Ziddi ladki

Then Sona went to the hospital along with Bijoy reports to meet Dr. Sinha .Dada and Devki went to the school for her admission.

Sona sitting outside cabin of Dr. Sinha for waiting for her number. reading some magazine about health & nutrition. And she heard some voices. Some familiar voice. Firstly she can't believe - so she quickly turn over to see Ishwari and Mamiji coming inside the Dr. Sinha waiting room.

Ishwari and Mamaji saw Sona and totally shocked , surprised

Ishwari : Aree Nutritionist . Tum yaha .. Kitne saal ho gaye ..Kaise ho tum.

Sona : Auntyji main theek hoon..

Sona : Aur Aap ??Yaha .. Aap theek toh hai na? Aur yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Ishwari : Ye ladki kabhi bhi nahi badale wali hai.. Itne saalo ke baad mil rahi hai phir bhi jaisi thi waisi hai.. Aree main theek hoon. Mamaji and Main routine checkup ke liye aaye hai..

Ishwari : Par tum yaha kaise ? aur itne saal kaha thi tum ? Tumhari Shaadi ho gayi kya ?

Sona: Auntyji baba ki tabiyat theek nahi hai so main unke reports lekar yaha par aayi hoon Dr. Sinha ke yaha . Sona purposely didn't answer marriage wala answer.

Meanwhile receptionist call Sona- Dr. Sinha is calling you. Dr. Sinha already took the appointment with Dr.Pradhan( Cancer Specialist and even he works in the same hospital) , So he was present along with Dr. Sinha .

After 30 mins discussion. Dr. Pradhan suggested her they need to do few more tests so that we can have clear idea in what stage is in Mr. Bijoy Bose is in ? And after that line of treatment will be decided.

Plus Dr. Sinha offered her same post as nutritionist with same salary. Sona quickly accepted the job offer and informed him that she will join it from tomorrow .

Sona came outside and fulfilled all formalities of Hospital recruitment.
And there once again meet Ishwari and Mamaji outside the hospital waiting for the taxi.

Ishwari : Nutritionist tum gayi nahi. Chalo ghar chalo

Sona: Nahi auntyji. Aaj thode jaldi main phir kabhi aaoogi.. Pakka.

And then She heard dada voice from back .

Dada: Thank god Sona tu Yaha hai. Sona teri beti ekdum impossible hai. Usko maine thousand times bola ki mumma busy hai direct ghar chalte hai but nahi...

Ishwari saw Devki- Chubby, extremely fair , brown eyes, brownish hair, beautiful smile and same innocent face just like Dev.Wohi Chehra, Wohi Ankhe , Wohi.. Nahi ye nahi ho sakta .. Tried to compose herself and managed to talk to Sona

Ishwari with slight astonishment: Nutritionist tumhari beti hai ye? .. Kya naam hai isska? And tumne humme bulaya bhi nahi shaadi mein..

Sona fumbled , nervous and got tensed and said : Haa Auntyji.. Meri beti hai .. OK bye Auntyji mujhe late ho raha hai .. Dada chalo chalte hai..

Ishwari : Ek mintue Nutrition!! Pheli baar mil rahi hoon isse .. Shagun toh dene de.. Itna Faaq toh hai mera tuih par and uss par

Sona(Slight tears in eyes self talk)- Kaise Batao Auntyji - Aapka kya Faaq hai Iss par and mujhe par. Kaise batao ye aapki ghar ki beti hai. Kaise bataoo ki aapki Dev ki beti Devki hai..

Ishwari to Devki: Beta ye lo and aap ka naam kya hai? Aur pata hai main kaun ho ?

Devki : Thank you (( KYa bolu so she looked at Sona )..

Sona : Purposely said in english just like your granny and granpa..

So
Devki : Thank you granny.and gave hug to Ishwari .
Sona : Chalo Hume late ho raha hai ..

Sona , Dada and even Mamiji is in tears while watching this scene.

Ishwari : Tum bahut pyaari ho.. Aur iss pyari ki baachi na humme naam toh bataya hi nahi..

Meanwhile Dada stopped the taxi and through gestures telling sona to sit inside quickly.

Devki while started walking turn around: Devki !!

Ishwari heard that name.. Sona quickly pick her up and sit inside the taxi.

----DIxit Manison

Same house , nothing is changed in this 5 years except emptiness. There is so much dullness over here. No noise inside the house as if there is no sign of life .

Ishwari is in her room ,tensed and all the time she was thinking about Devki

Suddenly Mamaji came inside her room and gave her medicine.

Ishwari : Bhaiya!! AAp kyon leye !! Keechu ko bol dete

Mamaji : Ishwari retirement ke baad. Kuch kaam nahi mere pass. Dekh tumhari medicine abhi hi table par hai then le aaya.. Nahi la sakta kya tumhare liye ..

Ishwari : Bhaiya aapko pata hai na aisa kuch nahi hai .

Mamaji : Kya soch rahi thi? Itne tension mein kyon ho Ishwari ?

Ishwari : Kuch nahi Bhaiya. Bahut din se baccho se baat nahi hui so unke baare mein soch rahi thi.

Mamaji : Ishwari tum bhi na. Devki ke baare mein soch rahi thi na

Ishwari Shocked and said nothing .
Mamaji : Devki bilkul Choti dev hai na .. Mujhe aaj usko dekar laga maano bacchpan ka chota na dev ko phir se ek baar dekh liya hai.

Ishwari again didn't say anything.
Mamaji continue: Ishwari !! Agar jo hum soch rahe hai agar woh sach hai .. Then kabhi socha hai ki kya ho gaya hai humse

Ishwari with anger: Nahi BHaiya.. AIsa kuch nahi hai.. Mana ki devki Dev jaisi dekhti hai lekin phir bhi woh bahut lag hai..( just to please her mind and mamaji she said this thing )

Ishwari : Aur waise bhi Dev ne and Sona ne kabhi mujhe bhi aa kar kuch nahi bataya . Toh phir aap kaise bol sakte hai ki maine kissi ke saath ..

Mamaji: Mana Dev aur Sona ne kabhi bhi tumhe aakar nahi bol. But kya tumhe unke baare mein nahi bata tha ?

Ishwari : Ye sab jhuth bhi ho sakta hai. Jab tak koi mujhe aakar apne muh se na bole tab tak main kya kar sakti hoon.

Mamaji : Ishwari !! Kabhi Socha hai Dev ka kya hoga? Batao kab tak hum log aur jiyege ? Tab Dev ke saath kaun hoga. Teeno behen aapni apni zindagi mein chali gayi. Dev ka kya hoga tumhare baad Ishwari ? Kya hoga ?

Neha - Ranveer ke saath finally shaadi ho gayi, aur khush hai. Riya ne USA mein ja kar MBA course complete kiya , job kiya and last month uski bhi uske pasand wale ladke se shaadi kar di.
AUr NIkki - bhi padai ke liye USA gayi hai. Aur mujhe yakein hai uske saath bhi accha hoga

Ishwari almost in tears , this reality check to hard for her to digest

Mamaji in scarastic laugh: Ishwari tum toh aapne bete ki chupi bhi pechanti ho. Par afsos ki baat hai Aaj tumhare pass Dev hote hue bhi tumhare pass nahi. Uske chehre par hassi laane wali ladki ko tumne khud ne durr kar diya hai.

Mamaji continue: Ishwari .. Main apne bete and biwi ki aur dhyaan nahi de saka aur isliye dono ko rok nahi saka galat kaam karne se . Par Tum khud ke maan ko rok nahi saki aur issliye Dev ke saath galat kar bethi.

Mamaji left without saying further. Ishwari is in tears. Looking her house , Kaha gayi mere ghar ki Hasi , Kaha gaya Mera Dev, Mere pass hote hue bhi Kyon nahi mujhe uska aasaas , aisa lagata hai maano Dev ne jaana hi chhod diya hai .Uski aankhe bhi mujhse puchti hai - Mere saath kyon hone diya aisa .

Ishwari now crying uncontrollably and cursing herself to being so selfish in her life. Ye mujhse kya ho gaya Bhagwan.. Dev se maane sabse jayada pyaar kiya aur usse hi sabse jayada chut pouchi.

Next Part 3: Dev finally saw Sona after 5 years and first time meeting his daughter Devki

Dev : Hi !! I am MR. Dev Dixit. and you?

Devki still playing with her dolls without looking at him: Hi ! I am Ms. Devki Bose.

Sona entering into her cabin Shocked to See : Dev !!!!
Dev and Sona shocked to see each other with devki standing in middle of two.
Dev and his detective mode will be fully on after their meeting.

P.S. For pink colour obsession came from my 3 year old daugher who is exactly like devki totally obsessed with pink colour so much that I can't tell u ..

P.S. Thank you So much for kind words and encourangement. Pls do share your views . As you guys know this is first time am writing any os. So need your guidance to improve the quality of writing .

PS. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

P.S. If possible please comment if you like and silent members please hit " like " button .

Edited by mayu1982 - 9 years ago

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