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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mygaby
mayu plz post next part...mujhse intazaar nahi hoga...did i say how amazing it is...thank u thank u thank u

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Mujhse bhi...😉
Please dii, your story is not letting me sleep...😲
Please cont soon😊

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Originally posted by: Prizi
its okkk i understand... google translator sucks badly :p
whenever u need my help just msg me.. :)

Yeah Thanks dear

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vry beautifully written plz cont soon

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Originally posted by: sneharay
Interesting..
Mindblowing Updates..
Devki is so cute..
Update soon
Please pm me when u next update

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plzzz update Next part..soon.. I am waiting

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Originally posted by: yyy

Yayy...I am so happy you will be writing more stories. ..🤗

Please update soon...

Uska pata hai - torture milega ki entertainment milega 😆😆

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Originally posted by: Rojulia
Hiii...I am Rojulia...your new reader...I love dev sona...and the update is awesome...
I want to tell you something that I am Bengali...if u need any help in your update u can ask me...l will be very happy to help you...

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Omg thank you so much guys !!!

---------------------------Next Part - 3-----------------------------------

It is almost 2 months - Devki is well settled in her new school and has many frnds( or ..) in her school and happy.

Bijoy is at last stage of Prostate Cancer. So obviously Asha , dadi , Dada ,and Sona is tensed about his health. Sona is still consulting doctors and fighting with death of her father. Meanwhile in dixit mansion- Ishwari is very restless and disturb after meeting with Sona and Devki but she didn't shared this news with Dev. Unfortunately Mamaji after retirement is more busy in social work , he could not meet Dev. And Hence Dev is still unaware of Sonakshi is again back in Delhi..

-----------------------------Dev office ----------------------------

Dev : Tina !! Pls come to my cabin immediately with today's meeting schedule.

Nothing is changed Same Tina and her dressing style . But she is married now.

Tina : May I come in Sir?

Dev : Yes Pls come

TIna :Ye liye Sir.. Aaj ki meeting schedule hai with-

10am : marketing department ,
12:30 pm : Shareholders
2:00pm: With Mr. Saxena
3:30 pm :J.L.S Hospital mein hai - Being of Board of member aapko waha jana jaroori hai - for extension plan par voting ke liye..

Dev ( self talk): J.L.S Hospital mein..woh hospital jana Sona se pheli baar mila tha.. Ok fine Tina .Thanks Tina

Dev as a robot busy with his business work

On other side

------------------------Sona at Hospital -----------------------------

Busy with her patients and even following some of them and giving them long- longest lectures of about food.
Since Asha is busy in taking care of Bijoy and dadi so after school Devki comes to Sona's hospital and stays in hospital daycare unit . But devki is devki afterall she like to spend some time with Sona mumma before going to daycare unit.Even Dr. Sinha gave permission to Sona to keep Devki for sometime.Even he can't resist her cuteness and pampered Devki in his own way.Because of this in Sona cabin there is special corner for Devki :Her dolls , and small toys .

AT 3:00 pm:

Devki - Mumma am here !!

Sona: Ohh my baby !! How was ur day Jaan ?

Devki : Nice !! Today I shared my strawberry jelly with Neha. So she is not angry with me anymore for spoiling her drawings with water. and ..

Sona: And?? What Devki ? And who is angry with you today ?

Devki : I guess Rohit is angry with me .. Am not sure but he is not looking very happy I would say..

Sona : Continue ...

Devki : By mistake I ...( looking here and there).. I put gluestick to his hair. I said sorry Mumma .. But i guess teachers told him- that he need to cut his hair..( after finishing the last line she almost closed her eyes)

Sona: What ? Gluestick .. Need to cut his hair.. Devki .. Am sure in next parent meeting - no parent will leave me in one piece ..Sab ke sab khoon ke pyaase ho jayege.. Why devki ? WHy devki ?

Devki : BUT I SAID SORRY MUMMA..

Then nurse came and said Dr.Sinha is calling you..

Sona is pleading way - Pls don't do anything. AAJ Ka - Apni- Mummy-KO shock Do- Quota finished.

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Dev reached Hospital before time, but internally he is feeling not feeling good and very emotional. Unknowingly he start walking towards Sona cabin saying - Yaha par Sona ka cabin tha. He got a shocked after reading nameplate again??

DR. SONAKSHI BOSE - Nutritionist'

HOW COME ???
No it is not possible, she must be someone else. Tina informed me that Sona left Delhi and shifted to Mumbai I guess. Then

So he entered the cabin and there saw small cute girl- wearing school dress with two ponytail , brown eyes, brownish hair , fair and in fact Dev felt its his female version - Small dev in skirt and blouse. How come?So pleasantly surprised Dev said

Dev: Hi !! I am MR. Dev Dixit and you ?

Devki : HI !! I am Ms. Devki Bose still busy in playing with doll..

Dev : What are you doing over here?

Devki: Playing with my dolls. Meet my doll Lilly and Annie.. Lilly feeling vert hungry so am feed her and Annie is feeling very sleepy so I making a bed for her.. And ..

Dev almost surprised with her nonstop talking: But what are u doing here? Means Why are you here and not at home?

Devki : AA A A A I will go home with my Mumma. I love my Mumma .. And my mumma..

There she goes again ..

Dev almost gave up and said ok Beta and I will leave now and turned around and sonakshi was entering into her cabin

Sonakshi : Devki : Dev both of them are standing with devki in the middle.

For few seconds both of them are looking each other, wants to hug , laugh and at the same time cry. So much is going into their mind .
But

Sonakshi (trying to calm herself and said): Dr. Dev Dixit here? Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai?

Dev: Ms. Sonakshi Bose ??? AAP yaha par kya kar rahi hai ?

Sona: Firstly -Its Dr. Bose for you and Secondly - pehle maine pucha hai ??

Dev: Ignoring her question.. Ye tumhari Beti hai?? Tumne Shaadi karli ?

Sona: I guess aapka appointment nahi hai plus mere patients baar wait kar rahe hai .. So will pls leave ..

Dev in detective mode: Agar tumne Shaadi ki le hai then why didn't you change your surname then ?

Sona was so scared with that question: She almost told him in sternvoice : Pls leave and my patients are waiting outside ..

Dev : Fine am leaving but hum kab baat kar sakte hai ?

Sona: I guess never.. Aapko yaad nahi but mujhe yaad hai- we will never meet again .. Never ever and press the buttonto call the boy and ask him to send the next patient ..

Shocked Dev left the cabin and entered into Board room little late and apologised .. But he was hardly paying any attention to board members their boring discussion and his mind and soul was with Sonakshi and Devki..

Well even board members were even more confused than Dev's current mind 😆 regarding extension plan of Hospital . SO meeting was ended without any results. Plus they planned to keep board meeting next week for further discussion ..

After coming out from the meeting Dev immediately went to meet Dr. Sinha. But Dr. Sinha told him that he need to go to OT asap .

Here Dev again come to meet Sona but receptionist told him - just now she left with her daugher

Then Sona and Devki was waiting for taxi in taxi rank - then suddenly it starts raining , Devki and Sona don't have any umbrella. Sona was tensed for Devki s health but Devki was fully enjoying rain and singing nursery rhymes in full volume.

And there MR. Dev DIXIT saw Sona and Devki again..

So he came and offered her lift which Sona refused immediately . But Dev insist saying he is offering lift because of Devki. She might fall sick if she... till the time Dev finish this line Sona told Devki to come and sit in car.

Now Dev to Devki :

Dev: Devki.. Would you like to eat something?

Devki : A a a a Strawberry Ice cream..

Sona: What ??? Devki ( angrily )

Devki : But mumma am just answering uncle's question ? Otherwise he might feel bad na.. Its not good to hurt someone.. As u say.

Dev : Yes ! Yes !! You were not wrong- Staring at Sona.. But Ice cream is this weather is not good. I will give you strawberry icecream some other time. Pukka.Promise .. Something else do u want to eat?..Do u like to eat pizza ?

Devki : Ye ..s.sss ( ss in very low pitch)

Sona: Devki .. Pizzza is not healthy food baby..

Dev: Ms. Bose sorry Dr. Bose she is just small girl ..

Sona: I know that u don't have to teach me.

Dev: Am not teaching you.. Just inform kar raha tha.. Pizza mein vegetables bhi hote hai. and cheese hota hai which is good source of calcium. Kid needs calcium for their bones..

Sona: Aapko bahut pata hai Kids and food ke baare mein ?

Dev: Stare her.

Dev stopped the car at pizza hut and sona refused to get down and in fact told him that she can take taxi now. But Dev ignored her completely and locked the car doors and quickly went inside and brought 2 small pizza for her and for Sona. But she refused to take it. So Dev gave it to her .

Dev: Kyon accha hai ??

Devki : its yummy.. Thank you uncle.

Sona ( Self talk) : Samaj nahi aa raha hai - Kaise batao Devki ko ki tumhare papa hai .. Uncle nahi..

Dev: Accha ye batao ki tumko kaun pasand hai Papa ki Mumma ?

Sona: Mr. DIxit ??? Staring at him

Dev : What ? am not speaking to you .. Am speaking to Devki..Yes tum bolo

Devki: Mumma ..munch munch munch...

Dev: Aur aapke papa ka naam kya hai ? kya karte hai ?

Then Sona can't handle this anymore ..she said in high pitch.. Will you please stop this question- answer session right now.. Aap meri life mein interfere kar rahe hai Mr. Dixit..

Dev ignoring her completely : Yes bolo

Devki : Papa ka naam - Papa hai . Papa is busy in taking care of his kingdom.

Dev in super SHocked , shouted in top voice : WHAT ?

Devki : Papa aapne praja(kingdom) mein busy hai uncle ...while eating her pizza ..

With this they reached home, and Sona quickly and almost jumped out from the car and took all belongings and asked Devki to get down immediately from the car.

Devki to dev

Devki: Bye uncle... T.( munching) H( munching fast ) Munching...

Dev: OK bye Devki : I got it .. No need to say thank you..

Off they go inside the house ..

Dev self talk: Praja / Kingdom mein busy hai..??? OMG .. ye confirm hai ye pakke se Sonakshi ki beti hai ..Kaun sa King mil gaya usss Sona ko.. Pagal kar degi ..

Part 4: Coming soon -

Huge fight between Sona and Dev after knowing the truth about devki..

plus dev and sona both remembering their love making night.

P.S. : Devki naughtiness is inspired from my daughter (3year old).especially gluestick wala case - I have to cut her hair recently..Ignoring people while playing is concept of 5year old son.😆

P.S. Thank you So much for kind words and encouragement. Pls do share your views . it makes me happy after reading your wonderful comments.

PS. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

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Edited by mayu1982 - 9 years ago