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I would like to apologised each and everyone who liked my OS and even post their comments . Although I read almost every comment but due to some personal reasons not able to get enough time to reply to each and everyone.

Secondly this part is most difficult part for me - to write something against my mental state- to write a something romantic when your mind is not fit for romance. Am not sure whether I will able to do justice with your expectations or not.. If not then I am really sorry in advance. That is reason I kept it bit short instead of long.

So Dil Se sorry in advance

-------------------Next Part - 10-----------------------------------

Now Dev understood what is the meaning of Being Parent?Turned over but can still feel the small kicks of Devki..

Morning time :

Dev is still sleeping suddenly heard Devki voice from bathroom..

Devki- Mumma... !! Can I flash the toilet now??Can I flash the toilet now??

Sonakshi in very cool and calm tone- Not yet..Devki.. Complete your work first..

Dev laughed and can;t believe the morning conversation between daughter and mother is for flash the toilet..

Sonakshi- Hello !! Good morning.. Why are you laughing Dev?

Dev- Nothing. Flash the toilet is the topic of discussion for both of you..

Sonakshi with smile- Well it is .. Devki likes to play with water.. And unnecessary waste the water. So it is my duty I mean it is our duty to tell her the importance of water.

Dev- It is ok Sonakshi... It is my duty bol sakti ho.. I understand .Btw how much time she will take in the bathroom?

Sonakshi- Well.. She needs to do her brush, then bath ... then ..

Dev- Leave it.. I will adjust .. As such I have important meeting so I need to get ready quickly. Don't worry there is plenty of vacant bathroom available for me.

Devki- Mumma.. I am done. Now can I flash the toilet..

Dev and Sonakshi both smiled ...

Both Sonakshi and Dev were busy in respective work. Even after coming home Dev was busy in office work, Sonakshi with Devki and with her bose family especially with Bujoy.

It is almost 15 days, even after marriage Dev and Sonakshi hardly get any time for each other.

Breakfast time

Sonakshi busy in feeding Devki and reading the reports of patients and Dev is busy in reading company's progress report.

Ishwari- Dev and Sonakshi.. Mujhe office mein jane se pehele dono mujhe mil kar jana ..

Both of them were shocked with sudden request by Ishwari Maa. After Devki went to school by bus, Sonakshi and Dev came to Ishwari's Room together . There Mamaji is also present along with Ishwari.

Mamaji- Haa Bhai.. Aaa jaoo.. Kitna accha lag raha hai . Dono pheli baar office jana se phele Ishwari se milene aaye hai.. woh bhi ek saath. nahi roz toh aate ho but alaag alaag..Accha hai accha hai..

Ishwari- Dev! Sonakshi.. Main jaanti hoon tum dono bahut busy hoo.. Sonakshi sab samajhti hoon ki tumhare baba ko tumhari jararoot hai.. But kabhi kabhi tum dono ko bhi ek dussre ke liye time nikalna chaiye..

Dev and Sona both didn't look up..

Ishwari - Main kuch nahi jaanti tum dono ko aaj dinner karne ke baar jana hoga. Waise bhi tum log kya bolte hai usko -

Mamaji- Honeymoon ..

Ishwari- Haa! Honey,,, Honeeeymooon par bhi nahi gaye..

Dev - Maa tujhe pata hai na .. Ye sab.. Devki ko aaj tak..

Ishwari- Devki ko hum log kuch time ke liye dekh sakte hai... Tum log Jaoo..

Dev- OK yes from me..Looked towards Sonakshi..

Sonakshi in blushing way- Hmmm and hospital jana hai late ho raha hai..

Dev - OK !! even am getting late.. Will drop u there in hospital

Both Dev and Sona sit in the car but no one is speaking to each other - both went into flash back - remembering their car talk, coffee date.

Whole day Dev and Sonakshi were busy in their respective work mentally but eagerly waiting for the evening. After a long time Dev will be going for date once again that too with Sonakshi which he never dreamed of few years back.

Dev came to JLS hospital to pick up Sona for their dinner date as discussed.

Inside Cabin
Dev- Hi Sonkashi.
Sonakshi- Hi Dev.. Sorry !! Maine bola ki office se jalte hai.. As u know ghar jayege then Devki bhi hogi..And usko convince karke baar jana is nearly impossible.

Dev- Its ok.. You are still looking good in this dress. But yes mera pata nahi.

Sonakshi - Hmm ( Blushing a little )
And off they went from hospital for their first dinner date after marriage.

Dev and Sonakshi were stucked in heavy traffic.

Sonakshi- Dev.. Hum log kab se yaha par hai..

Dev- Aree toh main kya kar sakti hoon..

Sonakshi- With this rate hum log bahut late ho jayege.. Devki waha par .. Nahi Nahi.. Kuch Socho.

Dev- Kya Socho main.. aab Kejiriwal ka mindblowing idea- Odd and even number work nahi kar raha hai then you go and complain to him.

Sonakshi- Dumb idea tha. Kuch nahi hua Iss odd and even number se..

Dev- Koi nahi next election mein Abhi baar Sonakshi ki Saarkar ka naara lagega..

Sonakshi- Dev.. Anyway Just park the car in the coming parking slot in that building.

Dev- Tum pagal ho gayi ho kya.. Aree itna emotional ho gayi Neeta bola toh.. Dimaag par chhot aa gayi. yaha se hotel bahut bahut durr hai.. Maine nahi park karni.

Sonakshi- JUST PARKED THE CAR RIGHT NOW.. RIGHT NOW MEANS NOW..

Dev scared to see Tigress avatar of Sonkashi, so without doing maach- maach he parked the car.

Sonakshi- Good aab chalo.. Yaha se main log metro mein jaayege..Chandni Chowk.

Dev - What ?? Chandi Chowk.. Are you mad.. Main nahi Jaana .. Hum logo ki booking hai.

Sonakshi- Dev.. Aap decide karo ? aap ko 7 star booking chaiye or do u want to spend time with me?

Dev - OK then ..But main metro mein nahi gaya abhi tak.

Both Dev and Sonakshi reached Shivaji Stadium Metro station waiting for the train..
As soon as the train arrives, huge crowd pushed both Dev and Sonakshi inside.Both of them are standing so close to each other. There was no gap in between them. Sonakshi was holding Dev tightly and scared to see so much crowd. Dev was holding her with both hands and trying as much as possible to keep her safe from unnecessary pushing.

Both reached the chandni chowk within 20-25 mins. Sonkashi was so excited to see chandni chowk after so many years . Even after coming to Delhi , she didn;t get time to visit this place.
Sonakshi- Lets go to the Karim Hotel .. Nahi nahi Babu Ram Devi Dayal Paranthe wale..Ki Kuremal Mohan Lal Kulfi Wale ke yaha . Omg look Natraj Dahi Bahlle wala...

Dev- OK OK Kahi bhi Chaalo waise bhi ye itna crowded hai ki kya bolo main..

Sonakshi- Dev!! If you are not happy then chalo then wapas chalte hai..

Dev- Nahi Nahi first go to Natraj Dahi Bahle wale ke yaha par.

In excitement Sonakshi hold Dev's hand unknowingly, Dev noticed that.He felt so good from the touch of sonkashi's hand. He immediately hold her hand more tightly.

Both reached the shop and order Dahi Bahle.

Sonaskhi- OK aaj no calories counting .. SO enjoy but kal se ye sab nahi chalega.

Dev- Tum Mujhe bata rahi hoo ya Khud ko..

Because of huge lines, and demand , waiter brought only one dahi bhalle saying - very soon you will get another one.

Dev- Aree ye kya hai.? Very soon ka kya matlab hai..
Sonakshi- Dev .. Leave him .. Aisa hota hai yaha par.. You eat and I will eat afterwards.
Dev- NO you eat ..I will wait.
Sonakshi- No we will eat together and in this way both have to wait for another one.

Dev and Sonakshi were eating Dahi Bhalla together.

Dev ( Self talk) - Now this is romantic.. Agar main 7 star hotel mein bhi hote then sonkashi and main aise nahi Kha rahe hote..

From there they went to another hotel - to munch another food. But together-together haatho mein haath Daale..

IN Ishwari Niwas..

Devki- Mumma kyon nahi aayi abhi tak..

Ishwari - Mummy ko kuch kaam hai Beta .. Tum batao kya khayegi meri gudiya rani..

Nikki- Maa aapko meri lens mile kya ? Kab se dhund rahi hoon ?

Ishwari- Rakh kar Bhool jati hai tu.. Dhud jara mil jayege.. Abhi main apni Gudiya ke saath busy hoon.

Devki- I want my mumma.. Mujhe Nani ke pass jana hai..

Ishwari- accha accha Nani ke pass jayege , Mama ke Pass jayege aur Mummy ke pass bhi jayege. Bass khaana Kha ke jayege..

Devki- Accha then I want pasta..

Ishwari- Pasta.. Beta mujhe toh ye pasta- rasta nahi aata.. Tum Chole Bhautre Khaogi.

Devki- Hehehe Pasta Rasta.. You are so cheeky dadi.. 😆

Ishwari- huh???

Nikki- Aree Maa Mujhe Na mil rahe hai.. Waise bhi mein itni chote se box mein rakhti thi- Kaha gaye lens from little box.

Devki- Woh.. WOh... Woh..

Ishwari- WOh kya beta.. Tumko Pata hai .. Batao Phir..

Meanwhile Mamaji also came from outside and sit on dinning table.

Devki- Woh maine -round and round the na

Nikki- No !!Devki No!! Devki .. Beta tumne kya kiya uske saath..

Mamaji- Nikki .. Chillao maat .. Choti bacchi hai.. Devki beta.. Tum batao apne kaarname woh bhi bina darre..

Devki- WOh main Kha gayi .

Ishwari- Mamaji- Nikki- KYA??? KHA GAYI KA KYA MATLAB HAI?

Ishwari- Beta Kha gayi matlab kha gayi.. Tumhare peeth mein hai..

Devki- Yes and smiled nervously ..

Mamaji- Bhai!! Koi Doctor ko Phone karo.. Dev and SOnkashi ko inform karo..

Nikki- Mere Lens Kha gayi.. Hey Bhagwan ..

Ishwari- Hey bhagwan .. Main kya muh dekhogi sonkashi ko.. Ye Lens kha gayi.. Beta aisa kyon kiya.. Nikki Doctor ko phone laga..

In chandi Chowk:

Meanwhile Dev and Sonakshi almost tried everything, were eating Shahi Tukda..

Dev- hmm Maine kabhi nahi Khaya ye .. It is good.

Sonaskhi-- Yummy hai na.. Maine bhi nahi Khaya tha..Thank you Dev .. Aaj mujhe phir se bacchpan ki yaad puri ho gayi..

Dev- Yes even I enjoyed a lot- Food bhi aur tum bhi.. first time tum ko maine itne dil se smile karte dekha.. I am happy to see you happy Sona..

Sonakshi put hand in Dev's hand and Dev tightly hold her hand and looking here and there to cross check if someone is looking at them or not. He quickly give a kiss to her hand and wink at her.
Sonkashi closed her eyes in embrassement.

Dev saw mamaji name in his mobile. He quickly pick up the phone and asked him-

Dev- Hello Mamaji .. Sab theek hai na.. Devki ne kuch dhamaal Kamaal toh nahi kiya na..

Mamaji- Beta woh Devki ki pediatrian ka number chaiye .. and tum log kab aa rahe ho.

Dev in serious tone..

Dev- Devki theek hai Mamaji.. Hearing this even Sonakshi became tensed and stood up.

Mamaji- Dev not to worry about.. Pls first number Do.. and bilkul tension maat karo but ghar aa jana jaldi if possible.

Dev- OK we are coming asap..

Both Sonakshi and Dev reached home without single minute delay.

In Ishwari Niwas.\

Doctor came and were doing checkup.

Both Sonakshi and Dev came running inside the house, Sonakshi were too shocked to see Doctor doing checkup for Devki.

Sonakshi- Kya hua? Devki sab theek hai na..

Doctor- Hahaha Sab theek hai.. Ma'am Devki is fit and fine.

Devki- Scared tone.. Yes I am . That means I am good girl.. Right dadi..

Ishwari asked Nikki to take devki to her room,,

Ishwari- Doctor Saahab sab theek hai na.. Aap sach bol rahe hai na.

Dev- Kya hua hai.. Koi baatayeg?

Ishwari- with slight hesitation- Woh devki Nikki ke Lens Kha gayi..

Sonakshi and Dev- Both - WHAT? LENS KHA GAYI..

Doctor- Relax .. Kuch nahi hua.. Morning tak sab kuch out bhi ho jayega..She is fine..But kabhi kuch problem ho then i will do detail investigation but mujhe aisa lagata nahi hai..

Ishwari- Sorry Dev and Sonakshi.. Tum logo ko aisa bolana pada.. Woh aisa kabhi kuch Dekha nahi Suna nahi so darr gaye the..

Sonakshi- Its ok Maa.. Waise bhi Devki is difficutlt child to handle ..

Both Sonakshi And Dev came inside the room and saw Devki was sleeping and smiling at the same time.

Dev quickly changed into night ware while sonkashi was collecting toys from their toys.

Dev told sonkashi through gesture to go and change.

As soon as Sonkashi went inside the bathroom, Devki with closed eyes searching for Sonakshi.

Dev Saw this and quickly sleep next to devki without making noise. Devki touched his chest and came and sleep over him like a monkey. Dev was super happy today .. His two princess were so close to him.
Sonakshi came out from the bathroom and saw Dev and Devki sleeping . She quickly went near them and plant a small kiss to Devki and hesitating give a small kiss on Dev forhead as well.

When Sonkashi turned around , Sleepy Dev smiled and hugged Devki more tightly..😃

Finally Sonkashi is coming close to him . Slowly and Steady she is coming back to her home- Heart of Dev Dixit.

Next Part -
Dev get a call from the school regarding Devki.

And Sonakshi and Dev went to their first dinner date (after so many years) all alone.But will Nikki . Ishwari and Mamaji will able to handle Devki without sonakshi ?

Next Part -

Devki ki Dhamal

Dev got a call from the school for Devki.??
And Dev and Sonkashi Again back to Principal office - Devki did something which will give shock to the principal madam.

P.S. This is not proof read herefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

P.s Sorry in advance if someone didn't get my pm for this updated OS link. Pls send me pm separately so that I will know who else who didn't get the pm .

P.s - Yes my niece eat her mumma lens..So some kid can eat anything😕🤔.

P.S. If possible please comment if you like and silent members please hit " like " button .Every comment acts like booster to like me..

Edited by mayu1982 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey amazing part... it was a awesome as always...I am super happy to see the update...you can never disappoint us with your update

Omg Devki is super super adorable...did she really swallow the lens or did she act so that she can get her mummy back...I couldn't stop laughing seeing her antics ...I love the line "dhammal kammal " line

Dev and Sona's date was so good...so real...there is some awkwardness between them which is expected ...

By the by does Devki know Dev is her father ?

Edited by yyyy - 9 years ago