Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 45

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Awesome update!!!!
very well written.. waiting for the next part.. please post soon!!!😊
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plzzz update fast ...big request..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi07

Just read the last 4-5 parts in one go... loved it πŸ‘πŸ‘

superb story and great writing... very nice separation track.. mature, sad yet amazing!!
liked seeing ishwari getting some sense in her head..somehow I feel even in the show after some years or months she is going to realize her mistake like this.. when her dev would be with her but wont really be her dev anymore!!

cant wait to see the marriage track

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Originally posted by: Himruta_fan

Amazing story.. pls pls update soon..



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Originally posted by: SupriyaC

Awesome update!!!!

very well written.. waiting for the next part.. please post soon!!!😊



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-------------------Next Part - 9-----------------------------------
First of all thodi personal baatein - Thank you guys for so much appreciation and encouragement. I know many of you wants me to update the OS fast- fast .. But I am overburden with all of stuffs- Two Kids, house duties, then IF , whatsapp that too without any helper in my life. I want Keechu bhaiya in my life..




Sonakshi was about to say something.. But Asha came forward

Asha- Haa kyon nahi.. Bilkul.. Humlogo ko bhi bas yahi chaiye.. Sona beta chal toh maare saath..Sab ka moh meetha karte hai..

Sonakshi went with Asha,but Dev understood something is not right.. Sonakshi is not ready for this marriage..


Sona and Asha is in kitchen ..

Sona- Maa ye sab kya hai ? Shaadi ? Maa am not ready for this marriage?

Asha- Sona .. Tu pagal ho gayi hai kya ? Accha mujhe bata ye sab bahut acchanak ho raha hai isliye pareshaan hai tu? But beta ye jo ho raha hai bilkul theek ho raha hai.. In fact ye marriage toh shayad bahut phele hi ho jana chaiye thi..

Sona- Maa aap samajh hi nahi rahi hai mera point?

Asha- Bol kya bolna hai bol. Come sit over dinning table and will talk ..

Sona- Kyunki Maa .Maa main badal gayi hoon. Aab main kiddish, emotional and tough yet innocent Sona nahi hoon .balkil Now am Only tough Sona . Ye Sona mujhe Bana pada apni Devki ke liye uske survival ke liye ladate ladate main itni rough and hard ho gayi pata hi nahi chala..

Maa maine bahut kuch dekha hai - Bahut kuch khoya bhi hai..Sona was start crying. Apne Sapno ko todte dekha hai main.. Aur aab mujhmein phirse himmat nahi hai Maa.. Agar Dev Mujhse aaj Mujhko maagege toh main khud ko kaha se Laoo...

Hum aaj wahi khade hai 5-6 saal phele the but with a distance .. - Aab main sirf GF , ya Biwi nahi ho sakti hoon .. Aab main sab se phele Maa hoon .. Kya Dev Iss baat ke liye Taayaar bhi hai ??


Dev came inside the kitchen and said

Dev- Main Tayaar hoon Sonakshi ( I loved this line from rain wala episode so am copying it- thoda copy toh I guess its ok..)


Immediately Asha left the kitchen . She understood that Sonakshi needs answer and assurance and Dev is best person to give her that.

Sonakshi- turned back to Dev - Dev Pls .. I .. Don't know what to say..

Dev- But I know what I want to say.. Dev forced SOna to turned around and faced him and hold her hands..

Dev- Sonakshi I know .. what you are going through.. Everything is happening so suddenly and I understand you need time now.. Which I am ready to give you even after marriage ...But I would Like to know one thing first from you ?

Sona look up and first time having eye contact with him.

Dev- Do you still love me ?

Sona with slight shyness- Yes I do..

Dev- Yes I love you too..more than before( he said with smile on his face)

Dev- Even after so called 5-6 years of gap,or distance we didn't stop loving each other ( pushing her hair behind the ears) but yes we both are having issues - like everyone has- some communication gap problem, wants to know more about you etc etc..We both need to work on this.

Yes I don't want to marry in hurry and definitely not without your consent.. I said yes only because I want your father to be present in our wedding. I want him to give us his blessings. I want him to go peacefully from this world although I am still hoping that he will survive.. But again if you want to take time am happy to do so..

Sona just broke down into tears - don't know whether this is again all her dream or reality of her life..

Dev hugged her and said - Sona.. Kya hua? Don't cry I will not force you for anything.. Take your time.. and i will wait for you for rest of my life.. Don't worry there is no pressure on you..

Sona still hugging dev , said - Dev .. I am scared now.. I don;t have capacity the bear the pain once more.. What if something goes wrong once again.. Main theek gayi hoon Dev.. Bahut theek gayi.. Mujhmein aur capacity nahi hai...

Dev hugged more tightly this time - Sona .. Kuch nahi hoga.. Iss baar sab theek hoga.. believe me please.. I will not leave you no matter what .. Don't worry about me accepting Devki.. I know devki is my daughter.. Stop crying now... I don't want you to cry .. not anymore..

Meanwhile Mamaji shouted - Aree Bhai.. Kya ho raha hai.. Dev beta kaha ho tum ?

Dev and Sona immediately moved away from each other .
Goes to living room where everyone was discussing their marriage.

Dev and sona came to the living room . Dev was about to say that SOna needs time.

Before that Sona said to everyone- Well we are ready for tommorrow marriage..

Dev was happy and tried to hold her hand , but before that dada came and hugged SOna tightly. Tears started to come from him as well.

Dada- Finally woh din aa gaya Sona.. Woh din aa gaya ..

Then there was chaos in the room and everyone was shouting and screaming in excited.

Suddenly Dev shouted - Sab log sshhh... Devki is sleeping..

Everyone laughed and agreed to him

Ishwari was talking to the priest and came to living room

Ishwari - WOh panditji se baat hui hai he is saying kal 11:15 am baje ka muhraat hai..

Asha , Dada, Dadi were happy and sad to know that Sona marriage is happening this way.. But atleast she is marry to the person she loves.

Dev,Ishwari and Mamaji went to Dixit family , after discussing the basic rituals with Asha.

Here Sona and Devki were sleeping peacefully in their room but Dev was not able to sleep at all..

Nikki, Ishwari And Mamaji were shouting, calling and running here and there for marriage preparations. Not allowing Dev to do work considering he is groom after all.


Morning time - early 5 am clock- Asha and Dadi woke Sona up early for some rituals that needs to be performed before marriage. Plus haldi , mehndi and all that they need to manage before 11:15 am .

Around 6'00 Tina came to the Bose family..Dada opened the door and welcomed her.

Tina to Sona- Hello Ms. Bose ? Soon to be Mrs. Dixit.. Congratualtions ..

Sona hugged Tina said- Thank you Tina..

Tina - Well Dev Sir ki family ne ye bengali saree beji hai.. I understand ...

Sona - yeah I know.. Maa told me that Dev ki family mein tradition hai ki girl boy side ke dress pehen kar marriage karti hai.. Anyway thank you Tina for this..

Tina - Welcome Ms.Bose ... There is one more packet .. This one is for Devki..

Meanwhile Devki wakes and came in the living room rubbing her eyes and calling Mumma, MuMma.. and sit on SOnakshi's lap..

TIna gave small packet to Devki.. Devki was surprised and happy to see gift for her.. She opened it and found pink lehgna and with all matching accessories..

Devki - Yippee ... Ye mere liye... but she look at Sonakshi for her approval..

After Sonakshi's approval, Devki jumped and hugged Tina and gave her kissess..

Devki- Thank you Aunty.. I loved this dress..

Tina - Ye main nahi diya hai.. Ye aapke Pizza Uncle ne diya hai... ( Yeah she knows that devki called Dev DIxit - Pizza uncle)

Devki- WOW .. Pizza Uncle.. Pizza Uncle is my favourite uncle hai..

WIth this Asha and Dadi again came and gave thousand instructions to Sona ..

But Sona told Tina to wait and attend the marriage, but Tina refused it because she needs to go the office as such Mr . Dixit won't be coming to the office, so its her duty to go office.

Sonakshi again hugged Tina and said- Thank you Tina for everything.

Tina with slight tears - No Ms. Bose.. Thank you.

Both of them knew what were talking and why they were saying thank you to each other.

Meanwhile haldi, then even mehndi was applied to Sonakshi.. But So much Chaos and confusion Sonakshi didn't get time to talk to Devki regarding her marraige.

But devki was happy in her pinky Land and her new dress..

Marriage Hall:-


Sonakshi family reaches the marriage hall before Dixit family to welcome them.

Sonakshi was looking very beautiful in bengali saree and with her bengali look and so is everyone.

Asha does the tilak of Dev and everyone.. Devki who was busy in drinking coca -cola, saw Dev coming into the hall..

Devki quickly ran towards him and said- Pizza Uncle..Pizza Uncle..

Dev immediately picked her up and gave kisses to her..

Devki- See am wearing new dress which you gave me.. I am looking very pretty.. You are looking Handsome.Boys can't look pretty you see.

Dev and everyone laughed listening to that .. Dev introduced Devki to Ishwari Maa as Dadi , Mamaji as Mama Dadu, And NIkki as Bahu...

Meanwhile Sonakshi came to the mandap for varmala .. Both Dev and SOnakshi exchanged the varmala and everyone threw flowers petals on them..

Devki -I loved this games. actually she was throwing flowers to everyone ..But why we are throwing flowers petals only to Mumma and Pizza Uncle? Not fair.. She threw some on herself as well. She was confused whtat Mumma and Pizza uncle doing ?? Exhanging garlands?

Ishwari , Asha who was listening all this, understood what Devki is saying.. So immediately Ishwari called Nikki and asked her to take care of her till the wedding is over.. Nikki was keeping Devki busy with her nail paint and showing different lipstick.Meanwhile Neha and Ranveer came and happy to meet Devki ..

Devki was in full in enjoying mood, eating her favourite dishes like Chat, Yummy Icecream..


Other side in mandap Dev and Sona were busy in doing their marriage rituals.

Suddenly Devki came and jumped on Sonakshi's lap- Mumma I don't know why there is no strawberry icecream over here.. I want pink wala strawberry icecream.

Panditji was not happy with Devki.. Obviously she was pulling Sonakshi's hand to get give attention on her only..

Dev through his eyes told panditji to carry on the stuff.

Dev to Devki- Aapko nahi diya kisne ?? Immediately he called manager of food caterer to arrange for Strawberry icecream now.

Devki not jumped from Sonakshi to Dev to thank him of course.

Although she didn't understand what is hapenning but she was happy that her wishes were fulfilled. Again Dada came and took Devki along with him.

Marriage was finally over and so was the lunch..

Ishwari, Neha, Ranveer and Mamaji went to Dixit Niwas quickly after lunch since Ishwari needs to do preparation for Garaha Pravash as well.

Here preparation was going now for Bidaai.. First time Dev remembered Neha, Riya bidaai how he was emotional with Neha bidaai time but during Riya bidaai he was so emotionaless .. Today he felt so miserable thinking about bidaai for his sisters.

Here Asha, Bujoy, Dadi and Dadu were crying - This time not only Sonakshi is going but also Devki ..So it is double Bidaai for them.. Sonakshi was crying while hugging dadi and Asha.

Devki after playing enough with Nikki , looked very confused -why everyone is crying

Devki to Sonakshi- Mumma .. Mumma .. Why everyone is crying ? What's wrong? I have not done anything Mumma..

Sonakshi while crying starts smiling listening her innocent talks and hugged her..

Devki also starts crying - Don't cry Mumma.. Pls Mumma.. I won't do anything.. I will be good girl. I won't eat strawberry icecream and today I eat little bit more noodles .. But don't cry.. Ooo


With this everyone started cryine even more - Asha , dadi - came and hugged Sonakshi and devki more tightly.. How much they will be going to miss this innocent talks? Who will entertain us with her naughtiness and her so called pranks. Who will create terror in house? Sonakshi and Devki will be missed deeply everyday and every minute.

But they were happy as well because their daughter is going with a person whom she loved the most. Devki is also finally going home and she deserves the love of her father as well..

Dev, Nikki and Bunty came and informed them that Ishwari called them home ..

Sonakshi picked up Devki along with her and took the blessings of everyone..Devki who was crying more than Sonakshi .. Could not understand why her Mumma and everyone was crying. But she was upset because everyone was upset.

Dev came forward and carry Devki along with him. Devki was still crying , hugged Dev tightly..

Devki to Dev- Mumma crying.. Nani crying, Nanu crying even Mamu crying.. Not happy.. But I don't remember what I have done? I won't do anything next time..

Dev thinking how his little one is thinking everyone is crying because of her and smiled - No baby.. No one is crying because of you ..Yes they are crying for you.. Not because of you..

Devki gave - HUH ? type expression to him..

Suddenly Bujoy moved his wheel chair and came towards Dev and holded his hands - Saying thank you to Dev..

Dev along with Devki immediately keep his hands over his hands- No!! Never .. In fact Thank you for trusting me baba( first time he said Baba to him- ) Like Devki , even Dev got his Baba ( dad) finally after so many years

Sonakshi came and hugged her baba- Cried - Baba Main ja rahi hoon..

Bujoy- Sona beta.. Mera Sona Beta .. Aaj woh Din aa gaya beta.. Meri beti finally ja rahi hai.. Aur main Bhagwan ko thank you bolo ki Gussa karo ki Kyu ye customs baneye.. Kyu Beti hamesha ke liye apne papa ke saath rahe nahi sakti.. main khushi bhi hoon tere liye .Aab toh aaraam se jaooga main yaha se.. Meri beti ko apna ghar mil gaya.. Meri beti aab akeli nahi hai.. And starts crying uncontrollably..

Sonakshi - Aap bhool rahe hai Baba.. Main kahi bhi jao .. Kuch bhi Baan jaoo. But hamesha aapki beti rahogi..Aapki SONA. Aur ye baat koi nahi change kar sakta .. Koi nahi..

Asha and Dadi came put their hands over Bujoy. For any father - it is most difficutl time to give his daughter to anyone. To watch his daughter going away from him..

Asha- Ye betiyaan bahut Pyaari hoti hai.. Baba ki dil ki dhadkan hoti hai..

Even Dev is getting emotional watching all this. He understand each and every feelings so well. Hold his devki very tightly.. He was imagining one day his Devki will also leave him and go with her princes charming.

Finally Devki, Dev, Sonakshi, Nikki, And Bunty finally went to Dixit house after very emotional goodbye and blessings from near and dear ones.

Dixit Niwas :

Devki was still in confused state for so many things- where, what and why they are going now?
Dev, Sonakshi and Devki are standing infront of the door- and Ishwari were doing aarti for all three of them.
Ishwari instructed Sonakshi to came inside by pushing kalash and put her legs in plate( red kukkum water) and walks over white sheet.

Devki was watching all these things with curiosity and even she wants to do the same thing.
Nikki pick up Devki and told her to come and see her bedroom and other cool stuffs.

Sonakshi was following every instructions Of Ishwari Maa and doing it very carefully.

Neha, Ranveer , Sonakshi, Dev were busy in talking and entertaining some of close relatives .

At night after everyone had dinner , Neha and Ranveer went to their home saying they will come next time very soon.. Mamaji and Ishwari Maa was too tired to do anything. Keechu bhaiya and Bhoola Bhaiya were running here and there to clean up everything.

Ishwari Maa came and told nikki that keep Devki along with her today. Nikki was big enough to understood what she meant. But devki was not at all interested in any games at all.

Here Mamaji took Dev and Sonakshi to their room

Mamaji- aree bhai.. Tum dono bhi bahut theek gaye hoge Na.. Go and take rest..

Sonakshi and Dev came inside the room and Dev closed the door. Sonakshi was watching the room closely. There is no change in the room .. Stll the same.. No change at all.. As if nothing changed over her.

Sonakshi noticed the time and was tensed .. Dev who noticed the tension lines of Sonakshi's faces. Came slowly and hugged her from backside ..

Dev- Aab kya hua.. Kyu tension mein hoon.. Mujhse darr lag raha hai? Abhi bhi..

Sonakshi smiled listening this and feeling shy- Nahi!! aap na.. Means Yes laag raha hai.. I mean Nahi laag raha hai.. Nahi Nahi.. woh toh main..

Dev still in hugging position - Ms. Bose itna confusion? Oops Sorry aab aap Ms. Bose nahi Mrs. Dixit. Meri hai officially meri hai with this he gave a little kiss to her shoulder.Sonakshi .His touch is sending shivers down her spine

But Sonakshi was still in tension .Dev felt the tension in sonakshi gestures and immediately turned her towards him and hugged her..

Dev- Sonakshi.. Kuch hua hai.. Kya hua ?? Maine kuch kiya.. SOrry if you are not prepared.. Don't worry..

Sonakshi- No I am feeling sorry and confused.. Woh actually..

Dev - yes bol na ? Kya chaiye ... Bol..Without any tension just speak.

Sonakshi- Dev .. Bahut time ho gaya hai .. Aur pata nahi Devki Nikki ke saath Soyi bhi hogi ki nahi .. Woh aaj tak mere bina nahi soyi .. Isliye main confused hoon ki kya karo- Aap ke saath ..?? Dev kI..???

Dev hugged her tightly- Go .. Bring her now.. Sonakshi..Not even for you but for me as well. Devki comes first.. . Don't worry. We will be having thousands opportunities to spend time together aur agar nahi bhi hui then we will create that opportunity but not at the cost of Devki's time.

Dev moved back and said - Go Run ... Now..

Sonakshi quickly ran towards towards Nikki s Room where Devki is crying and in full volume. Nikki is struggling with her..

Nikki- Sona Di.. I mean Sona Bhabhi.. Ye Devki mujhse chup nahi ro raha hai.. But you don't worry I willl do something..

Sonakshi- Nahi Nikki Thanks for the help and Immediately came and pick Devki up..

Sonakshi and Devki came to the Dev's room where Dev is busy in arranging the bed by spreading pink bed sheet on their bed and making the atmosphere perfect for -------------------- DEVKI...

Sonakshi put Devki on the bed.. And now devki is full in angry mode ..

Sonakshi- Devki .. Come on now .. Stop Crying now.. Change your clothes.. See Mumma is here with you..

Devki- Nahi .. Nahi I will cry .. I will cry more... AAA ... AAA

Dev was confused with crying tone.. It was more like shouting instead of crying..

Sonakshi- Enough of your drama.. It's night time. I am already very tired Devki.. I begged of you .. Pls Change your clothes and lets sleep..

Even Devki is feeling more sleepy than anyone else, but she is angry .. When she is angry- everything else doesn't matter.

Devki- Why Should I change my clothes? Take me home and will sleep with Mamu, or with Nani and not with you Mumma .. I am not your friend anymore.. Mumma WRONG.. Wrong Mumma.

Now sonakshi realised that she needs to do one major task in life.. Devki needs to understand why she is here and who is DEV actually? Before she says anything.. Dev gestures her not to speak to her now..

Sonakshi forcefully changed her clothes and devki was giving her tough competition.. She was throwing her legs, hands and entire body.

Dev was actually laughing seeing the entire scene- becauseit was like WWF Live where Sonakshi and Devki were giving tough competition to each other.

After alot of struggle and tough time - Sonakshi put her nightie clothes and Devki was crying more than ever..
Dev came towards her to console her but devki was not in mood .

Finally Sonakshi came and hugged her - Sorry bolo Baby ko..

Devki - Nahi..

Sonakshi - Huggiesss..

Devki- Nahi...

Sonakshi- Pls ... Mumma saying Sorry and huggies..Kissess
Put her on her lap and starts patting in faster mode..

Devki- Alots of kisses ..still tears are coming and she was rubbing her eyes

Dev felt not to interfere in their personal zone as such he don't know how to pacify Devki.. So better Sonakshi handles it in her own way..Off they sleep.

In the middle of the night

Dev felt small kick over his face, shocked Dev wake up and see devki was keeping her head over sonakshi's neck and her leg is kicking him...And she was giggling - heheeheh

Now Dev understood what is the meaning of Being Parent?Turned over but can still feel the small kicks of Devki..

Next Part -
Dev get a call from the school regarding Devki.

And Sonakshi and Dev went to their first dinner date (after so many years) all alone.But will Nikki . Ishwari and Mamaji will able to handle Devki without sonakshi ?


P.S. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.


P.s Sorry in advance if someone didn't get my pm for this updated os link. Pls send me pm separately so that I will know who else who didn't get the pm .

P.s - My kids starts crying when I starts crying - even without knowing the reason.They are my crying partners.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely 😊
Eagerly waiting for the next part πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
A superb update πŸ‘
continue soon
u make me wait a lot πŸ₯±
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing story. Read all chapter's in one go. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowowowo so nice...really like...πŸ‘πŸΌ...but plz make devakshi to say papa now.. Pizza uncle bhut hogyaπŸ˜†..and make dev and sona spent some hot hot moments😳

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