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------------------------- Next Part - 8 -----------------------------------
Flashback scene - Ishwari was shocked to see his reactions.

That night not only Dev, Sona, but also Ishwari lost her son.
All three of them standing near window
Where Sona , Ishwari were crying but Dev was showing no emotions.
Although Dev leave Sona hand, but he was not with Ishwari as well.

Today two woman whom he loved immensely, were in tears because of him.

Now


Present time - After 15 days of Devki and Dev dinner date..

Ishwari Niwas -

Ishwari - Bhaiya !! Aaye !! Pata hai Aaj Nikki wapas aa rahi hai.

Mamaji - Chalo Accha hai.. Uski padhi puri ho gayi kya?

Ishwari - Haa!! woh bol rahi thi kuch job ko lekar par maine bol diya usko phele ghar aao baad mein job-vob..

Mamaji - Chalo !! Accha hai Ishwari... Bacchi ghar wapas aa rahi hai..

In JLS Hospital.


Now board of directors are doing meeting with all doctors , informing them about their plans of extension .. Also wants to take some feedback and advice from them . Dev and Sona is also present there , but Dev as board member and Sona as Nutritionist .

In the middle of meeting, Dev got a message from Tina , she needs to give some urgent papers to marketing people, but before that she needs to discuss something with him.

Dev was already outside talking to Tina .

Suddenly Sona's mobile starts ringing, Sona forgets to put her mobile on silent mode. Everyone starts looking at her, giving her- "what the hell "look.

Sona quietly left the left the place and attend the phone.

Sona- Hello !! Who's this?

Principal - Ms.Bose I am from principal of Jacaranda School. May I speaking to Devki Mom?

Sona bit tense-Yes speaking. I am Devki' mom.. Is Devki alright? Hope everything is fine

Dev is passing by Sona , stopped after listening the last sentence ..

Principal- Ohh ! Yes !! nothing to worry as such. Situation is under control. Devki is fine.. Is it possible for you to come after school hours.

Sona- Ohh ok .I will come.. Don't worry.Sona is tensed after that.

Dev- Sonakshi !! Is everything alright.. I mean to say is Devki fine?

Sonakshi ignored him and went inside.

Dev was tensed and curious to know what must have happened ? He was restless and couldn't concentrate on meeting anymore.

As soon as meeting and discussion was over, all doctor came outside ..Sonakshi quickly grab her things , starts running and went to taxi rank. Took taxi and off she went.


Dev quickly came outside but he saw her going into taxi.

Inside School- Principal Cabin

Sona- Hello Ma'am .. what happened? Hope everything is fine with devki?

Prinicpal - Calm down Ms. Bose.. Calma down..

Principal - Actually ye humare school bus driver hai.. Ramesh.. Ramesh Come here..Ussne Aaj Devki ko ... Actually devki was not listening so he .. after hesitation she said - slapped her..


Sona - HUH ?????????? What ?

Principal - I am sorry Ms. Bose.. Well we immediately called doctor and doctor is saying everything is alright.. Bass thodi se swelling hai.. And we will take action as per your instructions. I am sorry Ms. Bose.


Sona- Where is devki?

Meanwhile Devki and Ramesh both entered the principal office. Both of them are not looking into Sonakshi's eyes.

Ramesh - Bose Madam.. Sorry Woh Devki Sun nahi rahi thi.. Woh baar baar kidaki se jhaak rahi thi.. Bahut bola usko madam .. Maat karo.. Par Jab woh bahut jayada jhuk gayi tab darr se main usko rokne ke liye maara aur galati se jayada laag gaya.. Sorry Bose Madam aage se nahi hoga..

Devki's cheek were swollen and was staring Ramesh very badly.

Sonakshi quickly asked her - How are you baby? Is it still paining ?

Devki - Mumma Monster Ramesh ne kiya ..

Sonakshi- Firstly don't use the monster word. Secondly woh jo bol rahe hai tumne aisa kiya baby..

Devki -struggling to speak - quickly hugged her - Yes Mumma..

After a pause Devki - Happy Mother's day Mumma..

Prinicipal - But today is not mother's day Devki..

Sonakshi rolled her eyes - Well it's her way to flatter me..

Ramesh - Sorry Bose madam .. pls main akela earning member hoon..Aap ..

Sonakshi quickly cut him off- See aap dono ki galati hai..Devki tumhe driver uncle ki baat suni chaiye thi.. Agar gir jati toh??

Aur aap Rameshji bachho ko maarna ka right nahi hai aapke pass. First and last warning hai.. Uske baad no warning. Direct jail mein jayege aap..

Principal- Ms. Bose. I have already informed management people regarding this incident. whatever they will decide , we will take action surely against him.

Sonakshi- NO Ma'am .. Hopefully he will not anything like this in future.. First and last time warning to him..But am bit upset ki aapne mujhe phele kyon nahi bulaya..Anyway Rameshji ... Dare you touch my baby next time..

With this angry Sonakshi took Devki and came to the hospital



Here dev is restless in office thinking about sonakshi and mostly about devki..

Dev after meeting with Marketing people told tina that he is going to JLS hospital for something important. Tina somewhere knows the important work. It is already evening and dev knows Sona must have seen all her patients by now( if everything is alright ) . So he quickly came to JLS hospital.

Inside Sona' s Cabin


Dev entered into Sona's cabin with just after single knock..

Dev- May I come in ?

And saw sonakshi crying ..

Dev was shocked and worried - Sona what happened ?

Sona immediately wiped her tears

Sona- Dev !! What are you doing here??

Dev - Sona .. Pls don't. I mean to say - kya hua? mujhe batao.. Is Devki alright? Where is she?

Sona- Devki is alright Dev.. Pls go from here .. Pls..

Sona knew tears were about to come down and she don;t want Dev to see her like this - in broken state..

Dev- well I am not going anywhere until and unless you tell me what has happened?

Sona- Well then .. You sit , dance do whatever you want to do? am going ..

Dev hold her hand stopping her from going outside .. Sonakshi was struggling to take her hands from his grip.

Sona- Dev pls leave my hand .. Pls ( tears are flowing from her eyes)

Dev can't see her like this.. Not his Sona .. He quickly came and hugged her..

Dev while touching his nose to her nose - Sona .. Kya hai re ? Kisi ne kuch bola ? Ghar mein sab kuch theek hai na..

With this Sona lost her control and started crying uncontrollable in his arms..

Dev holding and hugging her tight..

Sona- Baba !! Dev !! BABA .. Ja rahe hai .. Dev..

Dev- Baba ko kya hua hai Sona.. Bol na kya hua ?

Sona- He in his last stage of his cancer.. Today Dr.Pradhan told nothing can be done and stopped all his medicines except his painkillers..

Dev- Shussshhh !! Sona.. Calm down.. there must be some way..

Sona- Kuch bhi nahi ho sakta hai Dev.. Kuch bhi Nahi.. Ye baat mujhe aap Maa ko Bhi batani hai..

Dev was still hugging her.. and this time more tightly than before.

And Bang Devki came inside after making big noise. Dev and sona quickly move aside and sona was wiped her tears quickly.

Devki jumps in excitement and hugged Dev - Pizza Uncle.. Pizaa Uncle ..

Dev-immediately picked her up- Hi angel.. How are u ? Why your cheeks are swollen ? Kya hua tumhe? ( with concern)

Devki - Pizza Uncle.. Monster Driver Unlce ne Maara ..with this she took her lower lip outside..

Dev- What ?kisne maara aapko? How dare he ? Sonakshi is this true?

Sonakshi - Well uski bhi mistake thi.. Both of them are at fault...

Devki started crying , rather started crying in dramatic way..

Devki- Dukh raha hai mumma .. Bahut dukh raha hai...

Sonakshi- OK Devki - first take your medicines .. Uske baad humlog ghar jayege..

Devki still in dramatic crying mode- No .. I won't take it alone.. You take it first..

Sonakshi knew this problem well before so she already made glucose water for herself. She took the syringe and dripped glucose water ..And then she after hesitation gave it to Dev..

Dev who has no idea what to do with syringe. Looked Sonakshi with concern..

Sonakshi - Dev give it to me..

Dev- OK then take it.. but suddenly Sonakshi started shouted -Nahi Main!! nahi!! Main Nahi!!Le sakti hoon.. Started rolling her head from right to left continuously.

Dev was so confused with entire drama

Sonakshi with her eyes told him to give her with slight force...

Sonakshi- See Devki... Mumma Ne medicine Le Li..Now you take it..

Devki - Now !!Pizza uncle will take the medicines.

Sonakshi- No !! Devki .. Then you will demand to give it to the entire hospital staff and patients. Chup Chap Lo Ye

As such Sonakshi is not in mood to entertain this drama .

After finishing their medicine drama,

Dev- .. Good girl Devki.. I will drop you my angel.

Sona- NO .. Don't worry we will go..

Devki - But I will go with Pizza uncle.

Dev- Please Sona.. I mean Sonakshi.. Mujhe koi problem nahi hai.. I will drop u guys..

Devki immdiately raise her hands up- Mujhe abhi bhi pain ho raha hai.. AAA

This time Dev knew what she meant .Dev quickly pick up Devki and quickly grab her bags as well knowing that today Sonakshi is not in good mental state.

In car.

Devki was still crying. So dev gave Devki to Sonakshi. Both of them were siting at the front seat of the car.
Devki -Mumma.. Pain ho raha hai.. Chee Chee medicine se kuch nahi hua..

Sonakshi- You will be fine.. Devki.. Thode daar se aaraam milega ..

Dev with concern- But why that driver hit her? Hope they took action against him ?

Sonakshi told him entire incident in minimum words..

Devki still crying and Sonakshi was finding it hard to handle the situation - one side devki other side - her baba.. She herself wants to cry..

Sonakshi- Don't cry everything will be alright.

Devki with bit dramatic crying- OK .. So aaj main study nahi karo then koi problem nahi hai na..
Sonakshi - Hmm Ok

Devki - And chota Bheem Dekho.. Uske baad Doreman .. Uske baad..

Sonakshi - OKKK Devki.. But only for today..

Dev was slightly smiling hearing both mom- daughter conversation. His daughter is taking advantage of the situation. She is like him only.

With this they reached the home , Sonakshi quickly came out from the car. With alot of struggle she carry devki , her two heavy bags and went inside.. Again Dev wants to help and stopped him but he don't want to trouble Sonakshi more.

Ishwari Niwas

Nikki came home today and Ishwari were very happy and fulfilling her demands ..

After dropping Sonaskhi home and dev came to his house. Nikki was super happy to his brother. But today again Dev was not in mood to do chit chat with Nikki.

So after few mins of general enquiring session he went inside his room and looking outside the window..

Ishwari came to his room ..

Ishwari - Dev!! Yaha par kya kar raha hai.. Dekh kitne din ke baad Nikki aayi hai.. Chal Neeche..

Dev- Yes Maa. Woh baas .. Aata hoon office ka kuch kaam hai woh kar ke aata hoon..

Ishwari was well aware that Dev was lying ..

Meanwhile Mamaji came inside the Dev's room as well..

Mamaji - Haa Bhai.. Kya chal raha hai Yaha par.. Dono Maa- Bete ke beeche kya khichdi paak rahi hai humme bhi batao koi..

Ishwari - Aisa kuch nahi hai Bhaiya .. Baas hum log baat kar rahe the ki aaj kitna aaccha lag raha hai Nikki wapaas aa gayi..

Mamaji intentionally said - Haa Dev .. Ghar ke log jab wapas aa jate hai toh accha lagata hai.. Par aabhi bhi kuch logo hai jo ghar se dur hai. unko wapas aa jaana chaiye.. Unka ghar hai.. Sab Unka hai.. Phir bhi woh kahi aur hai..

After saying this Mamaji left the place , he knew that time has come for dev and Ishwari to talk face to face alone.

Dev and Ishwari both understood what he was saying.. It was related to Devki and Sonakshi.. First time after so many years someone came forward and started this conversation..

Ishwari with tears- Pata hai Dev.. Mujhe ko Lagata tha ki Jab bhi koi Ladki teri zindagi mein aayegi tab tu mujhe bhool jayega..

Dev- Maa Pls..

Ishwari- Aaj mujhe Bolne de. Dev.. Aaj mujhe maat rukh..

Ishwari- Dev mujhe lagata tha ki Mera beta sirf mujhe hi pyaar kare.. Main tujhe kissi aur ke ssaath baatene ko tayaar nahi thi..

Ishwari- Dev !! Mujhe Pata tha tere and Sonakshi ke baare mein..Main jaanti thi ki tu usse pyaar karta tha matlab karta hai..

Ishwari- Dev..Main galat thi Dev. Sonakshi nahi balki maine bhi mera Dev Kho diya uske saath ..Hum dono bhi alaag ho gaye... Sonakshi ko tu sab se jayada pyaar karta hai .. Sab se jayada Pyaar..

Dev- Aisa kuch nahi hai Maa. Seriously Abhi bhi aapko ye lagta hai..

Ishwari- Dev.. Ho sakta hai tu ye baat na maane.. But yahi sach hai- . Mera dev mere pass hokar bhi mera nahi tha..

Dev- Maa .. After a pause.. Maa.. Main aap dono se pyaar karta hoon( it took more than 6 years for dev to say this line to his mother) and he took a deep long breadth after saying this.. At last he said those words to his mother.. At last..

Dev with tears- Maa.. Main agar kisi ladki se pyar karta hoon iska matlab ye nahi ki main tumse pyaar karna chood duga.. Aisa bhala kahi hota.. Exchange offer hai ek aaya aur ek gaya.. Tu hamesha mere liye Meri Maa hi rahogi .. Aur woh jagah koi nahi Le sakta hai.. Sona bhi nahi

Ishwari - Sona.. With scarastic smile ..

Dev- Likewise Sona ki jagah bhi koi nahi Le sakta hai.. Koi bhi nahi.. Ye mere baas mein nahi hai Maa.. pyaar insaan ke bas mein nahi hota hai.. Koi on/off switch nahi hota hai.. Agar hota Maa toh main definitely uss "off" kar deta..

Dev was not in control now.. he just want to say everything.. means everything to Ishwari..

Dev- Maa.. Ek aur baat hai jo mujhe aapko batani hai..

Ishwari- Devki tumhari Beti hai na Dev..

Dev while keeping his head down- Yes Maa.. Woh meri beti hai..

Dev - Maa !! Sonakshi ke liye ... Main kuch nahi kar paa raha hoon. WOh akele sab kar rahi hai.. Meri beti mujhe papa nahi Pizza uncle bolti hai Maa. Mera bhi maan karta hai usko bahut saara pyaar karna ka.. Jaise papa karte the humlogo ko( hearing this even Ishwari were teary eyed) and quickly hugged him and Dev after a 6 years put his head on Ishwari lap and crying uncontrollably. \

Dev- Maa.. Main fail ho gaya ... Main na accha Beta ban saka.. Aur nahi main sonakshi se kiye hue koi wada niba saka aur to aur main toh papa ho kar bhi papa nahi ban saka .. Isliye jayada aur kya fail ho sakta hoon main ..

Ishwari- Nahi Dev.. Fail Tu nahi Main hoon .. Mera beta and Sonakshi ne bahut kuch saaha hai sirf mere liye... Aab baas bahut hua .. Chal Dev lekar aate hai.. Devki and Sonakshi ko.. Ye uska ghar hai.. Sab uska .. Sab uska hai..

Dev- Kise jaoo Maa. Kisse Jaoo Uske Papa ke samane .. bahut bimar hai.. Main toh milne bhi nahi ja sakta hoon.. Kya bolo main unko jakar..


Ishwari wiping her and dev's tears - Chal aab mere saath chal uske ghar.. Abhi chalte hai..

Dev- Par Maa raaat ke 9pm baje hai..

Ishwari - Ye sab maat dekh Dev.. Tune bol Na uske papa bimar hai.. Tu phir chal Abhi chal..


Bose Family House :


Ishwari , Dev and even Mamaji were sitting in living room of Bose family. Asha and Dadi were surprised to see them at this hour. And sonakshi was busy with devki. She was in pain so she was taking more time to sleep.

Devki was crying loudly.. Ishwari were listening all these things and were about to ask but dev through his gesture told her not to do so..

Asha- Woh actually devki ko thoda laag gaya hai.. So jayada time Le rahi hai.'

Mamaji understood that situation and so he took the initiatives ..

Mamaji - Actually humog Sonakshi se nahi aap Logo se miline aaye hai .. Specially Mr. Bose se..

Asha.- Ohh .. Aaye woh idhar hai.. Aap log mil sakte hai..

Mamaji- Accha phele unse mil lete hai. Chal Dev aaja..

Dev ,Mamaji and Ishwari were about to enter the room, but Dev refused to go inside and quickly came back..

Dev- Kya face karo main unko ?? .. Kaise ??? Aaj koi meri beti ke saath aisa karega then kya sirf ek sorry se sab kuch maaf ho jayega.. ..Dev was too disturbed and shaking his head..

Dadi came and sit beside him and put her hand over his head..

Dadi- Bujoy ko kahi na kahi tumhara hi intezzar hai. Usko sirf Sonakshi ki hi tension hai..

Dev- Dadi.. Maine sach mein jaan mooch kar kuch nahi kiya.. Sach mein..

Meanwhile even Dada came back from office and shocked to see Dixit family in the house.

Dadi- Dev.. Sona ne kabhi tumhara naam nahi liya jab hum sab ne usse puch ki kaun hai woh. But hum ko phir bhi pata tha ki woh tum hi woh.. Uss time jab woh tumhare yaha par thi toh kuch alaag hi thi.. Uska hassna , rona sab kuch maano tumse judd gaya tha..

Dadi- Galati sirf tum se nahi.. Hum sab se hui hai.. Humlogo ne abhi toh Sonakshi ka saath nahi diya.. Uss bacchi ne bahut kuch saha hai Dev.. Bahut kuch... aaj bhi woh yaha par humare liye aa gayi jab hummne uski jararoot hai. Bina kuch sawal kiye bina hum par naraaz hue. Maafi toh sirf Sona beti se maangi chaiye..

Dadi- Chalo Dev Bujoy saalo se tumhara wait kar raha hai.. Uske pass aur time nahi hai. Usko iss baat ki khushi hogi ki tum aa gaye ho ..

Dadi hold his hand and took him inside the Bujoy room where he was sleeping or pretending to sleep.

Dadi- Bujoy.. Dekhi kaun aaya hai.. Dev babu..

Bujoy opened his eyes - Dev Babu .. Come !! Come !!

Dev was unable to meet his eye with him - aap kaise hai.. Meri Maa and mamaji bhi aaye hai..

Ishwari and Mamaji both gestures - Namaste to him.

Dev and Bujoy didn't say a word after that .. Both of them stare each other for a long time..

Bujoy starts crying and Dev quickly came and wipe his tears with his handkerchief,.

Dev- Nahi Baba ..Aap maat roye.. Sab mari galati hai.. Main aap se dil se maafi maangta hoon ..

Bujoy- Dev babu !! Bahut time laga diya aapne aane mein.. Mera toh jaane ka time aa gaya hai..

Dev- Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai.. Aap theek ho jayege..

Bujoy- Nahi dev Babu. Mujhe meri nahi.. Sona ki chinta hai.. Devki ki chinta.. Meri Sona himmat wali hai.. Bahut himmat wali . aur ussne kar bhi dekhaya sab ko.. But aab bolti nahi and main jaanta hoon thak gayi hai .. Laadte Laadte sab se.. Dev babu meri sona .. Meri sona..
Suddenly
Ishwari - Aapki Sona aab aapne ghar jayegi.. Hum usko lene aaye hai..

Dev- bass aapki sab ki aur sona ki permission chaiye ..


Meanwhile Sonakshi is successful in her mission and devki was sleeping after long hours of crying. Dada told her to go and he will sit in devki room .

Sonakshi came to Bujoy room and was surprised to see smile on Bujoy face.. After ages her Baba was smiling with full heart .. Ishwari quickly came and hold Sonakshi hand and put her hand on Dev;s hand ..

Ishwari- Main aapko vajan deti hoon .. Agar sona and dev agree ho jaye then main toh kal ke kal marriage karogi .waise bhi bahut time nikal gaya hai..

Sonakshi was too shocked to hear this. Already it was rollercoaster ride for her- from devki's swollen cheeks, to Bujoy reports, her meltdown in Dev's arms, and now this sudden marriage. She was not ready for all this..

Sonakshi was about to say something.. But Asha came forward

Asha- Haa kyon nahi.. Bilkul.. Humko bhi bas yahi chaiye.. Sona beta chal toh maare saath..Sab ka moh meetha karte hai..

Sonakshi went with Asha,but Dev understood everything .Sonakshi is not ready for this marriage..


next part 9 - Sona and Dev marriage..

Sona and devki came to Dev house.

Their first night after marriage but with devki . Little cutie is still not aware of the fact- Dev is her dad.

P.S. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

P.S. That slap episode was actually happened with my sister. She was so naughty and never used to listen .. Driver uncle gave one tight slap to her and she got mumps.😆. My mom took left, right, centre and even corner class of that driver.

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