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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Awesome update :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
Cute and beautiful update
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Originally posted by: vssdp

Cute and beautiful update

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Mam I wanna see devakshi's second baby..devki excitement...dev ki Care n love for songs...plz plz mam
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----------------------------PART17------------------------------------

Some personal baatein yet again : Sorry for not able to update it i think i have said this N number of times..that am busy in domestic chores🤔 and two annoying kids.

Secondly am only writing this story more because of you guys wants more.Otherwise in my point of view the story should end now. But anyway I give up infront of public demand( using big words hehe)

Don't blame me if you feel the quantity is down now- ( behaving like typical writer of the serial)

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Ishwari Niwas


After 15 days


Sonakshi speaking over the phone - Alright Mam. I will come within one hour .


Dev- What happened ? Why are looking so stressed out? WHo was on the line ?


Sonakshi - Principal Mam from Devki school. She wants me to come and meet her again .


Dev with his eyes wide= Now what ? WHat she has done now ?


Sonakshi= I don't know. But very soon I will know things in details.


Dev pulling her towards him- Sona.. It's ok yaar. She is just a kid. Thodi different hai. But that is her speciality , her uniqueness that she is different from rest of the world. Don't stress out so much.Bass my praying that everyone should be in one single piece over there .


Sonakshi- Dev you are not understanding. I have to go to her school after every 15 days to hear every bomb she is dropping on that school campus. It's getting difficult to me to concentrate on work. As such these days am feeling not well and am so tired.


Dev- You are not feeling well. Doctor you need a doctor.


Sonakshi giving light punch on his chest- Pls Dev.am not in mood to do all these things.


Dev- Well don't worry I will go in the school if you are ready to and visit Doctor now.


Sonakshi - No .I will go tomorrow but today i will go ..

Dev- No . Not tomorrow but today means today only. I am taking your appointment with doctor. I will drop you in the clinic and will go to the school then and after that office. Everything is set and clear. Let's go.

Sonakshi giving him tight hug- Where were you all these years ? I missed you so much. Life is so easy with you.

Dev hugging her back - Wished if you had... Anyway leave that thing. It's past now.

Sonakshi and Dev after having breakfast went to the respective places.


Devki's School

Inside principal office

Principal - Oh Mr. Dev Dixit. You are here? I thought Sonakshi will come .Anyway ... So

Dev- Mam we are very much aware and so much used to of these kinds of meeting that I don't think I need to remind you that I need to go the office.

Principal - Mr. Dev .. This time complaint has come from Teacher and not from student . She is Mrs. Kanly and she is quite upset. Means a lot.

Principal- Pls call Devki and Mrs. Kanly to my cabin.

Devki came and stand beside Dev. Dev through eyes assure her not to worry , he is there for her.

Mrs. Kanly came to the office and was crying.

Mrs. Kanly- I don't want to see this kid anymore. Please mam just rusticate her.

Dev- What she has done now?

Devki taking out her lips again.

Principal- Actually Mrs. Kanly was sitting near fan today. As per Mrs. Kanly report, Devki came and started doing something because of which her hair stuck inside the fan. And we had to cut her long hair because it is impossible

for us to separate her from fan.

Mrs. Kanly - See. What she has done? In the morning my hair was below my waist and now it was not even touching my shoulder. What will I say to my hubby. He loves my hair. Because of her everything is spoiled.

Prinicpal- Mrs. kanly .. Stop it. Devki come here I want to hear what do u want to say regarding this.

Mrs. Kanly- Why are u asking this girl? Just rusticate her.

Prinicpal in stern voice- Mrs. Kanly ! You don't need to tell me what I have to do or what not?

Devki stand beside prinicipal with teary eyes , Dev was struggling to see her like that. He was about to loose his control, but somehow was telling him - Just few minutes more baby. I will hold you..

Devki with teary eyes narrates her side of story- Mrs. Kanly, the craft teacher, gave us assisgment of drawing one pillow-No !! Two pillow actually- but I have made one pillow- I am sorry. i want to make two pink pillows but ...

Prinicpal - It's ok Devki. Even one pillow is good. What next ?

Devki- one bed, one lamp table , one chair.

Devki- I made bed, table was not correct , and not able to draw chair at all, it is so difficult

Prinicpal - Devki !! We need to know regarding Mrs. Kanly hair.? Will you please tell us why did u put her hair inside the fan?

Devki- Oh yes!!! Then everyone was busy in doing drawing. Suddenly I was saw Rohit, Vishal and Mathew near Mrs. Kanly chair. Mrs. kanly was sleeping - she likes to sleep most of the time after giving assignment to us.

Mrs. Kanly- She is speaking rubbish, am telling you

Prinicipal just raise her hand towards her- Not a word.

Devki with teary eyes- Mrs. Kanly's chair was next to fan. Her long hair was going inside the fan. Rohit took her hair and putting inside the fan, Vishal was taking out her hair, but mathew was again putting her hair inside.

So Rohit - inside, Vaishal- Outside, and mathew again inside.

So I thought I should tell them not to do this. But as I went there to discuss this issue. Rohit , Mathew challenged me- SHowed us how much daring you are? SHow us whether you are capable to put her hairs in moving fan or not? So I showed it by holding her hair and putting inside the fan. But at the same time Mrs. Kanly wakes up and she started panicing because of which her hair goes inside more.

After that you came , Mohan bhaiya came with scissors, Mrs.S..

Principal - Fine Devki. Rest of the story i am very familiar with it. SO thank you much for telling us the complete story.

Prinicpal - Devki please and sit outside and leave it.

Devki with teary eyes showed Dev again, Dev through gestures told her that he loves her alot.

Prinicpal- Mrs.Kanly!! WE can't take actions against Devki.It is your fault to sleep in the class.

Mrs. Kanly- You are believing child words and not mine.Is this because she is daughter of rich man.

Dev lost his control and was about to open his mouth but

Principal - Mrs. Kanly. This is not first time I am hearing something like this about you. Even earlier alot of complaints came about you , but we ignored it because no student came forward to say something against you on record. As Devki is naughty girl but she is not liar. Even after all this if you want me to investigate then I will do it as per your request. I will you have to bear the consequences.

Mrs. Kanly- This is not fair

Prinicpal- Oh Yes. See you soon in board meeting.Rest vice prinicipal will guide you more what to do and what not?

Mrs. Kanly went outside cursing everyone including god in her language.

Prinicpal- Sorry ! Mr Dev Dixit! As per norms we have to call parents for such issue. Have a nice day. Tell sonkashi to call me . I want to ask her about my niece. Bye

Dev came outside and saw teary Devki, pick her up , after giving thousand kisses and tight hugged. Dev explained to her that putting hand inside the fan could be risky for her as well. Devki promised him that from today she will not putting inside the fan.


In the afternoon

Dev's office

Tina called Dev's cabin and informed him that Sonakshi Mam came here to meet you.

Dev- Please tell her to wait for 2 mins. My meeting is almost finished .

After meeting is finished Sonakshi came inside the Dev's cabin

Dev- Wow what a pleasant suprise? Now you are here, let's eat something together. I am so hungry.

Dev- Tina. Please order some chinese for us. We are hungry ..

Dev noticed that Sonakshi was too much silent mode.

Dev- Sonakhsi ! Is everything fine ? Yes what happened? You went to Doctor's place ? WHat did she say?

Sonakshi was blank- Hein? Yes... What happened to Devki's School?

Dev- Ohh.. Not much just inside - outside - then again inside. Finally inside forever.

Sonakshi - What ???

Dev narrates the entire the school incident to her.

Sonakhi- Oh god.. Why did she always does this?God am so tired now.

Dev came and sit next to her , pulling her towards him , hugging her.

Dev- Kya hua ?Hmm.. Doctor ne kya bola u tell me first?

Before Sonakshi could say anything. Tina Buzz him on intercom.

Dev- Tina. I said Lunch time.

Tina - Sory sir. IN fact Mr. Steve wants to speak to you regarding something very urgently. He even apologised in advance , but he can't help it. He needs to talk to you urgently. That too through Video conferencing.

Sona came towards Dev- It's ok Dev. You carry on we will talk in the evening.

Ishwari Niwas

Evening time, Sonakshi, Ishwari , Mamaji , Devki were happily chatting among themselves.

Dev entered the house with a lots of presents for everyone.

Dev- Hello !! Everyone.

Before Sonakshi, Ishwari could react, Devki quickly ran towards him, asking him to pick her.

Dev leaving all shopping bags on the floor, pick her up , hugged her tightly.

Dev- My Princess.. I have bought a beautiful doll for you.

Sonakshi- Dev.. Again new doll for her. Not good. Please don't bring anymore new toys till she behaved nicely in the school.

Ishwari - Sonakshi. she is little girl, abhi nahi khelegi then kab khelegi.Meri umar mein

Sonakshi - No Maa. Baat discipline ki hai. I want my kids to behave and live like a ordinary people. Jayada comforts hum logo ko bighad bhi sakta hai. So please ..

Ishwari- Theek hai baba.. But main kitchen mein jaati hoon. Mujhse nahi dekhta jaata hai yeh discipline and all that. Main toh thooda sa bighadogi hi..

Mamaji- Bhai .. Even can't scold Devki. Main bhi Chalta hoon.

Dev was smiling and came close to Sonakshi- Alright.. Even I can't

Sonakshi- Dev please fresh up ho jao. And do some work or relax or whatever you want to do. Then you and me will talk to Devki in private.

With this Sonakshi also went inside the kitchen to help Ishwari for dinner.

Dev and Devki both looked each other and in chorus- Mumma is very angry angry today.

After half an hour.

Dev's Room.

Devki and Dev both sitting on the bed like chota babies , ready to listen the scold of mumma Sonakshi.

Sonakshi- Alright. Devki. As you are very much aware that almost every day we are going to your school for some or other reason.

Sonakshi came with white board and a lot of stickers.

Sonakshi- See this is smiley sticker-happy sticker and angry sticker. Every day Devki will get a sticker based on her behaviour towards everyone, and studies, and of course degree of mischievous

On the day of the week - if you get more happy sticker, Devki will get reward - like a pizza., a toy, nail paint , a movie, anything

Devki in excitement- Pizzzaaa, Toyyy

Dev looked at her with so much love- Ohh my baby.

Sonakshi in anger- Stop it Dev...

Sonakshi- Yes but if you get more angry sticker , then you will be punished as well. You will not to allowed to watch Television for weekend .

Devki in horror- NO TVVV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dev- Sonakshi .. NO TV is big punishment for nearly 6 years old girl. For 6 years old girl Tv is the life line. I protest..

Sonakshi- WHAT PROTEST..????

Both Dev and Devki were too scared to say anything after that.

Sonakshi - There is some rules and regulation for Daddy Dixit as well. No toys or chocolates, anything during weekdays .. Got it otherwise you will punished as well.

Dev in a naugthy- Hmmm ... What punishment.. SOmething related to me and you...

Devki looking at Dev with curious eyes , and Sonakshi with angry eyes.

Sonakshi in angry voice- Yes .. You will be punished to sleep in the living room outside this room.

Dev mouth was wide open- NOoo...

Sonakshi with happy face= Hope both of you are happy with new rules and regulations and am sure both they will cooperate with me.Time for Dinner. Let's go/

After Dinner

Devki went to Ishwari's room to play with her for sometime. Mamaji were busy in his social work, Dev was busy in files.

Sonakshi were busy in her own hospital files, after sometime, Devki came to the room , was feeling sleepy.

Sonakshi put her into the bed but her mind was somewhere else.

She was quite tensed looking at sleeping Devki, that she didn't noticed that Dev came inside the room , watching her from the distance.

Dev- Sonakshi !!! What Happened?

Sonakshi quickly came out of thinking mood- Nahi .. Kuch nahi.. Well koi serious nahi.. Basss.

Dev came and sit down on the bed and moved aside the devki a little bit on the corner.

Dev- Come here. Come and sit next to me please.

Sonkashi was quite nervous at this time and her face can't hide this fact/

Sonakshi came and sit close to Dev, Dev hold her and hugged from side.

Dev- Kya hua Sona.. Kuch toh hua hai??? Tell me ...

Sonakshi was in tears and started shaking terribly.

Dev was super tensed - Sonakshi... Calm down.. Hua kya hai? Yeh toh batao..

Sonakshi- Dev.. Mujhe sab se phele aap ko phele hi batana tha. But my pervious experience was so bad.. Mujhe baar baar woh sab yaad aa raha tha.. Isliye aab batane ki himmat hi nahi ho rahi hai.

Dev completely confused with her statement- What? Kya bol rahi hoo? Kya experience ?

Sonakhsi with tears and shaking - Dev.. I am pregnant.. And she closed her eyes.

Dev was in shock means pleasantly shock, mouth was wide open. His mind could not register any thoughts after listening this. He wants to shout, dance, sing,wake up whole world , but all he could do was cry. Tears started to come from his ears and he was smiling, just holding Sonakshi hand tightly.


Sonakshi with closed eyes remembered the scene where she shared her first pregnancy news with Asha and Baba.. How everyone reacted after hearing this news. In fact baba gave her tight slap and said a lot of evil words for the baby. Not a single hand come over her and bless her and her baby. No one said nice things to her and her baby. Everyone just gave a lot of curse.

Dev after hearing from Sonakshi, could not believe how much Sonakshi has to bear ??

Dev gave her tight hug - Duffer ho tum..I am extremely happy stupid..touching her tummy- Our Baby.. One more baby...

Dev- Thank you Sonakshi.. Thank you once again for the beautiful gift.

Dev holding her hand- Sonakshi..I know tum ne and maine bahut kuch miss kar diya hai during Devki's time. .Shayad uss baby ke through main imagine kar luga ki Devki ke saath bhi kya kya kar sakta tha.

Sonakshi keeping her head on Dev's chest- Dev.. Am scared .. Two babies ?? Aur Devki ke baare mein toh jaante ho.. Sab kaise hoga. Means I ..

Dev- Don't be scared.. Sonakshi am with you. Together we will raise our both children and will give them equal love.Main Maa ko baaata kar aaooo..

Sonakshi- Hmm.. Maa toh theek hai.. But hum logo ko yeh baat Devki ko bhi batana hoga.. Am sure you can guess questions and answers of her and a lot more.

Dev-- Aab tum mujhko daara rahi hoo.. I am scared to tell this news to Devki.

Sonakshi still keeping her head on his chest- Yes mee tooo.. Mummy...

Both Dev and Devki were scared to share this news to terror Devki who sleeping peaceful with smile on her face.


Next part


Sonakshi- Devki .. What if we bring one baby to our house.?

Devki playing with dolls- Why ?

Dev- Then you can play with her or him ?

Devki playing with dolls- Interesting? I am still playing with my doll. Secondly last time you said i can't have a pink baby. So am interested in babies anymore.


Both Dev and Sonakshi are more tensed now than before

P.S. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.

P.S. If possible please comment if you like and silent members please hit " like " button .


P.S. If you don't like it then 🤔it's ok I understand.


Edited by mayu1982 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you so much di for continuing this story...😃
How wonderful chapter!
I love devki and her cute antics

Wow! Devakshi's second child...
How will they share this news with devki...
And what will be her cute questions
Very eager to read that

Pls update next part very soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing chapter dii
Devki and her antics are so cute
Yaay!!!!
Sona is pregnant with their second child
Thanks for listening to my wish
Update soon
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's a wonderful chapter. Devki is just so naughty. I am wondering how Devakshi will make her understand about the new baby🤣

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