RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th

Fantastic Chapter and stupendously written.👏👏👏👏

Not for a second I got bored while reading this chapter. I enjoyed every bit of this fascinating chapter and while reading I was wondering how you managed to write each emotion so precisely. In jo-ja conversation, blend of emotions engulfed them, sometimes they were happy, sometimes sad and sometimes helpless and confused -Of their own emotions and you have written each emotion so rightly and beautifully that I could feel jalal's helplessness and jodha's guilt, his anger and her detestation. his loneliness and her pain.

Very well done dear. 👏👏👏With every chapter your writing and imagination making me crazy-For This Story.

Registan Ka Gulab ~ ~ ~ ~

You never fail to amaze me.⭐️⭐️

Hamida

I don't find anything wrong in her thinking, fear and her actions. She was right at her place. As a mother, she's more experienced than jalal and only want good of her son and his sultanat.

She could see that jalal was getting obsessive about a maid, Radha which would definitely not end up in his good. He had to control his possessiveness, his anger and his emotions For her.

But what jalal said, those were the most painful words for her. Afterall what she had done was for his good. If she wanted her son and their sultanate to be safe then what's wrong in that?? Did she have any other option??

And after so many years when he directly said all those things, connected that thing,his childhood days and helplessness of his mother with Radha, definitely she would get hurt by his words and actions.

Jodha

Sorry but in this chapter, I just don't like jo. Rather I hate her. She's playing with jalal's emotions and not for a once she realized this while her conversation with jalal. No doubt she started loving him still she did not feel bad even for once that she's betraying him, even when he said that you are hiding something, then also she got scared. Natural reaction, I agree but wanted her to feel guilty for once atleast on his statement.

Jalal

Here is my hero.😃 I just love him in this chapter.⭐️⭐️ And I was imagining Rajat in whole chapter while reading. You have written each scene brilliantly and needless to say, Rajat would act so magnificently in both these scenes-His Convo with hamida, and jodha.

He was trying hard not to say anything offensive neither he wanted to disrespect his mother but the frustration he had since childhood, made him to burst out on her. In his childhood, he felt that his mother left him for sultanat. He was a child, an innocent soul and didn't know what's right or wrong. Child act and think the way he/she see the things around. The circumstances he faced during his childhood, when he needed his mother the most made him ruthless, leaving a negative impression for his mother somewhere in his mind.

As he grew up, he knew and understood that, that was the need of the time, his mother had to send him away for his safety but..

The impressions he had somewhere in his mind didn't remove yet. So when he was feeling so desolate, alone,shattered and frustrated with his own emotions, here hamida came..

When she was advicing him, to stay away from Radha.. he was already frustrated, wanted to meet Radha asap still he controlled his anger and didn't open his mouth, though he was exasperated by her words and delay in meeting with Radha but when she said that Radha can meet surya, this thing made him infuriated resulting in recollecting his sad and difficult childhood days without his mother.

Mother always give a chid a needed warmth when he/she was in trouble, though if a child doesn't share his/her pain still mother can feel the pain of her child and tries her best to give a needed soothe but here what he witnessed was mariam makani giving advice to shehenshah and not a mother, who could stroke his head once with affection which renewed his inner wounds.

As people say, self-assured can stay silent, but insecurities are always loud... In a due course, they burst.

>>Loved this line.👍🏼

But was he felt nice or satiated after yelling on her?? No!!

That's the difference between wise and fool. His inner self knew that she was not at fault, but his mind had some negative impression due to which he blurted out such words. But that's for good only. We should blurt out such things and never keep storing them in our minds, because that will give us pain and in future, made us to do very things which we never wanted or dreamt of.

And what I like is.. after this he blamed Radha.👏👏👏

I love you bhavi di.. You are awesome. This was what I wanted.🤗

He didn't let his heart to feel any such emotion before but since Radha came in his life, he started Feeling.

The heart which was enveloped in a glaze of ruthlessness started feeling emotions.. jealousy, affection, attraction for the first time which was alien to him and I am glad that now he realized this that she's affecting him-his actions and for me he was right. This happens,he shouted on hamida and was restless, is all because of Radha only.

Jalal-jo Convo

I just loved the way u wrote about jalal's rage, his red shot eyes and his scowling face. Oh my my, how I love this hot delicious devil?

His persona had the power to make her scared and uneasy and I so loved it. She refused to meet him but his one glare and she stood fixed. Wow. 👏👏👏 With each line, I loved this jalal more.❤️❤️

An eerie red smoke crossed his vision, one of his hands gripped her soft neck harshly "How dare you?" he growled... In less than ten seconds, he released her neck and captured her between the wall and his hands.

Fear ran through her spine seeing his murderous glare. He was shaking in a rage, a thin layer of the liquid blaze was on his forehead, and his heartbeats were ridiculously rapid. As always, he closed his eyes to control his fury.

>>> woah!! I didn't expect him to do that😲 but guess what I liked that. 😎

Each line is terrifically written.👍🏼

"You ok?" he asked impassively, not only his sound, but his face was plain expressionless.

"Then why are you still, trembling?" he concealed his inner turmoil in thick, but the composed accent, still there was no regret in his voice for his action.

>>> Only jalal can do that 😆and that's why I loved him so much.😉 He didn't show a single trace of regret on his face, ofcourse which irked her more.😛

Like a flash, he responded "If you are asking about my preference then honestly I don't prefer you in this dress. I would rather prefer you in nothing at all..." His inner desire just spilled from his mouth by mistake, instead of embarrassment he cleared his throat with a mischievous smirk on his lips, his dark-lashed, sharp eyes twinkled with mischief

>>> My eyes wide opened when I read this.😲 I read it thrice, second time for clearing my doubt and third time because I loved his attitude.⭐️ I was grinning like an idiot.😃😆

Let me clarify, I feel comfortable wearing this dress in front of King Surya Vadan rather than in front of you. You are the last man on earth whom I would trust."

"Radha..." he shouted, Her sharp words sent a piercing icy chill through his soul, his one hand clamped slumping on her wrist and second hand swung her face towards him "Don't provoke me, you will not appreciate the outcome."

>>> Oops.. it hurts.. well men can't listen this thing from their girl as they always think that if they desired for their girl's body then it's ok, no matter if she's his gf, wife or not in a relationship with him but how can some other men think like that about her? So it's a girl's mistake to wear such dress and let other men think about her in this way.🤪

Btw I like possessive jalal too. 😉Angry and possessive jalal is too hot to handle.☺️

"In that case, let me warn you before you take any hasty decisions. If you dared to accept his proposal, remember there will be severe consequences which you will be responsible. Remember, If you let him touch you, I will rip his hands off his body. If you say yes, then he will become my prime enemy, my mission, my target, I will ruin not only him but his kingdom as well and I can assure you that in the end you will end up in Agra."

>>> I love you bhavi di..🤗 for writing this. I can't tell you how I loved these lines and jalal. Wish I could see Rajat acting this scene.

This girl is impossible to deal with. God knows what will she do after accepting me, she will definitely make me dance on her tune with her antics.'

>>> Right and this audacious girl complemented you shehenshah.😉😆

She shouted, "STOP LYING... Just to make me do your bidding, you lied on the boat and you're lying again right now. For your information, I know you took her to the lake house and said again and again that you love her, besides I have viewed your claim marks on your beloved Rukaiya's lips and on her body everywhere. Though it does not matter what you do with your official chief wife, but just stop lying you don't love her."

>>> Here she said it finally. Do they really need to confess that how madly they are in love with each other??

Here they are fighting just like husband and wife, still adamant not to confess their actual feelings.😆

His grip slackened for a second at her dissent, but he ignored her weak protest when his dark brown, sharp, and vibrant eyes scanned her flushed face, he simply pulled her into his strong arms to comfort both of them. Slowly, she gave in, her hands rolled on his back and head rested on his muscular chest. The desirable warmth soothed both their distressed hearts.

"I can't imagine my life without you Radha. I have never experienced like this for anyone. You are irresistible... You have entirely beguiled me... I can't get enough of you, how can I let you go." He slowly whispered each sentence with a pause while completely freeing himself in her warmth.

>>>>

"I offended Ammi Jaan today..." He didn't realize when his subconscious mind slipped out and even he didn't understand how that happened... He was utterly shocked and offended at his own state... Like an electric shock, he swiftly got apart from her...

>>> I thought he will again behave rudely with her but what I like is, he wanted to share with her about this, the thing which was disturbing him so much.😊

Even though I was deeply hurt yesterday, but still I would apologize for it, I couldn't sleep last night for even a second just because I was so worried." He looked in control but sounded grouchy, frustrated and uncertain.

Oh god, why am I defending myself... why can't I simply apologize?

The way he was apologizing and justifying his actions made it seem to her as if all the things happened because of her and he was blaming her for not being able to sleep the whole night. Radha lost all the sympathy he gained and once again anger flared inside her, "

>>>> At this time, felt bad for jalal.I completely understand that he couldn't apologize to her but this is the way he is. Why can't jodha understand this thing?? I agree she's not wrong either but I really hope that one day she will understand jalal completely. What he wanted and why he behaved this way.😕

When she took a long time to respond, he whispered in her ears in a challenging tone, "Don't be too self-conscious, confess."

>>>> My lips twitched as I imagined him saying this so softly and sensually. Loved it dearie.❤️❤️

"Yes... I do not believe in forcing on women and I will never force you to accept me, but I am not that great or a saint I will allow you by myself to go to him. And your statement about being unfair... Radha being a Shahenshah, I have done uncountable unfair things... I will add one more without a hitch, and for you, I can go to any extent..."

>>> wow.. amazing dialogues⭐️⭐️⭐️

He continued evenly, "And... Love!!! I don't love you or anyone else for that matter because Jalal is heartless... and YES... I will admit honestly that I... am... obsessed... with... you. I have never felt for any woman like this before... I desperately want you in my bed as well as my life, I desire you every second, and I want to kill King Surya Vadan for eyeing you.

>>>> My irresistible Jalal.☺️

Sometimes, I see an immense, unfathomable love for me in your eyes and sometimes you look at me like I am a horrible criminal who took away everything from you. I am unable to solve the complicated riddle that you are."

>>> Jhuti jodha.😈 Had any other girl been at her place, then jalal would have suspected her but here he just dismissed the thought, because he trusts her so much and started loving her.🥺

Here I wanted jodha to feel guilty atleast for 2-3 seconds.

"I feel complete when you are in my arms, your audible heartbeats assure me of the existence of my heart... Please don't leave, I feel deserted, I need you today." He mumbled in deprived tone.

>>> what else she needs?? He loves you dumbo.. Don't be "Komolika of kasauti zindagi ki"🤪

Here in this chapter, he kissed her twice. Second time, she blushed but first time when they were arguing you didn't write anything about her reaction. Wanted to know, was she remained impassive,or was annoyed or did she blushed?😛

He vowed to himself I will not hurt you ever again, now my actions will reveal how deeply I care for you and how much I love you...'

>>> aww.. my poor naive jallu.. See he cares for her that's why he wanted her to eat first. When she herself said this, that time he was so angry and couldn't have control on his own.. that doesn't mean he doesn't care for jo but jo needs to understand this that he needs love, affection, care and not her anger.

He blurted out his anger on her because he's confused and helpless with his emotions for her. Though, she's not wrong either but to me, she looks like a villain now.😈

I loved each sentence, each dialogue of jo-ja conversation di.. Very well written.👏👏👏

I love this story and love you more.🤗

Please update soon.!!😊

Questions

1. If U were the writer of this story, would U alter anything in this chapter? If so... WHAT? And Why?

>>> Not in a story but I made radha to feel guily for a moment, in this chapter.

2. Do U think story moving at the correct pace?

>>> Yep.. I am enjoying reading this story. Everything is just Perfect and fascinating.⭐️⭐️⭐️

3. Who is UR favorite character in this story? (Jalal... Jodha... Rahim... Ruku... Hamida... Surya) why?

>>> Jalal.❤️ Just because the way you portrayed his character in this story made me feel connected to this story and that's why I am reading this story ardently.😛😃

Precap: Waiting!!😃