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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hiii wow di what was i reading .😲😳

Congrats foh d new story .🥳. super awesome it was i loved it completely d prologue was super amazing ⭐️. And d character sketch n pics were supperrbb .. 👍🏼😃 .. loved d title , character sketch, picx n prologue everythng juz loved d story which is unique n different frm othrs .. great story 👏👏

Pls update d 1st part soon .. i wanna know wht has happend with jalal on dat nyt..😳😕😳

PS : di m sorry i cudnt like coz like button is still not wrkng from mobile. 😭😭😳 I tried many tyms to like i even refresh it n i restart my mobile too but it didnt wrk. 😭 I 'L try again later...

Edited by lovergirlalina - 11 years ago

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manisha sawant

@Manu_986

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

hasin chahre pe uske nur-e-aftaab chamkta hai
phir kyon ruh pe ye chilman ka naqab rehta hai

her shahjaade k ankhome us naznin ka khwab basta hai
khud jillelahi(jallu) ka dil bhi uske didar ko betab rehta hai

uske sine me mohobatt ka sailab behta hai
Sara jahaan use registaan ka gulab kehta hai

I eargly waiting for her entry 😃
Di plzzz update soon if possible 😊

Edited by manuluvpari - 11 years ago

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

My cutest bhavini di 🤗

Update plsss😳

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

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manisha sawant

@Manu_986

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Res.. 😛

unres
🥳 [:D/] yipee!!!...i am d first 🥳 [:D/]

thanks for ur awesome chapter 👏 👏 👏
There are many saspenses. Thats why i fell to predict but i guess this is flashback. But love radhas character...her atmsmaa loved d scene when she said... Humare sanskar hume kisi paraye mard ko apne karib nahi aane de sakte... hum apni izzat ke liye apne pran de bhi sakte he aur le bhi sakte hai...
Aisa fiery avtaar to jodha ka hi ho sakta hai

Overall...story is very diffrnt...i opened this page out of curiosity bt teri story pdhkar me aur curious ho chuki.
really exited to read more 😃
mere curiosity ka aur imthehaan mat le di jaldi se update de do 😊

Edited by manuluvpari - 11 years ago

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ash

@ashpat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

first of all, u're most welcome!!!🤗btw, i keep forgetting to tell u in last few pm, that there is only one A i mean it's Ayesha but no big deal 😳

anyways, back to the chapter. I LOVE radha. Her entry was amazing. The way she talked to the guard and then attacked muchard bec he was lusting her was wow. I like this fiery dasi. Look at her guts being a dasi. this chum chum sound when she walks is music to anyone's ears. Maham Anga in this story is little different too. I mean she was impressed by Radha and on top was joking with her and even she was surprised that she was getting lil friendly with a maid. Radha is so friendly with rahim and so perceptive too. Omg, Why did salima say choti ammi jaan. i hope radha does not get into trouble.ohh salima u should have cleared thsi before going now what will happen? Jalal is curious about this chum chum girl i mean radha.

Bhavini, I am so excited about this story and upcoming chapters. it's very different from other stories.

Please update soon. thx for pm.

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bokul

@bokul

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

i understand that may be this story is something very different

from is it hate or love . this is such a unique concept bhavi

it has a different flavour to it

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Mashallah ... kya chapter hai , bhavini 🤗... i have lots of questions in my mind ... but i feel as as the story proceeds ... saare raaz khul jayenge ...

lekin ek sawaal hai ...kya ye radha hi jodha hai ..??? n what is she doing here in agra that to ALONE ???

Bhavu .. correction ... character intro mein jodha ko 19years bataya hai aur yahan pe 17yr (only if radha is jodha) ...!!! aisa mujhe lagta hai

but ye toh thrilling story lag rahi hai ... continue continue ...😎

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago