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From where should I start , dii ? I honestly don't know what to say coz m loss of words . The chapter was beyond my expectations n imagination ! Awesomely Amazing ! I just loved every single word of this Marvellous chapter . You , as always , were Fantastic !
I loved Hamida , I loved Radha n off course I love Jalal the most . You did all the justice with each n every single character .
The desperate Jalal 😉 ! His desperation to have a talk with Radha about all this scenario got me more intrigued for their up coming encounter .
Well , Hamida , she was always the sweet type worrying for the future of sultanate n Jalal as well . She is also right on her place . After witnessing the hotshot meeting of King Surya n Jalal n also after getting to know about his pull towards Radha , she got the hint of the situation... She smwhat got to know that Jalal is crazily attracted towards Radha which obviously isn't good for the sultanate' fortune . She is intelligent enough to perceive the love her son had developed in his heart for Radha . But the thing she knows that she is just a mere maid who can't marry the Mighty Emperor of Hindustan . After the meeting n the proposal of Surya ... She had gotten the hint that very soon The same proposal could b coming from Jalal . All n all I think she had been right on her part for her fears r right to . But when Jalal after all those long years , spoke his inner soul out about the grief he had been carrying ... About the disappointment of not getting his mother's love , she knew that he had suffered a lot in his childhood ... But being the queen she had to take the steps she took ... But all the while behind the crown of that Queen , there always had been the heart of that helpless , vulnerable mother , who still is desperately dying to get her son's love . This time when Jalal spoke breaking all the self control he had on his emotions broke the control over her emotions too for she also had been suffering all this while ... If we take that Jalal had suffered a lot in his childhood for he was abandoned from getting is mother's love , Hamida also hadn't suffered less ... In fact , I think her suffering was much more compared to Jalal's . It wasn't easy as hell to take the decision of leaving her son behind ... She had carried him in her womb for 9 months ... Like all the other mothers she had loved him with all her heart . N also there on the other side her husband's life was in danger ... She was stuck there ... N after all that suffering she had gone through she never for once got her son back except for this time . This time he spoke about his feelings ... Previously never did he spoke to her except the sultanate matters . M not saying that Jalal is wrong on being so rude to his mother ... He also is right ... After all he is the small child who craved to see his mother for once .. N here when he knows he loves Radha with all his heart ... He can't afford to lose her like his mother . He had grown up with the ego he got but ... Some where he still loves his mother . N for his feelings for Radha ... He knows he is madly in love with that woman ... N he can't lose her at any cost .
Their hotshot encounter in his chamber got me goosebumps ! It was ... Mesmerising ! All the while reading that part I was carrying a dreamy smile on my face 😳😛 . This scene was beyond words . N all the where this situation led to ... Their aggressive argument... Their teasings ... Their Hug ... Gosh! What should I say about that hug ..! I was lost ... Completely lost ! U write in such a marvellous way naa dii , that I can't ever get enough of any of the chapters . N that is why whenever I finish reading ... M always like ... What ? Finished ? Itni jldi? 😆 Don't worry, m not saying your chapters are small ... They're long enough ... Just m soo lost that I don't release the length of the chapter .
Radha had always been the strong n the courageous one ... Except at the situations where she n Jalal are dead close to each other , where their proximity makes her loose all her senses n strength n she is no less than a fragile flower in his arms . All this while complying her mission she fell for this arrogant , egoistic man ... She fell for him really hard that now ... It's hell difficult to stand up ... ! Today , she saw his vulnerable side .. His pain .. Which she readily wanted to soothe ... Only if she could ..! There Jalal , for the very first time in his lifetime ... Wanted to get rid of the burden he had been carrying on his heart by sharing it with the love of his life ... If only he could !
I know a time will come when they both definitely will ! N m just waiting for that time . M seriously intrigued to this story soo much ... I just can't wait to read more of it ... !
M in love with this story . Thank you for this wonderful chapter dii 🤗 ! Love every bit of it . Desperately waiting for the next one . Oh god ! I just can't wait 😆😛. Love you dii ❤️.
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Questions:
1. If U were the writer of this story, would U alter anything in this chapter? If so... WHAT? And Why?
> I don't think so I would . It's just the perfect one !
2. Do U think story moving at the correct pace?
> Yeah , it is ! N I just can't wait to read more 😛.
3. Who is UR favorite character in this story? (Jalal... Jodha... Rahim... Ruku... Hamida... Surya) why?
>Of course My Jalal ! Well , his every single thing ... Be it his arrogance, his ego , his love , his care , his anger , his cunningness , his pain , his vulnerability , his Royal aura , his possessiveness , his hot personality ... Every thing ... M in love with all of this package ❤️
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Sorry for late reply dii 😊
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