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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

radha feels jalal is staring at her
she is getting uncomfortable
she is again about to leave
jalal as usual stops her and flirts with her
and then he starts his teasing session
omg i am just loving this
omg that kid rahim is so possessive
i never knew that
what will happen when jalal radha will fall in love
will he still be angry then
uff these two never take a break from fighting
finally they both slept

loved this part

Naughty Jallu... Jallu hath dokhe Radha ke piche padne wala hai... par with his dignity... What will happen when they fall in love... this story has major twist and turns...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

finally my long rant is over
precap is interesting
once again i loved the song u gave here

Rima Darling Love U jaan... I am so happy U enjoying this story as well...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: radhika7

Bhavi di ...

I know you told that you will be updatng this story on tuesday ...but please please if possible update by tomorrow...Forum is so suna suna...missing updates of beautiful stories since long...😭😭

Only savior was your last beautiful update of "Is it hate or love" which i have read numerous times...👏👏

Waiting for a update on this story soon.

Radhika love U sweety... I promised for Wednesday... I am glad u enjoyed last chapter of other story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
THANK U SO MUCH Ayesha for your Help and support!!! Even though your internet was down U read chapter and discuss with me on WA... U R suggestions are always valuable... LOVE U😃
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Jalal with calm tone: Hum Rahim ke sath bistar pe hi soyenge...

Rahim was very sleepy by that time... Radha sleep on the bed hugging Rahim till he went to sleep... then kiss on his forehead ... and put her mattress next to their bed... and went to sleep... she was about to turn off candle...but Jalal stopped her saying... hum andhre me Rahim ke sundar chehre ko kese dekh payenge...

Radha gave an annoying look to Jalal... and went to sleep on the floor...

Jalal moved Rahim on another side of the bed and he sleeps on Rahim side... and looked at her glowing face in dim candle light for long...and he didn't realize when sleep took over him...

Chapter: 4
Radha wake up very early in the morning... It was still gloomy outside... As per her daily routine, she wake up very early to finish Vadvai Pooja... Her eyes caught sleeping top less Jalal ... Unintentionally her eyes drool on his strong muscular shoulder ...His face was filled with content peace with little smile on it... He looked so adorable while cuddling Rahim in a sleep... His brimming innocence touched her heart for the first time... She never thought Shenshah e Hindustan... Heartless... cruel...womanizer... unkind... rude... Jalalludin Mohammad has humanity... She was amused first when; he had apologied to old Mughal bandi in front of many people... His apology to a bandi? It was difficult for her to digest his humbleness which shocked her... then he change entire law when he realized it was not fair... Not even in her dream she thought he care about his praja... His bold and quick approach with his commending power impressed her... It was another shock for her to see love and care for his step son Rahim... She felt it was pure from his heart... She always believed kids only get attracted to good and pure heart human beings... This was another shock... to please Rahim, he agreed to spend time and sleep at Night with him... She always pictures his most of the day and entire night drunk around many women... but again it was another shock, he gave up his harem enjoyment nights for his step son's pleasure... She looked at him but there was no expression other than surprising...little by little her expression turned to bitter and finally disgusted...and moved her face from him...

She quietly took her cloth from the cupboard and took bath ... In changing room she was secretly doing prayer and arti to lord Krishna every day ... Most of the Hindu dasi does prayer in their small cottage secretly but they were not allowed to do prayer in the palace and they were not allowed to leave palace without any one's permission... Jalal heard in his sleep doing Aarti... It was time for Jalal's exercise and sword practice. He wakes up and heard Radha chatting mantra in changing room... He opens the changing room door quietly, where she was performing final mantra... Radha didn't know that Jalal has caught her while doing prayer...

Radha came out of the room with pooja thal to finish final daily routine of Vadvai pooja... Her long wavy shiny hairs were still wet... Her face was dazzling with sparkling water... She was wearing no Jewelry... Without Jewelry, she looked divine and gorgeous in her simple look... Radha is holding Aarti plate... Divine Jyot is still burning... She knew immediately Jalal knows that she has done hindu prayer inside changing room... She knew she will be in deep trouble for breaking the law... but brave Radha had no fear on her face... She was in dilemma should I offer him Prasad and Aarti or not... She didn't feel like it but at the same time religiously, she supposed to give everyone Aarti and Prasad... Jalal is completely lost in her divine beauty... Her wet hair and her face were glowing in divine flame of Aarti... few drop of water glitter on cheeks... Her big doe like eyes gleamed in orange glow of flame... She walks towards him slowly chum chum chum... Jalal is gazing at her without a blink... His heart started to beat fast... She forward Aarti thal... Jalal didn't know what to do... he gave her confusing look... and looked at the thal... Then she showed him how to take Aarti... He followed and took Aarti... then she gave him Prasad... He was taking Prasad from wrong left hand... With her eyes expression... showed other hand... Then Jalal took Prasad from her... There was not even single word exchange between them... Radha turned toward door to finish Vadvai pooja...

Jalal broke silence with his strong tone: Ruk Jao Radha, Tum yeh thal leke bahar jake ped ke paas me Hindu pooja nahi kar sakti... His sound was filled with commanding order...

Radha turned towards him with soft tone she said... Shenshah, apni batmizi ke liye mafi chahti hu... Par yeh pooja karna mere liye bahot aavshyak hai...

Jalal with louder voice: Radha, Tumhe yaha ka kanoon to pata hena... Mehel ke andar hindu pooja karna gunah hai...

Radha with her firm but sober tone: Ji Shenshah, Jab yaha kam ke liye aaye tab hume maloom nahi tha iss mehel me hindu dasi aur Mughal dasi ke liye alag kayde hai... humne mehel ke andar aate hi dekha tha ek Mughal dasi namaz padh rahi thi... to humne socha hindu dasi ko bhi yahi swatantrata hogi... iss liye humne us vakt Vajire Aliya se hamare dharam ke bare me kuch baat nahi ki thi.

Hume dusre hi din maloom hua ki yaha par hindu ishwar ki prathna nahi kar sakte... yeh kanoon ke khilaf hai... Hum usi vakt chale jate mehel ko chod ke parantu... Humne Salima begum ko vachan diya tha ki vo jab tak vapas nahi lote gi tab tak hum Rahim ka apne bache ki bhanti khayal rakhenge... Issi liye jab tak vo vapas nahi aati hum chup ke se ... bhor hone se pehle apni pooja karte hai... jis se kisi to us se aapti na ho...

Jalal with angry tone: Radha, tumhe pata hai... tum apni mithi jaban se Shenshah e Hind ko Jawab de rahi ho... Tum kya sabit karna chahti ho ki yaha ka kanoon hindu ke sath jyaati karta hai... To sun lo... Tum mehle ke bahar jake kya karti ho us se hume koi fark nahi... par Mehel ke andar tum pooja nahi kar sakti... Hume us se bhi koi masla nahi apne bandh kamre me tum kis ki ibadat karo... lekin tum yuh khule aam kayade ka bhang nahi kar sakti... Iss ki tumhe hum izzazat nahi de sakte... Humare liye kayde ka palan karna sabse upar hai... Tum Jab chaho yeh mehel chod sakti ho... us pe koi pabandi nahi...

Radha with upsetting tone: Shenshah, hum aapse vinanti karte hai... Bina pooja kiye hum na to ek anna ka dana kha sakte hai aur na hi ek boond pani pi sakte hai... aur Salima begum ko aane me abhi paach din baki hai... Kripya kar ke aap humari majboori dhayan me rakh ke akhri nairnay sunaiye... hume aapka jo bhi nirnay hai wo swikarya hai...

Jalal with angry tone: Radha tumhe kya lagta hai... tumhari zid ke samne hum juk jayenge... Tum ho koun ek bandi... aur uske liye hum kanoon ko torenge... Tumne pooja ki to tumhe gunegar man kar bandhi bana liya jayega... Tum mehel chodna chaho to tumhari marji aur yaha rehna hai to KANOON KE DAYRE ME... He gave her angry look...

Radha looked straight in his eyes... Her eyes were filled with immense pain... With choking heart and angry painful tone she said... Ji shenshah, Jo hukum aapka... Hum Rajput hai... Humare liye jaan jaye par vachan na jaye... Hum Rahim se bahot prem karte hai... Hum use bich majdhar me chod ke nahi jayenge... Hum panch din iss mehel me bina khaye aur piye aaram se nibha lenge... Aur hum kanah se prathna karenge... Jald se Jald Salima begum aa jaye aur hum apni jimevari se hume mukt kare...

Jalal was shocked... He never thought that she is that stubborn... He could see pain in her eyes... but for him Rule is Rule... for him law is the last ultimatam ... He never believed in bending rules for peoples convienience... His heart was pure but his ethics made him cruel...To allowed hindu people to follow their ritual in palace it was impossible for him... His entire darbaar filled with Mughals administrator and Mulavis... and to change this law was not a small request... ... without saying a word he walked out of the chamber...

Radha's word roaming around in his ears, her words pierced deep down in his conscious... For the first time his own harshness was hurting him to extreme... He knew deep down what Radha said was right... Law was not fair hindu dasi...but she stepped on his pride and ego... Now it was matter of his ego and pride too... His heart was pinching inside... Her words...Hum Rajput hai... Humare Liye Jaan Jaye Par Vachan Na Jaye... Was running in his mind like a record... One side her purity touched him and other side her stubbornness was making him angry...

Hoshiyaar running towards Rukaiya's room... Rukaiya just wake up and Still sitting on bed ... Hoshiyaar in haste enters in Rukaiya's room... and in very exciting voice... Hajoor... Hajoor...aap ne muje us bandi pe nazar rakhne ke liye bola tha...

Rukaiya madly screamed at Hosiyar: Gushak... Itni Subah yuh pagalo ki tarah hume us bandi ki khabar de rahi hai... aur bina humari izzazat...

Hoshiyaar excitement lowered and her face filled with fear... and said Maaf kar dijye begume khaas... hume laga aapko Shenshah aur us bandi Radha ki baat sun ne me dilchaspi hogi... hum bad me aake aapko batayenge...

Rukaiya with rude attitude: Ruko, Ab aye ho to bata ke Jao... Kya bat hai...

Her expression change from exciting to normal and said...Hum aaj subah me bawarchi khane ke taraf ja rahi... Tab mene Salima begum ke kamre me dekha... Shenshah us bandi se kuch bate kar rahe the... mene chup ke puri baat sun li... Shenshah us bandi pe kafi khafa the... Then she tells her entire conversation...

Rukaiya' face gleamed hearing this... and with evil smirk and happiness... she said... Kya khabar sunai hai Hosiyaar... Ab pata chalega us bandi ko... Saltant ke mamle me bolne se kya hota hai... Jao pata karo Rahim apni padhai ke liye kab jata hai... Aur jese hi Rahim ko Radha padhai ke liye chod ke aaye... Uske bad Radha ko turant hamare samne pesh kiya jaye...

Hoshiyar felt relieved and happy ...Since she was able to please Begum E Khaas...

Jalal is sitting on the breakfast table... lot of food is in front of him... but his mind still captured in Radha... He is talking to himself... Have I done anything wrong? Why I am feeling guilty? Every time she does something shocking... and able to shaken me... Her eyes had pain for not finishing pooja... The way she was telling... She will not eat anything without finishing her ritual. Why I stopped her from doing pooja... Why I didn't ignored it... there are many things happens in the palace which is illegal but I ignore it... Rukaiya and badi ammi both do many things which is against my wish and some time against kanoon... I don't punish them... Jalal heart was feeling pain for his own decision... He had taken many cruel decisions...but never shaken like this... Her purity touched his heart... For one promise she is ready to suffer that much...

Hamida walks in breakfast room... Jalal didn't notice Hamida... his plate is still untouched... his face expression looked worried... Hamida notice that Jalal is deeply lost in some thoughts and his thinking is giving him worry...

Hamida sat next to Jalal's sit and with very polite way ... Jalal... Kis shoch me dube hue ho...

Jalal awake from his self-thinking... and saw his ammi Jaan... then he said Kuch khas nahi Ammi Jaan ... par na jane kyu aaj hume humara hi fesla bay-rehem lag raha hai... Aaj hume bahot becheni ka ehsaas ho raha hai...

Hamaida with very sober tone: Jalal, kahi bar apne dil ki baat kisi ko batane se dil halka ho jata hai... Kya aap bata na chaho ge aesa konsa fesla hai jisne apko itna sochne pe majboor kar diya...

Jalal felt little scratchy but with little hesitating tone, Nahi ammi Jaan aesi koi badi baat nahi hai... Then he tell entire conversation between him and Radha... Pata nahi yeh bandi har baar kuch aesa karti hai... Aur hume sochne pe majboor kar deti hai... Aur aaj uski aankho me jo sachhai hum ne dekhi usse to yahi lagta hai vo kuch nahi khayegi aur kuch nahi piyegi ... Aur nahi mehel se jayegi jab tak Salima begum nahi aati... uske liye uska vachan bahot mayne rakhta hai...

Hamida was shocked to hear entire case... She was so touched by Radha's purity and was surprise by Jalal... His heartless son never shaken after giving even death penalty... or cutting some hand for even small crime... his heart never melted seeing their families' tears... When comes to law and justice, he doesn't tolerate any small crime... She was surprise to see his heart made with Iron is melting for Radha...

Hamida with witty tone: Jalal you have taken right decision... You never go against law and don't believe in seeing the situation, why person had to do crime... What you see has done and you make sure culprit get punished for it... but in this case you know why Radha has committed this crime... I think her purity and her divine cause is bothering you... She is indeed pure hearted very cultured girl. I understand her point of view to ... Law should be fair to everyone... Why Mughal bandi can do ibaadat and Hindu can't... But we cannot change law for Radha... Law is law... She gave him witty look... and said... Jalal khana kha lo... diwan ka vakt ho gaya hai... aur Radha nahi kha sakti tum to kha sakte ho na... She smile a little and walked out with her Royal grace...

Jalal finish his breakfast with heavy heart and got busy in his daily routine work... Radha got dressed Rahim... and drop him off for study... and going back towards Rahim's chamber... In between Hoshiyaar comes and tells her that Begum E Khaas Rukaiya begum wants to see you immediately ...

Radha with surprise walk with Hoshiyaar towards Rukaiya's chamber... Radha walks in Rukaiya's chamber...

Rukaiya with her attitude resting on her bed sitting while smoking hukka...

Hoshiyaar with very sober tone ... tells Rukaiya begum... Hajoor aapke hukum se hum Radha bandi ko pesh karte hai...

Rukaiya with her arrogant attitude looking at her from top to bottom... She was shocked to seeing her beauty... Her long hair... sharp features... deep eyes... fair spotless skin... and glow on her face... threatens her a little...

Radha bend a little and said Pranam...

Rukaiya with arrogant attitude... Aaj se jab bhi Rahim padhai ke liye madrasa me jaye us vakt tum humare paas kam karogi...

Radha with sober tone: Begum Sahiba, Jab hume Rahim ka khayal rakhne ke liye niyukat kiya gaya tha tab hume bataya gaya tha ki... Hume sirf Rahim ka hi khayal rakhna hai... Aur koi karya nahi karna hai... Aur hum humari jimevaari ache se puri kar rahe hai... Rahim hum se gul mil gaya hai... aur jab vo madarsa me to hai... hum unka hojra thik karte hai...aur humara khana aur sab kam kaj khatam karte hai...kyu ki poore din aur rat unhi ke sath vyast hote hai...

Rukaiya with loud scream: Gushtakh, Kamchor, Tu begum e khaas se jaban lada rahi hai... Teri Jaban ko iss vakt katva dungi... Tuje yaha kam karna hai to mere hukum se... Aaj tu pura Diwan E khaas aur pur Diwan ke bahar ka farsh saaf karogi...

Radha felt helpless... to work hear she need to do this work... But still for the last time she argue... Begum Sahiba: Iss vakt tej dhoop me Diwan ke bahar ka itna bada farsh hum kese itne kum samay me saaf kar sakte hai...

Rukaiya with angry tone: Tumse kam nahi hoga to yaha se dhake mar ke nikal diya jayega... Jao ab ... aese humar mooh dekhne se kam khatam nahi hoga...

Radha was so angry inside... she felt like killing Rukaiya...but she was helpless due to her promise... To get success in her mission...She had to follow her orders...

Sun is at his extreme agony... It is very hot... Radha has not eaten or drink anything... She started her work of cleaning floor and mopping it with water... for about two hours in hot sun... her face turn entirly red... she had never done this type of work... her entire face is sweating in this hot weather with this labor work... When she said yes for this mission she knew that she might end up doing this type of work... mentally she was prepared for this but in reality this work she felt not easy task...

Jalal came out of the diwan alone... It was time for his lunch... His eyes caught Radha mopping the floor... Her face was glowing in sun... She was all sweat, looked like she just came out of the shower... Her face turned all Red... He was shock to see her mopping the floor... She was Rahim's maid ... he walked swiftly towards her... asked Radha with firm voice... Yeh kya kar rahi ho Radha...

Radhah with surprising look... and her expression was like don't U see... but she replied with tiring tone with heavy breath... I am mopping floor Shenshah... Jalal realized he asked her wrong question... He asked her in questioning tone...Why... don't you have to take care of Rahim...

Radha with annoying attitude: Yes, Shenshah... don't worry, I will fulfill my duty... Rahim is at the school now ... so Rukaiya begum has given me this work while he is at the school... I think she wants me work 24 hours a day... I even didn't know that I will have to do this job as well until today...

Jalal could see her face... and he can tell seeing her condition, she has never done this type of laborious work... Immediately he knew why suddenly Radha has been given this work by Rukaiya. He knows Rukaiya very well... She doesn't spare any one easily and because of Radha... Jalal changed entire law and screamed at her for her rudeness and harshness ... She had to take revenge on someone... But harem his Rukaiya's responsibility and he can't tell her why she has given this work to Radha... That is too personal...

He thought for about a minute and said to Radha ... I am going to eat lunch with Rahim today and I want you to send some one to school to bring Rahim back immediately and get some help from Bawarchi khana and tell my personal maids to arrange food for me and Rahim in Lunch room...

Radha felt much relived... She knew why suddenly Jalal has taken decision to eat food with Rahim... She could see Jalal was melting for her... she could feel his eyes started to care about her... He didn't have anymore lust but he was looking at her with respect...

Before walking out he turned to see her ... and looked at her intensely... Radha also looked at him with same intensity...

Radha quickly took shower and change her dress... as per her instruction all the food served for Jalal and Rahim in Royal Grand dining room... Table was served... Radha hair was still wet... and she left her hair open since she had very short time to get dress... She quickly put kajal in her eyes... Small bindi ... and lots of glass matching bengals... and her chum chum kamar band...and her payal... Jalal entered in the room first... he saw Radha... and mesmerized... how quickly she took shower and she put very first time kajal in her doe like sharp beautiful eyes... Jalal was lost for a few second in her eyes... Rahim ran in the room with screaming...Choti Ammi... Rahim pass Jalal and went to his Choti Ammi and hug her tight...Radha also opened his hand to welcome to hug Rahim...

Jalal smirk seeing Rahim and Radha's intimacy and love for each other... He recalled words from Salima begum... No one can please Rahim in our palace... all maids has given up on him... He doesn't like anyone else other than me... he play tricks on all bandi and play alone... or run around me only... Jalal talks to himself... Salima begum kash aap yaha hoti iss vakt... ab use kisi ki jarurat nahi hai... use apni choti ammi mil gayi hai...

Rahim finally saw Jalal standing watching them... he break hug from Radha and does Aadab to Shenshah... Jalal carried him...Adab shehzade... and asked him...kesi rahi padhai aaj ki... Rahim with annoying expression: boriat... (Boring) usse to acha choti ammi hume padhti hai... Acha hua aaj hume jaldi chutti mil gayi... hum bach gaye ...

Jalal with smile ... Acha chalo ab khana kha le... Rahim almost jump on the chair and from his plate took food...

Radha almost screamed... Ruk Jaao Rahim... bhool gaye aap humne kya shikhaya tha apko ... chaliye rakh dijye vo vapas... Aur chaliye humare sath apne haath saaf karne ke aaiye...

Rahim with little upsetting way looked at Jalal... Jalal with smirk jaiye shehzade varna tumari choti ammi tum se khafa ho jayegi...

Rahim yeh to thik nahi hai... sirf bacho ko hi kyu...bado ko bhi hath saaf karke khana chahiye... chaliye shenshah aap bhi humare sath aaye... varna hum nahi jane vale...

Radha looked at Jalal to see his expression ... with smile Jalal Jo hukum mere shehzade ka chalo...

They both sat on the dining table... Rahim with questioning tone: Choti Ammi, Aap kya soch rahi hai... chaliye khana khane...

Radha with low tone: Rahim Aap apne abbu ke sath khana khao hum khana parose ge...

Rahim with little attitude scream... Koi hai yaha pe...

Dasi came in running... Jee Shehzade... he ordered her... you serve us food and stand here till we finish food... and Choti Ammi you eat with us like every day...

Jalal is observing how Rahim is loving her around...

Radha with low tone: Rahim, you eat I am fasting today ... I can't drink or eat anything... but I will sit next you and feed you with my hand...

Rahim with little upsetting tone: Choti ammi not fair... then I don't want to eat... Why you have to do fasting?...

Radha glance at Jalal and Jalal looked at her... Radha's eyes were filled with complain... and Jalal's with pain for his harsh decision...

Radha with very loving tone: Chote bachhe... bado se zid nahi karte...

Jalal suddenly words sleeped out his tongue in haste... Aur bade zid kar sakte hai...

Radha gave him annoying look... and asked him... sach kaha shenshah... Bado ki zid kabhi kabhi janleva hoti hai...

Rahim with stubbornly ... said I am not going eat unless you eat...

Hamida entered in lunch room... she heard Rahim... seeing Haminda... everyone did Addab to her... Radha got up and said pranam to her...

Hamdia caress her hand on Rahim's forehead... and Said don't be stubborn Rahim, Radha is fasting today and she can't eat or drink anything... you can't stay hungry...

Rahim with annoying look and Why you fasting choti Ammi... See your favourite sweet Gulab Jambun... you love that... how can you fast...

Radha with smile... and fasting is like a war... this war is to control your inner desire... this war is between your desire and your will power... Actually fasting doesn't make you weak... but it make you very strong... I will not eat this gulab jambun today but I will win over my desire...

Rahim with confuse look sometime I don't understand you choti ammi... Still can you tell me what you win... in war you win will state... but here you don't win anything...

No Rahim... No you win over your desire... You learn how to control your desire... the person who learns to win over his mind and heart ... no one can defeat them... They always win all wars...

Jalal asked Radha a question... Why you are fasting... tell him the truth... Answer his question...

Radha looked at him with bitterly and said... Rahim, I am punishing myself for not doing prayer to god today...

Jalal with questioning tone ask Radha: Do you believe in god...

Radha looked at him what kind of silly questions he is asking ... Of course ... I do believe in god...

Jalal ask another question: Do you believe that god in everything...

Radha knew immediately where he is taking the conversation... she said...yes I do believe god is in everywhere and everythings...

Jalal then why you have bound yourself to all ritual... close your eyes do prayer to god...

Radha with bitter smirk: Shenshah, aapki tark hum bade acche se samjte hai... (I understand your point of view very well)

If everyone started to prayer this way then in very small period of time... there will no existence of god... We do follow all ritual to let ourselves know that god exist... We human have very small memory... we needed reminder constantly that god exist... so before you do anything wrong your heart stops... why you need to do prayer five times a day... because it is your religion ritual and belief...

Hamdia was stunned with her argument... Rahim was all confuse ... Jalal was mesmerized in her knowledge and strong argument...

Jalal with content look ... He said Radha I am very impress with your argument... but still I want you to think about your decision... Sometimes King also bound in some boundaries... Certain changes are impossible for even king... and what you are doing is committing suicide... and I don't want be guilty for your suicide mission...

Hamida was shocked to see Jalal's care for Radha... She was so happy inside after many years this is the second time she saw his humanity because of Radha... Hamida's mind started to see Radha as a begum... She could see Jalal's love and care for her...

Radha with smirk ... Shenshah, don't worry as I told you I know I will survive... Why you will feel guilty... A person feels guilty only time when he or she knows inside of their heart whatever is happing is wrong and some where he or she is involved... After slapping on his forehead... with very sober tone she said: I don't want you to feel guilty ... whatever you are thinking is right for the saltant... You are doing, what is right and fair to everyone. I have no hard feeling for you... I understand your dilemma very well.

Hamida was so happy to hear her answer... She decided at that moment she will be begum e Jalal... No one had dared to talk to Jalal straight... and this girl is slapping him with her words in a sober tone... She is teaching him what is fair and what is unfair... Hamida's eyes moist with tears... Finally she saw a light in deep dark cave... and She saw Radha standing there to lite the divine love & humanity in his heartless son's heart...

Rahim with confuse look... He realizes his attention divided... Nothing he could understand what is going on... so with annoyance tone: Aap sab bhool gaye ... Yaha pe ek chota bacha betha hai... usko bhukh lagi hai...

Radha with innocent giggle... Are yeh to bahot badi galti ho gayi shehzade... she holds her ears with both hands...

Rahim with attitude tone: choti ammi, Aap apne kan pakodi to hume khana kon khilayega...

Everyone laugh in the room... After dinner Jalal cancelled all his meetings and decided to relax... He was so impressed with Radha... and he just wanted to spend time with himself alone... He has never felt this happy and sad at the same time... He was feeling different for the first time... Every day he meet with her she give him surprises... and today she has shaken him to his core... His mind... his heart ... everywhere only Radha was surrounded... he was feeling happy and sad ... thinking every conversation they had... Suddenly her pain was giving him pain... He was feeling sad seeing her mopping floor in burning hot sun...

After dinner Hamida said to Rahim with complaining tone: Rahim, Jabse aapki choti ammi aai hai aap to hume bhool gaye ho... She looked at Radha and said... Rahim ko leke humare hojre me thodi der aa jana... hume Rahim aur aap dono se kuch der baat kar lenge...

Radha with very pleasant tone: Ji... Maryam Makhani Begum sahiba... Hum thodi hi der me Rahim ko leke aapke hojre me aa jayenge...

Rukaiya fuming with anger enter in Jalal's chamber... Jalal is lost in his dream world... He is resting on sofa... He saw Rukaiya's face and he knew why she is angry... but as soon as she saw Jalal looking at her... she changed her expression and in mannered way did Aadab...

Jalal with pleasant tone Said, Aaiye Rukaiya begum... Kahiye kya shikayat leke aai hai aaj aap. Rukaiya nahi Jalal, Hum to aapse aese hi milne aaye hai...

Jalal knew what is brewing in her mind... He knew why she came in his chamber at this time...

Jalal with cheerful tone: Rukaiya, Aaj ka khana lazeez tha... bade dino baad Ammi Jaan aur Rahim ke saath khana khaya... (He knew she won't be able to control herself)

Ruakiya with annoying tone: Aur vo khoobsurat bandi ne itni chah se khilaya ke aap ka khana aur bhi lazeez ho gaya...

Jalal with pretending: Koun bandi Rukaiya... Humari kuch samaj me nahi aa raha... Pehli O me bate kyu kar rahi ho...

Rukaiya with little angry tone: Jalal hum aapko bade ache se jante hai... Khubsurat aurat ko dekha nahi ke aapke din aur raat rangin ho jate hai... Hume pata hai aaj kal aapki nazare vo kamjat bandi Radha pe hai... Hume to yeh soch ke bhi ghin aati hai... aap kese kisi bandi ke saath... aur vo bhi ek hindu bandi jis ki aukat ek nachne vali se kum hai...

Jalal with roar and extreme anger got up from sofa ... RUKAIYA... apni jaban pe lagam do... tum kisi aurat ko itna kese gira sakti ho bina kuch uske bare me jane... Vo hindu ladki se jyada humne aur koi pak ladki nahi dekhi... Vo chahti to vo ek pal me humare bistar pe hoti... Shayad usko bhi pata hai ki hume vo pehli nazar me dil pe chu gayi hai... Us ne itne dino me ek baar bhi hume apne hushan ke jaal me fasne ki koshish nahi ki... Aur tum usko Napak bol rahi ho... Uska dil shayad tum se bhi jyada saaf hai... uski aankho me sacchai ka noor hai... Aur sun lo apne kan khol ke aaj tak humne us bandi ko chua tak nahi... Aur wo hamare bistar ki ronak kabhi nahi banegi... Uski pakizgi kisi paraye mard ko chune ki izzazat nahi degi...

Rukaiya shocked and freezed to hear this...

Jalal with angry tone: Rukaiya, Hum aaram farmana chahte hai... Tum ab ja sakti ho...

Rukaiya was traumatized with Jalal's attitude... She never thought Jalal can think such high for any women... He always treats women like his toy... he never show respect for any women in his eyes other than very few close relatives... Her heart filled with insecurity from Radha... some unknown fear captured her... Without doing anything Radha threaten Rukaiya to extreme...

Radha and Rahim entered in Hamida's chamber with her permission... Hamida welcome Radha and Rahim with very pleasant smile... Rahim hug Hamida with cute smile... and asked her aaj aap humse kya khelegi... Hamida with regret Rahim achanak se hamare sar me dard ho raha hai... Aaj kafi dhoop se... shayad usi ke karan hamara sir kafi bhari hai... Par aapke liye humare paas kuch hai... Rahim almost jumped with curiosity... Kaya hai dadi jaan... bataiye Na... Pehle aapko hum eek acchi wali chummi deni padegi... Nahi dadi Jaan pehle aap hume bataiye bad me aapko mithi wali chummi dunga... Hamida with smile... bada shatir banta hai... acha waha pe dekh... kya hai... He saw wooden horse and seeing that Rahim got so excited and scream love you dadi jaan... and hugged her with sweetest kiss... Radha also cheer with Rahim and Hamida...

Hamida with very loving tone called Radha... aao yaha betho hamare paas...

Radha with very courtesy went and sit on the sofa... and asked hamida... Aap ke sar me bahot dard hai...

Hamida with little sad tone: Ha yeh sab umar ke karan hota rehta hai...

Radha with very exciting tone: Kya me aapke sar me tel malish kardu... humari masa kehti hai humse acchi tel malish duniya me koi nahi kar sakta... humare hatho me jadoo hai... zat se aapka sar dard yuhi gayab ho jayega...

Hamida smirk with her innocent talk and said... Acha to chalo dekhte hai... tum hamara sar dard kese bhagati ho...

Radha started oil massage... and with very loving tone she said... You know Marium makhani begum sahib... Whenever I see you... I feel like I met with my masa... She is just like you ... very humble, sober and polite... Shenshah is very lucky to have mother like you...

Hamida was enjoying oil massage... She said Radha... Sach me tumhari masa sach kehti hai... Tumhare hatho me jadoo hai... Aaj tak kisi ne itni achhi malish nahi ki hamare sar ki... Hamida asked Radha: Aur koun koun hai tumhare ghar me...

Radha with sad tone: Bas ek chota bhai and choti behen... aur koi nahi hai humare parivar me... Bapusa to Yuddh se kabhi vapas hi nahi aaye... Hum bade uccha parivar se hai... hum ne kabhi koi taklif nahi dekhi... Hamre paas badi si haveli aur bahot sare das aur dasi the... par yudha me hamre rajay ki parasth hui usme hum ne humare bapusa haveli aur paisa sab kuch gava diya... Hume ishwar ki krupa se ek asharm me aashra mila... Ab humara parivar humari jimevari hai... so humne yaha pe kam karne ke liye aa gaye...

Hamida was enjoying her talk... She wanted to know more about Radha... so She ask... tumari ab tak shadi nahi hui...

Radha with little sad face... Yahi to rona hai... Humari masa hamre piche hai vivah ke liye par hume koi ab tak pasand hi nahi aaya... Aur bapu ke jane ke baad humne bol diya masa ko hume abhi vivah nahi karna... Hamare liye bahot bade bade ghar se vivah ke prastav aate hai par hum ne har baar bat tal di... par shayad iss baar hume pata nahi kese na kahenge...

Hamida looked back and said ... Radha...Kyu ab kya hua... Kisko na kahogi ...

Radha with very sad tone: Nahi Jis din hum yaha aane ke liye nikal rahe the usi din... Raja Surya Pratap Singh ka humare sath vivah ke liye rista aaya tha... Aur vo itne bade Raja hai... vo ek rajay ke nahi par char rajyo ke Rajvanshi Raja hai... suna hai vo bahot veer hai... Par hume unse vivah nahi karna hai... Pata nahi masa kese vo prastav ko na bolegi... Hum to vaha se turant nikal gaye the masa se na bol ke par hume nahi lagta iss bar humari ek chalne vali hai...

Hamida with smile: Radha, Par kyu tumhe unse sadi nahi karni... itne bade Raja hai... Tum vaha par raj karogi...

Radha with little annoying tone: Aap bhi humari masa ki tarah hi baat karti hai... vo bhi hume vahi kehti hai...Par humari to koi sunta hi nahi...

Hamdia with smirk: Radha, batao hume kyu nahi karni tumhe sadi unse...

Radha : Sabse pehli baat vo humse nahi humare roop se aakarshit huve hai... aur doosri baat Unki sadi ek baar ho chuki hai... Hum kabhi nahi chahenge ki humare pati ki aur bhi koi patni ho... Hum to chahege vo hume itna prem kare ki unki duniya me humare alava aur koi na ho... Hume koi Raja se vivah nahi karna... Jiske aas paas itni sari sundar dasi aur patni ho... Aur bahot ahem baat to humne aapko batai hi nahi... Vo humse jyada bahadur ho... Unko hume shastra vidhya me parast karna hoga... and so far I have defeated all of the man who wants to marry me... but I am worried... I have heard Raja Surya Vadan is very brave... and he might come here to meet me...

Hamida was so shocked to hear Radha... Her desire was not less than any princess... She is working as dasi but she rejected proposal of King... She realize she is very independent and brave girl. She doesn't give up easily ... She doesn't care for money or power... Hearing her one wife condition her dreams shatter into a pieces...

Hamida asked her cross question... Radha agar tumhe kisi se mohabbat ho gayi to kya karogi...

Radha with smile... Vese aesa kabhi hoga nahi... Kyuki humse bahadoor to humne ab tak dekha nahi... aur ho bhi gaya to hum usse pehle ek vachan mange ge... ki voh dursi bar vivah nahi karega...

Hamida ask her another question... Par uski pehle se hi begum hui to...

Radha with laugh... to phir hum unse prem kese ho sakta hai...

Hamdia asked her another question: Agar Raja Suryabhan tumse bahdoor nikle to tum kya karogi...

Radha with confusing tone: Shayad iss bar masa hume doli me bitha hi degi... and with innocently giggle...

Hamida talk to herself... Jalal U have no idea... what you are going to go through... Radha is not easy to achieve... It is going to be tuff than winning a war... and I can tell soon you are going to fall in love with this girl... or may be already in love with her... Khuda tum pe rehem kare...

Radha with smile said to Hamida... Aaj hume kitne dino baad acha lag raha hai... Aesa lag raha hai ki hum apni masa ke sar me tel malish kar rahe hai... aur vohi humse sare prashan puch rahi hai... Par hum aapse ek baat bataye... Hume apne pati ka to nahi pata par ishwar se prathna karenge ki humari saas aap jesi pyari hi ho... bilkul aap jesi mamta ki murat ho...

Hamida turned back and with big smile... Allah tumhari murad puri kare... Aur tum jo bhi ghar me jaogi vaha par roshni hi bikherogi... tum bhi bahot masum aur payari ho...

Radha with lots of love and sobre tone... begum sahiba aap bistar par let jaiye aankhe band karke... aapko turant hi nind aa jayegi...

Hamida with smirk... Sach me Radha humara sar dard bilkul gayab ho gaya hai... Ab hum thoda aaram kar lete hai... Hamida lay down on the bed... and Radha continue massaging quietly... Rahim also came next to Hamida and went to sleep...

Hamida finally went to sleep... Radha is still sitting on the bed next to Hamida...

There was loud announcement of Jalal's arrival... and Radha saw him walking in... She almost ran towards him...and said isshhh quite... push him out of the room with her oily hands...

Jalal was shocked and surprise with her behavior... With low tone he asked her... Kya hua Radha... She whisper ... issh... abhi abhi Rahim aur Marium Makhani begum sahiba soi hai... unke sar me dard tha... hum ne unhe tel malish ki tab jake vo soi hai... aap bahar chaliye... abhi vo vishram kar rahi hai

Jalal with same whisper... par hum kese jaye bahar... tumne hume pakad ke jo rakha hai... Radha's face turned blush... seeing herself so close to him... she swiftly leave his hand and walk backward to steps... Jalal give her intense gaze with out a blink...

Jalal with deep intense stare move forward towards her... she was looking at him with surprising and scary expression and walking back towards wall... every one step he took towards her... she took two steps backward... Her entire face filled with fear... She hit to wall... and Jalal swiftly walk and lock her with his both hands... They both didn't blink for a second... Cool wind blew and some of her wavy hair landed on her face... Jalal softly blew on her face so he can see her face clearly ... which gave her sensual tickle... she unknowingly close her eyes for a few seconds... Jalal again mesmerized in her long lashes...and her beautiful close eyes... Her simply divine beauty was making him uncontrollable... She slowly open her eyes and in whisper sound... Shenshah, Don't dare to touch me... With sensual tone Jalal smirk... I have not touched you yet... But you are going to now... She gave him angry and annoying look at him... Shenshah, What you are saying... How dare you said that... Jalal with little angry and commending tone... Never say dare Radha... don't forget that... You are talking to King of Kings... Jalalludin Mohammad... Radha with same commending tone: I rather prefer to die than touch you Shenshah... King of Kings... Jalalludin Mohammad... Jalal loved her strong fiery attitude... Every rejection of her was creating more and more desire for her... He gave her romantic smirk but firm tone he said... If you don't wipe my oily hands now with your dupatta than I might kill you... How dare you touched me with your dirty oily hands you stupid girl...

Radha realize in a haste she hold him with her oily hands... She gave him upsetting childish look and grab his palm in her hand started to wipe his hand carefully with her dupatta... Jalal smirk seeing her angry cute annoying face... He has not seen any girls like her... Her attitude was making him dreamy in day time... She took his another palm in his hand started to wipe his other hand... Jalal squish her hand a little... She gave him angry look... which Jalal was expecting... he was enjoying seeing her angry and annoyed... her nose turn red in anger... He release her hand from his... and pull her nose cutely and said my angry tigress your nose turn red in anger and see I have dare to touch you... do what ever you can... and with a wink at her he walk out of from their... he walks few step and turned back to see her cute annoying angry face... He walked out so swiftly... everything happened in a flick and She looked at him with confuse look...

It was beautiful evening... wind started to blow cooler after harsh sunny day was giving everyone peacetime... Radha started to feel little weak due to her entire day fasting and her throat started to crave for water... She had done many fasting in the past but Nirjala always tuff to her... She did only one day Nirjala fast ... This was only first days and she had to go another four days with out water and food... She said to herself... she can do anything and everything... She was pleased everything was going as per planning but with little unexpected problems... but she was very much confuse with Jalal behavior and personality...

Sun set with his gloden glory and moon rise with his silver peaceful glaze on the earth... Weather was getting cooler and wind were blowing high... Radha put on few candles... Rahim finished eating ... Now it was his fun time... He started with some puzzles and games... Radha enjoyed playing with him... Soon was time for bed... Jalal couldn't wait for night to come... so he can be with Radha again... Jalal stopped at window... to see inside the room...

Rahim notice some weakness in his Choti Ammi... Rahim with his little hand cupped Radha's with tender soft little hands and with very emotional tone he asked... Choti Ammi, Are you feeling fine... you seems very tired...

Radha's eyes glemed with his care and inncoent concern for her... she took him in his arms... His warmth touch was giving her strength to fight... In few days their heart connected like mother and son...

Seeing her moist eyes Jalal heart cried in pain... His smirk vanished...

She replied to Rahim with strong voice: I am feeling very good... when I have son like Rahim how can I feel weak... She kissed him on his cheeks... and said it's time for to go to bed...

Rahim with arguing ... but I am waiting for Shenshah to come... I want to hug him and sleep... and with annoying tone... I forgot to ask you, but why you didn't sleep in the night with me... I saw you in the night sleeping down on the floor...

Radha with confusing tone: Rahim this bed is small and Shenshah is so huge... so we all can't fit in this bed... You know him, how he sleep occupying entire bed... his leg in one direction... his head in other ... and his hand in some other ... she murmur... he don't know how to sleep properly...

Jalal heard Radha saying... him Huge... which annoyed him... but on her murmur he smirk... he was enjoying they were talking about him...

Rahim with favoring his Abbu; Choti Ammi, You don't understand anything... Shenshah is not huge... but he is strong... you have seen his big muscles... he can fight with forty people at the same time... Shenshah is very brave... He is not petu like agdha sahib... and he giggled...

Radha and Rahim both giggled... Radha said, Rahim, acche bache bado ko aese nahi kehte... bahot buri bat ... Rahim said sorry choti Ammi par aap kyu hasi fir... Radhah with a smirk... ok baba I am sorry too...

then she said Rahim... have you seen fighting Shenshah with forty people... Nahi na... It's all stories... Probably he fight with four people and saying forty... and even in that he lost probably... she giggle...

Rahim with upsetting tone: Choti Ammi... I am not going to talk to... You not listening to me and not letting me talk... I have seen Shenshah fighting with forty people alone... You have not seen him practicing sword... No one can defeat him... My Abbu is the strongest and bravest men on the entire world... I have heard people saying that he can finish half army of any foj by himself alone... and don't giggle like this... He is the best...

Jalal was feeling so proud on himself and feeling great how Rahim can't hear a word against his abbu...

Radha with surprise look... Vese hum suni sunai bato me yakin nahi karte par Rahim ki bat ko hum kese na keh sakte hai... Radha with teasing tone: you know Rahim... aap na apne abbu ke bahot bada chamcha hai... and started to tickle him... They both giggled...

Rahim with cute face with request... Choti Ammi, Kahani sunao na... then made a cute little puppy face... Ok... Chalo humare rajkunvar ko kahani sunate hai... Konsi khani suna yei...hmmm... Pari o Wali... Rahim got excited...

Jalal entered in the Chamber with saying... Rahim... Kahani to hum bhi sunege...

She looked at Jalal and with taunting... ab tak to hum kahani... sirf ek pari o ki sunane vale the par ab use me ek Jallad bhi aa gaya hai... Jalal felt little sad with her taunting...

Rahim with impatience... Choti Ammi ... Please start story...

Once upon a time... Long Long back... and Far Far away... in other side of the sky... There was Fairy land...where every thing was beyond beautiful... and preetiest... in Fairy land King and Queen were happily living with their only daughter ... they named their little princess name... Pari... She was so beautiful... All of the fairies were jealous of her beauty... and all fairy prince wanted to marry her... Her beauty was beyond any words...

In between Rahim interrupted ... I got it... she looked like you... right... No one can be more beautiful then my Choti Ammi... So you are my Pari princess...

Jalal with smirk... I agree with you shehzade... No one can be more beautiful then your Choti Ammi...

Radha gave him annoyed look but... her face blushed at the same time... Jalal smirk seeing this both expression on her face...

Radha continue story... Rahim... This Pari princess is very good hearted ... kind... brave... and curious... She always enjoys reading and listening about the world under the sky... Earth... She was very much fascinated to hear about humans... She heard and read lot of story about brave charming... handsome prince... Nothing gave her much pleasure as to hear about the earth world... She enjoys every little thing in the life... She is her dad's favorite daughter... Her dad allowed her breaking all the boundaries... She was very much pampered by his father... Her mother was worried always one day Pari will be in big trouble... but Pari wanted to enjoy her life... she wanted explore the world... She wanted see Prithvi lok... She wanted to feel the air... She wanted to smell roses... She wanted take shower in waterfalls... she heard many stories about very brave prince... She wanted to see the human kingdom...

Then one day Pari decided to visit Prithvi lok... She asks permission from her mother to visit Prithvi Lok... Her mother got shocked and denied immediately... If any human or devil will touch you will never be able to come back to Fairy land... door of the Fairy land will be close for you forever... Then stubborn Pari doesn't listen to her mother and ask her father to convince her mother... And finally she gets permission to go Human world... Prithvi lok... Her mother advises her to go in middle of the night and go to deep jungle where no one is their... With so much excitement ... Pari came down on the Earth in the evening... (She didn't listen to her mother Rahim...instead of night she came in evening) Sun was setting down... entire sky was glowing with orange glow... she smell flowers... Her happiness was beyond any words... She was completely lost drenching in cool waterfall... she was singing with melodious voice... and suddenly a huge beast come and grab her hand...

Rahim with scary face... Choti ammi then what happen to Pari... what you mean by beast... Radha said... a mean huge human... and she looked deep in Jalal's eyes... and continued... the beast forcefully kissed on pari's cheeks... Pari scream out loud... For a second beast got scared and leave her hand... and Pari quickly with her magic run away from their and went back to pari lok... while telling this story Radha's eyes moist.. And her voice started to chok... and trembles a little...

Jalal with confuse look watching her ... Rahim with curiosity ... Choti ammi what happened then... Radha took a deep breath and control her emotions and continue the story...

Pari went back to Pari lok and at the gate she tried to use her magic power to open the gate... but her magic didn't work... King and Queen both came at the gate but and they couldn't even open it... then her mother asked her...did any human touched you... with anxious tone Pari told everyone what happen with her ... Then her mother with tears said if you want your power and magic back ... you will have to change than beast bad human to good human being... and you will need to marry him then only you can come back to Fairy land forever... King and queen both were crying for their daughter... and with heavy heart they bless her daughter and said good bye...

Pari with very sad heart came back to Jungle... Her all magic was gone and she became human now ... and she decided to go to the beast Palace... Pari was all alone in prithvi lok... Jalal could see Radha was choking ... Her voice was getting heavier... at the last sentence...when she said she was all alone... her eyes filled with immense pain and sorrow...

Rahim with curiosity then what happen then Choti ammi... Radha with low and sad tone... Rahim I am very tired can I finish this story tomorrow...

Jalal understood something is bothering Radha... This story has opened her wounds... Her face turned completely pale while telling this story...

To divert Rahim's mind... Jalal said... I know this story... I will tell you what happened next...

Pari comes to palace and started to work for the bad devil king... and then one day Jallad King saw her ... and fall in love with her... Pari hates him but little by little Pari see good side of that Jallad king... King was also lonely... he had no one to love... so he became cruel with everyone... but then Pari teach him humanity and how to love people... then both of them fall in love with each other and they marry ... and then they leave happily ever after...

Rahim clapped after hearing the story... Jalal caress on his head and said... Rahim beta go to sleep now... Rahim closed his eyes like a good boy... Jalal is looking at Radha... Her eyes was filled with immense pain... and lowered down in deep thoughts... Radha was feeling so suffocated... She ran out in to balcony... She tried not shed tears... to control her tears she closed her eyes... but her tears flood out from her close eyes... Radha was feeling vulnerable... she felt nothing has left in her life... she is all alone... Her all wounds opened unknowingly... She never felt this sad in her life... In few minutes Rahim went to sleep... Jalal walk in the balcony slowly... and saw Radha in immense pain... her eyes are close... she is standing by the wall resting her head on wall... tears are flooding without any sob... He could feel that she is failing to control her tears...

It was impossible for Jalal to see in her tears... He wanted to give her comfort... he wanted to give his shoulder to cry on... but he was not sure how she will react if he try to give his support...

Jalal couldn't control himself seeing her in this condition... His heart sink seeing her in tears... he walked near her and with lot of care... softly cupped her face... and wiped her tears... and at the same time Radha was feeling she is alone in this world... She slowly opened her eyes... and seeing her painful eyes... Jalal couldn't hold himself any longer... He took her in his broad strong arms to give his warmth... It was not lust but it was his care for her... He just wanted to make her feel better... Radha broke in loud cry... Jalal caress on her back and head to give her comfort... Radha cried for few seconds... and she wake up from her sorrow in shock and found herself in his arms... She moved away from him with a Jerk... with loud voice... she screamed... humse door rahi ye Shenshah... then she sit in the corner of the balcony and struggling controlling her tears... Jalal sit little far from her... he knew when he hugged her she might scream but he was helpless... He couldn't control his desire to give her comfort...

Radha realized she screamed at him for no reason... He was just trying to make her feel better... She was feeling much better after his warmth comfort... with low tone... she said to Jalal... Shenshah, Hume maaf kardijye... hume aap pe iss tarah chillana nahi chahiye tha...

Jalal with sober tone; Radha, Hum samaj sakte hai... Tum se yeh anjane me hua... Jalal with concerning tone asked her...

Radha... tum bura na mano to ek baat puche...

Radha looked at him... and with low tone... Ji Shenshah...

Jalal with sad tone: Radha, humne tumhari ankho me ek udasi dekhi hai... Tumhari anko me hum ek gehra dard mehsoos karte hai... Aur humare liye bepanaha nafrat... Hume pata nahi kyu par tumhari ankho me dekh ke ek ajib sa mehsoos karte hai... kabhi kabhi hume tumahari yeh khoobsurat Ankho se dar lagta hai aur kabhi kbahi hum iss me doob jana chate hai...

Radha with shock looked at him with intense look... She never thought Jalal was observing her so deeply... She never imagines Jallad Jalal will talk to her with his heart... His words were filled with so much pain... She could feel that he was feeling her pain...

With low tone she said... Shenshah, Yeh sach hai...ki hum aapse nafrat karte hai... Hum ne bachpan se Mughal se nafrat karte the... Par aaj humare Jivan hume yaha pe hi khich ke le aaya... Aur humne jo suna tha aapke bare us se humare man ne aapke liye ek tasvir bana di thi... jis se iss jivan me mitana namumkin hai...

Pata hai Shenshah, Humari masa humse har bar shikayat karti thi... hum kabhi nahi rote... hume kitni bhi badi chot lage phir bhi kabhi humari ankho se ek aansoo nahi gira... Hum samjte hai kamjor log ansoo bahate hai... Par shayad aaj pata nahi kese kamjor ho gaye... Sach kehte hai... Jivan samay aane pe sab kuch sikha deta hai... aur shayad hum bhi aaj ansu bahana shikh gaye... Par hume bahot afsos hai humare aansoo ne bhi humse daga kar diya... aur aapke samne hi bikhar ke toot pade...

Shenshah hum aapse ek baat puchna chahte hai...

Jalal ...Ha kaho Radha... Radhah with little annoying tone: Kya aapko nahi lagta aap ek dasi se kuch jayadi najdiki badha rahe hai... Yeh aapke hodde ke liye shobha nahi deta...

Jalal with little smile on his face: Kyu Radha, Jallad ko insaan ban ne ka koi hakk nahi...

Radha with little angry tone: Ha nahi hai... Kahi bar kahi gunah aese hote hai... jiski koi mafi nahi hoti... Jallad ne jo kiya hai pari ke sath... vo Aapki kahani vali Pari maaf kar sakti hai... Par Radha ki Pari kabhi Jallad ko maaf nahi karegi...She swiftly got up and said shubh ratri Shenshah...

Precap: Radha gets extremely dehydrated... Meena Bazar competition...

What U all think? Will Jalal change the law for Radha? OR he will let Radha leave palace... I want an answer, please... This update is 10000 words... So next update 15 days later..

Edited by shahbhavini - 9 years ago
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yey me first di first time I comment first on any of your work i always desire for it and today me first first first I am excited just like a school girl now come to story Its like commoner vs king but not commoner vs king its princess vs king actually I love Radha rahim and hamida trio a lot Jalal is changing lets see radha forgive him or not but i must say she slowly get influenced by him his changing attitude I like chum chum of radha rukaiyaa is pathetic jalal favouring a bandi surely made her insecure She doesnt have humanity I love strong will of radha and story telling is marvolous aur kya likhu aapki praise praise karte time words kam pad jate hai awesome fantastic classic aur aapko jo words aate ho soch lo
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Lovely update Bhavini👏

I m liking how Jo/Radha's opinion about Jalaal is slowly changing as she is seeing his good, caring side...

Poor Radha had to fast all day😭 and that Ruqu😡 made her work even more knowing well that she was fasting...but Jallu's concern and trying to make her eat by reasoning with her that she can pray anywhere as god is everywhere...it was sweet!!

Jallu is in delimma to make such a big change or not even though he does agree with the point Jo made that all religions shud have equal previlidges...i think he will end up changing the law for her!!

I m confused about the story Jo told who's story is it?? If it her's and Jallu's then y didnt he recognise her??
I have a feeling that she heard that story from her sis or friend with whom it happened and came to take revenge but it was not Jallu who did it...

I loved Radha-Hamida interaction👍🏼 she is sooo good at making out things...she already thinks that Jallu will fall or has fallen in love with Radha!! She is happy to see his son's heart awakening and getting active👏
She also thinks Jallu will have a hard time getting Radha😆😆 it was so hilarious when she said KHUDA AAP PAR REHEM KARE for Jallu😆😆

I loved this chapter😃😃
Reaveal soon what happend and y Jo wants to take revenge from Jallu😳😳
Edited by rishbala3018 - 11 years ago
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I liked this story a lot. A strong Radha/Jodha has come to find justice for herself from Jalal. A different take where she is not the beautiful princess for him. He is falling for the kind and strong hearted common woman
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Originally posted by: TheSunShine

I liked this story a lot. A strong Radha/Jodha has come to find justice for herself from Jalal. A different take where she is not the beautiful princess for him. He is falling for the kind and strong hearted common woman

VOW IN FEW LINES... U HAVE DRAW ENTIRE PICTURE OF THE STORY... BEAUTIFUL COMMENT... I WANTED TO WRITE DIFFERENT CONCEPT BUT STILL TRADITIONAL... I WAS REALLY SCARED AT FIRST ... I KNOW MANY READERS STILL CAN'T DIGEST JODHA'S AS A BANDI... I AM REALLY HAPPY TO SEE UR COMMENT... THANK U SO MUCH
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THANKS SO MUCH

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