RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th - Page 3

Oh my god darling it was amazing , magical it is definetley the best chapter for me so far.
Hamida and jalal part is surpraising even though it was very good . i felt as eager as jalal to meet radha. But that conversation played a major role in the next part . and here comes the major part jalal and jodha. From the very first scene it was very clear before my eyes you made them alive and hug was peak. Beautiful huggg. Pleasent the first ever beautiful moment where they both expressed true feelings with out any egos. After that there was little drop and monotonous feeling in the story because of continuous disagreement from both sides always fighting for their ego. But immediately you brought the major change by jalal provoking her about her true feelings. Finally slowly story is moving forward . jalal got some thing suspicious about jodha that was one more peak in the story. Finally jodha the poor soul completely charmed by his man and opened up herself before him that was beautiful. Got little busy i will answer your later. Thank you very much for the update. Take care

The best morning msg i have got ❤️

Many many congratulations for new thread di

Amazing update di
i just loved the whole encounter between jalal and jodha they both love each other but deny the truth because of ego.
And the way jalal ignore maham is really nice.
Ijust loved your writing style you know how to stike readers

and the answer of your question is
1. Don't change anything it is awesome story.
2. The peace of story is slow acording me you have to increase its speed little more if you are comfertable or else keep it as.
3. I love jodha's character because she is intelligent, brave, selfless, and very well know how to deal with any situation.

Eagerly waiting for next chappy...
Thanks for pm di.

rahim is my favourite character

loved the whole encounter between akdha

A wonderful and such long-awaited continuation! Jalal and Jodha painted themselves into a stalemate (as in chess). He still cann't to yield to his ego in the open love, she cann't surrender, because she not trust his love, and she is afraid of losing respect for him that which she has subconsciously and this will be her loss, defeat
And Jalal has to rise to the selfless refusal itself in love to Jodha and he must became equal to her. They are now equal on their inner nobility, but there is no trust between them and secret destroys their relationship.
The first time I read your story on FB. It is also very exciting, but this story - a completely new qualitative leap you, as a writer. All the characters are more clear and prominent. And this Jalal is more holistic personality. Jalal in "H o L" is more like a nervous young man 20th century. Jodha more weaker. But your 39-chapter - absolutely amazing!!! There's quite a different Jalal - a wise, reliable and manly. I hope you will some day continue this story.
In this story a very strong characters, very bright. I don't want to change anything in your chapter, but I would also like to more dynamic relations between Jalal and Jodha. 😃
My preferences Jalal, Jodha. And Rahim - for the courage to protect his friend outside of social differences and against adults.
With great impatience I will wait and hope for a speedy continuation.

Congratulations for new thread dii..
Update was stupendous 👏
jalal shouted on hamida 😲
Akdha's arguments were never ending...
Both love each other insanely but can't confess..
Thanku for pm
continue soon

Was a silent reader till date. Not regular on forum as well as am busy often. But now I really have to appreciate your writing skills. The way you describe emotions and characters is just brilliant. Continue soon, Di 👏