AsYa FF: Healing Her With His Love- Thread 2 Link below- 28th Apr

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Plot: Zoya Farooqui is a singer in Seventh Heaven suite sharing the staff room with the candy counter girl Humeira Siddiqui. Zoya hates rich people as she thinks they only use their money in wrong ways and have no emotions. When Asad and his friends enters her and her friends lives, Zoya starts hating them as they are rich. She judges them that they are bad people since they are rich. Sometimes, her acts shows as if she is hiding many things about her which not even her friends know. Why does Zoya hates rich people? Is Zoya hiding some secrets of herself which no one has any idea of?



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Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Promo 2

Part 12

Part 13

Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

Part 20

Part 21

Part 22

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue:

A group of teenagers Asad, Ayaan, Nikhat, Ria, Farhan, Aditi n Imraan came to one of d best suites of Delhi Seventh Heaven to spend some days chilling out there before d college starts. D manager welcomed them. They lukd around d lobby n went to d candy counter to get some candies. Humeira was in charge of d candy counter.

"Hi guys," said Humeira.

"So, u n ur friend work in dis suite?" asked Ayaan.

"Yes," replied Humeira, "Sorry, I cud not talk more wid u all."

Humeira n her friend had met them at college wen they went to do their admission. Asad, Ayaan, Ria, Farhan, Aditi n Imraan also had to do admission while Nikhat was their senior by 2 years. Asad lukd around d suite as if to find someone.

"Where is ur friend?" asked Asad, "Vo dikhaayi nahi de rahi hai."

"She will be here in some time for singing," replied Humeira.

"Ohhh," said Asad.

Humeira's friend works as a singer in dis suite. Asad recalls how he had met Humeira's friend in college. Her name was Zoya. He tried to talk wid her but he did not knew why she did not talked wid them in a friendly way like Humeira but talked wid them coldly.

Humeira's friend Zoya came in d lobby along wid singing band. She was lukn very beautiful in a blue knee-length dress n hair styled in lovely curls. Zoya n others tuk their position on d stage. Asad n his friends sat on one of d couch in d lobby.

Zoya lukd at Asad n his friends n was shocked. She was unhappy to see them. She recalled how while standing in d long line for admissions Imraan reached late than his friends so he had to stand very behind in d line. He gave some money to poor students as bribe to get ahead in d line. Zoya was angry wid him for using his money in d wrong way. Wen they met d group, Humeira talked wid them in a friendly way but Zoya was cold wid them. Zoya n Humeira got admission in d college by passing in d scholarship exam. She n Humeira made 3 friends Ehsaan, Karan n Sameera who also got admission thru scholarship.

"So, we have to tolerate these rich spoilt-brats here who can even bribe others wid their money," thinks Zoya bitterly.

Zoya hates rich people as she thinks they have no emotions n they use people for their benefits. Due to Imraan's act, Zoya thinks dat his friends r also him.

"Whatever," thinks Zoya, "I am here for my job not waste my time thinking of them."

D other singing band members started playing d music of d song Lehrein.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WYDc1JQqduY[/YOUTUBE]

Zoya started singing.

Khoyi khoyi si hun main
Kyun yeh dil ka haal hai
Dhundli saari khwab hai
Ulja har khayal hai
Saari kaliyan mujha gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharonde reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi

Rah me kal kitni chirag the
Samne kal phoolon ki baag thi
Iss se kahun kaun hai jo sune
Kante hi kyun maine hai chune
Sapne mere kyun hai kho gaye
Jage hain kyun dil me gum mere
Saare kaliyan mujha gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharande reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi

Na na na...

Kya kahun kyun ye dil udas hai
Ab koi door hai na paas hai
Choo le jo dil wo baatein ab kahan
Wo din kahan raatein ab kahan
Jo bhi dhakhal hai ab khawab sa
Ab dil mera hai betaab sa
Saari kaliyan mujha gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharande reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi beh gaye

Asad n his friends were amazed by her singing. He felt as if there was some pain in her voice n her expressions also conveyed d pain.

"Such a beautiful voice," said Asad.

"She also has a hot body," said Imraan lukn at her up n down.

"Imraan, not again," said Ria irritatingly.

"Okay sorry," said Imraan reluctantly.

"U better be," said Ria.

After Zoya was done singing, she went to Humeira.

"Wat these guys r doing here?" asked Zoya.

"They came to chill here for 2 days," replied Humeira.

"Now, we need to tolerate these rich spoilt brats here for 2 days," said Zoya unhappily.

"Wats wrong wid dis, Zoya?" asked Humeira.

"I told u wat Imraan did na," replied Zoya.

"Zoya darling, wat he did does not means he n his friends r bad," said Humeira.

"U don't abt these rich people as much as I do," said Zoya n walked away 4m there.

"Wat does she mean?" asked Humeira, "Why she hates rich people so much?"

Zoya left d lobby n came back after some time in a stylish short purple dress. Asad lukd at Zoya who was now in her normal straight hair. He went to her.

"Can u tell us abt our rooms?" asked Asad wanting to start a conversation.

"I think its d job of bellboys to show d rooms not me who is not a singer," replied Zoya.

"Sorry," said Asad n went back to his seat.

Zoya rolled her eyes n went to Humeira.

"Wow Zoya, u r wearing a stylish dress 4m Ritu Kumar's latest collections," said Humeira wid a smile.

Zoya was shocked for a moment n then laughed.

"Do u really think I can afford such an expensive designer dress? These types of dresses can be found anywhere now. I got it 4m a mall at 50% discount," replied Zoya wid a laugh.

"See, its not branded," said Zoya showing her d dress label at d nape of her neck.

"I really thought for a moment dat its actually a designer dress," said Humeira.

"It happens," said Zoya wid a smile, :Well, I need to rest for a while."

"Okay," said Humeira.

Zoya went to her room in d employees quarter on 22nd floor. She shares dis room wid Humeira. She sat on her bed n heaved a sigh of relief.

"Glad dat I changed d label yesterday wen Humi was at d counter," said Zoya.

She opened one of her bags to reveal some of her clothes. She takes out a yellow dress n removes d D&G(Dolce &Gabbana) label n sticks a standard label on it. She changes d label of some more clothes. She takes out a lighter n burns all d real labels.

"No one sud come to know dat I wear designer clothes," said Zoya.

She takes out a cigarette n lights it wid d lighter. She starts smoking.

"I hate u, Mom," said Zoya wid hatred as she blew d smoke 4m her mouth.

After finishing d cigarette, Zoya sprayed her mouth wid mouth freshner n came out. No one knew dat she smokes. There r more secrets which no one knew abt her. D bell boy in his early 20s was showing Asad n his friends their rooms which was on d 22nd floor. Zoya was shocked dat these guys were getn their rooms on d same floor as she n Humeira lived.

"I am Jung Bahadur. I will show u ur rooms," said d bell boy.

"I did not asked ur name. Just show us d rooms," said Imraan rudely.

"I think anyone can introduce themselves to anyone they want. He don't need to say wen u want," said Zoya as she came to them.

"Zoya," said Jung Bahadur.

"Jung Bahadur, why u gave them rooms on dis floor only?" asked Zoya.

"Cuz all other rooms r full. Its holiday season na," replied Jung Bahadur.

"Okay, show them d rooms," said Zoya.

Jung Bahadur opened 3 rooms. Ria, Nikhat n Aditi went in one room. Farhan n Imraan went in another room while Asad n Ayaan went in 3rd room which was opened.

"Ameer maa-baap k bigde bacche," said Zoya n went back to her room.

Asad who had not gone far inside d room heard wat she said.

"Wats wrong wid her?" thinks Asad confusingly.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats🥳 on your new story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue...

interesting

what to read more...

continue soon...
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Hi Juhi
Hope u doing good 😃
coming 2 story lovely prologue
I m sure its gonna b wonderful story
but I want 2 say a thing actually there r many characters in this story & I m very bad remembering names 😳 that's only d reason I tend 2 lose interest in a certain story when unfamiliar characters & names come taking importance in d story 😕
I m familiar wid on Qh characters & when any1 put different names it confuses me & I can't completely connect wid d story u see So can u do 1 thing keep names of d main characters from Qh & others which r just side character & will have very less imp in d story u can keep any which name
btw its just a suggestion 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very interesting start
Loved reading it
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Interesting Prologue ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!
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gr8 prolouge
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
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A new story from u
Yay
So it will be multi character
So zoya seems to hate rich spoilt brats
But she seems rich and is hiding it
She seems like quite the character
Waitng for more

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