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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderfull update
Zoya thought Asad N his friends as rich spoil brat coz ofor Imran
Interesting precap
Continue soon :-))
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nice start
Interesting one
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Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Juhi
Hope u doing good 😃
coming 2 story lovely prologue
I m sure its gonna b wonderful story
but I want 2 say a thing actually there r many characters in this story & I m very bad remembering names 😳 that's only d reason I tend 2 lose interest in a certain story when unfamiliar characters & names come taking importance in d story 😕
I m familiar wid on Qh characters & when any1 put different names it confuses me & I can't completely connect wid d story u see So can u do 1 thing keep names of d main characters from Qh & others which r just side character & will have very less imp in d story u can keep any which name
btw its just a suggestion 😳


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I am doing good😃

Hope u also doing good😃

I changed some names to avoid confusion. Only 2 college students names r out of QH dat is Karan n Ria. They r couple of one of my fav show. My profile pic is of them only. I liked ur suggestion so changed some names. Aditi is Sanam 2's real name while Ehsaan was in QH Season 4. Sanam 2 n Ehsaan were a couple in Season 4 so they r familiar.

Don't worry, only few characters will be focussed a lot in dis story😉.

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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

A very interesting start

Loved reading it
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
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Originally posted by: Sneha8337

Interesting story

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Part 2

Zoya was sitting wid her friends in canteen. She told them wat Imraan did wid some students to get ahead in d line.

"Dats so selfish of him," said Karan.

"The Great Imraan Qureshi. Really?" mocked Sameera.

"But Zoe, u only saw Imraan doing like dat. May be not everyone in his friends group is like him," said Humeira.

"Humi dear, positivity is fine but too much of positivity is wrong. I saw Imraan proudly teln his friends all dat. So, I am sure all his friends r like him only," said Zoya.

Zoya has not heard full talks as Humeira had called her to introduce Ehsaan so she can't hear wat Asad n Ria said Imraan on how its wrong on wat he did.

"We r not less than them. We came here wid scholarship dat is by giving an exam not just by throwing money at d cashier," said Ehsaan.

D waiter comes to them. Zoya's friends gave their orders.

"Zoe, u won't eat anything?" asked Sameera.

"No Sam, its not like dat. I was thinking on wat to eat," replied Zoya n turned to d waiter, "1 burger n 1 chocolate ice-cream.'

Wen d waiter went 4m there, Zoya got lost into some thinking.

-----Flashback-----

Zoya's friends Nazia n Shazia who were fraternal twins ordered burgers n chocolate ice-creams for them in d school canteen.

"Dis is for me, Shazia?" asked Zoya.

"Yes," replied Shazia wid a smile, "We know u love these foods too but can't eat due to ur mom. But here u can eat na."

"We want u to be happy," said Nazia wid a smile.

"So sweet of both of u," said Zoya wid a smile.

She was abt to take a bite of d burger wen someone snatched it 4m her hand n threw it away. Zoya lukd up n was shocked to see her mom Zeenat lukn angrily at her.

"Mom, how come u r here?" asked Zoya shockingly.

"I came here to give you a new diet chart diary which dietician made but am seeing dat u were abt to eat dis bloody burger n ice-cream. Ur low class friends r spoiling u. I told u many times not to be friends wid these poor people but u never listen," said Zeenat angrily.

"Not here, Mom," said Zoya n went to a corner where no one can hear. Zeenat followed her.

"Now I understand why u r so fat n not bcumn zero size even after so much diet. Dat burger n ice-cream will make u gain extra calories n fats. Is dis d way u will bcum a supermodel? Tum mera naak kyu kataana chaahti ho? Wat will people say? Dat Zeenat cud not bcum a model n she cud not even make her daughter a model? I love u baby. I see myself in u. U r my dream. Wat I cud not bcum I want u to bcum," said Zeenat.

"But Mom, I am eating these after so many months," said Zoya truthfully.

"Don't lie to me, Zoya. I saw wat u were abt to do," said Zeenat angrily, "Now, take dis new diet chart diary n stick to ur diet. I don't want u to have these junk foods again."

Zeenat left 4m there. Zoya had tears in her eyes.

-----Flashback Ends-----

"Mam, ur order," Zoya came to present wid waiter's words.

"Thanks," said Zoya.

Zoya tuk a bite of her burger n then her ice-cream n smiled happily.

"Now, I can do wateva I want n eat wateva I want," thinks Zoya.

Scene shifts to Seventh Heaven.

"How was ur day?" asked Jung Bahadur.

"It was nice. Made some new friends," replied Zoya.

"Cool," said Jung Bahadur.

"We will talk later. We need to rest for some time as I had to be on candy counter after 2 hours n Zoya had to do her singing rehearsal," said Humeira.

"Okay, see u later," said Jung Bahadur.

In d evening, Asad n his friends reached Seventh Heaven. Maan Singh welcomed them. They lukd around d lobby n then went to d candy counter to get some candies. Humeira was in charge of d candy counter. They r amazed to find Humeira working in dis hotel only.

"Hi guys," said Humeira.

"So, u & Zoya work in dis suite?" asked Ayaan.

"Yes," replied Humeira, "Sorry, I cud not talk more wid u all."

"Its okay," said Ayaan, "She is my elder sister Nikhat who is a year senior to us in college. She is in IT."

"Nice to meet u," said Humeira wid a smile extending her hand.

"Nice to meet u too," said Nikhat wid a smile shaking her hand.

Asad lukd around d suite as if to find someone.

"Where is Zoya?" asked Asad, "Vo dikhaayi nahi de rahi hai."

"She will be here in some time for singing," replied Humeira.

"Ohhh," said Asad.

Asad recalls how he had met Humeira n Zoya in college. He tried to talk wid Zoya but he did not knew why she did not talked wid them in a friendly way like Humeira did but talked wid them coldly. But still don't know why he was mesmerized by her wen she fell in his arms. He also remember how she straightened up quickly on seeing him.

Zoya came in d lobby along wid singing band. She was lukn very beautiful in a blue knee-length dress n hair styled in lovely curls instead of her normal straight hair. Zoya n others tuk their position on d stage. Asad n his friends sat on one of d couch in d lobby.

Zoya lukd at Asad n his friends n was shocked. She was unhappy to see them. She recalled how while standing in d long line for admissions Imraan reached late than his friends so he had to stand very behind in d line. He gave some money to poor students as bribe to get ahead in d line. Zoya was angry wid him for using his money in d wrong way. Wen they met d group, Humeira talked wid them in a friendly way but Zoya was cold wid them. Zoya n Humeira got admission in d college by passing in d scholarship exam. She n Humeira made 3 friends Ehsaan, Karan n Sameera who also got admission thru scholarship.

"So, we have to tolerate these rich spoilt-brats here who can even bribe others wid their money," thinks Zoya bitterly.

Zoya hates rich people as she thinks they have no emotions n they use people for their benefits. Due to Imraan's act, Zoya thinks dat his friends r also him.

"Whatever," thinks Zoya, "I am here for my job not waste my time thinking of them."

D other singing band members started playing d music of d song Lehrein.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WYDc1JQqduY[/YOUTUBE]

Zoya started singing.

Khoyi khoyi si hun main
Kyun yeh dil ka haal hai
Dhundli saari khwab hai
Ulja har khayal hai
Saari kaliyan mujha gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharonde reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi

(Zoya thinks abt doing some small modelling works in Mumbai.

One day, she woke up at 8.

"U are 3 hours late. U were supposed to be up by 5," scolded Zeenat.

"Mom, I studied till 1am as my HSC exams r near," said Zoya.

"I don't want any excuse. Just finish ur breakfast n go to school. U missed ur yoga n exercise 2day by ur laziness," said Zeenat.

Zoya eyes bcum moist thinking dat while singing.)

Rah me kal kitni chirag the
Samne kal phoolon ki baag thi
Iss se kahun kaun hai jo sune
Kante hi kyun maine hai chune
Sapne mere kyun hai kho gaye
Jage hain kyun dil me gum mere
Saare kaliyan mujha gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharonde reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi

(Asad n his friends were amazed by her singing. Asad felt as if there was some pain in her voice n her expressions also conveyed d pain. He kept lukn at her.

"So, she is Zoya?" asked Nikhat.

"Yes," replied Ayaan.)

Na na na...

Kya kahun kyun ye dil udas hai
Ab koi door hai na paas hai
Choo le jo dil wo baatein ab kahan
Wo din kahan raatein ab kahan
Jo bhi dhakhal hai ab khawab sa
Ab dil mera hai betaab sa
Saari kaliyan mujha gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharande reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi beh gaye

(Zoya recalls talking wid her 2 year elder brother Haider.

"Haider, I am tired of all dis. I need to talk to Dad abt dis. Mom is forcing me wid these harsh diets n exercises which r too much now," said Zoya.

"Zoya, don't tell Dad," said Haider, "Mom is not wrong. She wants u to be a supermodel which mom cud not. Think how people will praise our family wen u bcum a famous supermodel. I can proudly tell my friends dat my sister is a supermodel," said Haider.

"But Haider, I don't really want all dis. U & mom know na dat I want to be a fashion designer," said Zoya.

"Zoya, if Dad comes to know dat u don't want to be a supermodel he might think mom wrong. U know na how much they fight cuz of u on wat is good or bad for u. They already fight a lot for many reasons. Do u want them to divorce cuz of u?" asked Haider.

"No," replied Zoya helplessly.

Haider loved his sister a lot but as they grew up Haider started bcum self-centred n only think abt his benefits. He still loves his sister but only thinks of himself. He wants Zoya to be a supermodel so dat he can show off to others using her. He is like many rich spoilt-brats who thinks he can live lavishly on his parent's money n join business along wid Zoya wen they r ready for it. Earlier, he wud befriend people of all kinds like rich, middle-class n poor but as he grew up he started befriending only rich people due to mother's influence n wud hate Zoya befriending people who r not rich. Zoya fights back tears thinking of dat.)

Zoya finshed singing n everyone clapped at d band's performance.

"Such a beautiful voice," said Asad.

"She also has a hot body," said Imraan lukn at her up n down.

"Imraan, not again," said Ria irritatingly.

"Okay sorry," said Imraan reluctantly.

"U better be," said Ria.

After Zoya was done singing, she went to Humeira.

"Wat these guys r doing here?" asked Zoya.

"They came to chill here for 2 days," replied Humeira.

"Now, we need to tolerate these rich spoilt brats here for 2 days," said Zoya unhappily.

"Wats wrong wid dis, Zoya?" asked Humeira.

"I told u wat Imraan did na," replied Zoya.

"Zoya darling, wat he did does not means he n his friends r bad," said Humeira.

"U don't abt these rich people as much as I do," said Zoya n walked away 4m there.

"Wat does she mean?" asked Humeira, "Why she hates rich people so much?"

Zoya left d lobby n came back after some time in a stylish short purple dress. Asad lukd at Zoya who was now in her normal straight hair. He went to her.

"Can u tell us abt our rooms?" asked Asad wanting to start a conversation.

"I think its d job of bellboys to show d rooms not me who is not a singer," replied Zoya.

"Sorry," said Asad n went back to his seat.

Zoya rolled her eyes n went to Humeira.

"Wow Zoya, u r wearing a stylish dress 4m Ritu Kumar's latest collections," said Humeira wid a smile.

Zoya was shocked for a moment n then laughed.

"Do u really think I can afford such an expensive designer dress? These types of dresses can be found anywhere now. I got it 4m a mall at 50% discount," replied Zoya wid a laugh.

"See, its not branded," said Zoya showing her d dress label at d nape of her neck.

"I really thought for a moment dat its actually a designer dress," said Humeira.

"It happens," said Zoya wid a smile, :Well, I need to rest for a while."

"Okay," said Humeira.

Zoya went to her room in d employees quarter on 22nd floor. She shares dis room wid Humeira. She sat on her bed n heaved a sigh of relief.

"Glad dat I changed d label yesterday wen Humi was at d counter," said Zoya.

She opened one of her bags to reveal some of her clothes. She takes out a yellow dress n removes d D&G(Dolce &Gabbana) label n sticks a standard label on it. She changes d label of some more clothes. She takes out a lighter n burns all d real labels.

"No one sud come to know dat I wear designer clothes," said Zoya.

She takes out a cigarette n lights it wid d lighter. She starts smoking.

"I hate u, Mom," said Zoya wid hatred as she blew d smoke 4m her mouth.

After finishing d cigarette, Zoya sprayed her mouth wid mouth freshner n came out. No one knew dat she smokes. There r more secrets which no one knew abt her. D bell boy in his early 20s was showing Asad n his friends their rooms which was on d 22nd floor. Zoya was shocked dat these guys were getn their rooms on d same floor as she n Humeira lived.

"I am Jung Bahadur. I will show u ur rooms," said d bell boy.

"I did not asked ur name. Just show us d rooms," said Imraan rudely.

"I think anyone can introduce themselves to anyone they want. He don't need to say wen u want," said Zoya as she came to them.

"Zoya," said Jung Bahadur.

"Jung Bahadur, why u gave them rooms on dis floor only?" asked Zoya.

"Cuz all other rooms r full. Its holiday season na," replied Jung Bahadur.

"Okay, show them d rooms," said Zoya.

Jung Bahadur opened 3 rooms. Ria, Nikhat n Aditi went in one room. Farhan n Imraan went in another room while Asad n Ayaan went in 3rd room which was opened.

"Ameer maa-baap k bigde bacche," said Zoya n went back to her room.

Asad who had not gone far inside d room heard wat she said.

"Wats wrong wid her?" thinks Asad confusingly.

Wen Humeira comes to her room, Zoya tells her abt Asad n his friends.

"Asad n his friends r staying on d same floor," said Zoya.

"Dats so nice," said Humeira.

"Dats not so nice. I hate them," said Zoya.

Zoya removed her I-Pad 4m her bag n started playing Candy Crush on it.

"How did u afford an I-Pad?" asked Humeira shockingly.

Zoya was initially shocked but smiled later.

"My dad gifted me after I got good marks in 12th exams. He had to save money to get it for me," lied Zoya wid a smile.

"Wow! Dats so nice of him," said Humeira wid a smile.

"Yaa, he is d only one who can understand me in our family," thinks Zoya sadly.

"Yaa, he is a very caring n loving dad," said Zoya wid a smile.

Precap: #Zoya gets in d lift to go to d lobby. Asad enters d lift at d same time to go to d lobby. Zoya is unhappy to see him. He tells her d suite is very nice n she tells him rudely dat not all can afford to enjoy in d suite n some people have to work here in d same suite he is enjoying wid his friends. Asad is shocked by her words.

#Anwar is sitting sadly in his study. Haider somes to comfort him but he scolds him badly for being selfish n causing his sister to leave d house. Haider is guilty.

A/N: So, I finally brought out some secrets of Zoya to the readers. More secrets will come out time to time. Zeenat and Zoya's parts are a little copied from an episode of MTV Big F if anyone remembers that.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Amazing chapter
Loved reading it
Zoya had indeed bared a lot in life due to her family
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

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