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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

precap is good...



always clear with your story... to avoid any MU...

if you are getting it from somewhere cleared..

lately lot of the writer very pissed of...

with plagiarism...

and opening up blog for their stories...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Nice updates
They all reached college. Zoya saw Imran giving bribe & thought all his friends was like that. She didn't hear asad & ria reply. Asad was shocked by her cold behaviour. They went to same hotel where Zoya & humeira did job. Song was nice. Asad feel the pain in her voice. She hate rich people & as far as her past revealed, it was justified. Curious to know what happen next. Update soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Nice updates
So zoya is rich she come from richness and name brands
But she hates it all be cuz of her mother and brother
So he mother wanted to live her dreams through her daughter
A supermodel but zoya wants to design the clothes for the models
So seems zoya ran away after she turned 18
Oh boy Imran actions cause bad for all his friends in zoya eyes
So Asya met and bump fall and catch and eye lock
Asad is smitten but zoya is not giving him a chance 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Awesome update
Loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Superb start
Loved reading it
Looking forward to know what happens next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Part 3

Zoya gets in d lift to go to d lobby to give her performance at dinner. She was dressed in a long green gown. Asad enters d lift at d same time to go to d lobby. Zoya is unhappy to see him. Asad was happy to see her. Both were silent for some time.

"Zoya, d suite is very nice," said Asad trying to initiate a conversation.

"Yes, d suite is very nice but sadly not all can afford to enjoy in d suite. Some people have to work in d same suite u r enjoying wid ur friends," said Zoya rudely.

"I was only complimenting abt d suite," said Asad shocked by her words.

"Lobby floor came. Lets get out," said Zoya as she went out followed by Asad.

Asad n his friends sit for dinner like other guests while Zoya went to d stage to take her position. D music played.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l1R9XBsqaEw[/YOUTUBE]

Hmm..mm..mmm...
Har dil mai armaan hote tou hain
Har dil mai armaan hote tou hain
Bas koi, Bas koi samjhe zara

Tinka tinka, zara zara
Hai roshani se, jaise bhara
Tinka tinka, zara zara
Hai roshani se, jaise bhara
Har dil mai armaan hote tou hain
Har dil mai armaan hote tou hain
Bas koi samjhe zara

(Asad was lukn at Zoya as she sang. He was drawn to her beautiful voice.)

Tinka tinka, zara zara
Hai roshani se, jaise bhara
Tinka tinka, zara zara
Hai roshani se, jaise bhara
Har dil mai armaan hote tou hain
Har dil mai armaan hote tou hain
Bas koi samjhe zara

(Zoya recalls a moment wid her ex-bf Murtuza Zakaria(Varun Toorkey/Shaad's evil lookalike) who was also her classmate in school. They were talking in their school corridor.

"Mutuza, why r u not letn me invite Nazia, Shazia n Nisha(Nisha Nagpal) on ur18th birthday?" asked Zoya, "They r also my friends."

"But they r not rich like ur other friends. Murtuza Zakaria will not let u spoil his party by inviting those beggars," replied Murtuza.

"Then I will also not attend ur party," said Zoya.

"U will not attend my party for ur poor friends. Wat kind of a girlfriend u r?" asked Murtuza unhappily n left d corridor leaving Zoya hurt.)

Dil pe ek naya, sa nasha cha gaya
Kho raha tha jo, khab laut aagaya
Dil pe ek naya, sa nasha cha gaya
Kho raha tha jo, khab laut aagaya

Yeh jo ehsaas hai jo karaar hai
Kya issi na hi naam pyar hai
Yeh jo ehsaas hai jo karaar hai
Kya issi na hi naam pyar hai
Pooche dil thumke zara

Tinka tinka, zara zara
Hai roshani se, jaise bhara
Har dil mai armaan hote tou hain
Har dil mai armaan hote tou hain
Bas) koi samjhe zara

Tinka tinka
Tinka tinka

(Zoya recalls another moment wid Murtuza. They were arguing over a dress while shopping for their school prom.

"I am not wearing dat dress for prom. Its 80K, Murtuza," said Zoya.

"Wats ur problem ha?" asked Murtuza angrily, "1st u blackmailed me into inviting ur poor friends in my birthday embarrassing me n now u r throwing tantrums for a dress. Listen, if u want to come wid me at d prom then u will wear dis red dress only. Got it?"

"Then I will not come to prom wid u," replied Zoya angrily, "If d dress was of 2K or even 5K I wud have agreed but I can't agree to wear a 80K for a school prom."

"Fine, Murtuza Zakaria can get any chick he wants," said Murtuza rudely.

"Ya, go n get," said Zoya rudely.

Murtuza left d shop furiously while Zoya was in tears.

Zoya came to present bcumn sad at those 2 moments as d song ended.)

Zoya came n sat wid Humeira who was at d candy counter.

"She is really awesome in singing," said Nikhat.

"But she is akdu," said Asad.

"Why r u calling her dat?" asked Ria.

"Cuz weneva I try to talk to her she is rude to me," replied Asad.

"Why she is rude to u?" asked Ayaan.

"No idea," replied Asad.

"But she is not bad. Luk how happily she is talking wid Humeira wid smile n laughter," said Aditi pointing to d candy counter.

Asad was shocked to see her smile n laugh. It was d 1st time, he n his friends r seeing her like dat since they met her.

"I can't believe dat dis girl can smile n laugh too cuz weneva I meet her she is in her khadus mode," said Asad amusingly.

"U r really funny, Humi. I can't believe u used to take ur teddy to school wid u," said Zoya wid a laugh.

"I was a kid then, Zoe," said Humeira wid pout.

"Sorry," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad kept lukn at Zoya's smile n laughter being lost in them.

Scene shifts to Farooqui House. Anwar is sitting sadly in his study. Haider somes to comfort him n call him for dinner.

"Dad, plz come for dinner. We will find Zoya," said Haider.

"I will come to eat weneva I want. Its cuz of u & ur mom, Zoya left d house leaving a letter. Meri bacchi ko ghar chhode 1 mahina ho gaye aur uska kuch pata nahi chala," scolded Anwar angrily, "She told u several times dat she don't want to be a supermodel but a fashion designer & u sud help her in talking to me abt it but for ur selfish reasons u did not helped her. U don't love ur sister even a bit."

"Its not true, Dad," said Haider wid tears in his eyes. Its true dat I was selfish but its not true dat I don't love her. I am missing her a lot since she left."

"Don't shed crocodile tears in front of me," said Anwar angrily, "U became a snob as u grew n hated Zoya for making poor people as friends. U were not like dat wen u were a child but as u grew up into a teenager u changed a lot. U even did not understood ur sister's feelings just cuz u wanted to show off dat ur sister is a supermodel. U r flying so high cuz of my money na. U think dat u & Zoya can enjoy my money lavishly n join my business wen u both want. But Zoya is not selfish like u even if wants to join my business. Pray dat Zoya is alright wherever she is otherwise I will remove u 4m my property."

"I don't care, Dad if u do dat. I deserve dis," said Haider guiltily n left d study.

Anwar removed a photo frame of Zoya 4m his study drawer n caressed her smiling face wid tears in his eyes n said emotionally, "Plz come back, my princess. I promise dat I will not let anymore tears come to ur eyes. I was a bad father to not realize dat u were in pain 4m such a long time. Forgive ur dad, beta. Plz come back Zoya. Plz come back.

Scene shifts to Seventh Heaven. Maan Singh comes before everyone to make an announcement to d guests.

"2mrw night, there will be disco themed party on d occasion of 10th anniversary of Seventh Heaven branch of hotels. Hope u all enjoy a lot in d party. U all have to wear clothes suitable for going to discos," said Maan Singh wid a smile.

D guests cheered happily.

"Wow! A party," said Ayaan excitedly.

"Wat a surprise it is," said Asad happily.

"Even all employees will have to wear disco-themed clothes," said Maan Singh wid a smile.

"Its so nice. I can wear sumthn else 2mrw other than uniform," said Humeira wid a smile.

"I will have to sing a song on disco theme," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Which song u will sing?" asked Humeira.

"Not yet decided," replied Zoya.

Zoya got up to leave. As she walked in d lobby, she bumped into Asad who too got up. His laptop fell down. Zoya was annoyed at dis as he bumped into her 4m nowhere.

"Sorry," apologized Zoya reluctantly.

"Its okay," said Asad wid a smile.

"I will only have to apologize whoever is at fault as I am an employee," whispered Zoya for only Asad to hear, "U bumped into me 4m nowhere but its only me who had to apologize."

"I am sorry for my fault," apologized Asad.

"Its okay," said Zoya wid a fake smile n went inside leaving him stunned.

Precap: #Zoya sings old n original 80s version of Disco Deewane at d suite party. Asad enjoys her performance as its one of his favourite song which his mother used to love a lot in her childhood being her favourite song.

#Imraan insults Karan for cumn to d suite widout money n asking whether he came on a lottery. Ria shuts him up saying dat he came to meet his friends Zoya n Humeira. Zoya who sees all dis tells Imraan dat he is a guest so he sud be in his limits.


A/N: One more past of Zoya is out which is Murtuza. Those who don't remember Murtuza was Shaad's lookalike who was a terrorist. If I show Shaad as Zoya's ex-boyfriend, his fans will kill me😆.


Will you wear a 80K dress at a small event like a prom party even if you are very rich?


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Amazing update
Loved reading it
So we get to know something more about zoya's past
Can understand why she hates the rich people
Hopefully she will understand that not all are the same
The precap seems very interesting
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love it
Amazing update
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Very nice.
Waiting 4 asya's frndshp.
Thnks 4 pm.cntu soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear
Thanks for pm

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