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OMG...shocking promo ...poor Zoya... thanks for the pm


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Umm zoya's friends anger was justified

Being her friend they felt hurt
But when everyone will came to know about zoya's entire truth
They Will Surely Feel Bad For For zoya and guilty for their behaviour
Aww asya in love
Excited to read more
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Zoya has lied really too much so her friends anger is justified
Zoya may be a liar but she never meant to hurt anyone
AsYa r in love but they broke up even before bcum a couple😭
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Nice update & promo
Loved it
Finally truth will be out
I feel that being angry with Zoya was justified but finish the friendship is not. They should gave her chance to explain.
Everyone deserve a second chance
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Zoya's friends were right in being angry but were wrong in not giving her a chance to explain

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Wow great update😊

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Finally truth is out
Asad and their friends anger is justified but they should understand her turmoil and forgive her after all her intentions was not to hurt them
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Zoya's friends anger is justified but they sud have given her a chance to explain
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Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

Happy to see asya growing
Could have imagine the photo shoot
Aww love precap asad in love
Plans to confess but hit with thw truth
Promo oh no all zoya lies caught up wirh her
She loss her friends and also the man who loved her from a long time
And the saddest thing is she loves him too
And he doesnt believe her he felt betrayed
Feels sad for zoya but she shouldnt have lie and kept lying
She should have come clean
Hope they forgive her when they learnt y she did it


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Photoshoot was one of moment of AsYa's growing bonding

Who won't fall for a girl like Zoya who has such a heart of gold?

Zoya's friends anger was justified as she was lying a lot

Even though Zoya confessed her love to Asad he can't believe as she said so many lies till now dat now even though she is saying d truth he can't believe her

Zoya had no other option than lying to be able to live widout her rich family
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Part 13

Zoya sprayed mouth freshner in her mouth after smoking which Humeira saw.

"I can't believe Zoya smokes also," said Humeira in disbelief.

Karan n Ria who were at d mall to spend time wid each other. They did some little shopping.

"Lets eat sumthn. I am so hungry," said Ria.

"Okay sweety," said Karan.

As they were walking 2wards d escalator to go to d Food Court, they saw Zoya's parents near d stage in d lobby dressed in some colourful clothes.

"Now, we wud like to present a folk dance by theatre artists Shishupal n Rosy," said d organizer on d stage.

Karan n Ria r puzzled on wat they heard.

"They r Zoya's parents then why dis organizer is saying different names?" asked Karan.

"Don't know," replied Ria.

Shishupal n Rosy presented a Gujrati folk dance on Paheli movie puppet song. Everyone clapped for them after their performance. Shishupal n Rosy sat on 2 chairs along wid some other people. Karan n Ria went behind them stealthily.

"Everyone loved our performance," said Rosy.

"We dance very well n even act very well," said Shushipal.

"Yes, how can I forget wen last month a girl told us to act as her parents in some Imperial College," said Rosy.

"I remember her name Zoya Farooqui. She told us to act like her parents Anwar Farooqui n Zeenat Farooqui," said Shishupal.

"We did such an awesome acting dat no one cud doubt us," said Rosy wid a laugh.

Shishupal too laughed n hi-fived wid her. Karan n Ria came before them.

"U both were talking abt a girl Zoya Farooqui teln u both to act as her parents," said Ria n asked, "Can u tell us more abt dis as we want to know more abt ur awesome acting?"

Shishupal n Rosy got happy dat she was praising them. They had not seen them before as Zoya did not showed her friends to them so they don't know dat they r Zoya's friends.

"Last month, a girl Zoya Farooqui gave us money to act as her parents. She gave us some clothes so dat we luk like her parents," replied Shishupal.

"Is Zoya dis girl only?" asked Karan showing Zoya's photo on his cell.

"Yes, its her only," replied Rosy shocking Karan n Ria.

"Plz, tell us more abt u acted as her parents," said Ria.

Shishupal n Rosy narrated how she gave them money to act as her parents n how she guide them in d Principal's office thru notepad in her cell wen they went wrong. Karan n Ria shocked to hear d whole truth. They went to d Food Court n ordered sumthn to eat.

"Why did Zoya brought fake parents in college?" asked Ria shockingly.

"Don't know," replied Karan, "We need to find abt dis."

Next morning, Zoya was lukn for sumthn to wear. She saw dat one of d dress' label is still not changed. She quickly removed d label of d red Vero Moda dress n replaced it wid a standard label. Unaware to her, Humeira who was cumn 4m d kitchen saw dat n was shocked. Zoya sensed Humeira behind her n quickly closed d cupboard forgetting abt d Vero Moda label which she kept on a small shelf near d cupboard. Humeira came to her.

"Zoe, I made coffee for us," said Humeira wid a smile.

"Thanks Humi," said Zoya wid a smile n went in d kitchen.

Humeira picked up d label on d shelf n kept in her pocket.

"Why u r lying so much, Zoe?" thinks Humeira in her mind.

In d afternoon, Asad goes to watch Najma's ramp shoot. He goes backstage to spend some time wid her.

"Bhai, why r u smiling so much?" asked Najma.

"I have fallen in love wid Zoya," replied Asad.

"Really?" asked Najma happily.

"Yes Najma," replied Asad, "Don't know 4m wen I have fallen in love wid her."

"Zoya is a very nice girl even though she behaved differently wen I met her 1st. But she was very nice wid us wen u introduced her to us as ur friend," said Najma.

"I want to tell my feelings to her," said Asad.

Then u sud tell her soon," said Najma.

"Don't know how she will react," said Asad.

"U sud not think abt dat. If she loves u then she will reciprocate," said Najma.

A male make-artist brings a male fashion photographer near Najma n some other models.

"He is Anand Kumar one of d best photographers in Mumbai. He will be a part of ur Van Heusen clothing ad," said d make-artist n went 4m there.

Najma n other models were happy to see him n shook hands wid him.

"1st, I wud like to show u some of my best clicked photos which is some of my best works," said Anand wid a smile.

Najma n other models nodded. Anand started showing d photos of both male n female models 4m his folder book which everyone watched in awe. Anand was teln them abt each model as he showed d photos. As he shows everyone d photos, Asad n Najma r shocked as they came across Zoya's photos in some of d pages wid her name written on d photos.

"She is Anwar n Zeenat Farooqui's daughter Zoya Farooqui who is 18. She is a part-time model 4m 2 years. Even though, she is a partial heir of Farooqui Constructions along wid her elder brother Haider she is also doing part-time modelling. She modelled for several print-ads, video-ads n also walked on ramps for various designers," said Anand.

Asad n Najma r again shocked after wat Anand said abt her.

"Zoya is 4m a rich family? Then why she told dat she is 4m a middle-class family?" thinks Asad, "She said dat she has no siblings but she also has an elder brother."

After sometime, d other models went 4m there.

"Can u tell us sumthn abt Zoya Farooqui?" asked Asad.

"Why u want to know abt her?" asked Anand.

"Cuz we need to research on her as I am fashion designing student," replied Asad.

"Okay," said Anand.

He showed some of her information on internet along wid some of her modelling photos as well as her photos wid her family.

"She even tuk part in Miss India dis year but she cud not make up to Top 25. I did not saw or met her 4m 3 months," said Anand.

"Thanks for d info," said Asad.

Anand left 4m there.

"So Zoya is not poor n also she is a model," said Asad.

"I remember where I saw her," said Najma.

"Wat do u mean?" asked Asad.

"Wen I & mom met her we felt as if we have seen her somewhere before but we cud not remember," replied Najma.

"Where u saw her?" asked Asad.

"Remember, we went to Mumbai during New Year at some business party of dad. U did not came as u were busy wid ur HSC Board preparation. Even I had my SSC Board but I cud take some time as I already studied much. I saw her in dat party," said Najma.

-----Flashback-----

Rashid, Dilshad n Najma went to some business party cum New Party in Mumbai. Rashid n Dilshad were talking wid some elders while Najma was talking wid some young girls. Najma saw a beautiful girl in heavy green strapless gown. Her hairs were tied in a bun. She was doing sumthn in a cell sitting on one of d chairs in a corner. A guy came to her.

"Zoya, wat r u doing alone here on ur cell?" asked d guy, "Come n have fun wid us."

"Playing Candy Crush," replied Zoya, "Mutuza, I am fine here only."

"Zoya, u r my girlfriend but still u r not wid me," said Murtuza.

"I am ur girlfriend not ur dog dat I sud be always wid u," said Zoya in an irritating tone, "I am already fed up of dis heavy dress which mom made me wear along wid these 7-inch high heels but u only care abt me having fun wid u & ur friends. I was not interested in cumn to dis boring party but mom, Haider & u told me to come but u don't care a bit for me."

"Do wateva u want," said Murtuza in frustration n left 4m there to his friends.

"Idiot," said Zoya wid disappointment n went back to playing her game.

-----Flashback Ends-----

"She has a boyfriend also," said Najma shockingly.

"Had not has cuz she told me abt her boyfriend wid whom she broke up," said Asad.

"How can Zoya say so much lies to all?" asked Najma.

"Don't know wat more she is hiding," replied Asad.

"Glad dat u got to know abt her lies before confessing ur love to her," said Najma.

Asad became sad as she said dat. He recalled Zoya's some of clothes which lukd branded n how she everytime lied to him n other friends on those clothes being of standard label m buying them on discount. He recalled how Zoya was having a tough time in sweeping d auditorium wen they both were punished n how her whole body pained after dat. He recalled how she was so relaxed while doing photo-shoot wid him n managing their photoshoot poses so nicely.

Tears came 4m his eyes as he recalls how she fell in his arm on d day of their college admission, how they shook hands for friendship, their photoshoot for their project, their moments at beach yesterday. Najma kept a hand on his shoulder.

"Bhai, r u alright?" asked Najma wid concern.

"I fell in love wid her but she has lied so much abt herself," replied Asad wiping his tears.

"Bhai, u need to forget dat u fell in love wid her," said Najma.

"Wat sud we tell to Mom n Dad?" asked Asad.

"Right now, we will not tell anything to them. We will tell later," replied Najma.

Scene shifts to Farhan's house in d evening. All his friends except Zoya were there. Humeira, Karan, Ria n Asad told everyone abt Zoya's lies so they decided to meet at Farhan's house widout teln Zoya. On

"I myself saw her changing d label 2day," said Humeira.

Asad recalled wat she once said to Sexy Babes abt cloth labels.

"Talking abt low standard or branded, I don't think there r any differences between standard label clothes or branded label clothes. If u remove d brand label n replace it wid standard label then d value of dat cloth will not be high anymore but will bcum less like standard label clothes," recalls Asad of Zoya's words to Sexy Babes.

"Zoya has lied so much till now," said Aditi.

"Zoya even did not spared her own family in her lies by bringing fake parents in college n saying dat she don't have any siblings," said Farhan.

"Don't know why is lying so much," said Asad.

Scene shifts to Zoya in her suite room resting on her bed. She is thinking abt her project photoshoot wid Asad n their moments on d beach.

"Why I am thinking so much of Asad?" thinks Zoya.

"Cuz u fell in love wid him," replied her heart.

"But u said dat can't fall in love wid anyone?" asked her mind.

"Asad made me fall in love again," replied her heart.

A smile came on Zoya's lips as she said, "Yes, I love Asad."

She then realized how she has lied abt herself to everyone.

"Its not dat I regret for lying as I did wat I had to live somewhere away 4m my selfish mother n brother. But I think I sud tell d truth to my friends. I am sure dat they will understand me. There sud be no lies between me n my friends. As for Asad, I can't have him wid my lies. He needs to know my truth before we r 2gthr. 2mrw only, I will tell my truth to my friends. After dat, I will tell my feelings to Asad. Don't know how Asad will react but still I sud tell him n see wat he feels for me," said Zoya.

Someone knocked on d door. Zoya opened d door. It was Humeira.

"Hey u back. I will make sandwiches for us," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Okay," said Humeira wid a smile.

Zoya went in d kitchen to make sandwiches. Humeira just lukd at her going in d kitchen not knowing how to talk to her after knowing all her lies.

At night, Asad is having dinner wid his family.

"Why r u so quiet 2day?" asked Dilshad.

"Its not like dis," replied Asad.

"Is sumthn troubling u?" asked Dilshad.

"No," replied Asad.

Asad was quiet cuz he was lost in thoughts of Zoya. He was very hurt dat d girl he fell in love wid has said a lot of lies to everyone around her. Asad n Najma did not told their parents abt Zoya's truth till now as they don't want to disturb them 4m time being cuz they like Zoya a lot thinking her to be a very nice girl.

Next day, Zoya's friends decided to confront her after college. Zoya was wearing d same red Vero Moda dress dat Humeira saw her changing d label of. Till then, they behaved normally wid her. After lecture they called her in d music room. Her friends came in d music room n waited for her. Zoya enters d run n others luks at her.

"Zoya, ur dress is so awesome. 4m where u bought it?" asked Aditi.

"Sarojini Nagar Market," replied Zoya, "U know na how trendy clothes r sold at low prices."

"Dis is not some low price dress but its of Vero Moda," said Humeira.

"No its not," lied Zoya.

Humeira shows her d label of dat dress n some other labels along wid it shocking her. Suddenly, she n her other friends luks angrily at her.

"No need to be shocked, Zoya. I found them in a box which accidently fell 4m ur side of cupboard. Actually, I myself u saw changing d label of d dress u r wearing," said Humeira.

"Humeira, I can explain...," said Zoya but was cut by Humeira.

"Wat else is there to explain, Zoya? U were lying to everyone all these times pretending to be 4m poor family wen u r actually 4m a rich family. Ur parents r construction business professionals & u were a part-time model," said Humeira.

"U even brought fake parents in our college. U thought dat we will not come to know? We saw them yesterday at a mall n they told us how u paid them to act as ur parents. U even lied dat u have no brother wen u actually have an elder brother," said Karan.

"U r such a hypocrite, Zoya. U were saying dat how u hate rich people n wud show attitude to rich people but u urself is rich who is pretending to be poor," said Ria.

"U played wid our emotions by always lying to us," said Ehsaan.

"We can't be ur friends now. We can't be friends wid a liar," said Sameera.

"Guys, listen to me," said Zoya as her eyes became moist.

"We don't want to listen anything," said Farhan.

"I was abt to tell everything to all of u," said Zoya.

"Wen ur truth came out, u r giving excuses to us," said Humeira.

"U r lying to us 4m 2 months pretending to be poor," said Asad.

"Being a friend u put us in darkness abt urself," said Aditi.

"We can't trust u, Zoya," said Ayaan.

Her friends were leaving d music room.

"Asad, listen to me," said Zoya stopping Asad who was abt to leave d music room while others had already left.

Asad turned to Zoya n lukd at her in displeasure.

"Wat sud I listen now? Another lie?" asked Asad raising his voice wid a hint of anger in his tone, "I was attracted to u even at d time wen we were not friends n only fought wid each other. Wen we became friends, I don't know wen I fell in love wid u. I fell in love wid u due to ur good nature of always helping r friends n standing for them. I was impressed wid how u answered back Sexy Babes even giving them d nickname of Sexy Pigs. Yes, I saw dat scene 4m behind a wall n enjoyed it. I liked how u worked hard wid me for our project. I was attracted to u 4m a long time cuz I was always felt dat there is sumthn more to u than ur behaving arrogantly n rudely wid rich people. I was abt to confess my love to u but I got to know dat u were a model n how u lied to everyone abt ur urself n ur family. I fell in love wid u not caring dat u were poor but now even though u r actually rich I regret falling in love wid u who is such a big liar. I hate u, Zoya Farooqui."

Zoya was shocked at wat all he said. He loved her n was abt to confess his feelings to her but he stopped on knowing truth abt her. She too fell in love wid him but did not knew wat he felt abt her. Yesterday only, she realized her feelings for him. She fell for his handsome looks, his sweet nature n sense of humour. But now he hates her which is hurting her a lot. She saw his eyes were also turning moist like her.

"I love u too, Asad. I never meant to hurt u & our friends," said Zoya hurtfully.

Asad smiled a bit as he became happy at hearing dat she loves him but his happiness faded realizing d situation now. He changed his expression into blank one.

"Another lie now by saying dat u love me. How can I believe u after so much lies? If u really loved me u wud not have hid ur truth at least 4m me n our friends but u kept on lying to us. U did not meant to hurt us but u actually hurt us," said Asad disappointingly.

Asad left d room while Zoya broke down. She thought abt her selfish mother n brother cuz of whom she left her house. She thought abt d friends she made here in Delhi. She thought abt realizing her love for Asad. She slumped on d couch as she kept on crying recalling her friends knowing her truth n breaking their friendship wid her. She recalled Asad teln her dat he hates her n felt as if someone stabbed her in her heart.

"I lost my friends 2day," said Zoya as she cried bitterly.

Precap: #At Seventh Heaven, Humeira tells Maan Singh dat she wants to change her room as she can't live wid Zoya. Zoya told her dat she don't need to take trouble as she will herself leave her room. Assistant manager Preeti who saw Zoya sad n crying near d corridor tells her dat she can stay in her room wid her n her 12 year old twin sons.

#Zoya's friends does not talk to her in college. Asad ignores her even wen they r at their lockers.

#Sexy Babes again call Zoya as lower class girl but Zoya defends herself again by saying dat she is of lower class but their behaviour is more lower class than her. Her friends r shocked dat Zoya is not shutting them up by saying dat she is more richer than them. Humeira asks her why she is not defending herself by saying dat she is rich Zoya replies rudely dat she can easily tell them to shut them by using her rich family status but wat abt her(Humeira) who can't use d same since she is not 4m a rich family like her n does she mean dat people who r not rich deserves to be insulted. She then tells her n her other friends dat she will do wat she wants n till wen she wants n she don't regret lying abt herself to everyone.

A/N: I showed Zoya not regretting for her lies because I don't want her to become like other mahaan heroines who are always righteous and regret for all their actions. She mentioned that she is not regretting for lying in her self talk in this part and precap. I don't care if anyone thinks her unapologetic bitch for that. Najma told Asad to forget that he loved Zoya because any sister on knowing the truth of someone who their sibling loved will say the same. This story is in a way a social issue on how many children are affected badly due to their own parents who wants them to fulfill their unfulfilled dreams through them and are harassed by them in doing many things to fulfill their dreams. Here Zoya was harassed into harsh diet and exercises by her mother to become a supermodel. At least, Zoya has not done any crime like stealing or killing anyone which many people like her do at some point of time. It was not easy to write a story with a flawed heroine as I hardly read such stories in any forums. I can't believe I made Zoya a liar for 12-13 parts.


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Superb update juhi...
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