Mriara Drabble series , *Close to you * , page 4 up !

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys , this will bethe place where ill post mriara drabbles , hope you like it , please leave your feedback and please hit the like button to motivate to write more 😃😃⭐️



Aankhein teri..

Maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere
Mrityunjay was standing near the mirror , he was changing his shirt , he was unbottoing his shirt , and tara was sitting on the bed with her head down in the pain , her mother had cut all her ties with her because she had refused to go with her , her reflexon was on the mirror , Mj was admiring her beauty , he removed his shirt ,



aankhein teri.. aankhein teri kitni haseen
ki inkaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu
ishq hai..
maula mere, maula mere

her lowered eyes , her hands were entwined thinking , alomst about to cry , lost in her thoughts , there was was , starin at her reflexion in the mirror ,


ki inakaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu


the greek god figure with broad shoulder and a well toned chest , he slowly touched her face in the mirror lovingly , with teary eyes , in the pain , he was the reason why her mother left her , he was guilty , he was badly ashamed of himself ,

mujhase yeh har ghadi, meraa dil kahe
tum hi ho usaki aarzoo
mujhase yeh har ghadi, mere lab kahe
teri hi ho sab guftagoo
baatein teri itni haseen, main yaad inko jab kartaa hoon
phoolon si aaye, khushaboo


he had the impossibility to live with her , he knew his destoniy , he didnt want her to invilve in his problems or his life , but he couldt hide his feelings for her anymore ,

at that mment she looked at him , he saw a well toned bare back in front of her eyes, she admired this sight , then her eyes fell on his strong arm touching at her faces reflexion in the mirror,


rakh loon chhupaa ke main kahin tujhako
saayaa bhi teraa naa main doon
rakh loon banaa ke kahin ghar, main tujhe
saath tere, main hi rahoon
zulfein teri, itni ghani
dekh ke inako, yeh sochataa hoon
saaye me, inake main jiyoon


he moved his fingers to her eys , in the mirrir , she got up and started walking towards him as if she was spellbount by his presence , he was so lost her that he didnt noticed her coming , when she reached him, she touched his arm making him to come back to hissense , and then she touched his shoulder to turn him to fa ce her ,


ishq hai..
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere


he tueend to look at her , they both shared an intense eyelock getting complertely lost in each other without breaking the eyelock she took his hasnd and took it towards her face , placing his hand thereand moving his hand on her face to carresses herr face , he lookeed at her, with love in his eyes mixed with pain , in a moment she wasnt moving his hand , he started to move his hand on her face carressing it she felt that and she then brought her hand down , he carressed her eyes coming down to her cheeks and then with his thumb he gently touched her lips , making her shiver ,

she opened her eyes , ionly to find him with teary eyes with his passionate gaze on her ,
t. mujhe meri maa ne chod diya mrityunjay , sab ne mujhe dheere dheere chod diya , ao toh mujhe apnalo mrityunjay , ap toh mujhse door na jao

saying this a lone tear escaped her eyes , he rested her forehead on hers with his hand on the side of his neck and face , she felt his tear on her face ... thinking of his inevitable destiny ... which only she could change




meraa dil yahi bolaa, meraa dil yahi bolaa,
yaara raaj yeh usane hai mujh par kholaa
ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein
usko pasand karta hai maulaa



Index

Aankhein teri.. , page 1
Sweet Torture , page 3
Close to you , page 4
Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Mini
MriAra Drabble series...lovely!!!

Loved the title, one of the best romantic songs...
And I think this songs suits MriAra and their love a lot!!

Loved the plot and how you executed it...
Tara was sad and Mj was guilty...

Loved the whole mirror sequence...
Their chemistry...

Too much emotional story yet beautifully written...

Thank you Mini for writing this story and sharing it with us!!!
Looking forward to read more of your writing...😊

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Mini, the drabble idea is great ⭐️

This story title is lovely 😊
This is one of my fab song 😃

It was happened after Aradhana left Tara..
You described the pain of Tara as well as MJ also 😊

MJ was guilty as he was the cause of Aradhana broke ties with Tara
He just wished to remove Tara's pain 😊
He was also mesmerized by her 😳

Tara caught it and went to him...
She painfully asked to be with her 😭

The whole story was very emotional ...

Superb writing 👏


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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow great story thanks 😊 hamesha iss tarah story wright karti rah na 😃
Edited by irfan2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome writing!!!
Title is too good!!!
Song selection is perfect !!!
Mriara ko aise imagine karna

Thanks for this part...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all It's a great Idea to write Drabble
👏

Nice title"Aankhein Teri"

The situation for drabble you choose is nice and
Beautifully written👏
I love your song selection

Tara ke liye bas itna kahongi ke

***Kitni masoom khuwahish hai iss devani lerki ki***
***Chahti hai mohobbat bhi kare aur khush bhi rahe***

Aur Mj ke liye

***Tujhe khuwabon mein aksar loag cheen lete hain***
***Tujhe wasta mohobbat ka mujhe sone na diya ker***

Thanks Mini
This is splendid and beautiful !
Thanks for writing and sharing with us.
Edited by SamreenJ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Wow Mini
MriAra Drabble series...lovely!!!

Loved the title, one of the best romantic songs...
And I think this songs suits MriAra and their love a lot!!

Loved the plot and how you executed it...
Tara was sad and Mj was guilty...

</font></font>
<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Loved the whole mirror sequence...
Their chemistry...

Too much emotional story yet beautifully written...

Thank you Mini for writing this story and sharing it with us!!!
Looking forward to read more of your writing...😊

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Thanks a lot nira

This is one of my fav songs its so beautiful as its emotional and suited the situiation so much

Yes even i thought that it suits there love so much and the way mj looks at tara ... In her eyes

Thank a you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful creation by you once again. 👏 👏 👏

I just love the romantic quotient in your FFs. 😳 😳 😳

Tara is sad and depressed as her mother has broken all the relations with her. 😭 😭 😭

No one can think his/her life like this. It is only MJ who can not only relax her but also can make her feel comfortable and support her in every condition. 😊 😊 😊

She wants a confirmation from him that he will be with her every time.


They love each other and his personality make her addict to him.😉 😉 😉 He is like a drug to her and she is always under his spell. 😳 😳 😳

Hey dear continue soon asap.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SamreenJ

First of all It's a great Idea to write Drabble

👏


***Kitni masoom khuwahish hai iss devani lerki ki***
***Chahti hai mohobbat bhi kare aur khush bhi rahe***

Aur Mj ke liye

***Tujhe khuwabon mein aksar loag cheen lete hain***
***Tujhe wasta mohobbat ka mujhe sone na diya ker***



Beautiful lines Sam
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: irfan2

wow great story thanks 😊 hamesha iss tarah story wright karti rah na 😃



thank you so much

glad u liked it

will write on mriara for sure

love this jodi a lot

thanks a lot

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