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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
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Mriara drabble : Close to you

Mrityunjay was stamding on the trrrase ... looking at the garden in a pleasant whether night ... he had came from office a tired ... he ws rrlaxing there ... soon...he felt a pair of hands on his chest and she had hugged h from back ... he looked down... and saw those colourful bangles of her writs ... he placed his hands on hrs ... and after a while he softly moved them from there and turned around ... he lookrd at her...his beautiful wife was standing in front of him... looking at him lovingly... he stared at her
... his eyes moved from her eyes to hrr lips ... with a slight nauthy smile on his face making tara blush a deep shade of pink ... she looked down in shyness ... right then ... he slid his hand on her waist and pulleed her against his chest ... until the distance between them disappeared as her body was no touchingbhis ... her hand stopped at his chest ...and his hand was now on her lower back...

Mj lifted her chin with his hand and looked in her eyes ... she hesitated in looking at him but she lifted her eyelids up to look at him so close to him ... her heartbeat was beating really fast ... he started to lean forward ... tara closed her eyes surrending herself to him ... he leaned forwrd at her lips but he changed the direction as he noticed her condition... ears have turned red hervcheeks were beetroot red and he could feel her heart pounding as if she was maria running in an huge open field ... he felt her knees going weak and he held her tightly ... he placed two wet kisses on her right cheek ... she felt btterflies in her stomach ... he looked at her... at her beautiful face ... he looked at her closed eyes and then... he placed a kiss on her eyes ... making her tighten her grip on his shirt ... he could feel his closeness was affecting her so much ... he kissed her forehead ...

He looked at her lips ...she opened her eyes ... only for getting lonst in his eyes ... where he could only find love fr her... they shared an intense and pationate eyelock ... he moved his eyes to her lips ... she understood his intentions... he leaned forward ... mwking the little distqnce between them vanish ... she closed her eyes in anticipqtion ... he had reached very close only a couple of mm between their lips ...

Adi entered the terrqaase by the door ... making tara and mj move back in embarrassement ... adi feeled really bad to disturb them and turned around ...
Adi .im sorry bhai... i shouldnt have come hre ...
And he was about to leave
Mj. No ... uh... dont worry ...

Tara had a dark shade of red on her cheeks and she ran out of there in embarrassement.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
no comment ?

itna bura tha kya ?
please guys , for the motivation of the writer comment even if its a line of motivation its really encouraging even if its one line
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Story 2 : Sweet Torture

Fabulous story Mini 👏

WOW !!! You took the situation from Tara's revenge mood 😃
Tara made beaten MJ
And MJ was in pain 😔

Tara wanted to take revenge more 😲
And she tried to tease MJ 😳
Really sweet revenge 😃

She wanted to make him understand what it is feeling when someone force ...
But how Tara was going I thought she would trapped by her own plan 😆
Seriously the scene was sensuous 😳

The title suits very well ⭐️


Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Story 3 : Close to you

Great story ⭐️

MriAra normal life 😛
It is a dream for us that we didn't watch

We always imagined when MriAra would lead a normal ..
How will be their romance 😳

Tara hugged MJ from behind, it was very romantic 😛
MJ also was on romantic mood..😉
I like their hug and MJ's kisses ☺️
Their eye lock was also very romantic 😳

This was about to kiss happen and Adi came 😲
Total embarrassment !!! 😳
Tara was so shy that she ran away from there 😆
Last part seems funny to me 😆 😆 😆

Good Job Mini 👏 👏 👏

It was not bad story at all dear 😃
You keep writing 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
This is another romantic and passionate story.

All your stories are so romantic I wondered sometimes how you describe their romance so beautifully?!!!!

MriAra's 'Terrace Romance'

Tara hugged him from the back
Then, MJ's wet kisses
And their eye-locks!!!!
you portrayed every situations brilliantly

Adi...bad timing!!!!
I laughed so hard imagining the last part!!!
Such an embarrassing moment!!!

Good job Mini!!!
Your drabble series is awesome!!!!
Keep writing more

And do share with us!!

And agree with Khadeja, we so wanted to witness MriAra's normal life, romantic moments between them but we didn't get the chance.
So, Thank you for writing!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Romantic passionate update !!!!
Great Tara romancing to mj !!!!

Superb description !!!!

Whole chapter I enjoyed thoroughly!!!

BT adi ki entry kyun !!

Great going
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: miniapplepie

no comment ?

itna bura tha kya ?
please guys , for the motivation of the writer comment even if its a line of motivation its really encouraging even if its one line



Dear why u get worried easily!!

Comment karne me late ho sakta hai !!!!

BT jab story mriara pe ho to pasand na aaye possible hi nai!!!!

So chill dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Another great Mriara story⭐️

Love the Title👍🏼
This time they are very close to each other😳
They feel much comfort into each other arms

We Ebians wanted that Happy life for them but kuch se kuch hogaya
I liked their hug and MJ's kisses
Tara was ready to surrender herself to his Patidev☺️😳

But Adi's entry...😲
Embarrassing hogaya😆
Door close q nahin kiya tha Tara👎🏼

You wrote it beautifully Mini👏
Keep updating 😃
Thanks for sharing with us!🤗



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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Love the title "Sweet torture"

thanks a lot dear
This is very seductive and sweetest torture from Tara's side😳

true , the way she was sooo romantic

but MJ BABA to self control mein PHD hain so😛

mj in this drabble has his senses in his hands so badly but , he could lost his control if hadnt gone away for sure

Mj warned her also in a sweetest way and then
Tara took a instantt jump out of the bed😆

tara wanted that only to take revenge sweet one for that night h e took her to a place and threadtedher that hell show her qwhat is kareeb aana

Tara bhi kam nahin hai aesa torture sirf Tara hi desakti hai MJ ko 👏

Embarrassed
Nice, sizzling and splendid Mini👍🏼

thanku dear

Thanks dear!
🤗
youre welcome
🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Splendid work Mini👏


thanku nira
I loved the title and one thing that is really interesting is, your perspective.👍🏼

thnku

This whole story you wrote from Tara's perspective and it is really nice!!!😛


the revenge of that night when he threated her about the " paas aana kya hota i wilshow you " ( if im not wrong this was the dialogue ) that night

Tara was seducing MJ & tried to tease him😳
this was exctly her revenge


But MJ warned her... 😉

so as not to lose his contrrol if she didnt stop
And I think Tara seriously was loosing her control gradually & that is why she left from there!!!😆

😳Embarrassed
Superb one Mini...!!!👏


thanku so much

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