Mriara Drabble series , *Close to you * , page 4 up ! - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Khadeja


Hey Mini, the drabble idea is great ⭐️

This story title is lovely 😊
This is one of my fab song 😃

It was happened after Aradhana left Tara..
You described the pain of Tara as well as MJ also 😊

MJ was guilty as he was the cause of Aradhana broke ties with Tara
He just wished to remove Tara's pain 😊
He was also mesmerized by her 😳

Tara caught it and went to him...
She painfully asked to be with her 😭

The whole story was very emotional ...

Superb writing 👏




thanks a lot khadeja

glad u liked it


mine too i love this song a lot

actuallly was watching that epi and this thought cam einto my mind so thought of penningit down

he wished to give her allt he love she deserves but his end was doesnt letting him do that... he was extremelly guilty ,,,,,, his heart ws huritng seeing her in so much pain ...

thanks a lot khadeja
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: miniapplepie



thank you so much

glad u liked it

will write on mriara for sure

love this jodi a lot

thanks a lot

thank you so much😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: kumari27

Awesome writing!!!

Title is too good!!!
Song selection is perfect !!!
Mriara ko aise imagine karna

Thanks for this part...




thanks a lot dear

thisis one of my all time fav songs

mriara hia hi itne dreamy

youre most welcome
Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

First of all It's a great Idea to write Drabble

👏

Nice title"Aankhein Teri"

The situation for drabble you choose is nice and
Beautifully written👏
I love your song selection

Tara ke liye bas itna kahongi ke

***Kitni masoom khuwahish hai iss devani lerki ki***
***Chahti hai mohobbat bhi kare aur khush bhi rahe***

Aur Mj ke liye

***Tujhe khuwabon mein aksar loag cheen lete hain***
***Tujhe wasta mohobbat ka mujhe sone na diya ker***

Thanks Mini
This is splendid and beautiful !
Thanks for writing and sharing with us.




i like writng small pieces of writings so that i can update whwner i have something written on mriara a roamntic scene


thanks alot dear

its one of my fav songs ever ,

love tis song to the core

@bold

awesome lines samreen

loved them

youre very nice poet



my pleasure writing on mriara




Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Wonderful creation by you once again. 👏 👏 👏

I just love the romantic quotient in your FFs. 😳 😳 😳

Tara is sad and depressed as her mother has broken all the relations with her. 😭 😭 😭

No one can think his/her life like this. It is only MJ who can not only relax her but also can make her feel comfortable and support her in every condition. 😊 😊 😊

She wants a confirmation from him that he will be with her every time.


They love each other and his personality make her addict to him.😉 😉 😉 He is like a drug to her and she is always under his spell. 😳 😳 😳

Hey dear continue soon asap.




thanks lot dear

when it comes to mriara romance hi romance suuj ta hai

when was watching that epi this situiation came into my mind so thugth of writng on it

but he is afraid to lover her because for him he has to go to jail

they both are so much in love cant s<ty without each other 😳

actually dear i havent written a contini coz it a independant drabbles



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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha



Beautiful lines Sam
👏 👏 👏



so true
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: irfan2

thank you so much😊



mention not 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: irfan2

thank you so much😊



mention not 😃
Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
thanks for reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you for reply

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