Modi and other family FF - Ghar Ghar ki kahaani.

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Part 1
Paridhi comes to MM after Gopi's recovery. She only did the recording part & gave that to Gopi which everyone came to know about it eventually. She does not feel good about Sona but for Sahir's happiness, she is not able to tell anything to her but she starts observing Sona.


The trio is admitted to the mental asylum. Gopi is unable to see her mother's condition but at the same time, she is disappointed with Madhu. Sona quarrels with Sahir for what the Modis did to Madhu. In comes, Paridhi & heated argument takes place between them.

Paridhi tries to slap her but Sona holds her hand & pushes her but Jigar saves her on time.

Sahir: How dare you push my mom?
Sona: when you people can do this to my mother why can't I?
Gopi comes in.
Sona: It is all because of you. First, you killed Radha & now you sent my mai to the mental asylum.

Gopi: When did she become your mother? As far as I know, my parents had 2 daughters & I am the one remaining. If you are my sister where were you at that time when my dad came to our place. I know my mamaji & dad will never hide these things.
Sona: Yes, she is not my mom but I consider her as one.
Gopi: Trust me, I didn't know my mom would do these things. I had convinced my maaji to give shelter to you people & this is what you guys are doing.
SHAME ON YOU.
Sona: You are insulting mother-daughter relationship.
Arguments take place between three of them. Gopi & Paridhi are together. Kokila comes in & screams
BASS BAHUT HO GAYA SONA. Either you apologize to my DIL's or pack your bag & leave the house.

Sona: You people have done this to my mom & I should keep quiet.
Kokila: Your so-called mai is wrong & you are defending her? She knows what all Radha did to us yet she is doing harm to the family. I was not ready to keep her in the first place but it was because of my Gopi Vahu I relented. It was only because of that you got the entry. You should be thanking my Gopi Vahu.
Sona: Even I was not ready to stay here but it was only for mai I am staying here. I agree that I had mistakenly kidnapped Samar but I married Sahir because I love him.
Sahir: Is this the way you behave with your elders? Apologize to them right away otherwise, I will throw all your belongings outside the house.
Sona reluctantly apologizes to all.
Paridhi: Sahir, now you know how your wife is! I will give her a months time. If she shows improvement in her behavior & changes her attitude, I will accept her as my DIL else you have to abide by what I say.
Sahir agrees.
Kokila: From now on, she will be under observation. We have put on the CCTV's in which every action will be recorded. Even when she goes out for shopping, somebody or the other will come with her. If Sahir comes with her, he too should report me. And Sona, don't be under the impression that you can come back to your old behavior once you get over this one month trial and no tricks from you. Your time starts from now.
Sona is shocked. She is thinking about meeting Madhu.
Kokila: And if you try to meet Madhu or even to communicate with her at any point in time, it won't be good. You shall not move out alone till we are convinced that you won't play any tricks. You shall not meet her unless we give you the permission.
Sona is shocked but she agrees.

Everyone leaves.
Sona: Why these rules are only for me? Please speak to your mom.

Sahir: It is dadi's decision. even if I tell my mom what can she do? You know dadi very well. Once she decides, she won't listen to anyone. So I cannot do anything in this regard except that I can take you to her. But you have to give me the assurance that whatever you speak to her, it should be in my presence. This is also dadi's wish & will. I'm very much helpless.
Sona is thinking what to do when she goes to Gopi & requests her send her for meeting Madhu.

Gopi: I understand your concern for mom. I too feel bad for her. No matter how she is, I cannot deny or change the fact that she is my mom. Maaji had warned me about her intentions but I requested her to give her(Madhu) a chance. I was hoping that she will not goof up but I am so much disappointed & I can't talk about it to my maaji. When she listened to my plea & everyone including my husband had requested the same. So, it is also my part to abide by her even if that person is my mom or whoever it is. Even I want to see her & speak to her but I cannot do that without Maaji's and/or Ahemji's permission. Sorry, I cannot help you in this matter.

Sona approaches all other Modi members except Kokila but they gave her the same reply. Baa told her to speak to Kokila about it. Sona is afraid to talk about it to Kokila that she somehow musters up the courage & goes to her room.

Kokila: I know why you have come here. Is it about your mai right?
Sona: Yes chhoti dadi.

Kokila: Well, you can meet her but not in private. Anyone of us will come with you if you are interested. Did you speak to Gopi Vahu about it?

Sona: Yes, I did but she said your permission is needed.

Kokila: I know Gopi Vahu very well. She has been longing for motherly love for the past 22 years. She forgives people very easily & never keeps any grudge. If she is willing you can go with her.

She then calls Gopi to her room & asks her to go with Sona to meet Madhu.

Gopi: But what about Ahemji? I need to ask him too. If you remember, when we sent Vidya to her in-law's place, he got very angry for not consulting him. We also knew about Meera's cheerharan but I didn't tell him that because you told me not to tell him. When he got to know about it, he broke all the relations & left the house. I am afraid of his temper & I can't put our relationship at stake. After all these incidents, I don't have the face to talk to him regarding this matter. So I told her that besides your permission, I need Ahemji's approval too.

Kokila: What you say is correct. I fully agree with you. Sona, have you heard what Gopi said just now. I knew that Gopi will say that. There were times when Ahem used to listen to me without questioning or analyzing but now things have changed a lot. Ahem's transformation is justified. He has got his immediate family and has got his responsibilities and priorities. Did you talk to Ahem about it?

Sona: No, I only spoke to ladies of this house till now. I have not talked to any men in the house other than Sahir.

Kokila: Speak to Ahem about it. If he agrees, I have no objection but bear one thing in mind. You won't go alone to meet her or speak to her in private. Even if you escape & go there without my knowledge, I will still get that information. We know everybody in the asylum plus we have friends everywhere.

Ahem comes & calls Gopi. She goes to Ahem who asks for green tea in his room. Gopi goes to the kitchen & prepares green tea. She then goes to the room & serves him. Ahem goes to the bathroom & freshes himself. He relaxes & sits on the sofa, making the presentation for the next day. Gopi is re-arranging the wardrobe. Ahem finishes his work & helps Gopi.

Then they start having some conversation & have some moments.

Ahem: Darling, so many days have passed. Don't you feel like seeing your mom? I know that after this incident, you are very much hesitant to meet her. I can understand your situation. My only concern is that Gaura & Premlatha would also be there & I can sense they are upto something. I dreamt they have befriended other mad people & will harm you when they see you. That is why I didn't want to send you alone or even talk about it. You two didn't ask me about it which made me ask myself whether I'm doing the right thing or not but she is your mom & we cannot change the fact.

Gopi: Sona too wants to meet her but maaji is not willing to send her alone. She specifically told her that if I agree then she will send her. But I want to ask you before proceeding.

Ahem is happy that Gopi has consulted him & it has been a very long time ever since she did that. Sona stands outside the room. Ahem sees her and asks her to come in.


Sona: I spoke to chhoti dadi about meeting Madhu mai...

Ahem: I know. We were also talking about it. You can go with Gopi to meet her but Myself, Jigar, Sahir & Samar will also come with both of you.

Sona is shocked but has no other option.

Gopi: Ahemji is right. People are not good there.

They all leave for the asylum.

To be continued...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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plz write FF in the title,only then others will know that its a FF.Loved Paridhi fight with Sona.Kokila supported Paridhi.I hope in one month paridhi will tame sona well.Plz include more khatta meetta scenes of Paridhi Sona like Kokila Rashi used 2 have.They all r going 2 meet Madhu.I hope nothing goes wrong.
Can u specify what really happened to Gopi's n Rashi's father.They went to meet Madhu n sona?i'm confused
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

plz write FF in the title,only then others will know that its a FF.Loved Paridhi fight with Sona.Kokila supported Paridhi.I hope in one month paridhi will tame sona well.Plz include more khatta meetta scenes of Paridhi Sona like Kokila Rashi used 2 have.They all r going 2 meet Madhu.I hope nothing goes wrong.
Can u specify what really happened to Gopi's n Rashi's father.They went to meet Madhu n sona?i'm confused



Thanks for the suggestion. I have added FF to the title & changed it. GoShi's fathers part will come later.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice title.. but doesnt suit these two...
i always hated pari & also hate sona...
but d story was gud...
thnks 4 d pm..
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Part 2
Ahem, Gopi, Jigar, Sahir, Sona & Samar enter the asylum & ask for Madhu at the reception & they get the information that Madhu's ward number is 13. She is with Premlatha & Gaura. The trio is found fighting among themselves. They all blame each other.

Gaura: I had told you what to do to stop the girls & pagli samdhan from visiting Gopi. How did you allow them?

Premlatha: The girls didn't listen to us. Jigar gave them the address & foiled our plans.

Madhu: Despite puncturing the tier, they reached the place.

Premlatha: The girls stole the key from the ward boy & met Gopidi.

Gaura: Enough! You people are really useless. Premlatha, you could have tied those girls & Urmila luring them elsewhere.

Premlatha: If I had done that everyone would have got the doubt about my identity.

Madhu: They found it out in any case. Your idea was really stupid. What was the need to make Gopi act as a mad woman? She sobs.

Premlatha: You have become emotional about Gopi all of a sudden.

Gopi, Sona, Ahem, Sahir & Jigar see Madhu. Sona gets emotional seeing Madhu. Gopi feels bad for her & confronts her.

Madhu: I'm your mother, I'm sorry. Please forgive me.

Gopi: I never expected this from you. If you had any grudge towards me, you could have talked to me directly instead of doing these bullshit things. You have insulted mother-daughter relationship. Even now I don't see any regrets form your side and now when you are in this condition, you are thinking about me.

Madhu: I know that I have troubled your family a lot. I could not digest the fact that Radha died in your hands.

Gopi: I didn't get any pleasure to do that either. What made you to think that maaji told me to kill her. On the contrary everyone told me not to do that but they supported me in this step. She had gone out of control. What else I could do? We could not even reach out to the cops as the place was lonely and we could not reach out to the police.

Sahir: Even we had accused badi maa without knowing the full truth but apologized to her after knowing the full story. She had almost killed our badi maa. Bade pappa searched for her everywhere in the river but could not find her.

Sona: When you brought me to MM, you told me to be in the good books of the Modi family. You have been doing these things and I didn't even know about it. I miss you a lot.

Gaura and Premlatha were interfering in their talks.

Ahem: Shut up both of you. I am talking to my MIL.

Gaura: Hey dufford.

Gopi: Shut up otherwise I will call the nurse if you don't allow me to speak to my mom.

Ahem: Yes, that is better. They call the nurse to make them shut their mouth.

Gopi: Sister, please attend to these 2 ladies.
The nurse gives them injection & tie them up tightly, giving them electric shock. The injection makes them unconscious.

Madhu pleads to Ahem & others for forgiveness. Ahem says, "You are Mom's & Gopi's culprit. Gopi is innocent so she will forgive you in no time but to get my mom's forgiveness, you have to win back her trust. If she forgives you, it means that I have forgiven you."

Gopi: As a daughter, I can forgive you but as a DIL, wife & mother, it is hard for me to do so. You have to give me some time to get over it. You first talk to my maaji.

Madhu: I'm ready to do what you tell me to do but please take me out from here.

Gopi: It is upto the doctors to decide.

Nurse comes & tells them to leave as their time is up. All of them leave.

Madhu cries a lot. Premlatha tells her that she has developed affection for Gopi. Madhu said "She is my daughter. I thought Gopi killed Radha because Kokila told her to do. One daughter left the world & another daughter is not ready to forgive me. It is all because of you people."

Gaura: It was you who approached me for friendship to take revenge from Modi family. I was not interested in your friendship.

Premlatha: And it was you who tempted me to become Kokila Modi. Otherwise, I was quite content as a sabziwali.

Gaura: Tum dono ka toh koi aukaat hi nahin hain. Whatever you guys got it was because of me.

Madhu: Exactly & because of you, I'm in this asylum.

The nurse comes & gives them injections because of too much of noise. The doctors decide to change their ward. Madhu is retained in the same ward. They shift Gaura to Ward no 420 & Premlatha to Ward no 210. They inform the same to the Modi family.

At MM
Kokila asks them how was Madhu to which they reply they could not speak to her properly because of Gaura & PL.

Gopi: Mom is apologizing to us. I feel that you need to see her once.
All agree with Gopi.

Kokila: That is what I was fearing but now the doctors have shifted them to different wards. I will definitely make a point to see her though I don't trust her.

Paridhi tells Sona to cut some vegetables. Sona agrees but Paridhi is not satisfied the way she does. Sona argues that when PL was there, she didn't point out.

Paridhi: Who is your MIL? Is it PL or me? If you compare me with that lady, go to your mai & PL forever. Don't ever come to our house.

Sona reluctantly agrees. Kokila overheard the conversation. She says, "Sona, you wanted to meet Madhu, I accepted your request. Now you have to learn our ways if you want to stay here."

Sona: But you never sent me alone.
Kokila: Do you know where Madhu is? Just now you went to see her. I didn't send you there alone because it is not advisable for a girl to go alone to such places. Gopi is a mother of two grown up girls but still we don't allow her to go alone.

Sona: But will you go alone to meet mai?
Kokila: I will go with my Gopi Vahu & possibly with Ahem dikra or Paridhi. If you want to come with us, you should behave accordingly.

Sona takes a long time to cut them. Hetal comes in & tells her to make the aata ready for chapathi while she is cutting those vegetables. Kokila then tells her to take out the clothes from the terrace. Sona goes there grumbling.

Sona gets exhausted at the end of the day.

Paridhi: What happened? You got tired so quickly.

Sona: Premlatha never gave me that much work.

Paridhi: Ok, tell me what you were doing when I was not there?

Sona: I was asked to do aarti early in the morning & prepare breakfast.

Paridhi: Then why are you struggling so much now? When I entered as a DIL, I learnt cooking from Gopi. I learnt some of the things by observing keenly & I expect you to do the same.

After everyone finished their dinner, everyone goes to their room. Sona complains to Sahir about back pain.

Sahir: Well, to be honest, fake Kokila asked you to make dishes according to her choice & that was easy for you but now things are different. You need to win my mom's heart. You can do it by listening to her.

He then massages her back Sona gets relief.

Kokila calls Gopi & gives her the responsibility which PL had taken that from her & gave to Sona. She also tells her to teach Sona whatever she does not know.

Ahem comes and requests Gopi to make green tea and mango shake for him. Gopi does it promptly and takes it to the room. After having them, he opens his computer and analyzes the report to prepare for next day's meeting. He asks Gopi for a file and she gives it to him.

Gopi presses the clothes with iron box and puts the clothes neatly inside the cupboard. Ahem gets backache and tells Gopi to massage it. Gopi does the massage. Ahem gets relieved from his pain. He tells Gopi that a huge project has come to him and shows her the project details. It was the same project which he got before Gopi had killed Radha.

Ahem: It is the same project which uncle took charge of it when you were in jail and I had left the house. But this is completely different but the client is the same. We have to go to USA for one year. This time, it is you, me and possibly Meera. But we have to be away from the family.

Gopi: Maaji is the concern for us.

Kokila overhears their conversation and tells them to go to USA as this is their second chance. Meera had divorced Dharam and she agrees to join them. She also tells them that she will continue her studies in US. Everyone agrees.

To be continued
Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Nice! Do continue, and keep entertaining us!
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Madhu is regretting.thats gud.loved paridhi training sona in cooking too.gohem massage scene was gud.gohem n meera going 2 US.meera will do higher studies there.U made Dheera divorce😉
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Gutted if Gopi et all forgive Madhu. She should rot.
Nice start btw 😃
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Madhu is regretting.thats gud.loved paridhi training sona in cooking too.gohem massage scene was gud.gohem n meera going 2 US.meera will do higher studies there.U made Dheera divorce😉


As per the real show dheera already signed dps
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Part 3
Ahem and Gopi request Kokila to come with them to US. Kokila roundly refuses as Hetal and Baa will be left alone. However on Gohem's insistence, Kokila agrees to join them after 2 months. Paridhi assures that she will take care but will take tips from her to tackle Sona. Kokila tells Paridhi that she can tackle that girl better than anyone else but she has to inform her if Sona goes out of control. Meera gets the student visa. News reach Suryavanshi house. Vidya is still upset with Shravan for not revealing him about the matter. Vidya decides to join her parents in US and complete her studies with Meera. Shravan supports her decision. Vidya comes to Modi Bhavan and informs the family about joining her parents and her husband has got no objections. Shravan gets the project in US and will have to be there for one year. He informs the Modis about it and joins Vidya. Kokila: In the mean time, I need to see Madhu.
Ahem, Gopi, Paridhi and Sona accompany Kokila. They go to the asylum and meet Madhu who is very pale and sad. She begs for Kokila's forgiveness but she refuses and says, "I have lost my trust on you. In the first place, I was very much aware of your intentions but good enough to listen to Gopi and keep you."
Madhu: Whatever you tell me to do, I will abide to it but please don't keep my children away from me.
Kokila: Gopi Vahu is not your daughter nor is Meera, Vidya and Rashi are your grand daughters. You are not fit for being a mother.
Urmila too comes to meet Madhu and tells her that Kokila is right.

Urmila: I agree that I have done a lot of kalakaris. I have troubled the Modi family with my
kalakaris . I have cheated many people and extracted money from them and I have not paid the money that I owe. But I never went to the extent of kidnapping. Your deeds have proved that Radha is your true blood. She had inherited these qualities from you. Jeetu & Jayantilal had also come with Urmila.

Jeetu: I never expected this from you. I have always stood by you when Urmila was against you. I restricted her because of you & have sheltered you when your hubby Jayantilal had gone abroad for shooting though my wife didn't want you. You have let me down.

Jayantilal: Even I never expected this from you. When Gopi was not around us, you had lost your mental balance to such an extent that you were taking others child, thinking that she is Gopi & now you have done this to our daughter. It was better if we had stayed where we were. At least Radha would have been there with us. I'm ashamed of calling you as my wife.
He then apologizes to Gopi's in-laws & Ahem on behalf of Radha & Madhu.

Kokila: It is not your fault. I had come to meet Madhu only to tell her that my son, DIL & grand-daughters are going to USA.

Ahem says" I don't have anything against you. However, whatever she did to my mom & Gopi cannot be forgotten. Gopi has recovered well from the electric & mental shock but she needs time to get over that shock that Sasuma has caused & I am not in a position to make her forget as I am also in the same trauma. I feel her pain & it has hurt me as well. I can only make her smile by being mischievous with her so as to divert her mind from these things when she is free & console her when she is in tears & distress. I only hope that she does not have to live in those memories all her life. But she is perfectly alright. Nothing to worry."

Jayantilal: What you say is also right. But I request you to try & forget all that my wife did so that you will be able to help Gopi to get over it.

Ahem: You are right. I will try my best. I hope this trip will be refreshing for us.

Madhu speaks to Sona & tells her, "You are also like my daughter & have always stood by me. To give you a decent life, I got you married to that family. At least you try to understand me."

Before Sona could say something, Kokila intervenes & tells her, "FYI, you didn't get her married to Sahir. You had got Samar kidnapped. Sahir has married her without informing us. I know you were also involved in this. What not did you do that I should forgive you? When Rashi was under the truck, you didn't make an effort to save her. If you had not done anything more than that after entering our house, I would have considered your case."

Madhu: When your son left, you were in pain. Even Urmila was in pain after she lost her daughter. I realized my mistake & can't live without Gopi. She is my only hope. As you are a mother, I believe that you can understand my pain. Please forgive me.

Kokila: It all depends on Gopi. Once she overcomes this trauma, you can spend time with her.
Inwardly, she tells Madhu, "You won't see her for at least one year. If you get discharged within one year, you are very lucky vaivaanji."

Paridhi tells Sona, "If you want to tell something to Madhu, write it in the piece of paper & give me. I will pass it on to her." Sona writes it & gives to Paridhi who leaves the chit to Madhu. As Madhu opens the chit, she finds the message, "Dear Mai, Wish you a speedy recovery. Once you are back, don't do anything more than that. Once Chhoti dadi is convinced that you have changed, she herself will come to you. If she forgives you, it means that bade pappa & badi maa has forgiven you. Take Care."

Sona thinks, "This is the way to win the trust of the Modi family. Once I meet Madhu privately, I will help her to take revenge from the Modi family without affecting Sahir. But how will I do that? If one gets hurt, it will automatically hurt others. I should somehow win Paridhi' maa's confidence & take Sahir away from here. For that, I need to split Sahir from the family. That itself is a revenge."

At MM

Kokila tells Sona to make tomato soup. Sona is excited. she makes the soup ready. When it came to having it, it had more salt and Baa could not have it. Kokila confronts Sona.

Kokila: Could you not make a simple soup. It seems that Madhu didn't teach you anything.
Sona: I didn't get an opportunity.
No one had taken the soup after baa tasted it. Gopi takes it to the kitchen and rectifies the soap and brings it back to the table. Everyone drinks the soup and are happy.
Kokila: It is simple but you are lost in your thoughts.
Sona: I was thinking about mai.
Paridhi comes in and tells Sona not to lose courage. Even Hetal had not accepted Sona as a bahu but is very happy that Paridhi is handling her well. She then tells Sona to clean the puja room. Sona cleans it. When Urmila was passing by, a small glass pricks her leg and it was in the puja room. She screams.
Kokila comes and sees that the glass had pricked Urmila's leg. Meera removes the glass and dresses the wound.
Kokila then asks where was the glass.
Urmila: It was in Puja room.
Kokila reminisces that Sona had swept the floor and confronts her again. She tells Kokila to clean it again. Sona sweeps and finds more dirt there. Gopi guides her and this time the puja room is spic and span.
Sona has a back pain again and she misses Madhu. At the end of the day, Sahir sees Sona crying and feels sorry for her. He puts the spray where she has the pain. Sona gets the relief.
Ahem and Jigar come from office with the clients to show them a presentation and they get the project. Jigar, Sahir and Samar takes up the project as Ahem is leaving for US with the family.
Gopi & Ahem does the packing and ensure that nothing is missing. Gopi's dad comes to MM to see his daughter, son-in-law and grand-children. He blesses them all and comes with them till the airport.

To be continued


Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago

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