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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Part 15

Siddharth tells Dharam that he understands that Gaura is his mom, no matter how she is but it has to be ensured whether she is pretending or not. Dharam takes Gaura's court files. Siddharth comes there with the cops. They show the file to the hospital that if any such thing happens, they will be under police observation whether it is genuine or not & the family members should be called only if it is genuine. Dharam further says that he has lost all his trust on Gaura. So it will be better if they call him if she is not faking. The hospital authorities agree. Gaura is under police observation. They get the confirmation that Gaura is perfectly alright but is mentally sick. It was also mentioned in the documents that if Gaura happens to be mentally sound, she should be imprisoned for at least 10 to 12 years as it was a kidnapping & attempt to murder case. After checking her thoroughly, the hospital finds out that Gaura as faked her heart attack and is also mentally sound as an insane person cannot do such drama. The court decides to imprison Gaura for 12 years and she will get tortured in jail as well.

Raghav is sad & depressed as he is still not getting any peace despite getting back his full family. Meera consoles him & tells him that it is a part of life. Raghav's mood becomes better. He offers Meera to come with him for a long drive so they can spend time with each other. Siddharth, Dharam & the Modis give them permission but should be back by evening as they have to get ready for the engagement party. Raghav & Meera have their moments while all others are making the preparations for the engagement. Both decide to leave in the afternoon as it will take 3 hours for them to reach home and they have to get dressed up as well. Raghav & Meera start from the Napean Sea Road and are heading towards home.

Sahir asks Sona to massage his back and tells her that it is paining. When Sona is about to massage, Sahir gets mischievous with her. He takes her hand near his chest. Sona asks him, "What is wrong with you?" Sahir says, "I don't have pain anywhere except in the heart. I love you so much and it hurts when you are away from me." Sona says, "When did I go away from you?" Sahir says, "True but when we spend time with each other, someone or the other comes to our room." Paridhi and others see that and tells them to spend time as much as they want now as they have to get ready for the engagement party. She tells them that they have done a good job in making preparations.

The elders of the house check whether anything is missing or not and find that the preparations are over. Sahir, Sona, Samar and Vidya had decorated the house well. Gopi, Paridhi, Sona and Vidya had made varieties of snacks for the party.

Raghav & Meera are back home. Both of them are asked to relax & freshen up as they have traveled a long distance. After 2 hours, Meera & Raghav get dressed up & become a centre of attraction.
The guests come in for the engagement.

Ahem remembers his days & realizes how grim he was on that day & was not at all happy on his wedding day. He remembered working on the file even one day before his wedding & realizes that he has neither stood up for his girl-friend nor has he lived in the present after moving on in his life with Gopi, meaning that he had done injustice to both. Gopi goes to him & asks him why he has become quiet all of a sudden.

Ahem said,"We will be missing Meera in the days to come & I wish I had lived in the present. I want to make up for all unpleasant incidents that had happened in our lives. So that I can spend the rest of my life with you happily."

Suddenly, Ahem gets mischievously romantic. The guests kids are running everywhere & peep in to their room.

Gopi gets shy & tells Ahem, "The kids are watching. What are you doing?"

Ahem locks up the door & covers them up with curtains, switches off the light, puts on the candle & have romantic moments as there is still plenty of time for the ceremony to start.

Ahem says,"It has been long we have ever shared these moments. One of the most memorable days in our life was on that Holi day after which we got Meera. It is so refreshing that we had these moments again."

Gopi said, "True, the only difference is that you didn't remember immediately about what we did but by Kanhaji's grace that you remembered everything as soon as you got the news about my pregnancy."

Ahem apologizes to her once again & kissed Gopi on her forehead. He said, "I won't just promise you by only by words but I will show it by action as words can always twist & break." Gopi smiles.

Jigar said,"Paridhi, I'm sorry I could not give her the love she deserved. I could not forget Rashi. You have done a good job in grooming & moulding Sonakshi. Whatever she is today, it is because of you. I want to make up for what I could not give you."

Paridhi said," I want a child of my own blood. That is more than enough for me. Even Sahir & Samar don't have any objection."

Jigar said,"I don't know whether it is right to have a child now but even I feel the same now. I never had any relationship with Radha but Rashi 2 is the output between me & her & she is much younger to all the children here. It is not a big deal to have one more as you are my present love."

After the couples have spent their moments, everyone gets dressed up & come down. Meera & Raghav gets best wishes from all. Both of them exchange rings, completing the engagement.

The surprise item comes in which the couples have to perform individual dance.

To be continued.

Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
as i guessed gaura had faked heart attack n is jailed 4 12 yrs.Raghav Meera went 4 long drive,later they got engaged.nice.Loved Sahir Sona romantic scene n loved d dialogues.In ur ff dialogues r very less.but i felt very happy that u gave nice dialogues 4 Sahir Sona.Gohem also got intimate.nice.liked Jigar appreciating paridhi 4 grooming sona well.She deserves it.She wants 2 give birth to Jiga's baby.so sweet.I always wonder y they have no child of their own.Who knows they may come up later with a news that paridhi lost her baby or had miscarr during d last 10 yrs.
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
I have edited ff & added gohem dialogues too.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

as i guessed gaura had faked heart attack n is jailed 4 12 yrs.Raghav Meera went 4 long drive,later they got engaged.nice.Loved Sahir Sona romantic scene n loved d dialogues.In ur ff dialogues r very less.but i felt very happy that u gave nice dialogues 4 Sahir Sona.Gohem also got intimate.nice.liked Jigar appreciating paridhi 4 grooming sona well.She deserves it.She wants 2 give birth to Jiga's baby.so sweet.I always wonder y they have no child of their own.Who knows they may come up later with a news that paridhi lost her baby or had miscarr during d last 10 yrs.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
read them.lovely dialogues.Ur dialogues r so nice.then why r u not adding dialogues in ur stories?

Originally posted by: katrinasalman

I have edited ff & added gohem dialogues too.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Part 16

Everyone gets excited about the individual dance. First, all the couples dance on the song Salaame ishq.

Raghav & Meera dance on the song Halla Re
Shravan & Vidya dance on Prem Ratan Dhan Payo
Sahir & Sona dance on Gerua
Jigar & Paridhi dance on Chudi khankayi re
Ahem & Gopi dance on Radha kaise na jale.

Meera then offers to dance on a solo song & dances on ae bachchoo & does that.
Urmila & Kinjal dances on Sheela ki Jawaani.
Sahir, Samar, Shravan & Raghav dance on Gangnam style.
Kokila, Hetal & Madhu dance on Dola Re Dola Re.

The surprise item & the engagement party ends. Meera & Vidya go to the room. Meera said, "I had married & divorced a person from Suryavanshi family but am marrying the person who is getting love from foster & real parents. You & Shravan can also join us as Shravan is Raghav;s younger brother.
Vidya said, "I will talk to Shravan about it."
Gopi comes in & hugs both her daughters. She said, "I will be missing both of you. But we are always there for you. Please feel free to share your problems with us." All three of them get emotional. Ahem joins them & hugs Meera & Vidya.
Sahir tells Sona, "You have danced very well. I remember those days my Rashi mom used to dance." Sona asked, "Do you think I can be like your mom?"
Sahir said, "Well that is difficult as my mom was unique but you are good in your way."
Paridhi comes in & tells Sona, "There is still so much to do. So you have to wake up early in the morning." Sona said, "With all pleasure."
In Gohem's room,
Ahem recollects all the moments with his family & gets emotional. Gopi comes in and asks, "What is this? You don't seem to be happy."
Ahem said, "I have mixed feelings. But am sad that I will be missing our daughters." Gopi said, "I too miss them. I remember when I was carrying Meera, you told me that you want a girl whereas I wanted a boy. It is for this reason."

Ahem said, "I've never thought about that but I heard that girls have more attachment towards their parents than boys. If you had been with me in those 18 years we could have had more romantic moments. We all have a bad habit to blame somebody without knowing the other side of the story. Even though mom blamed you for Meera's accident, at least I should have asked you how did it happen. Though we believed that you cannot harm anyone especially your own daughter, we have accused you. As for Radha, I should have worked on a strategy & helped you & mom which I didn't. I chose to run away from the problems when you went to jail.

Gopi said, "It was also my fault. I didn't tell anyone in the house when I was carrying Vidya. I didn't even send a text message by SMS or whatsapp. I shouldn't have left the house. I knew that if I had told about my second carriage, Radha would have been a threat to our child & would have done anything to cause miscarriage for me. I shouldn't have believed Radha & given Rashi Jr to her."

Jigar & Paridhi consummate once again.

Ahem said, "We cannot get back our past but hereafter, I will never let you go away from me nor will I leave you. I will show it by my actions."

Ahem jokingly said, "I think we too can have one more child possibly a boy as you wanted it when you were carrying Meera. When Jigar can think about starting his family with Paridhi, why can't we have one more child?"

Gopi too jokes , "We have anyway started it. Lets see the output this time." Both laugh.

To be continued.
Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Nice dance scene.loved d song selec 4 each couple.wish 2 c it on d show.Wih instead of urmila n kinjal it was kinjal dhwal.Dhawal quit d show,but in ur ff he can be there.Its true that ahem always blamed gopi without knowing d real story.hope this time he keeps his promise 2 b with her always.Ahem wants gopi 2 have one more baby?A boy?OMG!Will they have a child along with Jigar Paridhi?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
So more babies in the offing? I do feel sad that Sona is being used as a maid. Seems to be a rite of passage but it seems wrong.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
I will be ending this FF as we will be seeing Paridhi's reaction from tomorrow.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
u can end this ff,but dont leave it with loose end.give it a proper ending

Originally posted by: katrinasalman

I will be ending this FF as we will be seeing Paridhi's reaction from tomorrow.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Of course, I will close all the loose ends.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

u can end this ff,but dont leave it with loose end.give it a proper ending

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