ISHRA SS ~Zehnaseeb~ Chapter 18 on Pg 94

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Hola ppl.
I hope you all are doing well in your lives.. So the thing is that there was an idea which was popping in my mind again and again... That's why I thought to pen it down and give some peace to my mind...😆
So bear with me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH !

Ishita Iyer

A girl of age 25 years... owner of a beautiful smile and a kind heart... gifted intelligent but lacks self-confidence... living along with her friend Mihika in a small apartment... but behind her beautiful smile she hides her terrible past... !

Raman Bhalla

A 27 year old happy go lucky guy... has been appointed as new branch manager of a well known company in Mumbai... was engaged to a girl named Shagun but called it off soon... he is a self-made man...he has achieved everything in life with his hard work..!
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Chapter 1

Ishita's POV


Lighting ho gayi...

Tables?! Aiyoo murgan... abhi tak saari tables pe covers nahi chade..

(Lightings done.. tables?! aiyoo murgan... the tables are yet to be covered..)

"Ashim! Ashim!" I called out.

"Yes, ma'am!" Ashim replied as he appeared from somewhere behind.

"Yeh kya? Abhi tak sare tables pe cover nahi chade...mehmaan aate honge! Jaldi kare..." I said.

(What is it? tables are not ready yet! guests can come any moment.. finish this faster)

Ashim looked around, "I am sorry... main abhi karva deta hu... paanch min lagenge bas! Achha aap please ek baar caterers' se baat kar lein." Ashim said as he moved towards his team.

(I am sorry ma'am.. I will make sure this is completed soon..! it will take not more than 5 mins... can you please go and talk to caterers?)

Ashim, yeh janaab manager hai uss event organizing team ke jinhe humne hire kiya hai, khair hire karne ka koi fyaada nahi hua... balki mera he kaam ulta badd gaya...

Kasam hai, agli dafa kuch bhi ho jaye.. main event management katai nahi karungi...

Chalo abb caterers' ko bhi dekh lete hai..

(Ashim, he is the manager of the event organizing team which we have hired.. anyways it was of no use..! Seriously, I wont take up this event management ever again... its a pain.. come on.. lets check on the caterers as well)

"Haan jee! Kya pareshaani hai?" I asked as I reached the spot where the manager of caterers' was standing along with few of the chefs. Apparently he was scolding the chefs there.

(Yeah.. whats the issue?)

"Kuch nahi ma'am bas chef ne dessert ke liye choco-vanilla cake bana diya hai, jabki maine inhe saaf saaf bataya tha ki choco-chip brownie banegi!" manager replied as he glared his team of chefs.

(Nothing much.. the chefs have prepared choco-vanilla cake instead of choco-chip brownies... although my instructions were very much clear!)

"Yeh toh problem ho gayi... aapne pehle dekhna chahiye tha na? Abb kya karenge?" I said with creases of worry.

(Oh no.. its a matter of worry now..you should have checked it beforehand.. now what? )

"Kuch nahi ma'am aap chinta mat kariye...choco-chip brownie he serve hogi...yeh log bana denge!" he replied.

(Please don't worry... we will serve brownies only... they will prepare it!)

"Aur jo ban gaya hai uska kya? Rehne dein... Choco-vanilla cake he serve kar dijiyega... khamakha waste hoga warna!" I replied.

(And what will you do with the cake then?! leave it.. serve the cake only.. there is no use of wasting the food)

The manager nodded as mumbled a sorry and directed his chefs' to be more careful in future.

I looked around, sab thik lag raha!

Murgan bas aaj ka function thik se karva de...uske baad kuch nahi chahiye...

(Everything looks fine...Murgan just make sure.. things go smoothly today.. I don't need anything after this!)

Aap log soch rahe honge ki main yeh kis party in tyaarion mein busy hu.. hai na?!

Main batati hu...meri company, yaani jis company mein main kaam karti hu, ussne ek bahout badi deal crack kari hai... yeh celebration issi khushi mein ho raha hai...

Humari company ke saare sponsors, high profile clients, management sab aayenge aaj... issiliye main nahi chahti ki koi bhi kami reh jaye..

Aur Raman sir ne itne trust ke saath mujhe yeh responsibility di hai... I don't want to let him down!

(you must be wondering with what all i am busy... okay let me tell you.. the company for which i work has cracked a big deal.. so this celebration is for that! all the sponsors, high profile clients are gonna be here.. that's why i don't want any kind of issues..and Raman sir has laid so much trust on me.i don't want to let him down..)

Then suddenly my eyes fell on a girl standing near the candles, Yeh yahan kya kar rahi hai?

(What is she doing here?)

"Anamika?!" I called her out!

"Ishita! Tum kitni pyaari lag rahi ho" she complimented me.

(Ishita you are looking so pretty!)

"Khair abb main itni bhi achhi nahi lag rahi tum batao, tum abhi tak tyaar kyu nahi hui?" I asked.

(Oh please.. its nothing.. why are you not ready huh?)

"Arre yaar.. these candles!" She said as she showed her the unlighted candles around.

"Chhodo isse yeh main karti hu... tum change kar aao!" I replied.

(Ohho... leave them.. i will do it! you go and change..)

"You sure?" she looked uncertain.

"Haan yaar... come on go!"

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Raman's POV


Sab thik ho jayega... Don't worry Raman!

Everything will turn out well...

Oh hello! Aagey aap log... kaise hai aap sab.?!

Main bilkul thik hu...

Kya kaha? Thik nahi lag raha?! Kyu bhai...?

Main thik hu...

Pareshaan lag raha hu...?

Nahi toh...!

O..kka...y fine... thik nahi hu! Pareshaan nahi hu.. nervous hoon!

Nahi, party ke liye nahi... mujhe pura aitbaar hai Ishita par... she will handle everything perfectly...

Nervousness kisi aur baat ki hai!

Kis baat ki...?! Ummm... kaise batau?

Baat Ishita se related hai...! Nahi samjhe...

Achha! Iss baat ke baad humari zindagi badal jayegi... abb kuch samjh mein aaya? Abb bhi nahi...!

Ohho..! achcha wait..

(Everything's gonna be fine! Don't worry.. everything will turn out well...Oh hello! You guys have come...how ae you all? I am good...what did you just say? i am not looking well.. why so?! I am looking worried?! Hell no..! ok fine.. but i am not tensed.. i am nervous! no.. not about the party.. i trust Ishita for that.. nervousness is about sumthing else... well it is related to Ishita only! Okay.. our life will change after this moment.. No?! uff wait then!)

He opened the drawer, and took out a red velvet box. Wanna see it?

He carefully opens it, and there lies a beautiful diamond ring...

Abb toh samajh he gaye honge? Yess..!! Main Ishita ko aaj propose karne wala hoon... Isiliye hawayiyaan udi hui hai...

Ring kaisi lagi? ... Thank you! Bahout mehnat lagi select karne mein... pura din mall mein ghumne baad finally yeh select ki...

Pata nahi kaise react karegi? I hope mind na kare...

Aap log mere liye pray karna...

(Now you get it?? yes.. i am going to propose her today... that's why i am nervous... Howz the ring? i am glad you liked it.. i have literally spent my whole day looking for the perfect one...! I hope she doesn't mind my proposal.. Pray for me..!)

He re-checked himself for the 1000th time in mirror, carefully placed the box in his blazer's pocket, put on his cologne and took in a breath as he left his house!

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He could see the guests pouring in but he had to wait outside as CEO of the company was on his way...about to get to the venue.

Uff... aur kitni der lagegi inhe...

Yeh sabse fizool kaam lagta hai mujhe... pagalo ki tarah bahir khade raho.. aur apne boss ka intezaar karo... jaise humare pass aur koi masroofiyat he nahi hai...

Maine subah se Ishita ko nahi dekha... mere ko milna hai usse...

(Uff... how much time more? this is the most ridiculous task.. keep waiting for your bosses like crazy.. as if we don't have any other work... i have not seen her from morning.. i have to meet her..!)

He heard the honking of a lavish BMW...

Ahh... finally!

"Welcome sir!" I said while faking a smile as I held the door open for him.

"Thank you! Congratulations Raman on the achievement..." he said.

"Thank you so much sir... but it was a team effort!" I replied as politely as possible.

"Come on lets go inside!" he replied.

"Yes sir for sure!" I said and we started to move inside the venue. As soon as we reached inside, the crowd gathered them from all the sides to congratulate them.

"Crap!" I murmured.

As everyone was congratulating him, his eyes were just looking for her...

And there she was!

He looked at her and his heart skipped a beat... She was looking divine in deep blue floor length anarkali...she was laughing on something...her smile was to die for!

His trail of thoughts was broken by one of the guests standing along with him. He shifted his gaze away.

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Ishita's POV


Murgan!! How can sumone be so handsome...?!

She saw him as soon as he entered the venue along with CEO... he was looking dangerously handsome in that white shirt and black trousers paired with a blazer.

She couldn't take her eyes off until she saw that he was too looking for her... she won't be able to meet his melting gaze!


Raman's POV


He was thanking everyone as politely as he could... But now it was getting on his nerves... he really needed to talk to her!

He finally managed to shoo everyone away... and started approaching her.


Ishita's POV


Kya woh meri taraf he aa rahe hai?

(Is he coming in my direction only?)

She asked herself as she saw him approaching her. Her heart began beating faster and faster and faster...

She could never realize when he had stated to affect her so much...


Raman's POV


He could sense her nervousness as she played with the corner of her dupatta...

I love it!!!

He finally reached near her... but he didn't want to spill the beans...

The proposal would be a surprise...!

And definitely not now!!

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Precap: Proposal!!!



Edited by pcnsb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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welcome nandini with a new story
the starting was promising and I enjoyed it and the best thing was Raman is a simple middle class person. I am tired with his CEO personality re.
anyway so Ishra are in a same office and Raman is her boss. I liked this thing.
continue soon girl. will wait for next part
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oye maine 2nd res toh padha hi nahi.
itthe bhi CEO par koi na I don't have problem unless IshRa are happy. please dear koi kachra mat karna yahan par. koi dimaag ke horses bhi mat dodaana.
I hope u will give us a cute love story.
thanks again for this beautiful start
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New alag hatke story..
Starting is superb ...
Waiting 4 nxt proposal update..
Plz update asap
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Superb part n good start n lovely intro n 1st part waiting for proposal pls continue soon
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There was clarity in the story, well etched characters & a perfect start! Marvellous! Continue soon please! 😳
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Good starting and it seem they are in love but not propose yet. So what will happen next will wait for update it kind like POV from both side.😳

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