*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Vartika dear,

Awesome start and interesting FF... 👏

Just loved the real life concept.. 😊

Update soon and pm me..



thank u Versha for supporting me here
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poorvi16

Nice FF dii.. 👏 👏

Continue soon..



thank u dear Poorvi 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2:-

Flashback:-

It was 18th July 2014 and Chhavi's birthday. Viraf and the whole gang has planned a surprise birthday party for Chhavi. Viraf called her.


"Hello Giraffe,"


"Chubby kahan ho tum?"


"Oye is time ghar pe hi rahoongi na?"


"Oh haan mai to bhool hi gaya tha."


"To bolo kaise call kia?" she asked.


Viraf checked his watch and found it's still ten more minutes to go so he thought to talk about some random topic. "U had food?"


"Yes, I have ordered pizza as u know itna tired thi na ki kuch bhi banane ka mood nahi tha."


"Chubby you are already over weighted ab roz roj pizza khaogi to you are not going to be fit and maintained for long plus har baar tum ko lift karna you know it's hard how much more stamina I need."


"Tum ne mujhe itna raat me ye batane k liye call kia hai?" she said with fake anger.


"Oye chill kar haan, mera farz hai tujhe batana aur agar mai nahi bataoonga to kaun batayega?"


"Haan Mr. responsible and sincere tum hi to ho jo meri itne care karte ho." She said taunting.


"Tumhari nahi to kis ki care karoonga? You are my overall responsibility darling."


"Oho...ye aaj kal itna jyada care aur affection kaise?"


"Bus yuhi, kabhi kabhi bahut pyaar aa jata hai tum pe."


Chhavi smile and said, "Tumhari flirting kabhi khatam nahi ho sakti na?"


"Ye flirting nahi hai sweetheart, it's my heart's true feelings."


"Aur meri true feelings ye kehti hain ki Mrityunjay ko ab rest karna chahiye apne ghutne (knee) ko rest dete hue varna kal k shoot pe nahi pahuch payenge."


"Tara ne to dil hi tod diya apne itne romantic pati ka. Kya yaar itne acche mausam me koi itna dry behave karta hai kya?"


"Viraf just stop it na. Ab mai bahut thak gayi hoon ab sona chahti hoon mai. Tumhari ye sab baatein kal sun loongi."


"No...not allowed abhi to bilkul nahi." He said smiling.


"Why???"


"Because...my dear Tara aka my Chhavi...wish u a very happy birthday sweetheart... Tum jiyo harazaon saal saal k din ho sab mere saath..." he sang for her several times to which Chhavi couldn't stop laughing.


When he stopped holding her stomach she said smiling, "Thank u so much...thank u Viraf..now stop it mere pet me dard hone laga."


"Hold a sec you called me Viraf? That's surprising." He said smiling.


"Haan mera dil bahut bada hai na to kabhi kabhi tum ko surprise de hi deti hoon."


"Aur is bade se dil me meri jagah kahan hai?" he asked in his usual flirty tone.


"Hai na bahut khas aur bahut badi jagah hai tumhari, after all you are giraffe tum ko choti se jagah kaise de sakti hoon?" she said teasing him back.


Viraf smiled, "Very smart haan."


"Vo to mai hoon but ab tum jaldi se batao mera birthday gift kahan hai?" she asked with her childish tone.


"Oho..madam ne mujhe to birthday gift diya nahi khud gift maang rahi hain." He taunted.


"Oye maine nahi dia to tumhara farz hai do mujhe after all I am special na?"


"Haan vo to ho tum," he said dreamily." Hold on abhi deta hoon tumhara gift... and he kept her call on hold which soon got connected and she heard many voices wishing her happy birthday and singing Happy birthday song.


"Happy birthday to u,

Happy birthday to u

Happy birthday to u dear Chhavi...

Happy birthday to u...

May god bless u...

May god bless u...

May god bless u dear Chhavi

Happy birthday to u...


It was a sweet surprise for Chhavi from her team on her birthday. Her mood was lit up. "Thank u so much guys. It was so sweet of you all."


"Tujhe pasand aaya humara surprise?" Sodhi jee asked.


"Bilkul Sodhi jee. Mai pata hai kitna thak gayi thi but ab aap sab ne mera mood hi accha bhi kar diya aur khush bhi kar dia."


"All credit goes to apna munda Viraf. Thank u jaroor boliye is ko." Sodhi jee mentioned.


Chhavi has already guessed it and now it was confirmed that he planned all. "Oho to ye giraffe ka kamal tha. Is ko to mai baad me acche se thank u boloongi."


"Oye hoye...ki baat hai..." he teased both and both blushed a bit.


Flashback over


But again his eyes fell on the news and a few of pictures of EBI brought him back to Chhavi land. Remembering her big eyes, lovely smile and so cute talks he got lost in his dreamland. He came out from it when a man called him a few times. He wanted to inform him that their head wanted to meet him and called him inside. The talks went fine and he was happy and satisfied now. More because of the news he got this afternoon about the breakup of Chhavi. Drawing back to his apartment he was super happy. He got stuck in a traffic jam when it took so long he took out his mobile and opened his twitter account and retweeted a bit which was more than his regular activity there.


His happiness needs no bound which was obvious. He tuned his radio and the RJ on other side said, "To doston garmi bahut ho rahi hai humare aas pass par is garam mausam ko cool kar deta hai aap k apno ka saath. Khaas kar k us insaan ka saath jis ko aap pyaar karte ho. Kabhi waqt aur halat dooriyan paida kar bhi dein to bhi agar humare pyaar me takat hai to vo humare pass laut kar jaroor aayega. Aur filhal un sabhi logon k liye jo pyaar me hain aur kisi bhi vajahon se un ko abhi tak un ka pyaar hasil nahi ho paya hai un ko barish ki rahat deta hua ye song mai RJ Neil play karta hoon ."


Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya vajood mera

Tujh se juda gar ho jayenge...

To khud hi ho jayenge juda


Viraf remembered the moment when they shot on this song in Ram Nagar sequence when Tara lost and MJ try to find her in his best way. But unable to find her he became tensed thinking how can he live without her as she has become his habit now. Finally he finds her in temple nearby. He smiled reminding those memories. Lagta hai kabhi kabhi jaise ye gana hum dono k hi liye likha gaya hai.'


Chhavi got many calls after the news got flashed in news. She was highly disturbed about it and when she got to know about Pracheen's response she became highly frustrated. She so wanted to kill him for doing it. "Samjhta kya hai ye apne aap ko? Mai is k haath nahi aayi to ye sab kar raha hai just to show that we were in relationship. How dare he? The cheap man. He doesn't even deserve anyone's friendship. Ab samajh me aaya ki is ki itne saari relationships fail kyoun hue because this man is really cheap and b****d. He both can respect a woman and never behave good with a woman all he think about a woman just like a s**t. Sahi kaha tha Viraf ne." She stopped all of a sudden when she again mentioned him in his thoughts. "Fir Viraf? Oh god...aaj subah se mujhe hua kya hai?"


"Chhavi u need to give some confirmation about the news they telecasted today." Nadia suggested her later on weekend.


"I don't think it's necessary."


"Why? You know if u doesn't give any confirmation regarding the whole matter people here will misunderstand you."


"Who cares? Vaise bhi didn't u see they showed that on my side that I don't have time for such things. It means that it's all false."


"I know Chhavi but on Pracheen's side he almost confirmed that you both had a relationship but you being busy in her schedule couldn't give him enough time. If you want I can take your interview and publish it."


Chhavi stopped having her coffee and said angrily, "This is the thing which is surprising me the most. If there was nothing between us how can he even say that? I want to kill that man for this. After all he was my friend he should at least respect that relationship. How can he play games with me? He want to be in lime light by speaking such cheap stuff. I called him many times talking about it but that b*****d didn't pick up my calls. He doesn't even deserve my friendship."


"Even I was shocked as well. As far as I know he told me that he liked you in an interview when I took it a month ago but he also said that you are not giving him any bhaav."


Chhavi smiled, "I have a suggestion for you."


"Suggestion for me?"


"Yeah u stay away with that man I think."


"Don't worry yaar mai us aadmi ko itna bhi bhaav nahi deti we meet just professionally and that is rare as well as right now he is not doing any show as well so no need to meet him." She said.


"And haan I thought about your suggestion but I think let this matter be cool in a few days I will give my point to any of the channel or tabloid."


"That's nice idea."


Here at Viraf's friend Freddy's resident:-


"Viraf I think u should go somewhere to change your mood. "one of his friend suggested.


"Kyoun? Tu boar ho gaya hai kya mujhe jhelte jhelte?" he asked naughtily, "Ya phir tu meri vajah se apni biwi ko time nahi de pa raha hai."


"Nahi be aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Crystal to all is mine us ko kaise time nahi doonga? But Pata nahi kyoun I noticed after your show EBI ended you have changed a lot."


"Nothing like that. I am same Viraf Phiroz Patel as I was."


"No Viraf, kuch to hai jo change ho gaya hai. Tu ab vaisa nahi reh gaya hai."


"Fine so tell me what has changed in to me?"


"As if you used to flirt with girls and now you are never interested in them. Pehle to u was ready to bring them on dinner dates as well if you too are interested in them. Even u too have a few girls till now as your friends but now you even don't talk to them even when you are free. You enjoy everything but your heart is missing. You even gone out from the parties when the parties are still going on. Hua kya hai tujhe?"


Viraf just looked at him, "It's nothing like that. I am not interested in these bimbo gals any more. And if I am not interested in them than how can we take our relationship in to another level. Coming to parties you know I was never a party person now a days I get bored in them so leave it."


"Isn't it sound unbelievable Viraf? You are not interested in gals?"


Viraf looked at him in awe feeling him misunderstanding the whole matter, "Oye it's not like that."


"Like what?"


"I know what your dirty mind is saying but it's nothing like that. You know I am a macho man and girls are mad for me."


"And you are not mad for them," he paused, "Or should I say mad for someone particular." He questioned.


"Nothing like that yaar."


"Is she Chhavi?"


Viraf looked at him in horror, "Kahan kahan pahuch jata hai tu?"


"I am sure she is and maybe she is engaged with someone his name is Pracheen na?"


He nodded, "But mujhe kya karna hai?"


"Don't tell me mujhe kya karna hai. If she is not interested in you than go out for some time you will get some change."


"Abhi nahi ja sakta yaar, you know I have to host L'Oreal event. Us k baad sochta hoon."


"But promise me you will go after that, your mood will be changed and you will get some boost for your future."


"I do." He smiled.


A few days later:-


"Chhavi tune vo you tube video dekha?"


"Kaisa video?" she asked Nadia.


"Are vo Viraf ka video jis me us L'Oreal event host kia hai."


"Nahi yaar, mujhe itna time nahi hai free."


"Oho, ab to show bhi off air ho chukka hai to aisa kya kaam hai tere pass jo tu itna busy hai." Nadia asked back.


"Yaar you know I have returned back after a long time from Patna, spending my quality time with mom, dad and sisters so I didn't get much time to spend on net."


"I know if u are with family u don't get time but u must see it. He was looking extremely killer in that and dashing." She said dreamily.


"Oho tum dono yahan aur mom vahan. Not only mom but my sisters as well...all of them are Viraf deewani." She said irritatingly.


"Are...tu itna chid kyoun rahi hai? Ya that's true we all like him so much specially with you. But I would love to know who else is here who keeps on popping you about Viraf."


"Aditya, he always tells me how much cool is he and he looks good with me." She replied.


"Oh...but I think Pracheen also looks good with you." She teased her.


"Chup kar...varna maar khayegi mujh se tu Nadia..u know now a days I hate him and literally want to kill him."


"I know, even you know he is not talking to me properly when I poked about his comment about your and his relationship."


"You know mujhe vahan Patna me maa papa ko kitna clarification dena pada hai about this matter. Papa to keh rahe the now it's high time to make me get married."


"What?"


"Ya, aur un vo mujh se pooch rahe the ki Pracheen kaisa ladka hai?"


Nadia gave a smile and thought to play along, "To tune kya kaha?"


"Maine kaha he is just a friend and told mom that he is too older than me. I was never interested in him. He was interested in me."


"Vaise I think he is good for you and will be a great life partner for you."


"Haan vo aadmi jis k pehle k bhi itne relationship toot chuke hain aur ab vo mere me bhi rumors spread kar raha hai."


"To kya hua? Once both of you will be together fir vo sudhar jayega I'm sure."


"To maine us ko sudharne k liye koi samaj sudhar mission join kiya hua hai?"


"Nops, tum ko kuch bhi karne ki jaroorat nahi ab jyada nahi bus kuch hi saal to bada hai baad me aaram se manage ho jayega."


"Nadia you want me to stop talking to you as well?" she asked.


Nadia laughed, "Chill babes, just have a look at your old friend's video and you will feel happy I'm sure. Vaise kya killer lag raha hai in that blue suit."


"It was black not blue." And she bit her lips after speaking that.


Nadia smiled, "Someone told me that she doesn't get time to see the video."


"No I didn't my sis told me." She gave a excuse.


"Aur kya bataya tumhari sisters ne?"


"Nothing, chalo ab rakhti hoon bye." And without waiting for her reply she cut the call making Nadia smiled here.


"Pagal ladki khud nahi jaanti ki kya chahti hai."

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Finally done and I hope you guys will like that.

Please do read and comment soon..

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Reserved for Samreen's comment.

unres kerdiya mehak 😛😛
check 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SamreenJ

unres kerdiya mehak 😛😛
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thank u dear will see and reply soon. 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Viraf's surprise for Chhavi in the flashback was very sweet!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Their talk was so cute and adorable!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Their calling each other Giraffe and Chubby is simple adorable and shows how close they were!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Viraf never leaves a chance to tease her about her weight!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

She is not at all over-weight but still he grumbles about lifting her!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

His flirting is just too romantic and how can anyone not melt at that!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

But Chhavi is so unromantic and doesn't understand his feelings!!!!

It was lovely when he finally wished her and sang for her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

So he wants all of her days to be with him!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

His surprise for her was soo sweet and indeed she should thank him properly for it!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Woh bhi kya din thhe and he is thinking about them!!!!

Viraf is very happy to know Chhavi has broken up with Pracheen!!!!

The song is very nice and perfect for them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I agree with Viraf that this song seems to be written for them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Good that Chhavi realized how Pracheen is and she is angry at him!!!!! 🤬 🤬 🤬 🤬

One thing good about it is that she remembered Viraf at the mention of Pracheen!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Nadia is a sweetheart and tries to get Chhavi down to repairing the damage done!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Freddy is right that Viraf has changed after EBI ended and that is very obvious to everyone!!!! 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

He even guessed that the girl is Chhavi and rightly too!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Freddy's idea of getting some change is good and hopefully that would improve things for him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Nadia seems to like Viraf a lot and I love it that she praises him for the L'Oreal event!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Nadia teasing Chhavi over Pracheen was too funny and she was so irritated!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Caught you Chhavi and Nadia is fantastic!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 👏 👏 👏 👏

Really Chhavi doesn't know what she wants and I hope she realizes soon!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

This part is wonderful!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏




Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Wonderful Update Vertika...👏

That is sweet Viraf planned surprise for Chhavi.
Their talk was so cute and adorable 😊
He is happy that Chhavi broke up with Pracheen.
Only if he knows actually they had no relation 😛
He misses her very much.
Chhavi is angry on Prachen, really he shouldn't do that.
Viraf was caught by his friend about Chhavi 😃
Nadia was testing Chhavi, now Chhavi caught by her 😆
Black not Blue 😉
Really she doesn't know what she wants 😔
I hope she realises.

Just love the whole part.
Update soon😃
Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Wow nice start👏👏👏
Giraffe and chubby uff mardala 😳😳😳
So so so so cute
Aub kitni beqarari hai BD wish kerne ki ☺️☺️

Beechara kitna preshan hojata hai jub chhavi ko bahon mein lena hoto😆😆😆
Love their NOK JHOK👏😳

And finally he wished her
And sang a song in his chocolati sweet melodious voice❤️❤️
Its very romantic and mesmerizing the way he flirt ❤️
But chhavi is so dumb(sorry) and unromantic sara muzza
Kirkira kerdiya😕

Chaavi ne kitne haq se gift manga yahi chemistry dil ko achi lugti hai donon ki
Kisi ki nazer na luge👍🏼

Sodhi ji bhi bude chunge hai ji👍🏼
Lovely flashback darling 🤗

Viraf ki feeling bohot strong hain chhavi keliye hope juldi se yeh sach hojaye
Perfect song played by RJ Neil
(Naam
Suna suna sa lugta hai )

Chhavi ka opinion mr. Pracheen 🤬ke bare mein change hogaya bohit acha howa👍🏼
Akhir viraf ki yaad phir agayi☺️☺️☺️

Nadia is such a sweetheart 🤗
Viraf kiya hum sab change hogaye freddy Ebi ke baad😔😔

Again do doston ki batein
Love their bonding

Uff chhavi ka jhoot pukra gaya😉
Nadia ne kamal kerdiya Clap

Chhavi please auone dil ki suno
Hum sab yeh sach hona dekhna chahte hain

Mahak kiya likha hai bohot piyaraClapClapClap
Interest level kahin bhi kum nahin hota berhta jata hai
Likhti raho aur hum muze lele ker perhte rahein
🤗🤗🤗🤗
Great job dear

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful start dear👏
Viraf never missed any chance to tease her abt weIght😆🥱

Cute phone conversation❤️

Viraf is happy now to know her relationship status.😛

Nadia is cute Frnd who know how to get things from chhavi.

Akhir chhavi ne admit kiya ki usne vedio dekha😳
Kitna time le rahi chhavi dill ki awwaaz sunne me. ❤️
Jaldi update kijihega ...intezaar rahega

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