RAGA SS ~ GAME OF LOVE ~ Epilogue @ 42 ~ 2 january ~

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no thanks kan 😉😆

Here i m gonna post my first story on Raga .. i interacted with many of u , and if u dont know me .. i m AMNA 😛 ( naam to suna ho ga 😆😆 )

thought to give a hand to raga ..and hope it turns out to be good 😉 ...


dedicating the story to kan ... 😉 .. get well soon jigar 😎 thanks for motivating yaaro ...sweta thank u re 😉

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" hum ne gowind seth ki beti ko mehel bulwa liya ha , badi rani ma " he casually sat on his royal chair ... with an evil smirk on his face ..

" indarvadan , wo aik aam ladki ha aur aap riasat k raja hain .. hum aap k iss faislay se khush nahi hain ' .. rani maa gave an unhappy look to him ... she didn't want him to do what he was doing ...

" badi rani maa... " he paused .. " hum jaantay hain aap yeh kabhi nahi chahain gi k hum kisi aam ladki se shaadi kar lain " his expressions were serious on calling her " aam ladki " ... but those , replaced by a side smirk with next line

" lekin .. yeh sab aik khel ha rani maa ... sirf aik khel ... "

" 2 mahinay se aap yehi baat keh rhay hain ... k yeh sirf aik khel hai ... Hmain aap ki baat samajh aa chuki ha .. ab aagay badhiye "

" hum us se shaadi karain gay ..sirf karz ki khaatir ... aik khel ho ga sab .. aur raja hmesha kisi chez ko apne paas nahi rakhtay .. hum bhi us ka kaam khatam honay k baad usse phek dain gay apni zindagi se "

" phir aap ne usse aaj mehel kun bulaya ... Hum chotay logon ki parchaai bhi mehel main nahi dekhna chahtay indravadan "

" hum koi bhi kaam chori chupay nahi kartay ...yeh bhi nahi karain gay ... hum unhain is khel k baray main bata dain gay ... "

" aap unhain bata dain gay ?? " rani maa was shocked coz she didn't expect this ... how come he tell her about his game ??

" dono taraf taqat barabar ho to khelne main maza aata ha badi rani maa ..." he was sounding exactly like a player king ... " aik chota aik bada ... aisay khelne main kuch maza nahi ha "

." Aap ko kia lagta ha wo ye jaannay k baad bhi aap se shaadi kar lain gi ???"

" un k paas koi dusra raasta nahi ho ga ... unhain hum se shaadi karni hi ho gi " ... He knew game is his ...even before he throw his first card . " aap bas unhain apni bahu bnaanay ki tyaari kijiye "

" bahu ... hum to us ladki ko is mahal ka naukar bhi na bnaain "

" wo to waqt hi btaay ga badi rani maa ... naukar ya ... " .. he left the sentence incomplete and went to his study ...

...

" hukum aap ko lagta ha wo ladki mehel aay gi ??" ... rao who was his right hand asked him ..

" aap ne bulawa de dia ha na unhain ??"

' g hukum ..magar wo ladki ab tak nahi aai ... hmain lagta ha k .. "

" aap ne bulawa unhi ko diya na ??"

" g hukum jaisa aap ne kaha tha waisa hi kiya ..kisi dusray ko nahi pata ..sirf unhain hi bataya k aap ne unhain mehel bulaya hai ' ... he said like an obedient servant ...

" To phir wo zarur aayen gi ... unhain aana hi ho ga hmaaray paas .. wo chahain ya na chahain ' .. he smiled and looked at the letter ... written by her ??? ... a love letter by gayatri seth to rana indravadan singh deo ...

" aap ja sakte hain rao ... jab wo aayen to unhain hmaray paas bhej dena "

" ji hukum ..." rao went off bending , as a gesture of honor for king ..

...

On the other hand gayatri was getting ready ... she chose her most beautiful sky color saaree ... with antique and most precious royal jewellary of that time ..

" rana gi ne hmain bulaya ...riyasat k raja hum se milna chahtay hain ... hum bohot khush hain .. aaj hum un se baat karain gay " ... her self talks were always like the queen ..she didn't address herself as a single person .. " hum " is what she said while addressing herself .. she dreamt of meeting raja , like the rani meets her raja in stories ..

All thanks to her reading habit ..she loved to read raja rani stories ..and she started practicing all those aspects of a queen , raja could fall for ... and she thought its as dreamy as it sounds ..

Unknown of the game , and ill plan waiting for her ..she sneaked out of her home ..all dressed up like a pretty princess ... as always no one stopped her .. she was the only daughter and her father treated her like a princess ... he could buy moon for his daughter too , if she asked .. and being the richest money lender that wasn't difficult for him ...

...

Rana was reading the letter once again , " kitna acha letter likha AAP NE ' ... he said to himself and laughed out loud ...

Hearing the melodious sound of " payal " he stopped laughing and heard carefully ... Closed his eyes and smiled by heart ...

" To aap aa hi gayen .. gayatri indravadan deo ' .. he knew this sound .. he can recognize it anywhere ..

Hearing a slight knock , he went towards the door ... and opened it for her .. signalling the maid who brought her to the study to leave .. he asked her to come in ...

" aayie aayie ...hum aap hi ka intezar kar rhay the .. " She smiled dreamily ,along with that she was nervous ..

" kitni ajeeb baat hai na ... riasat k raja ..aik badshaah , aap ka intezar farma rhay hain , aur aap btay gay waqt se pooray 10 minute late hain " .. he tilted his head , and moved his neck in an evil way .. proceeding close to her ..

Her eyes widened , when she found him merely an inch away from her face .. " is ki saza to aap ko milay gi hi , rani sahiba "

Her heartbeat was so loud that she was sure he could hear it .. she was so strong always ... but right now , she was feeling weak .. in her stories raja didn't behave like this .. and what he called her ?? " rani sahiba ??"

She questioned herself , that came out in the form of whisper , and rana who was close to her lips for the punishment of coming late , heard it ... instead of claiming her lips , he kissed her cheek and stepped backward ..

She instantly trace her fingers on her cheek ... did he really kiss her ??

"yeh aap k waqt par na aanay ki saza thi ... lekin yaad rakhiye saza agli baar itni choti nahi ho gi '

" hum der se nahi aay the ... aap k darbaan ne hmain rok lia tha " ... she finally spoke , controlling her nervousness ... She sounded like a scared cat .. he liked it .. she did talk like queen , addressing herself " hum " ...

" aap ki aawaaz aap ki tarah khoobsurat ha , rani ji " ... he smiled , stressing at last words ..that was the first time he heard her voice ...

" hum rani ji nahi hain ... hum gayatri seth ... "

He didn't let her complete ..

" gayatri seth THI ... Ab aap rani hon gi " ...

" gayatri indravadan singh deo , welcome to raaj mahal"





i know its small 😛 .. . but wanna know if i should type further or not 😉... if yes .. do comment ..if not then do tell 😆


my first try on raga and i m surely nervous ..

anyone want english subs ?? do tell me .. i will add 😉

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INDEX
PART ONE UPDATED ABOVE
part 8 @ 32
part 9 @ 33
part 10 @ 35
part 11 @ 36
part 12 @ 37
Part 13 @ 38
last part @ 40
Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Already waiting for ur story 😛
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Originally posted by: sam_DDzfan

Already waiting for ur story 😛

ahaah 😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abba12

ahaah😆😉


What aahah jaldi post kar 😆
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Originally posted by: sam_DDzfan


What aahah jaldi post kar 😆

done ..now read and comment 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aah loved it. Superb
Dont be nervous my sherni. Do continue. I m waiting for next part
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Ur Ranaji is too Kamina I hope Gayatri will also turn out to be equally kamini 😉
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Originally posted by: sam_DDzfan

Ur Ranaji is too Kamina I hope Gayatri will also turn out to be equally kamini 😉

haan hahah ..he is grey ..not sadist like serial 😆😆

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