MaNan SS : The Incomplete Song (Part 10 - Pg 62 - 13th April)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi All,
Continuously listening to songs from Hamari Adhuri Kahani and watching MaNan has drove me to writing this. I'm writing after ages, so forgive me if it is not up to the par...

Prologue : Hamari Adhuri Kahani

Dehradun

Ae Humnava, Mujhe Apna Bana Le...
Sookhi Padi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De
Hoon Akela, Zara Haath Badha De...
Sookhi Padi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De

Kab Se Main Dar Dar Phir Raha
Musaafir Dil Ko Panaah De
Tu Aawaargi Ko Meri Aaj Thehra De...

Ho Sake Toh, Thoda Pyaar Jata De...
Sookhi Padi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De...

Murjhaayi Si Shaakh Pe Dil Ki, Phool Khilte Hain Kyun
Baat Gulon Ki Zikr Mehak Ka, Achha Lagta Hai Kyun
Un Rangon Se Tune Milaaya, Jinse Kabhi Main Mil Na Paaya
Dil Karta Hai Tera Shukriya, Phir Se Bahaarein Tu La De

Dil Ka Soona, Banjar Mehka De...
Sookhi Padi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De
Hmm... Hoon Akela, Zara Haath Badha De...
Sookhi Padi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De

Waise Toh Mausam Guzre Hain, Zindagi Mein Kayi
Par Ab Na Jaane Kyun Mujhe Woh, Lag Rahe Hain Haseen
Tere Aane Par Jaana Maine, Kahin Na Kahin Zinda Hoon Main
Jeene Laga Hoon Main, Ab Ye Fizaayein, Chehre Ko Chhooti Hawaayein

Inki Tarah, Do Kadam Toh Badha Le...
Sookhi Padi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De
O... Hoon Akela, Zara Haath Badha De...
Sookhi Padi Dil Ki Iss Zameen Ko Bhiga De...

https://youtu.be/17Ebfhs6pMo


Even after so many years, Nandini can never hold back her tears whenever she hears those lyrics. Those were the lyrics from Fab5's debut album. It broke thousands of records, giving them the fame that they deserved but only she knows that it also broke his heart into thousand pieces as he wrote that piece. It wasn't a mere song but it was the yearning of his heart he wanted to convey to the girl who left him in that state.

"I think I lost my puzzle again..." cried a young voice stirring Nandini from her thoughts. Nandini quickly wiped off the tears of her face and walked towards the voice. "Haan baba, what is the matter now?" she bent over the small study table where a pair of angelic eyes was waiting with a gloomy face. "I can't complete it..." pointing to a missing piece of his puzzle. "Itni chothi si baat koh, tum sad hogaye? Main hoon na... Let me find the missing piece for you" she cajoled him while she helped him search for his missing puzzle. "Mil gaya" he jumped in joy as he picked the piece behind a pile of old magazines, unintentionally pulling out a magazine with Fab5 on the cover. "Mama, why do you keep this magazines when u don't read them?" he shoved the magazine on her hand as he got back to completing his puzzle. "These are memories that can't be discarded no matter how much you try" she replied him as she caressed the photo of Manik. "I just hope you would smile again, Manik." she whispered as her fingers ran over the outline of his face on the magazine cover.

Mumbai

"No Cabir, Just decline the Dehradun yaar...Just not in the mood for it" Manik refused the invitation to perform for their high school alumni night. "Come on Manik, it will be fun. After all, we have continuously refused their invitation in the past 6 years because of our album & tours. But this year, we all need a break & Dehradun will be great getaway. Concert be hoga aur old times masti be hoga" Cabir tried to convince Manik. "Yeah Manik, Cabir is so right... It will be so fun yaar, I can already feel it." Alya added. "Come on Manik, don't be spoilt yaar. It's been ages since we have all gone Dehradun " Mukti tried her luck. "Buddy, think about it. We all needed a break, concert ki saath break bhi mila. New album ka planning aur jamming bhi kar saktha" Dhruv added. "OK.. OK... If you all feel like rocking in Dehradun, then let's do it." Manik finally gave in. After all, his friends' happiness is his happiness. "Beware Dehradun, Fab 5 is going paint the town red" Cabir cheered. "That means it is time for a group hug yaar" Mukti pulled the rest into their customary Fab5 group hug.

Looking forward for you valuable comments/reviews... Since I don't speak or write in Hindi, feel free to point out & correct my mistakes.Even rotten tomatoes are welcomed😆😆

Love,
Reva

Note : I have changed the title of the SS from Humari Adhuri Kahani to The Incomplete Song, as I was informed by some of the readers that there is already a FF under the same name in this forum. It was unintended mistake, so my apologies.

Part 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/124024149
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neethi1997 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii Reva the prologue is interesting
No tomatoes for u 😛
Why did she leave him? And was dat manan's baby?
I knw u'll reveal it in the nxt few parts
Continue jaldi se 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting storyline
is dat boy manan child???
waiting fr d nxt update😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue is looking awesome👏👏
Plz continue nd post long update 😉
Nd PM me also if u can plz
Post nxt part sooon😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The prologue is intriguing
Forget rotten tomatoes u take flowers 😛
Lots of questions bt I knw they'll b answered soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: neethi1997

Hii Reva the prologue is interesting
No tomatoes for u 😛
Why did she leave him? And was dat manan's baby?
I knw u'll reveal it in the nxt few parts
Continue jaldi se 😊


Aww thanks dear... Glad you liked and saved me from the rotten tomatoes. Will update part 1 in couple of days. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rishita_ky2

interesting storyline
is dat boy manan child???
waiting fr d nxt update😊😊


Thanks dear... Your questions will be answered soon... 😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanskruti16499

Prologue is looking awesome👏👏

Plz continue nd post long update 😉
Nd PM me also if u can plz
Post nxt part sooon😊😊


I'm so happy that you liked the prologue... Next part will up in couple of days, and will keep the need for a longer update in my mind😉😉😉

Will PM you when i update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooh2015

The prologue is intriguing
Forget rotten tomatoes u take flowers 😛
Lots of questions bt I knw they'll b answered soon 😃


Aww I take that as a compliment... 😳😳😳

I know its full of questions, they will be revealed as the story moves along
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great introduction, I loved the prologue of tour story, waiting for the first update..

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