MaNan SS : The Incomplete Song (Part 10 - Pg 62 - 13th April) - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

amazing... beautifully penned ... read all parts in one goo
so real and emotional

Hats off to you👏...
Bira... was just awesome The way he explained about MaNan relation and about his life
Waiting for the next update
Cont soon

Thanx for PM😊


Thanks for taking your time to read all the parts...😊😊😊

Glad you liked it... Next part should be up by end of the week
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pagolmeye

Sorry was out of the city for somwe work thats why couldntsee ur post. Read the last 2 chap in one go. It was perfect. The convobetween cabir and nandini was soo goid. I was like 'awww'.
Manik nandini convo was the best part. Especially that sentence pierced my heart into pieces, "Alive and singing"
Hope you give us more of MaNan moments in next update and I am dying to know abt Manik's condition after that convo.

Good luck 😊 😊


Aww no worries dearie... Thanks for taking your time to read and comment, means alot to me 😊😊😊

Its nearing to unfold more on MaNan... You will know Manik's reaction in next update😉😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kapk

I just read all the 4 parts in a row! Breathtakingly beautiful story that is so damn well written. You manage to execute each of their emotions SO perfectly with your words. Loved every single bit of. The latest part was heart wrenching. Thank you so much for writing long parts. I actually didn't want any of it to end - that is how much gluing your words are.


I am really looking forward to your next update. Do PM me too if possible 🤗


Thanks dear... Glad you manage to bear the lengthy 4 parts😉😉😉 I tend to go into the details, which makes my updates a bit long.

I'm so happy that I manage to convey the emotions that I had in my mind well, I guess it reached you well. Reading your wonderful comment, gives me motivation and boast to write more. Will definitely PM you when I update next.
😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Kapk

P.S.: This has to be One of the Elegant and finest SS that I have come across 😳

Thanks for giving me such a great compliment, will take as my encouragement to write better 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha150

WOOWW!!

U penned it down very beautifuuulllyyy

Cabirrr...he is such a sweetheartt

The way he told everythng it was jst superrrbb

And virattt i jst love this cutiee pieee

Sry frgt to mention abt him in my befre comment

Jst loveee him

Waiting for MaNan's Reunion and fab5's reaction

Do pm me .

Love

Nisha❤️


Aww Nisha...

Thank you so much dear, you comments means lots to me...

I have always imagined Virat as a cutie pie

MaNan reunion and Fab5 will be coming soon... Maybe in next 2 updates😉😉😉

Will definitely PM you when I update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cooki

awesome...👏

cabir's speech was showing the pure love between manik & nandini...
marvelous..
cont soon...


Thanks dear😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuushi

Wow..u are an awesome writer..u beautifully penned cabir's speech of love and also the pure love of manan..love cabira for putting all his heart in bringing manan closer and also could feel his pain while revealing his emotional past.. he doesn't want manan to experience that kind of pain or to loose their true love...well loved every moment of the chapter waiting for nandini's reaction and to read more of the story..and don't worry we love the long updates..so please continue soon with a long update and Thanku for the pm :)


Thank you so much for such a sweet comments...

What I highlighted in bold is exactly what I wanted to convey... The whole update was dedicated in making Nandini realize through his experience and pain...😊😊😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ReneeAmora

Thank you so much loved it specially cabir's part
it was beautifully described.

please Update soon please please eagerly waiting


Thanks dear... Will update by end of the week😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nishpoo

You are an awesome writer!

Thanks hun...😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: naz450

Lovely Update
Continue Soon


Thanks dear😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jesse93

Really loved your update and especially the whole conversation of Cabir and Nandini .
Hope after this Nandu will decide to get back into the life of her love.
Aur rahi baat hamari angry chhotoo bache ki toh only Nandu can handle this Bacha.
Update the next part asap.


Thanks dearie...😊😊😊

Nandini will be back with love...

You are so right, who can manofy Manik if not her... If she can break him, she will be the one to fix him back too

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