Invisible wall : On behalf of SAC

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This morning I dreamt
That I woke up in a different world
Where between us
An invisible wall does stand

It's you on one side
My fear on the other
My dreams and you
Sit beside each other


I tried to walk across the wall
I tried to break the barrier
My hands are tied
I could do nothing at all

Something suddenly wakes me up
The world seems just fine
My hands are untied
Only that the wall from the other world
Has now descended into mine

P.S : it's writtern referring to Zeenath as the wall

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pearly you are the poet emeritus of this forum.
'My dreams and you sit beside each other'
What a lovely lovely lovely phrase. Love you for writing that.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Junoonian

Pearly you are the poet emeritus of this forum.

'My dreams and you sit beside each other'
What a lovely lovely lovely phrase. Love you for writing that.



Thanks Junoonian ! Glad you liked it !
Infact I hesitated a lot before posting this here because it's not a straightforward romantic poem, instead it expresses SAC's insecurity. I feel to him Zeenath and Aarzoo are 2 different worlds that he never wanted to intersect . He has no choice however and now one of his worlds is becoming a wall in his other world . Really glad that you understood it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pearly 👏👏👏 Beautiful lines ❤️ Simply loved it. You understand Sahir just so wonderfully. Muahhh ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Pearly14
👏 Fantastic. Something truly poignant in the thought that Sahir's dreams and Arzoo sit next to each other. The belief is that unless you have discharged your debt, you can't leave this world. If you try to leave forcibly, you must return to repay it first before you are allowed to move on into the next world. Something similar going on with Sahir here methinks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh pearly, that touched my heart! 👏

My dreams and you
Sit beside each other

Such lovely lines...you have described Sahirs state of mind perfectly. Thank you so much for posting!!!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Simply beautiful pearly! 👏

This has taken me back to his scene with Asharfi where he rues that Arzoo has now come between his path, the one that would take him from his past into his future. She has become deeply entangled with his past and even though he wants to stop for her he simply can't. Things have been set in motion long back, in fact 7 years back and he simply can't stop the events that are unfolding.

Yes. I do believe he never wanted to indulge Arzoo for this very reason. He knew he had to free himself of the burden of he past before he can claim his love for Arzoo. Unfortunatately for him everything, all his carefully laid out plan just blew up in his face.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: true2heart

Pearly👏👏👏Beautiful lines❤️ Simply loved it. You understand Sahir just so wonderfully. Muahhh❤️


Thanks true2heart ! Glad you liked it !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well expressed coz it brings out Sahir's dilemma & desire so well. Just a few lines & yet heart-wrenching 👏
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Omg pearly it's beautiful ...

I wish the makers had kept the show this beautiful ...😭

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