// LOVE U ALWAYS AND FOREVER //...( sandhir TS ) * Part 2 * updated;) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely twoshot...the pain n heartbreak, so palpable n evident...keep writing more😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: himaniagrawal12

it was so emotional

just loved it
can't explain in words


Awww...thanks a lot dear😃...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict

I couldn't like it. I mean I can't like a sad ending...I never loved unfortunate events in stories. (Yes I am that naive.) Never a fan of angst.To me reading is for relaxation and this thing disturb me a lot. I get a lump in my throat, my eyes itch, heart lurch and writhe.

I know you already warned us (we having cold feet) to stay away but just like life I cannot avoid flip sides of life...it is inevitable and definite.So couldn't by pass the story and landed straight. The mature me always know sad stories are often the true stories and it is only human nature to seek truth..and we cannot avoid it. (Getting philosophical ...arrrgghhh)

Now let me come to the story. I don't regret reading it. You wrote so effortlessly, depicted pain so beautifully, etched emotions artistically...totally loved it.

Will wait for your next PM.


Yeah I know reading is relaxation only but one thing you know tragedy has its own bliss...pain has its own sweet😳...that's why till now Romeo-Juliet is still read and loved😳 but its a tragedy only no? Ok now i'm being philosophical😆...
And you don't regret reading my story...Awww.😳...thanks a lot dear😳...thanks yopu so much for such a lovely comment😃...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandu_rockzz

Aww..Rakhi..u nailed it!!! 👏

Very very emotional.. 😭

Im currently searching for words to reply to ur story!!!

Just awesome.. Awesome compilation..👍🏼
Awesome selection of words to express Sanyu's feelings..
Lovely!!! Lovely!!! 😳

Sorry..Just now saw ur PM !!!


Its fine di and thank you so so much di for such a beautiful comment😳...thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pihu1596

Omg!!!!!
I cried n really right ne I hv goose bumps on my hand n my fingers r shaking while writing this.
It was brilliant... Superb yaar.
I liked d ending n it really ached my heart dat Rd couldn't hear Sanyu saying love you to him T_T
BT he knew she loved him.
I m really speechless n honestly I learned 1 thing Always shout out loud if u love sm1 in front of them...u never noe which moment vl b ur last...N v never lose anything by loving sm1 v lose by holding ourselves back...ty 4 making me realize this.
Love you loads : *

-Pihu


Oopsie sorry that I made u cry Pihu di...Yes, some times destiny is ruthless beyond imagination and thanks a lot di😃...You learnt something from my os...I'm honoured di😳...but you know its true life hardly gives us a second chance so when u love someone shout it at ur top voice😃...You are such a sweetheart😃...thanks a lot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow! that was something! but i didnt like the way randhir and sanyukta died!😭 why does people keep dying in your OSes?!🥱that still it was fantastic! keep writing such amazing stories and dont forget to pm me.

with love- shaina...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: -pearlblu-

Lovely twoshot...the pain n heartbreak, so palpable n evident...keep writing more😃


Thanks a lot dear😳...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shainanair

wow! that was something! but i didnt like the way randhir and sanyukta died!😭 why does people keep dying in your OSes?!🥱that still it was fantastic! keep writing such amazing stories and dont forget to pm me.


with love- shaina...😊


Haha yeah I'm a typical sadist😆...kya karu😉? Sad stories heart touching jo hota hai😳...Thanks a lot Shaina for ur lovely comment...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Ah! Finally I got the one fiction that I've been waiting for.
Sadism is my favourite genre and I'm highly elated to find this Two Shot.

This TS was really mind-jolting and heart-wrenching.
You've beautifully portrayed the meaning of the words "I Love You" and I'm so glad that you wrote this wonderful fiction.
The first part was so heart-warming with adorable SanDhir scenes while the second part was soul-shattering.
The entire TS was a splendid journey of roller coaster ride of many viceral emotions.
You have described the vivid hues of emotions exceptionally well.
I'm so in love with Sanyukta's dialogues towards the end. It showed her immense love for Randhir.
This was wonderful and fantastic to say the least.
Do write more stories.

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Ah! Finally I got the one fiction that I've been waiting for.
Sadism is my favourite genre and I'm highly elated to find this Two Shot.

This TS was really mind-jolting and heart-wrenching.
You've beautifully portrayed the meaning of the words "I Love You" and I'm so glad that you wrote this wonderful fiction.
The first part was so heart-warming with adorable SanDhir scenes while the second part was soul-shattering.
The entire TS was a splendid journey of roller coaster ride of many viceral emotions.
You have described the vivid hues of emotions exceptionally well.
I'm so in love with Sanyukta's dialogues towards the end. It showed her immense love for Randhir.
This was wonderful and fantastic to say the least.
Do write more stories.

Regards
Keya


My gosh!!! Thnk a lot Keya!!! Ur comment made my day😳...Thnk uh so so much😳...
So glad u liked it dear and finally relieved to see someone like me!!! Our favs match😳

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