FF Tormenting Mr.Gangster CHAP 29 PG 140

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Hello dearies !😊



Zubi aka misssmiley here with a Sandhir FF for you guys ! 😳

I had this planned out a long time ago, but never had the courage nor the time to work on it. GunSeerat whom you all must know , gave me the courage to go through with it, thanks a lot dear🤗(Could not take all the credit myself dear Seerat when you helped me sooo much ;) )


Sooo we BOTH have been working on it for the past 2 months ! And although we are not finished yet, it is high time to post the first chap !


Enjoy Tormenting Mr.Gangster 😊






Tormenting Mr.Gangster is :


A gangster with a purpose...
A lady who didn't ask for anything...
Some curses...
A litlle bit of shyness...
And a great deal of sarcasm !



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Part 22 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4219447/ff-tormenting-mr-gangster-chap-29-pg-140









=> Some chapters are missing on the second thread due to Seerat's account being banned, you can find the whole story on wattpad.


Chap 1


India 10 pm




Clouds drew in darker as the night sky was covered with a thick layer of clouds, surely not a good sign to be outside at this time as they harbingered heavy rain. He tightened his knuckles as he caught the glimpse of the sky, dawning back his hood, covering himself in his best shade, Black. Dark as night, Sweet as sin. He forwarded his steps towards the nearby block on the pavement, when his phone buzzed.


"What?" he spoke calmly yet with slight irritation.


"..."


"Tell me something new, I've been hearing this from a month now" he again spoke as the person from the other end tried his luck.


"..."


" The Falcon, one man ! One man has been fooling you and the team for a month now, do you have a valid explanation to that ?!" he roared, "Parth, I need falcon. Sir said Falcon was the only one that could help us. He even gave us the perimeter in which to look for him and still you can't find him ?!"


"..."


"I don't care what you do. I only care if you bring him to me" his tone getting higher now.


"..."


"You leave me no option I guess... " he sighed "Three days and He should be in front of me..." and he cut off the call.


***


"We ought to find falcon within 3 days" Parth addressed some men in front of him all wearing dark shady attires.


Parth took last glance at the papers in front of him and crumbled them up. Making some notes in his mind, he traced a pattern on the map with his fingers. Another guy in his 20's approached him and kept his hand on Parth's shoulder.


"Do you think we'll catch him?"


"I think we have a clue here, Sahil" he spoke with an unknown rush in his eyes.


"Let's try that" Sahil being the other guy assured him back.


They then grabbed their gun from the drawer and went away, followed by 3 other men with them.




***




Next morning, India 9 am


Sun peeped through the glass on her shades covering her grey orbs, as she travelled down the elevator. Her scarf perfectly aligned to her neck, while her long brown coat running down her slender body, ended perfectly over her knees. She silently made her way through the passing people to reach her car in the parking lot, fidgeting in her handbag for her car keys. Finally having found her car keys she approached it. Her eyes caught her own reflection on the car window, a successful and proud woman was staring back at her, she smiled at the thought. Who would have thought that a simple and shy girl would turn into a strong and confident lady, but the change had happened and it happened thanks to one person only, her mentor, Vardhan sir. Her mentor's words came rushing to her mind again...




Flashback 2 years ago :




"Sanyukta you have the talent and the passion, You can't leave all this without putting a fight" said her mentor Vardhan sir.



"Sir I don't think I can do that, I don't think I have the capacity to defend myself against all the threats" she said desperately.



"So what ?! you will leave all your hard work, and sit behind because of some rascals ? is that what you are going to do ? ...you are gifted for god sake !... Millions would die to have only 50% of your talent and you want to waste it ?!" he lashed out on her. He was not going to silently watch one of his best student leaving behind everything she had so hardly worked for.



"But Sir...I don't know... am scared" she said timidly. Sanyukta was India's best hacker and as such she was wanted by many. They all wanted to misuse her skills for their own ill intentions. Her life was at risk nearly every day. The threats, the fights, the stress...it was getting very difficult for her. Besides she knew that being a girl, when it came to physical strengh she will always be at the losing end.


"Sanyukta you disappoint me, i thought you were smarter than that." She was a rather shy girl, staying behind the comfort of her computer, she didn't like attention, she was not very good at dealing with it... hence her decision to leave everything to go back to a discreet and peaceful life.


"Ok tell me the difference between a proactive approach and a retroactive approach." vardhan sir spoke up, startling her.


"what sir?" she asked lost at the sudden change of topic.


"Just answer the question Sanyukta" replied Vardhan sir impatiently.


"A retroactive approach is when you act on something that already happened in the past for example if a system has been cracked you will correct it afterwards whereas a proactive approach is when you anticipate a future situation, you take actions to prevent it before it actually happens..." As soon as she finished her sentence she understood where sir was going with this.


"Sanyukta It is up to you to ensure that you will never end up in a situation where physical strengh is needed, to always stay one step ahead of the others. I know you are capable of it, you are always ahead of everyone." he tried to reason her.


"I understand sir... but you know am not really good at... at dealing with people..." she said awkwardly.


"Are you making excuses ? if you don't want to do, it's fine at least have the decency not to hide behind lame excuses " he said, his words discreetly conveying a challenge.


"No sir... but..." she timidly tried.


Remember Sanyukta...emotions: compassion, hate, curiosity, love, greed... are a human being most basic weaknesses..." he said emphasizing each emotion.


"The right set of words said at the right time can help you handle any situation". She perfectly understood his words but the problem was not that, it was her...she was not that good with words, she was rather shy and preferred to stay silent most of the time.


Sanyukta thought for a second, did she wanted to go with it ? she had worked hard to get where she was today, she had dreamed of it every night from the age of 12, she had achieved what most could not even in a lifetime... did she wanted to lose all of it ?... NO definitely not... but she had to change, so the real question was : did the change was worth it ?... and she knew the answer without a doubt, YES it was worth it.


"You are right sir... I want to try... I understand what you are saying, it's all about understanding your opponent and acting according to it! For example if I have an arrogant person in front of me, I should boost his ego to get him where I want him, if it is a compassionate person all I have to do is to make him feel guilty to have my way with him..." genius indeed but it was easier said than done.


"Good thing you understood it on your own because I was starting to wonder how you topped your last year" teased Vardhan sir.


"thank you sir" answered sanyukta


Vardhan sir sighed "that was not a compliment"


"sorry sir" said sanyukta looking down. "But I understand Sir ! Thank you for... scolding me... I will focus on what you said, it can work! And I will do whatever it takes to protect myself and live a normal life. You showed me the way, it's now turn to make sure I am deserving of your guidance"


She happily got out of vardhan sir's cabin and started pondering over what she just learnt. Hence she knew if she wanted to stay safe she had to build a strong mentality and learn everything on the human behaviour. She had taken her decision and she was determined : From now on, my mind and ability to judge others will be my biggest asset, she made a quick note in her mind.


For the whole next year she attended sociology classes, boosting her self-confidence, improving the quality of her speech, even took acting classes so as to learn the art of bluffing, doing all sorts of activities to have complete understanding on human behaviour , The final goal was to be able to create a way out of any situation with nothing but with a set of words.


End of flashback.


She was still admiring herself when a strong pull broke her reverie, a strong pair of arms grabbed her from behind. She struggled against the man that just threw her up against the car and was now towering over her with his front pressed against her back and holding her hand in a tight grip.


From what she can make out, he was tall, well-built and was wearing a mask covering the lower part of his face.


"Just come with me and no harm will come to you." said the man with a harsh voice.


"Not again" she muttered, it was not like these situation occurred often, on the contrary very few have made it so far as to trap her she thought. But still this was not a situation she enjoyed, she had to deal with it with care.


"No harm will come to me ?! are you really saying this while you are molesting me ?!" she hissed trying to free her hands quoting his words timidly even in that critical situation.


"I am telling you, just come quietly and no harm will come to you" the masked guy repeated.


"Well we surely have a very different definition of the word "harm", you don't go around kidnapping people and saying no harm will come to them, that's quite illogical if you ask me" she said sarcastically while trying to free herself.


"Look It can go smoothly or I can drag you, your choice, either way you are coming," he threatened her.


"No way am coming with you, and who the hell are you ?" she screamed.


"Shut up and move" was all he said.


"Pardon me ? Is that a way to talk to a lady ? She said incredously, this guy was seriously getting on her nerves, granted he was in middle of a kidnapping, and the whole point of it was to savagely abduct the victim, but still he could be a little more polite, would it be too much to ask ? ...after all she was not a newbie on her first kidnapping, she was the target of approximately one kidnapping a month, surely she was a loyal customer... maybe she could get a membership card ? she wondered, you know those premium things that give you advantages, ...less insults, better treatment and all... that would be great indeed ! ...but she was getting off the topic here. First she had to get out of here and then she will think about purchasing one of these a membership card, if they made any that is !


"Look mister whoever you are, I am not going anywhere with you. Now what I want to know is why in hell are you kidnapping me" she asked him.


"That you will find out soon, for now come with me" the masked man said applying pressure on her wrist. Ok she had had enough now.


"Oye kab se come with me, come with me' lagaya hua hai, aap 5 saal k bache ho jo mere saath ki zaroorat hai, you are a big boy, am sure you can find your way back alone, go shooo" she randomly said getting fed up by this guy. All it did was piss him off, he applied more pressure on her wrists.


"Ouuuch stop crushing my wrists idiot !" she exclaimed. "Is that a way to treat a respectable lady ?!"She tried another approach, even though the past ten minutes had clearly told her he was not very fond of civilities. But hey she wasn't going to listen that easily and follow any random person's orders who jumped out of nowhere and claimed to do no harm while crushing her arms.


"Shut up, don't test my patience" whispered the man as she winced in pain.


"But look at how inappropriate it is !" she said dramatically. The man loosened his grip on her but not enough for her to free her hands.


"Listen Falcon, the faster you do as I say, the faster you'll get out of this" he hissed this time.


"Falcon ?! what the hell is this ?!" She exclaimed outraged.


"Don't play innocent Falcon" said her kidnapper..


"Seriously ?! You are comparing me to an animal you monkey ?!!!" she said furiously "I won't tolerate any more insults! First you throw a respectable lady against a wall, then you manhandle her, and then you insult her, how would you take it if anyone treated your sister or you girlfriend like that ?!"


As soon as she said that his grip on her fell, so he was the emotional kind, she sighed at last ! But that was enough for Sanyu to quickly turn around, grab the little bottle of spray she always kept in her waistband and spray the man in front of her.


"What the hell?!" he screamed rubbing his eyes.


She pushed him and kicked him hard with her pumps, getting inside the car and rushing it out of the lot, making sure he didn't follow her. That was close !




Thanks for reading lovies😊


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hawww me first after so long!!!!🥳

hey zubi di and seerat di!!!
aise ideas ate kaha se hai???kaha se?????😲
its very good !!!!😊
i liked it very much !!!👏
pls do continue soon!!!😉
and do pm me!!!!
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Hey anisha Smile
Thank you dear 🤗
To tell you the thruth i got this idea while reading wonderful writers work :
In love with ennemy by Amour_Reet
And The gangster's mistress by FingerFetish
Unfortunatly both left the stories unfinished 😭 , but they must have their reasons... but still these works are a piece of art ! ⭐️
Anyway i hope you will like our story :) And I or Seerat, will definalty pm you :)
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