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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan

Done 👍🏼 😊 😛

done..so my ArshiPotterFan sanika is lollipop from now on😆

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vinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer
Hey Vinu,
Just read the first part. Really well written! Eager to know what happens next! Off to read the next part!

thank you so much di🤗

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Read the second part! What I liked the most is the way you focused on other characters too! Very few writers do that! Showing others' reaction is a sign of a good writer!

Haila! Suraiya saw the light! Haaye! Kaash yeh serial mein bhi hota! Off to read the next part!

Aaliya! Where art thou?

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Read the third part! Loved the way you described Zain's feelings and thoughts! That was really well written! Finally we found Aaliya! Off to read the next part!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Oh wow! I am in love with the way you wrote the last part! Felt like I was reading some english novel! It was a bit cheesy but still very beautifully written!

Loved it! The end was really sweet!

Well written story Vinu!

Really well written!👏

Keep writing! I expect to see more stories like this from you!

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Superb 👏
Beautifully penned 👏
Just loved it ❤️
Thanks a ton for writing this Vinu 🤗

PS: I know m late lattif 🤣
Really sorry... Exams month after all... eating my time 🤣

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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

@kalpana di

thank you so so much for the lovely comments

really means a lot to me

thank you so much🤗

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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Superb 👏
Beautifully penned 👏
Just loved it ❤️
Thanks a ton for writing this Vinu 🤗

PS: I know m late lattif 🤣
Really sorry... Exams month after all... eating my time 🤣

wahi toh sochu! ki kaha bhaag gayi meli vishi

thank you so much darling

i'm glad you liked it😃😃

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