Bin Tere-ZaYa SS|LAST CHAPTER Pg.21 - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess5253

Wohooo! What a piece! Tht was so amazing i had tears littreally flow...you captured my heart and i skipped a beat when zain was turning to leave u really kept me hooked BRAVO!BRAVO AND HATS OFF

thank you so very much dear.. i'm really happy you liked it
and him turning back, i don't know why but i felt like adding it.. and i'm glad you liked the part after that too
thanks again😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riakhan364

V well written.thanks a lot...

thanks dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

Mujhe aaj hi sona tha kya..??😭😭*facepalm*are koi baat nahi baba..why crying?

res😭😭
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unres..!!😭😭
Pehle to teri aisi ki taisi...u made me cry u rondu buttercup..Farhan sir bhi meherbani karte hai yaar..
😭😭abb yeh SS tha hi emotional! anyways will start drabble series for you!😉
Jokes apart..What a piece of work yaar...unsaid confessions and known feelings...inko bhi tune describe kiya hai yaar..!😲😲are explain nahi kar paayi iss liye keh daala-unsaid, unheard😆😆😆
WOW wow wow..!!Hats and caps off to your work..!!
Awesome..stunning..superb update tha ye to..!!aivehi tareef math karo! sunne me dikkat hoti hai!..i mean padhne me!😛
Cholly for late replies..!!Lekin dil happy happy kar diya tune..!happy hui na..kaafi hai!😃
And i loved it how Usman thought of Aliya...Mamu ho to aisa..!!missing maamu yaar😭😭
Zain ko rulaya tha tune..ab aliya ko bhi rulaya...At least Fanaa me aisa mat karna ok?fanaa is very much different! no comparisons please
As much as i love Bin Tere...I Love ur SS Fanaa...a lottt...Wahaa apna sadism door rakhna..!!😡fanaa SS nahi FF hai! and waha pe sadism nahi hogi.. khoob sara kitkit n romance and saath me suspense milegi😉😉
And back to this...I LOVEDDD THE LAST PART..AND I LOVE U FOR THIS..!!🤗🤗

thank u so much dayan
and i love you too
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinu127

thank u so much dayan

and i love you too

love side par rakh..though i love u..
BUT U R STARTING DRABBLES????????????😲
WOHOOO...!!!N MERE LIYE..?😳😳
n ok..no comaparrision of fanaa and BT...n ok..it is an FF..maana😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geet0910

nhi dear zyada nhi hua.. it ws a genuine compliment.. coz i cant write so brilliantly.. i can jst imagine stories bt cant put them in words so perfectly.. like some of the gifted ppl does over here.. so i ws not cchadaying u on chana jhaad.. 😆

😆 you have quoted a wrong one!😆
if you feel you can't write like this, then i must say you are wrong.. i was like you 4 months back.. i felt i can never do it and as i read a lot of FFs i started learning know how to do it.. i'm still learning.. but for that i need to write, how will i improve otherwise..
same applies to you.. start writing dear.. improvement will happen on its own
this is just a suggestion coz i am no different from you😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

love side par rakh..though i love u..
BUT U R STARTING DRABBLES????????????😲
WOHOOO...!!!N MERE LIYE..?😳😳
n ok..no comaparrision of fanaa and BT...n ok..it is an FF..maana😃

ha.. will post intro and will se if i shld continue or not based on response..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinu127

ha.. will post intro and will se if i shld continue or not based on response..

u vil get awesome replies..!!
n dont u dare not continue..!!😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneesha.

Perfect vinu a perfect n a happy ending👏mission accomplished😃

Why do u think we will nt cry...dunno abt others bt I cry...n its khushi ke aasoo ths time on zaya Milan after 3 months...aww... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
vinu u penned down their emotions so well...that I cn really feel their pain ...its tat I was jst standing there seeing them...superbOMG! thats a huge compliment thank u so much!
N the way u describe days hours min n secs zaya live without each other was gr8...true lovers really do that thy count the hrs min n seconds thy r away frm each other...n when talk abt lovers then our zaya is the master of all of them.ah that is one of my fav things to do.. and no one would observe but the days are more than 3 months, the hours more than 98days, minutes more than 98*24 hours and second more than those actual 98*24*60 minutes in what i have written!
Ths SS ends tat doesn't mean u won't write anymore...keep writing whenever u get. time..we love reading it.erm.. ya aasta whated me to write a sequel SS to my OS Jab we met.. so i'm thinking of that and a harshika drabble series as well.. so lets see

thank u so much for being by me in all these 4 chapters hun.. i hav never told you but you are one of those few whom i think of while typing the update.. that i should not disappoint u guys..
thank u again
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very emotional and awesome update with a beautiful ending. You Rock Girl! Kep it up. Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Awesome ending Vinu!Thanks fr pm!Finally ZaYa r re-united!Pls do write more on ZaYa & pm Me!

thank you so much dear and i will surely PM you when ii write😃

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