Hey guys,
Well this is an SS which I have planned to write in 4 or max 5 parts. it's based on the current track and I really hope u guys like it.its not proof read so please do ignore typos.So here is the 1st chapter of
Bin Tere
Zain was not ready to let go off the hand which he held. he could not! He was scared... to the roots! His darling, his best friend, his dad was being taken into the OT on a stretcher! The pain and the fear was killing him from inside... he was breaking all the more with each passing second! "Sir please let go off the hand. We need to operate on him. Each second is important", said the doctor but zain could not or rather did not want to let go.
Aliya placed her hand on his shoulder. She was trying to be as strong as possible but tears kept flowing from her eyes seeing the two most important people in her life in pain. One due to a hurt on his body while the other was hurt in the soul "Zain please unhe mamu ko andar le jaane do... please zain" she pleaded. Zain looked at her. He was not able to see her clearly as his eyes were filled with tears but his mind knew she was right. It was important for him to let go but his heart would not listen. So Aliya had to pull his hand away by force and zain immediately hugged her. As tight as he could. Pouring out all the pain he held in his heart. Aliya hugged him back. She was pained herself as her Maamu was one of the most important persons in her life but she knew it was nothing in front of Zain's pain. She knew how much he loved his Dad. He could do anything for him. Even marrying her was something he did for his dad!
By then, Suraiyya and the rest of the family reached the hospital only to know that Usman saab was being operated in the OT. She did not know what to do! She broke down in Zain's arms with Fahad next to her, supporting her. Usmaan saab had not spoken a word to her before leaving for the office. He was angry at her for having doubted Aliya. Aliya! Yes Aliya! She was the reason for all this! She had found Aliya's phone in her room. She had read that message which Zubair has sent Aliya. That he will not leave before finishing the 'work' and asked her to send Maamu to office. She remembered Aliya insisting that her Maamu should go to office!
She could connect the dots! It was Aliya! She is the one who is responsible for this state of her husband! Its because of her that her husband was fighting between life and death! Its this characterless niece of Usmaan saab and her so called cousin with whom she has an affair who is responsible for all this! She looked up at Aliya. She was crying with her hands on Zain's shoulders as though she was supporing him. Her eyes were tearing up continuously! Worry and concern evident on her face. But suraiyya could not see any of these. All she could see was the flashes of the times she had seen Aliya and zubair close to each other, flashes of the words Bobby had told her, flashes of the message she read, flashes of Aliya telling Usmaan saab to go to the office!
That was it! She was the cause of all the pain her family was going through! And she would not let her do it anymore, she decided! She got up from the ground and stood on her feet. All the family members looked at her, confused, as she stood shooting daggers at Aliya! Aliya was equally confused, she had no idea why her Maami was looking at her with anger... scratch that, hatred in her eyes! Zain was about to say something when him mom declared, "Yeh sab kuch tumhari wajah se hua hai Aliya!" hatred coating each word of hers. Zain, Aliya and the others were shocked! "Maami, yeh aap kya keh rahi hai?" , Aliya asked, tears still rolling down her cheeks, eyebrows close to becoming one.Was her Maami doubting her again? Zain was also shocked! His mom was targeting his wife again! That too when his dad... dad was fighting for his life! He could not take it anymore! "Mom aap phirse..." "Yeh sab kuch tumhari wajah se hua hai Aliya!" it was a shout this time causing Aliya to flinch! She held Aliya by her shoulder and shook her while she spoke "Tum aur tuumhare uss zubbu ne milke plan kiya nay eh sab? Aaj usman saab toh office jaane wale hi nahi the! Par tum ne insist kiya ki who jaaye! Kyunki zubbu ne kaha hai na? bolo Aliya" she shook her yet again "Maami aapko koi galat fehmi hui hai" "Ha ya na?" "ha!"
zain was taken aback! He could not believe it! But his heart screamed that Aliya cannot be wrong! That she can never harm her Maamu... her mom definitely had misunderstood something! " Mom zaroor aapko koi galat fehmi" "koi galat fehmi nahi hui hai mujhe zain! Yeh dekho! Yeh message joh zubbu ne Aliya ko bheja hai! Isse saaf pata chalta hai ki yeh sab isi ki wajah se hua hai!" she held out aliya's phone in front of Zain. He could not say anything as he could not really comprehend anything sensible out of the things around him! "Maami, Zain, aap log galat samajh rahe ho... yeh sab kuch.." she was cut off by the doctor who came out of the OT. "I'm sorry. Humne poori koshish ki lekin brain me ek major vein me blood clot ki wajad se Mr.Abdullah coma me chale gaye... abb aage Allah se duae maangne ke alava humaare paas aur koi option nahi hai!"
Zain was shattered! His world had come to a standstill! His heart refused to believe what his ears had just heard! No! His dad could not just lie lifelessly! NO! He collapsed into the hospital chair! Aliya's state was no different! Her Maamu was her guide, her best friend, her support system who was now on life support while next to her sat her life! His eyes were blank... he sat as though he was not in this world! She stared at his lifeless posture and was about to move towards him when she felt her elbow being jerked and fingers and palm of a person force themselves on her cheek leaving an impact which made her neck turn and head fall towards her shoulder. She raised her eyes to see the owner of the hand- her Maami! Her eyes were filled with pain, anger, hatred, disgust and her hand made its way to her cheek once again!
The next thing Aliya knew was that she was being pulled through the corridor of the hospital... she called out for Zain, once, twice, thrice but he did not respond! He could not respond! He could not hear her! He was still in the shock of his father's state. He was numb. He was in trance. He was out of this world! Aliya realized it! And her own body became lifeless! She stopped resisting the pull! She let herself be pulled away! Suraiyya pulled her out of the hospital and practically threw her on the road but somehow... no one knows how, Aliya gained balance and did not fall but stood staring at her mother-in-law, her maami.
" Phir kabhi mere ghar ya mere gharwalon ke zindagi me dhakal dene ke bare me soch nab hi math! Tumhara aur mera parivaar ka abb koi rishta nahi raha! Phir kabhi apna shakal bhi hume math dikhana! Humse milne ki koshish kabhi math karo! Especially mere bete aur mere shauhar se door rehna", spitting that out, she walked away into the hospital leaving behind a broken Aliya! A completely broken one! With no one by her side! She knew no one was wrong too!Nafeesa bhabhi , Shazia bhabi and Fahad bhai could not go against her. Atleast not when maamu was in such a state and she is shattered. The man who had to stand for her could not stand for himself now!
That thought broke her even more. She could not stand by her Zain when he needed her the most! She could not support him! She could not share his pain! She could not wipe his tears! She could not make her lap become his pillow! This left her devastated! But she could not hurt her Maami too! She needed Zain to support her... her family...she could not do anything! If Allah wants this to happen, then so it is, she thought to herself. Lekin tumhare bina main kaise rahungi zain? Kaise rahungi main bin tere?
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