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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: simran422
Very emotional and awesome update with a beautiful ending. You Rock Girl! Kep it up. Loved it.

thanks a lot simran

i'm glad u liked it😃😃😃

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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: rinku95
Superb
Thanks for pm

thanks dear and congos again on being adazzler😃

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Sanika

@Legilimens

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Resresres 😃
Unres.
Yes,i edited instead of quoting 😆
Chal, take my standing ovation 👏 👏 👏
Amazing hain yeh yaar 👍🏼
u have potrayed their emotions beautifully 😃 😃
especially when u described Aliya crying...amazing play of words.
was a power packed update...last vala scene..where Aliya acted along..like nothing is wrong..
and everything is dandy...
i was like that is sooo Aliya..
chal phir se tali bajati hun 👏 👏 👏
take a bow 😆
p.s- please call me anything And I mean ANYTHING other than sani 🤢
kuch bhi chalega...people usually call me Nikki cause i glare daggers at dem wen they call me sani or sanu 🤢
or lizze...my family calls me that..they moved from chipkali to lizze..for lizard..get it? Yeah, lame i noe 😛
But i am shit scared of them... 🤢

Edited by arshipotterfan - 11 years ago

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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
unres kardiyaa...!!

thank god! was waiting with crossed fingers

u noe na!

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Avii

@4bottlevodka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: vinu127
thank god! was waiting with crossed fingers
u noe na!

i know i know😆

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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
Res..!
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You are Awesome Vinu...😲😃...i totally loved this...!!!thank u darling🤗🤗🤗🤗
Koi Bataye na...Hai kya tujh me chupa..!!(Talent)
Kaise kahoon kaise kahoon kaise kahoon..ooo
Tere story me kuch magic hai chupa...story ye tera awesome thaa!!
my hindi song knowledge is very bad!yeh kaunsa gaana tha?😕cholly
I know i killed hindi once more...!!But i dont know how to appriciate this...!!
You have become such an awesome writer...!!oh my! itne compliments?
I was able to visualise everything...!!i'm so damn glad!

"Haar gaye na? maine kaha tha ki Maamu sab se pehle mujhe poochenge!"

I loved the way Aliya covered the truth...!!And Once again you proved that you are awesome!!uff...kisi ne toh point out kiya😆😆

tu bhi Renu ki follower ban gayi?😲😆
Vinu..Vinu..Vinu...I LOVE YOU..!!
I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U

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Avii

@4bottlevodka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: vinu127
Res..!
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You are Awesome Vinu...😲😃...i totally loved this...!!!thank u darling🤗🤗🤗...Hugs you back!!🤗
Koi Bataye na...Hai kya tujh me chupa..!!(Talent)
Kaise kahoon kaise kahoon kaise kahoon..ooo
Tere story me kuch magic hai chupa...story ye tera awesome thaa!!
my hindi song knowledge is very bad!yeh kaunsa gaana tha?😕cholly..2 min me PM check karo!!
I know i killed hindi once more...!!But i dont know how to appriciate this...!!
You have become such an awesome writer...!!oh my! itne compliments?Yeh bohot kam hai..!!
I was able to visualise everything...!!i'm so damn glad!..

"Haar gaye na? maine kaha tha ki Maamu sab se pehle mujhe poochenge!"

I loved the way Aliya covered the truth...!!And Once again you proved that you are awesome!!uff...kisi ne toh point out kiya😆😆

tu bhi Renu ki follower ban gayi?😲😆Vo tho me pehle se hi hun..😉Bas i did not show it😛
Vinu..Vinu..Vinu...I LOVE YOU..!!
I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U I❤️U

Lo Aaj ka quota bhi pura hua ILU!!😆

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Aneesha

@Ashis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: vinu127
thank u so much for being by me in all these 4 chapters hun.. i hav never told you but you are one of those few whom i think of while typing the update.. that i should not disappoint u guys..
thank u again

thanks to u vinu for taking time out n writing for us such nice SS...we simply enjoy reading them ...n get lost in it...seriously u r very gud at writing be it parody,SS or OS...i think u should join BI creative team...as u hv better ideas than them.

N waiting for ur fanna next part...eager to knw howz zaya first meeting...n offcourse harshika drabble series...zaya drabbles hv read alot...nw want to read harshika drabble...start writing it soon.