Bin Tere-ZaYa SS|LAST CHAPTER Pg.21 - Page 20

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

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Wow! Vinu you write so brilliantly. I loved this update.thank u

The best thing was how you penned down their feelings when they hugged each other...those silent promises and all was so well written.are waha i did not write only😆😆😆 bas silent likh ke escape ho gayi😛😛

Wow! You know how much I loved it when Zain swung her around... Omg! I could imagine the confession scene again ;)that was my fav as well.. i just wanted to recreate it

wohooo! I loved the side hug too when he was taking to Fahad bhai.. I could imagine their side hug at the hospital 😳mujhe toh yeh idea tak nahi aayi😳chalo u could connect..so cool👍🏼

I want it again in the show ;) actually I could imagine HarshIka nailing this scene 😛 really? if u could imagine, then its a Mission accomplished!

wow! Vinu keep it up! This was an amazing try ⭐️ thanks herm

and no matter if you don't get any comments , there are many silent readers too on the forum 😉tum kabhi likho! then u'll noe how desperate u can get for comments😛😛😛

thanks for the pm.. aur bhi kuch likho tou pm me 😛

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Originally posted by: arshipotterfan

Resresres 😃
Unres.
Yes,i edited instead of quoting 😆 haha... for once😆
Chal, take my standing ovation 👏 👏 👏 erm.. kuch zyaada nahi hua?😳
Amazing hain yeh yaar 👍🏼
u have potrayed their emotions beautifully 😃 😃
especially when u described Aliya crying...amazing play of words.Thank you so very much🤗
was a power packed update...last vala scene..where Aliya acted along..like nothing is wrong..
and everything is dandy...
i was like that is sooo Aliya..hai na😛... thanks dear😃😃
chal phir se tali bajati hun 👏 👏 👏
take a bow 😆 taken😆😆
p.s- please call me anything And I mean ANYTHING other than sani 🤢
kuch bhi chalega...people usually call me Nikki cause i glare daggers at dem wen they call me sani or sanu 🤢
or lizze...my family calls me that..they moved from chipkali to lizze..for lizard..get it? Yeah, lame i noe 😛
But i am shit scared of them... 🤢

Originally posted by: Aneesha.

thanks to u vinu for taking time out n writing for us such nice SS...we simply enjoy reading them ...n get lost in it...seriously u r very gud at writing be it parody,SS or OS...i think u should join BI creative team...as u hv better ideas than them.Lolz... jhoot accha bol leti hai Ms.Aneesha____(i don't know ur surname)😆😆😆 *in full preetika style*(remember GA?)

N waiting for ur fanna next part...eager to knw howz zaya first meeting...n offcourse harshika drabble series...zaya drabbles hv read alot...nw want to read harshika drabble...start writing it soon.yup.. will be as soon as possible😉

Originally posted by: kunakshafan26

lovely!!! rula daala 👏

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12

amazing update vinu

loved it

and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

hi vinu! i am so sorry i couldnt comment earlier.

actually whenever i recieve your pm i read the update bt at last dont get enogh tym to comment properly. so this is a joint comment for some of ur updates. no problem at all dear.. i'm happy you read it😃😃😃

first of all i really appreciate the heard work you put into writing this ff. since this is your first ff, congratz on tht too.thank u so much... this recognition of effort means a lot to me🤗

i really admired the last part. i suggest you shoudlnt have written 'last'. i kinda disheartened me as for no more updates in this ff now.awww... OK.. i'll edit it out😳😳

but the last part was really beautifully and nicely written. the way you descirbed their emotions, it was just awsm.thank u so much😳😳😳

write more soon. love the end! and my fav part was how beautifully you described the hug! really awsm work dear! keep it up and write more on zaya soon!check out... hav posted an intro of HarshIka/ZaYa Drabble series .. pls do leave ur sugessions..i would be happy

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take care.

ramzan mubarak.

lots of love,

-tanya.

Originally posted by: vinu127

<font color="#0000ff">accha thik hai... i call all ppl with some nickname... hmmm... how do u like lollipop?? accha nahi laga toh bata dena.. will change😉😛😆</font>

<font color="#0000ff">thank u so so much dear... there's a huge wide grin on my face right now😃😃</font>